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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #91 on: October 12, 2013, 11:19:48 am »

^Drew that recently. Feedback?
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #92 on: October 12, 2013, 12:43:56 pm »
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #93 on: October 12, 2013, 04:36:59 pm »
I find her right shoulder particularly dissettling. It appears as if it's a detachable Lego arm, and feels separate from the rest of the body.

There are other things to mention, but this is not a formal critique session and I think it's best to work on one area at a time.
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #95 on: October 12, 2013, 06:36:52 pm »
Eh? :V sorry noob pls
http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php?action=profile;u=224
I guess he doesn't walk to AAA, though. Probably we need to make him aware of your Aya through the Cafe or PM.

Now, when you went to anatomy, her tits seem to be too low, especially for a schoolgirl, since they usually have younger and tighter boobs, though we may also consider Sanae to be a smoker worse than Mokou.
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On DFC, female nipples occupy nearly the same position as male ones. As letters go further to Z, volume under them increases, but the general attachment points remain on the same ribs. So, Sanae's tits here appear to be hanging a long way from its attachment position down almost to her belly.
*have never seen female boobs IRL (. .)\ may be horribly wrong*
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #96 on: October 12, 2013, 07:25:56 pm »

^Drew that recently. Feedback?

Her eyes are too low, and her mouth too high. It gives her a derpy look.  Also, don't leave out the nose.
Her head should either be narrower or taller, and her neck is too long.
Her boobs are ginormous and saggy. Given how much of them is visible beneath her top, her nipples ought to be visible.
Her torso is slightly too short, and the shading on her stomach makes her look ripped. (I'm assuming you weren't going for the ripped look :V)
Her arms are a bit too long, her hands shouldn't be able to reach her knees.
Her right leg should be a bit longer, and her left foot should be foreshortened.
That's an extremely awkward way to hold a gohei. :V

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #97 on: October 12, 2013, 09:45:12 pm »
Duly noted all the advice! I'll be asking a few questions, for clarity, if that's all right. Also, the exaggerated cute face was unintentional lol

@delfigamer:

By "younger and tighter", did you just mean less saggy? And by them being "too low", you mean that from the top they start too low on the torso?

As for the nipples, I just won't ever bother drawing them; just a personal choice :P

@Ballmer: It's the armpit muscle that it's missing right? Because thats the feeling I'm getting right after you mentioned the odd arm.

@Desu_Cake:

I think I get exactly what you meant about the sag, since even considering the physics making breasts sag more after going past a certain size I miscalculated and overdid it despite that. o_o Er, was that right?


As for the areas to work at a time, I'd like to work on the removing the lego-ness of the arm. Any advice regarding that, or should I just keep studying at posemaniacs?

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #98 on: October 13, 2013, 02:52:14 pm »
@delfigamer:
By "younger and tighter", did you just mean less saggy? And by them being "too low", you mean that from the top they start too low on the torso?


As for the areas to work at a time, I'd like to work on the removing the lego-ness of the arm. Any advice regarding that, or should I just keep studying at posemaniacs?
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Shoulders

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #99 on: October 15, 2013, 02:58:46 am »
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Guys guys do you watch Attack on Titan
Height difference lol
Raymoo is a kid compared to Mikasa right right

@TEspeon, I think her boobs should be more "rounded" o__o
« Last Edit: October 15, 2013, 03:02:04 am by Hatateru »
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #100 on: October 15, 2013, 04:47:11 am »
Guys guys do you watch Attack on Titan

Of course everyone has. If you haven't, shame on you people! Go watch it right now!

And all Touhou characters are pretty short I think (the ones that look like they are in their teens), except the older looking characters of course.~ :V
Anyways, I love the way you draw Hatateru.~ So crisp and clean~

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #101 on: October 15, 2013, 09:24:01 am »
Of course everyone has. If you haven't, shame on you people! Go watch it right now!

And all Touhou characters are pretty short I think (the ones that look like they are in their teens), except the older looking characters of course.~ :V
Anyways, I love the way you draw Hatateru.~ So crisp and clean~

Height difference is meant to play out the contrasts. Huge difference between a laid back, carefree binbou miko and a hardened badass :V

There's a way to the clean lines really, you just have to reline a perfected sketch, it's a little tedious but then again it's only tracing. A little effort goes a looooong way~
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #102 on: October 15, 2013, 05:24:41 pm »
Hatateru: Awesomely clean! Your lines are a thing to aspire to.

I'd say that since all of it looks so wonderfully perspective-d -- it's very 3d even for purely line art -- the yin-yang orbs actually look a little flat by comparison. And this is my personal preference, but I have to go ahead and say it: people almost never stand with their feet turned in like that. I know anime does it all the time, and it looks cute, but it has always been a thing that knocks me out of the "immersion" of looking at a nice art piece, so to speak.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #103 on: October 15, 2013, 08:46:12 pm »
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #104 on: October 15, 2013, 09:40:20 pm »
@delfigamer: Understood; I'll see what I can do about the bones.

