On the Practical Application of Magic

[NecroSovereign]

This is my attempt at writing Touhou fanfiction.

Part one:  https://mega.co.nz/#!4IEFhAZC!aogpUiAtAby6E11lvddyqBdPwl9HSr50nENTrtSSnNg

A warning: some blasphemy and more or less detailed descriptions of surgery and anatomy are present in this.

[NecroSovereign]

Did anyone at least try to read what I've posted?

[Iced Fairy]

Probably not, since it's a download.  While I can't promise in depth critiques for stories posted on the board, links to other sites, downloads and other 'look at my story that I can't bother to type out' posts will pretty much go nowhere.  Unless there's depictions of sex or your surgery is very in depth you'd be vastly better off getting views by just posting it.