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Tad Marx Barba

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My Very First Danmakufu Script
« on: October 29, 2018, 10:39:14 pm »
Hi everyone!
I'm very new to this forum, and this is my First script in Danmakufu PH3. It was a long time that I haven't done anything to improve, but here it is:

Temporal Link: https://www107.zippyshare.com/v/dvZZUcJ8/file.html?fbclid=IwAR1bNP4gzMMjnNwO0dux92SLac21NVRWk8xpOqgWZ_iYzPt5U_qDeqMjMYM
Permanent Link: https://mega.nz/?fbclid=IwAR2IfUtTIFUDH0pSgqrAQtb3KLoNnBFTf8jCnKxWqWmmMk-kN4lNuyfelFI#!zB5AHAYL!7s7Ce10jVR9NI-Fqhq9Dftt_x7yzSdy0QgyezVKs64g

Credits
- to ZUN for some Sound FX, Nue Houjuu's theme and the Violet Detector's game HUD
- to Jinx for some Sound FX and bullets' graphics
- to Junky by Len'en Shot Constants's library
- to Gizmo the Dragon by the Touhou's Sprite Rendering Library
- to neito by boss's Charge FX library
- to Lefkada by the Player scripts that I include in this script
- to Sparen of Iria y Helepolis for the orientation videos and tutorials of introduction to Danmakufu PH3
- and you by playing the Script that with so much effort and dedication I made

I'm still learning, soooooooo if you want to help me improve my scripts and motivate me, please send feedback, and comment EVERYTHING that I'm need to improve

WARNING!:
This script contain a modified version of the Default System HUD, so, if someone wants to help me to improve that system, please send feedback!

ryannthierry1

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Re: My Very First Danmakufu Script
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2018, 08:08:43 pm »
I was planning to write stuff about it, but it crashes on startup :V


EDIT: My bad, I'm so dumb.
« Last Edit: November 04, 2018, 09:08:01 pm by ryannthierry1 »

ryannthierry1

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Re: My Very First Danmakufu Script
« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2018, 09:25:38 pm »
Okay, now for a real review (?):

First nonspell starts abruptly, which is kinda bad, yanno, it scared me. :ohdear:
Nue also comes down a lot, but maybe that was intended? Loads of health as well, took some time for me to take her down.

First spell looks pretty, but absolutely dangerous. Why are you using Len'en things in Touhou? That's kinda weird.
But I really prefer Len'en sounds over Touhou, so I'm not sad over this.  :)
What difficulty is this game anyway? I also can't read the spell name. I'm probably blind~.

2nd nonspell, I like the "you failed" thing dropping, lol.
It seems fair enough. Casual of Nue, isn't it?

2nd spell was pretty fast, I couldn't really see what really was happening, but it seems ok?

3rd nonspell is pretty fair, takes a little bit long to finish it up.

3rd spell has so much stuff! Mitori is here, and also the apparently laser knives? Lol. The windy bullets are impossible to dodge.

4th nonspell is... hard. It's cool, though.

4th spell is... complicated. Have you seen how much I criticize this? I feel bad.
and then she becomes Tsubakura. The next part looks to be the most fair out of the rest--- WTF, why is Master Spark/Sese here?!?
This was absolutely... amazing. LMAO  :V

After she exploded, I died. Kek. It is indeed a funny script.
Some things I have to note: cool background.
Why use the Violet Detector game frame?.
The spell card names are very annoying to read.
The game comes with a replay, for some reason.

I will give this game the grade of...........
8! It's not too bad. Of course, if these things are fixed, it would be great, continue doing these, please~.  :3

Tad Marx Barba

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Re: My Very First Danmakufu Script
« Reply #3 on: November 05, 2018, 04:01:17 pm »
Thanks for the feedback!

Yep, I been developing this script for a year and a half, but, I feel TOO VERY AGRESIVE, I need to learn how to do my non-spells/spells a less dangerous, but I can't control that  :ohdear:... I need someone to help me in how to fix some things in my script and help me to improve my system  ::).

I hope that you had enjoy my script, and I continue creating scripts  :] :] :]

Next in the list:
  • A script about Aoji
  • A script about Cirno

Again, thanks!  :]

Edit:
  • I use the Violet Detector's HUD 'cause I like it (idk why I like it)... in fact, it's pretty cool
  • Yep, I'm gonna fix my system, because all these things that I made are very bright and are impossible to read (including the spells' names
  • It's my replay, sorry for that  ::)
  • I agree too that Len'en sound FX are cooler than Touhou's sound FX  :D
« Last Edit: November 05, 2018, 08:58:26 pm by Tad Marx Barba »

ryannthierry1

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Re: My Very First Danmakufu Script
« Reply #4 on: November 07, 2018, 12:07:18 am »
Next in the list:
  • A script about Aoji
  • A script about Cirno

Again, thanks!  :]
Oh! An Aoji script? I would definitely like to play that. I'll be waiting. I hope it doesn't take more than a year this one too, lol
 

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