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[Art] Jealous Witch did something derp
« on: January 03, 2013, 03:56:01 am »
Just as promised.

Tried to draw two girls in certain situation. Failed. Then tried to do some fun with perspective. Remembered the famous floating castle. Thought it was a bit boring. And then...
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2013, 04:07:39 am »
Hmmm where is the other girl??? Also you should draw first a sketch using a light pencil before to draw the final pic, this way you can avoid to let lines passing inside of your objects.
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« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2013, 05:37:07 am »
Hmmm where is the other girl???
With the first, on the other side of the sheet. You see third one.

Also you should draw first a sketch using a light pencil before to draw the final pic, this way you can avoid to let lines passing inside of your objects.
I draw pic gradually, first I draw common shapes, then put more detail.
So, for this castle, I started with simple boxes. Then, one box was changed into cylinder. Then, I added solid walls on those two towers, and latter divided them into merlons.
Then I got bored and drawed a sort of professional shinigami.
When I drawed people, I was startin with simple skeleton, then adding meat on it and, later, putting clothes.
It helps me to keep some shape in my pics.


BTW, where you found those lines?

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2013, 06:21:19 am »
Look at her left leg, there are some lost lines there I think
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #4 on: January 04, 2013, 06:34:39 am »
Hope this helps.


Forgot to mention- the third vanishing point should not be expanding downwards.
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2013, 07:18:57 am »
Oh yeah I knew that perspective is just raped hard.
This questioned line... I wanted to show you an original with slope at this point, but just seen there're no slopes here... wait. Seems you still should look at original.
Here is what I tried to draw by memory. Here is the same castle from another angle.

Though other derps are my ones. ._.

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #6 on: January 04, 2013, 07:25:52 am »
I think the originals made me more confused on how the hell the thing you drew works. :V

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2013, 10:32:12 am »
Cool trees! :V

And some Coret. A little bit of it, simplified version.

So, now I have the best of my derp collected in single place. Yay! (EDIT: horribly outdated now, especially since I moved to Imgur)
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Well, less complicated thing.
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #8 on: January 12, 2013, 09:38:42 pm »
Poof.
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Edit: It's my birthday now, yay!
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #9 on: January 15, 2013, 12:41:16 am »
Okay, enough unrelated stuff, let's return to girls.
The meaning of this box is left to your perverted imagination. As well as her left arm.
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #10 on: January 15, 2013, 03:30:06 am »
Your characters in drawings are really tall, do you like Clamp-style art?

And Happy birthday to you :)

BTW did you draw that Cow?
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #11 on: January 15, 2013, 03:58:39 am »
Do you like architecture?  :3 And happy birthday, if it isn't too late!

i should probably get to changing my sig but im too lazy

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #12 on: January 15, 2013, 07:33:06 am »
yay happy late b-day!
though might need a bit more work on figure
i rly like ur skills on perspective and views
maybe u can try some cityscape?

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #13 on: January 15, 2013, 01:46:10 pm »
Your characters in drawings are really tall
I already noticed that.
Should reduce the space between a ribcage and a pelvis.
do you like Clamp-style art?
Don't know what are you talking about.
BTW did you draw that Cow?
Only added more red. Try to google a "cow" image. :3
Do you like architecture?
Really, not. Those things are just fun to draw.
though might need a bit more work on figure
Oh no that would mean redrawing this from the beginning, I'm too lazy for that.
i rly like ur skills on perspective and views
maybe u can try some cityscape?
Probably I'll try, I'm going to have a lot of free time without good internet.

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #14 on: January 16, 2013, 03:30:37 am »
Oh no that would mean redrawing this from the beginning, I'm too lazy for that.
Uh, frankly, I think Freeze meant that your anatomy is very iffy, and not just for the picture in question. Probably a good thing to focus on for now?

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #15 on: February 08, 2013, 01:42:52 pm »
On the theme of singe-point perspective.
Koos Galleon (sorta).
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #16 on: February 09, 2013, 05:00:41 pm »
Pretty good stuff! I like how you considered that the farther away they are, the thinner the floorboards seem to be, and such. Oh, and do you take requests?

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #17 on: February 09, 2013, 06:12:47 pm »
Depends on my mood. You may try your luck and give an attempt to get my interest. :3

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #18 on: February 10, 2013, 07:27:11 pm »
All right then, how about~

Orin looking surprised, with the caption "Owner said nyan! She understands my language!" :o

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #19 on: February 11, 2013, 01:50:01 am »
Sounds like fun, probably I'll try. :3

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #20 on: February 11, 2013, 02:48:28 am »
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That is the most adorable Cirno ever.
Your artwork is very good! Keep it up!
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #21 on: February 11, 2013, 11:45:12 am »
That is the most adorable Cirno ever.
Your artwork is very good! Keep it up!
LOL this Cirno is not mine.

