Author Topic: [Art] Finally.... It's the J.O.B art thread!(Beware TD Spoilers) (Read 14817 times)

J.O.B · « **on:** July 30, 2011, 01:40:25 AM »

I finally got around to this.
So let's get going shall we?
Note: Most of the colouring I do isn't done with my lineart. Generally I find them on some place like DA or something.
Some pencil art.
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And some colouring (not my lineart).
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P.S:Sorry if the pics are too big.

J.O.B · « **Reply #1 on:** August 02, 2011, 06:15:34 AM »

I would really like some feedback you know....

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #2 on:** August 02, 2011, 07:05:36 AM »

Don't fret; and I mean this in the kindest way possible! (I don't want to sound rude, that's all...)

I am not good at giving feedback, but I will try to do my best.

For the Kaguya drawing, for some odd reason, it looks like her head and neck is resting on her right shoulder. I would suggest moving it over to the left a bit to make it more centered. (Also, DAT HANDWRITING.)

Marisa doesn't really look like she's sitting on top of the broom, since the broom is shown in front of her butt, not under it. I think if you added a little more curvature to her bottom so that a little less of the broom is showing, it'll be fine.

I really like the way you color! Do you mind telling me how you make the clothes look silky like the way it is in the Reimu and Yukari picture? It looks really nice.

J.O.B · « **Reply #3 on:** August 02, 2011, 07:17:39 AM »

I'm fine with that feedback, especially since it's one of the first feedback comments I've ever had on MotK.
I think wht happened with the silky dress is that I used to make the lighting on dresses really wide but my sister said it looked a bit weird and she told me instead to do a much thinner line. So I decided to try that I that ended up happening. I think I had the normal colour of the dress and then I put lots of shades into it and blended them up so it made more of a thin line along where the light hits the dress. I was really surprised that it turned out like that. But as you can see, I didn't have much luck with Yukari.
About Kaguya: I think I tried to do it as if she is leaning back a bit while the rest of her body is a bit more head-on. But now that you mention it, it does look a bit weird.
Marisa: I had a bit of an ass crack for her but it looked kinda funny so I took it out (now she can't shit).
And the hand writing is so fun to do. Copperplate especially.
Also if you're wondering why Kaggy doesn't have any eyes. It's because generally when I draw eyes on faces, it ruins the whole pic. I can do eyes and faces but not together.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #4 on:** August 02, 2011, 07:31:15 AM »

Interesting; I'll have to try that next time I get to coloring something.

Actually, I think the lack of eyes for Kaguya sort of fits the mood for the picture. Makes her look serious, like she means business or something. :V

Do you draw the face first and then the eyes? If so, you should try drawing the eyes first, then the face and see how that works out for you.

J.O.B · « **Reply #5 on:** August 02, 2011, 07:42:04 AM »

It's not neccesarily tha tthe eyes don't fit with the face, it's more that they don't look the same. They're generally different sizes and have different shapes (even when they're head-on). But they don't seem too bad when there is no face to go with it. But I do generally draw the face first.
Also are there any characters that anyone wants me to draw?

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #6 on:** August 02, 2011, 10:42:24 PM »

I'd like to see you draw Komachi. I don't see too many people draw her here too often. (Or maybe I'm not looking hard enough.)

But seriously, you should try drawing faces with eyes, or you're never going to get better at drawing them. Since you're having trouble making the eyes look the same, I would suggest practicing by drawing just a pair of eyes. You can also look at pictures for reference (from say, a favorite artist) or, - I don't know if this works - try copying them? (Not trace them.)

Once you get better at that, you can add the face to it. Or in your case, face then eyes.

J.O.B · « **Reply #7 on:** August 03, 2011, 06:32:57 AM »

Because Aoshi is the best ~
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She looks a bit skinny. Her arms look weird. Her hand sucks. And she has no legs.
Plus her scythe got redesigned.
Also Aoshi, that idea sounds interesting. I might try it sometime.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #8 on:** August 03, 2011, 07:02:03 AM »

Wow, that was fast. Thank you!

I think the arms are weird because they are a little thin, and the shoulder doesn't look properly connected to the body. (I think if her right shoulder was "overlapping" the body just a tiny bit, and the left shoulder was a little hidden behind the body, it should be perfect. In a 1/2 turn, the shoulder farthest from the viewer shouldn't be completely visible, otherwise it'll look like the body is front facing the viewer.)

Also, hands are....difficult to draw, as a nice way of saying it, so you shouldn't feel bad about that. :V

J.O.B · « **Reply #9 on:** August 03, 2011, 07:06:13 AM »

Yay Aoshi~
Got anymore suggestions?
And yes hands are difficult to draw.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #10 on:** August 03, 2011, 07:14:23 AM »

If no one pops in the thread for a suggestion or two, I have a few ideas that'll keep you a little busy:

Reimu trying to complete her broom sweeping duties but is interrupted/annoyed by Marisa.
One of the new Ten Desires characters. (Preferibly Yoshika, 'cause she's cute. :3 )
Touhou crossover of your favorite TV show or book or anime, etc, etc...
And since I'm about to go to bed here in a minute, a sleepy PC - 98 Yuuka in Pj's.

