It's the fifth element; you've got your Fire, Air, Water, Earth, and Pussy. Damn. I'm like a Zen master up in here.
at this point I am pretty sure I was reading from a hobo diary.
You have... well, a lack of flair (as in maybe compared with myself who seem to over-represent things) in presenting your words, but where raw reading is concerned, this is a story that stands out on its own little world. It is itself twisting, beautiful, emotionally captivating in simple terms.
thumbs up.
and also, I recall a certain fiction writer called Damien Sin who writes these type of stories, of normal people in less than normal situations and so on...in the way you present them, really good, maybe you might pick it up yourself.
I recall one really brilliant tale he wrote where a morgue worker fell in love with a corpse and went to hell from there.
