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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #720 on: March 23, 2017, 04:29:40 PM »
//Will be absent for at most two hours.


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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #721 on: March 23, 2017, 04:32:46 PM »
//I don't think that wording will work either. <_<
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #722 on: March 23, 2017, 04:43:53 PM »
//Maybe something like "I mean no harm, so please don't do anything to me, can we please have a proper chat in person along with my sister ?" ?

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #723 on: March 23, 2017, 04:59:45 PM »
//I don't think it's a good idea to ask about a meetup just yet, she's very likely still on edge. I want to wait a couple more notes before proposing such. The first part sounds okay, but may fall too far into submissive territory for the tastes of those that objected to it earlier. It does give me a new idea, though...maybe replacing "Just, please, don't hurt me!" to "I don't want us to be enemies!" in the second one would work. That should convey a reasonable amount of fear without actually explicitly stating that Dai is terrified of Rin.

//EDIT: Also, we shouldn't be calling anyone we want Rin to meet our sister or similar terms, because Rin won't trust such a person to be an unbiased party.
« Last Edit: March 23, 2017, 05:12:51 PM by Suwako Moriya »
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #724 on: March 23, 2017, 05:16:49 PM »
//Hm... how about Keine if we do need an mediator ?

//Also: "I mean no harm, so please let's not start hostilities, you are... um... Rin, right ? Please say if i am right."

//How about this ? Better sounding, now it feels just that we wanna avoid an conflict and solve this peacefully rather than being scared of facing her or attacking her.

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #725 on: March 23, 2017, 05:29:01 PM »
//Eh, that meanders too much. We need to stay focused on one thing at a time. Also, we shouldn't be saying her name, it'll probably spook her if she learns we know it (since she never told us). (There's also no need to include "I mean no harm" since I explicitly said I didn't want to hurt her in the first note.)
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #726 on: March 23, 2017, 05:45:38 PM »
//Ok !

//"Uhm... sorry for startling you, that was never my intention Miss..."

//Prrtty neutral to me.

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #727 on: March 23, 2017, 05:57:14 PM »
//That would be a reasonable thing to add to the next note (which I already have planned), but doesn't mesh with the intention of this one.
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #728 on: March 23, 2017, 06:01:09 PM »
//What exactly do *you* wanna make this second note achieve ?

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #729 on: March 23, 2017, 06:05:01 PM »
//I could be convinced to omit it, but I think it's important to include so she gets an idea of where we're coming from, particularly in regards to the ominous feeling she felt. I'd like to help get across that she got that feeling not because we hate her or want to hurt her, but because we want to defend/save ourselves from her.

//The bolded above is my primary goal. The first note issued a bunch of general apologies for our actions; this one should focus on getting her to realize that we're just as scared of her as she is of us.

//The more I think about it, the more I like "I'm sorry! You just attacked us in the shop and then erased our memories and then you ate me and took my magic or something...I'm really sorry for making you mad! I don't want us to be enemies!" It conveys exactly what I want it to convey without actually explicitly admitting fear or risking spooking or antagonizing Rin further.
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #730 on: March 23, 2017, 06:06:58 PM »
//The more I think about it, the more I like "I'm sorry! You just attacked us in the shop and then erased our memories and then you ate me and took my magic or something...I'm really sorry for making you mad! I don't want us to be enemies!" It conveys exactly what I want it to convey without actually explicitly admitting fear or risking spooking or antagonizing Rin further.
//I'm fine with that wording.

//Everyone else?

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #731 on: March 23, 2017, 06:19:16 PM »
//That wording seems nice, although "mad" doesn't seem very accurate, how about "sorry for scaring you" instead ?

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #732 on: March 23, 2017, 06:24:49 PM »
//Or "upset".
Otherwise, I'm fine with it.

//PD: Sorry for poking and not posting anything. Doing things over here...
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #733 on: March 23, 2017, 06:29:43 PM »
//"Upset" is fine by me. (I'd rather not use "Sorry for scaring you" since that doesn't properly convey the fear we feel about her.)

Prime (Home):

> Write: "You're just really scary! I'm sorry! You attacked us in the shop and then erased our memories and then you ate me and took my magic or something...I'm really sorry for making you mad!"

> Don't write this. Instead...
> Write "I'm sorry! You just attacked us in the shop and then erased our memories and then you ate me and took my magic or something...I'm really sorry for making you upset! I don't want us to be enemies!"

> Then go ahead and do everything else that everyone has inputted for this update.