Ack, this almost looks like too much to draw. :ohdear:
In that case, take as long as you want or just choose from these ideas.

J.O.B · « **Reply #11 on:** August 03, 2011, 07:16:33 AM »

I'll start ASAP!
EDIT: Pretty much done Yuuka now. the way she is sleeping looks really funny, but I still sleep like that sometimes.
EDIT2: Finishing Yoshika now. There are two huge jokes in there. I'll post it soon.

J.O.B · « **Reply #12 on:** August 03, 2011, 08:26:20 AM »

Here are the pics.
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Sorry if Yuuka is a bit hard to see.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #13 on:** August 04, 2011, 06:23:38 AM »

:teaspit:

Wow, that was fast. Yuuka is adorable~

You might wanna shift Yoshika's right arm up a few mm because it doesn't look like its connected straight into the shoulder. Otherwise, both are looking good!

J.O.B · « **Reply #14 on:** August 04, 2011, 07:02:46 AM »

Did you get the joke?
Also the speed of the drawings was because I had nothing else to do.
I really wish I had the Resident Artist title. My profile's a bit bare.
Hey Aoshi, I probably won't get round to doing the other suggestions yet. I want to focus on one person in a pic at a time.
So do you have any other suggestions?

J.O.B · « **Reply #15 on:** August 11, 2011, 06:38:50 AM »

Somebody asked me to draw a pic of their new Siberian Husky for about $50-$60. Wow this is my first time.
I'll post the results if good enough.

J.O.B · « **Reply #16 on:** August 14, 2011, 12:00:21 PM »

Finished drawing the 4th and 6th boss of TD. Beware of spoilers.
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EDIT: Done a much better version of the stage 6 boss. Will upload tomorrow.

J.O.B · « **Reply #17 on:** August 28, 2011, 06:15:49 PM »

:toot::toot::toot::toot:
Resident Artist ++++++ get!!!!!!
Now that I'm a resident artist, I should really keep more updated on my thread.
Also you guys should look at my thread more often. I could really do with more suggestions.

J.O.B · « **Reply #18 on:** August 29, 2011, 11:24:36 AM »

Aoshi suggested I draw a picture to commemorate the event.
So I did.
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Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #19 on:** August 29, 2011, 02:36:24 PM »

Once again, congrats on getting the tag!

And don't thank me. :< I haven't done anything that important other than just suggest things for you to draw.

J.O.B · « **Reply #20 on:** August 30, 2011, 05:43:59 AM »

That's one of the reasons why I thanked you.
You're basically the only person who has really suggested things for me to draw.
You're also basically the only person who has given me feedback on my drawings.
And you're also a really nice person.
You are one of the most awesome poeple on this forum as far as I'm concerned.

J.O.B · « **Reply #21 on:** September 01, 2011, 10:58:46 AM »

:colbert:
I don't know what to draw.
Somebody help!

Tamashii Kanjou · « **Reply #22 on:** September 01, 2011, 11:07:08 AM »

Rika & Evil Eye Sigma! :derp:

No really; do it. :3

J.O.B · « **Reply #23 on:** September 01, 2011, 11:19:46 AM »

Wow somebody other than Aoshi has finally posted in my thread.

I'll get on it right away!

Yukarin · « **Reply #24 on:** September 01, 2011, 11:53:03 AM »

Yukarin is requesting for Yukari

Preferably megane.

GO

J.O.B · « **Reply #25 on:** September 01, 2011, 12:03:40 PM »

Yay another request!!!
And perfect timing as I just finished Rika and EES. Uploading after I've done Yukari.
PCB or Post-PCB dress?
EDIT: Nevermind you went offline. So I'll just do her PCB dress.
EDIT2: Okay, I finished Yukari, so now I'll just upload them.

Yukarin · « **Reply #26 on:** September 01, 2011, 12:46:23 PM »

DURR PCB DRESS

OH WAIT YOU DID PCB DRESS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

J.O.B · « **Reply #27 on:** September 01, 2011, 12:47:12 PM »

Here they are:
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Yukarin · « **Reply #28 on:** September 01, 2011, 12:50:23 PM »

* Yukarin is terrified that Yukari was beheaded.

* Yukarin is amused in seeing her head on the lower side.

* Yukarin is happy.

J.O.B · « **Reply #29 on:** September 01, 2011, 12:51:15 PM »

Quote from: Yukarin on September 01, 2011, 12:50:23 PM

* Yukarin is happy.

* J.O.B is happy.

Oh fuck I forgot megane!
Oh, well.