All right then, how about~
Epic fail.

might need a bit more work on figure
...
...Well, let's draw some tentacles!
I think, my nightmarish way of derping drawing should work well with binocular octopuses.
Also, I've finished my 15-paged notebook, and already made a new one.
So, for comparision, my old drawings.
Improvement: I now draw legs! :V
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #22 on: February 25, 2013, 07:35:07 am »
Less nightmarish face.
Actually, I drawed it from photo of my classmate, so it hardly can be named as improvement. Eh, I'm still so derp...
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #23 on: March 04, 2013, 08:44:43 pm »
Request completed + new stuff!

Not that bad a result on that request, there. Some feedback in blue:

-   Eyes would look better if placed lower. A little lower.

-   That hand palm could stand to be wider, on the viewer's right side, more specifically. Try that pose in front of a mirror; you'll see that that right side goes past the wrist a little, in a bump-like fashion. If that explanation's not clear enough, I can draw you a hand palm, if you'd like, so you can get the gist of it :) (Hand palms are one thing I don't suck at that bad, lol).

-   Also, the fingers. You drew them in the reverse order; from closeness to her face, the fingers are supposed to be:
   Index
   Middle
   Ring
   Pinky

   Instead. With the pinky being the most visible. I should know; I tried that pose in front of a mirror :P

-   There is other stuff regarding this pic too, but I don't know how to advise regarding it ^^;


Regarding that tentacle pic, I think it looks ok. Perhaps the tentacle creature could stand to be more detailed, but it doesn't looks bad as it is now. :) Though, I have a few things to say about the figure, also in blue:

I'm assuming that's a girl, so please correct me if I'm wrong, hehe. Also, feel free to disregard this advice if you were aiming to draw an androgynous girl. :)

-   The balance of the top half of the body and the bottom half is off. More specifically, the top half is significantly taller than the bottom half; if you're gonna draw girls, perhaps you should make it the other way around (or better yet, make both halves even).
-   The hips being wider and more shapely would make her look more female. I can provide a redline if you want, though perhaps it'd be a better idea to look at pictures of actual naked hips. Be they drawn by a great ero-mangaka or of pics made for students of figure drawing.

I see other stuff that's off, but I dunno how to advise regarding that either.


Dunno how to advise regarding that profile face.

Anyway, keep it up! You're improving at a faster pace than I am, if that encourages you  ^^

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #24 on: March 04, 2013, 09:30:07 pm »
Wow, I am not alone. :V
Regarding those pics, it is mutant anatomy, he-he.
About profile - no advices because it is perfect. :V Though, drawing from imagination and from photo are very different things, so this picture could hardly be named as progress.
You're improving at a faster pace than I am
I am particularly youkai, you're not a single bit one. :3

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #25 on: March 10, 2013, 04:19:30 pm »
Shapes, shapes, hm...
I wonder if anybody is interested in this particular undone lineart from a derp (as usual) sketch. Can you guess who is here?
Oh my, and I want to finish and color it.
Don't say about boots, I know they're bad. Other remarks are welcome.
Wanted to say something else, but forgot what. ^^" Maybe I'll add it when remember.

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #26 on: March 13, 2013, 01:40:37 pm »
Shameless bump.
Now with colors! :V
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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #27 on: March 13, 2013, 04:45:34 pm »
Criticism time!

The arms and torso still look too long.
The knees are too low. If you bend your knee enough, your ankle should touch your butt. At the moment it looks like her legs start from the bottom of her skirt, especially since the skirt hangs as if she's standing, even though she's walking.
Her hands are different sizes.
Her shoulders look too low, but I think that's partially because of her capette.
The linework is pretty wiggly, what program are you using?
Don't be so afraid of shadows, they could do with being a lot bigger. Also, I can't tell where the light is coming from?
Finally, her face is too square. Her nose and jaw should curve much more than that.

All that said, I can see a marked improvement over your previous stuff. Keep it up!

Quick redline below.
(Note: Please do not use as an actual reference. Also I am terrible at legs.)

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #28 on: March 14, 2013, 07:12:35 am »
Her hands are different sizes.
Hands... hands.
I've done about 5 attempts do draw a single one, horribly failed and just gave up do draw them right.
Her shoulders look too low, but I think that's partially because of her capette.
I intended to draw hair lying on shoulder, but now think that Homu should walk like ninja to keep them resting like that. ^^"
The linework is pretty wiggly, what program are you using?
MyPaint. Actually, I haven't searched hard for proper painting program, just seen it mentioned in some old post in Post Your Artwork.
Don't be so afraid of shadows, they could do with being a lot bigger. Also, I can't tell where the light is coming from?
Sun from the very top. At least, I thought that while was adding shadows.
All that said, I can see a marked improvement over your previous stuff. Keep it up!
Yay!

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Re: [Art] More derp from Delfigamer
« Reply #29 on: March 14, 2013, 06:46:49 pm »
Maybe you should try to draw simpler poses or train gesture drawings to get a better perception of the body anatomy. Walking poses look hard to draw properly :P
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