[Art] Flip?s art dump

[flipflopity]

So this lurker decided to start his own art thread. I think this?ll be the place where I'll post a few WIPs or sketches along with a finished piece once in awhile considering how I draw at a snail?s pace for now. I?d greatly appreciate any criticism ?n pointers.

Anyways I guess to start off here's a WIP of a Mokou-tan I've been working on for the past week:

[Mеа]

Hey welcome! AAA is ever in need of any fresh breeze to clear out the dust that settles. Don't have much to say, you're not done yet anyway. I do appreciate that sense of depth in the area by the armpits/side of the ribcage, something I'm working on.

[flipflopity]

Found a few days to chip away at this but I think this is almost done save for fixing some of the shading and adding a few details. Might ditch two-tone shading for a few things like the shoes or hair.
Other than that a few things I noticed is that I've had difficulty with clothing and hair in that they look too stiff  :V?

[Mеа]

That uh, right hand looks very uncomfortable to tuck your hand inwards at that much of an angle against your hip.