//(As a preview, my next planned note is going to be an offer to magically repair her clothes, presumably from a distance, as a gesture of good will. Feel free to discuss the merits of this now, though obviously such discussion would not need to hold up the current update.)
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #734 on: March 23, 2017, 06:35:24 PM »
//I don't like displaying fear towards her like she is some kind of evil person though, but oh well...

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #735 on: March 23, 2017, 06:41:30 PM »
//Displaying fear doesn't strictly means we consider her evil, but more like "you are the most cute and caring person of the world, but you are dangerous to us nonetheless".
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #736 on: March 23, 2017, 06:59:14 PM »
//Will post at home since this is just a mess of things I can't take the time to browse through right now.

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #737 on: March 23, 2017, 07:13:07 PM »
//I'm going to post the commands of everyone, parser.



Nazgul's commands:

Quartet:
>Which one of us is the least important...? We could probably use her as a scout...



Tashi's commands:

ExperiDai:

> Walk with Keine a bit away from our kids. Be sure to still be able to see them.
> "Miss Keine... What do you know about marriages?"

===

Prime (Kono):

> "It's about the results of what we did yesterday night."
> Keep our happiness hidden. Try to not show any happy expression yet!



Kilga's commands:

RenBug (T):

> Miss Renko? Sorry to intrude, but please tell Miss Merry about me.

---

SanaDai (R):

> "Okay, I think sending her notes might just work for a bit...um, it might also be a good idea for you to go see her soon, but I wouldn't join you. Not like this. I think it'd be better if you talked to her and just have me watch, so she's not scared of my presence."

KaisuDai:

> "Do you need help undoing, uh, yourself?"
>> If Kaisu indeed needs help unfusing, use life-force warping magics to separate her back into Reimu and Kasen.

---

HamiDai:

> Continue the growth.

---

SenDai:

> "You seem...distant, like you don't want me here."

---

Prime (Home):

> Write "I'm sorry! You just attacked us in the shop and then erased our memories and then you ate me and took my magic or something...I'm really sorry for making you upset! I don't want us to be enemies!"
> Warp the note over to Rin like the previous one.



//Will you warp the note, Kilga?
« Last Edit: March 23, 2017, 07:31:19 PM by Tashi »
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #738 on: March 23, 2017, 07:25:03 PM »
//Yes. Warping the note was a part of my original set of commands.

//Also, you forgot my RenBug command. :V

//EDIT: In the event the parser gets back before Tashi...

RenBug (T):

> Miss Renko? Sorry to intrude, but please tell Miss Merry about me.
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #739 on: March 23, 2017, 07:30:59 PM »
//Do you think the bugs ceasing to exist is due to the lack of faith or to the shockwave of what happened finally getting to them ?

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #740 on: March 23, 2017, 07:34:28 PM »
//Yes. Warping the note was a part of my original set of commands.

//Also, you forgot my RenBug command. :V

//Derp. I didn't catched that command that was before your countermand to Raf.

//Do you think the bugs ceasing to exist is due to the lack of faith or to the shockwave of what happened finally getting to them ?

//I think it's because they are isolated of the place where people believe in Dai. As far as I know, we aren't known in the Outside World, which is just logic that they start to disappear due to not having faith from anyone there.
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #741 on: March 23, 2017, 07:36:07 PM »
//The outside world bugs ceasing to exist is almost invariably a result of being cut off from the faith flow. Goddesses need faith to exist, and they're getting none. See my earlier comment below.

//(Incidentally, I don't think the outside world Dais are doomed: If we can get even just the Hifuus believing in us, then we should survive.)
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #742 on: March 23, 2017, 07:36:57 PM »
//I'm going to post the commands of everyone, parser.



Nazgul's commands:

Quartet:
>Which one of us is the least important...? We could probably use her as a scout...



Tashi's commands:

ExperiDai:

> Walk with Keine a bit away from our kids. Be sure to still be able to see them.
> "Miss Keine... What do you know about marriages?"

===

Prime (Kono):

> "It's about the results of what we did yesterday night."
> Keep our happiness hidden. Try to not show any happy expression yet!



Kilga's commands:

SanaDai (R):

> "Okay, I think sending her notes might just work for a bit...um, it might also be a good idea for you to go see her soon, but I wouldn't join you. Not like this. I think it'd be better if you talked to her and just have me watch, so she's not scared of my presence."

KaisuDai:

> "Do you need help undoing, uh, yourself?"
>> If Kaisu indeed needs help unfusing, use life-force warping magics to separate her back into Reimu and Kasen.

---

HamiDai:

> Continue the growth.

---

SenDai:

> "You seem...distant, like you don't want me here."

