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Zero Izayoi

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  • Poet and daredevil, among other things... (x.o)
  • Nickname: Aisaka
The Visit
« on: November 15, 2011, 09:31:11 pm »
The Visit
by Zero Izayoi

I can feel it.

As I lay in bed reflecting upon this past day, a smile crosses my lips. I had been preparing lunch when she dropped by uninvited, as always. I don't mind it, though. I like it when Marisa stops by. She's always so happy and energetic; the whole world seems to grow brighter when she's around. "Yo! Is anyone there?" a familiar voice shouted through the door.

"I'm in the kitchen, Marisa!" I replied, my heart leaping inside my chest. I thought she might come by, so I'd prepared a little extra than usual. "I made a little too much rice this time, if you'd like some." I said as she walked through the door, smiling as beautifully as ever.

"Sounds great!" she said, sitting down at her usual spot. I placed the food on the table and sat down opposite Marisa. I looked into her eyes and imagined a place far away, perhaps from a distant dream. A place only we knew, far from the cares of this world... "Are you okay, Alice?"

"Uh, yeah! Why?"

"You zoned out. Am I really that boring?" Marisa said with a laugh.

"No!" I replied, "I was just thinking."

"What about?"

"Uh, nothing important." I hesitantly replied.

"Okay, then." Marisa said, smiling, and then returning to her food. Only my heart's desire, Marisa, I thought, Only my heart's desire... "Alice."


"You're doing it again."

"Oh, sorry!" I replied, my face turning red.

"You're really spaced today, aren't you?" Marisa asked.

"I guess." came my weak reply.

"Listen," Marisa said, "tomorrow's the Hakurei Shrine Festival, right?"

"I guess it is! I completely forgot about it!"

"You wanna go with me? It'll help you clear your head, yeah?" Marisa asked enthusiastically.

"Uh, yeah! I'd love to go with you!" I said, my face becoming an even deeper shade of red.

"Great! I'll pick you up early, say nine?"

"I'll be ready!" I replied, my heart soaring across the sky, painting it a multitude of colours. We finished eating, and Marisa left, but for a while I stood looking up into the sky where she had disappeared into the clouds. "I love you..." I whispered into the cool breeze caressing my face, "...Marisa." As I closed my eyes, the vision of our place returned, and my heart began to sway.

She likes me. I can feel it.

Tomorrow will be special. <3

It's my first fanfic. If it's any good I'm thinking of turning it into a prologue and continuing on with the story.
What do you think?
Uh, what is this thread about? o_o
well it was simply quoting from The Book of Trolls but then Edible posted a Nick Cage mecha and it all went downhill from there

I yearn to fix this break in what never existed; to reclaim my reality, even though it isn't real...
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