@Hatateru:  Thanks for reinforcing that notion! Thank god fixing the boob issue isn't rocket science xD

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #105 on: October 17, 2013, 05:12:25 am »
I'm still very new here, but while I'm exploring the forum I could leave this here: http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/283/9/3/kagerou_imaizumi__fanart_sketch__by_gmsp123-d6q0ig0.jpg
(Any feedback?)
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #106 on: October 17, 2013, 06:59:42 am »
The distance between eyes is roughly equal to their width.
But overall, that's a cute Kagerou. Those ears are a nice touch.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #107 on: October 29, 2013, 06:44:00 am »
I feel that this thread died abruptly. Anywho, here's a little request I did awhile back in the week...

http://gmsp123.deviantart.com/art/Rika-Arikazawa-OC-Fanart-409137571

Hopefully, this is a good enough nudge.
(Don't judge my coloring just yet, I just started and I know I suck horridly.)

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #108 on: October 29, 2013, 07:05:29 am »
She's lovely. Really.

I feel that this thread died abruptly.
Welp. I'd say this thread is in a pretty sleepy state itself, so occasional art posts here are more like spontaneous life bursts opposed to the normal state which is just Hakugyokurou calm. :V

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #109 on: November 02, 2013, 06:55:18 am »

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #110 on: November 02, 2013, 10:46:49 am »
Welp. I'd say this thread is in a pretty sleepy state itself
People post when they want to I guess, and then in my case there are hardly any times where I finish drawing something (or have something worthwhile) to post.
Like for example; http://imgur.com/TLhzRat
Started on this a couple of months back and finished it a week or two ago. Then due to a combination of having lost interest and realising I couldn't really bring the picture justice if I coloured it, I just left it in a psuedoshaded state like that. I think I'll just stick to simpler designs which I can be sure of colouring to my tastes.

Also first actual draw post.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #111 on: November 02, 2013, 05:06:50 pm »
Well the thing is, most people who art frequently have their own art threads - we're kind of the anomalies in this sense :U

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #112 on: November 02, 2013, 06:40:13 pm »
Mahou Shoujo Ran? She's cute.
Well the thing is, most people who art frequently have their own art threads - we're kind of the anomalies in this sense :U
Why you still don't have your own threads? :derp:

Also, what's the difference between ColonVee and ColonYou?
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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #113 on: November 02, 2013, 11:28:03 pm »
Also, what's the difference between ColonVee and ColonYou?
Not much. I've always imagined that colonVee seems a little more smilish than colonYou.
I tend to use :V when I'm being silly, and :U for self-deprecating jokes.

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #114 on: November 04, 2013, 07:01:57 pm »
Something else I did.

Self-feedback below. Feel free to add to, debunk, or reaffirm any of it.

The Fire Emblem design on the rug nearest Linde's feet looks off; the angle lines that make up the sides of it aren't well-aligned with the sides of the rug, unlike as it is on the other one.

(continued) Before you're sure you got the base linearts all done, take a break from the pic for a few days and then come back to it; that way, you can fix stuff like that before it gets too late.

The hair looks off; I know your thought process meant that the hair had to look like it was in the original concept art, but keep in mind that her hair is just a huge ponytail held up by a candy cane.

(continued) Those fancy strand-lines come after you finish the hair's outer shape, nor do you need to worry about just how much of the sides of the head the hair covers; it's not like all artists draw heads the same.

(continued) Just draw the hair like you normally would, and it'll look better than the mess you just made.

The back couch-cushion doesn't really look cushion-y; practice shading such cushions, and notice how it works so the next ver can have nicer-looking cushions. Get a bunch of cushion ref pics, since apparently that one sofa pic is too small for you to get much from it.

Boobs and armpits are placed too low.


Regardless, I'm rather proud of this one!

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #115 on: November 05, 2013, 01:47:40 am »
just finish my commission might as well put it in here~|>w<>/

pixiv link down below would be great to give some stars
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Something else I did.
It look rather good
I suggest try not to focus on the detail so much
tho it's good that u realize the flaw u got
if u take a step back and look at the realtionship of the character and the background
she look a bit small for a coach (or the otherway around)
if it's mean to be like that then its k
but having the correct relationship between the thing u draw can rly give a better sense of depth
u can try to make a little tiny icon sketch on the other people to figure out the composition and proportion
then when u are done stuff it in to the actual surface and work on the detail
hope that helps
PS: nice drawing btw |OwO>

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #116 on: November 06, 2013, 06:58:18 am »
These days, I'm not sure what i should put on paper next...

My friend made a request, and I finished it yesterday:

http://gmsp123.deviantart.com/art/Shweeka-2-OC-Fanart-411630715

I've been getting better, but I feel that I'm straying far from what I want cause of it :L

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #117 on: November 06, 2013, 05:49:16 pm »
@Freeze-Ex: Thanks for the feedback and compliment! :) I'll be sure to keep in mind how big I draw the seats relative to what's sitting on them.

@MK_Ultimos47: Pretty good pic, though what was it that you wanted that you were straying away from?

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #118 on: November 06, 2013, 09:29:15 pm »
An artstyle that was completely versatile and detail oriented, one that portrays heavy amounts of detail even in monochrome, something like the artworks in Symposium of Post Mysticism. I've been at it for five years, and unknowingly it evolved into something else completely :I

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Re: Post Your Artwork Thread V6
« Reply #119 on: November 06, 2013, 10:37:39 pm »
i clicked on some stuff and this happened


oh yeah and of course obligatory


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