---

Prime (Home):

> Write "I'm sorry! You just attacked us in the shop and then erased our memories and then you ate me and took my magic or something...I'm really sorry for making you upset! I don't want us to be enemies!"
> Warp the note over to Rin like the previous one.



//Will you warp the note, Kilga?
//Much appreciated.

> Of you, you believe CopBug might be the least important, being one who has seen the least development and does not have a relation with it's fuse-ee. However, MerryBug or RenBug could be as well, given there is already one in the other host, depending on certain things...

> You walk with Keine, until you are far enough.
> "Marriages?" Keine asks.

> "Yea?" Kono looks a bit worried.

> "Alright." Gasanae agrees. "Did you get my magic for yourself yet? Or Sanae's?"

> "I got it." Kaisu says, before the two unfuse.
> "Well then... Please excuse me for now..." Kasen starts to leave the room.

> You continue growing Hamiya.
> Things peak, then begin to settle down...

> "No. You are welcome here Daiyousei." Virtue looks over.

> You scribe...
> Then warp the note.

> Rin receives the note and begins to read it.
//Yes. Warping the note was a part of my original set of commands.

//Also, you forgot my RenBug command. :V

//EDIT: In the event the parser gets back before Tashi...

RenBug (T):

> Miss Renko? Sorry to intrude, but please tell Miss Merry about me.
> "Uh... Daiyousei is... in me, Merry."
> Maribel blinks.
> "Huh?"
>_

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #743 on: March 23, 2017, 07:43:24 PM »
RenBug, MerryBug (T):

> I'm in both of you, Miss Merry. I'm sorry! I'm so sorry for everything! For arguing and being stubborn and getting you in trouble with Miss Yukari and talking to you while you're not wearing any clothes!

---

> Continue observing Rin not play with herself.

Prime (Home):

> Write: "I'm sorry for startling you so much, too. And ruining your clothes. Would you like me to try to fix them? I won't come anywhere near you unless you want me to."

SanaDai (R):

> "Oh!"
> Lower our voice volume.
> "Um, yes, but I didn't wanna say anything out loud about it."

KaisuDai:

> Look to Kasen.
> "Um, okay, but please don't go too far. I wanna see Miss Kaisu again soon!"
> Look back to Reimu.
> "...so..."

---

HamiDai:

> How large is Hamiya at this point?
> Continue the growth.

---

SenDai:

> Look at whatever Virtue is looking at.
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #744 on: March 23, 2017, 08:02:15 PM »
ExperiDai:

> Nod nod.
> "Yup! Marri-age!"
> Nod nod.
> "Can you tell me about that, Miss Keine? Pretty please?"

===

Prime (Kono):

> Be serious for some seconds.
> "... The final results... are..."
> Smile brightly and hug her.
> "... that everything is fiiine! It worked!"

===

Prime (Home):

> Add: "That last part was a lie, though. I'm seeing you right now. You are HAWT."
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #745 on: March 23, 2017, 08:04:05 PM »
//Side note: The crisis of last night/this morning is over and I am resuming tacit approval of all actions (unless otherwise stated, as usual) as well as requesting updates not wait for me if everyone else is ready.
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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #746 on: March 23, 2017, 08:20:56 PM »
(Absent: ETA - A few hours.)
//I still have things I would like to post.

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #747 on: March 23, 2017, 11:41:40 PM »
//Raf, anything you wanna input?
[22:40:12] <Drake> "guys i donwloaded esod but its not workan"
[22:40:21] <Drake> REPORTED
[22:40:25] <NaturallyOccurringChoja> PROBATED
[22:40:30] <Drake> ORGASM
[22:40:32] <NaturallyOccurringChoja> FUCK YEAH

[22:28:39] <Edible> Mafia would be a much easier game if we were playing "spot the asshole"

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #748 on: March 23, 2017, 11:47:14 PM »
//Add to the note that if she wants us tobfix them, that she needs to make the flowers go away, cause they seem to block magic or something.

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Re: Daiyousei Quest - Greater Fairy: Part 29
« Reply #749 on: March 24, 2017, 12:03:31 AM »
//I worry about adding such a thing, because we probably shouldn't know about that, and it's effectively asking her to lower her defenses, which doesn't reflect well on our intentions. I think she'll think to do that on her own if she wants us to fix her stuff.
[22:40:12] <Drake> "guys i donwloaded esod but its not workan"
[22:40:21] <Drake> REPORTED
[22:40:25] <NaturallyOccurringChoja> PROBATED
[22:40:30] <Drake> ORGASM
[22:40:32] <NaturallyOccurringChoja> FUCK YEAH

[22:28:39] <Edible> Mafia would be a much easier game if we were playing "spot the asshole"