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Tengukami

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Because I'm Home - Part Two
« on: June 30, 2011, 02:53:00 AM »
OK, so, after a long hiatus, I decided to take a crack at Touhou fiction again. This time, I wanted to give myself the challenge of writing about a character I've never been particularly fond of but still find interesting. In this case, it's Sanae. I'm writing this as I go, without so much as an outline to guide me, which - to those of you familiar with what I've written in the past - might know is very unlike me. This is the first part. Your feedback is appreciated.

Part One
Part Two
« Last Edit: September 13, 2011, 04:00:49 AM by Tengukami »
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Hideki

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Re: Because I'm Home - Part One
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2011, 05:24:06 AM »
I wonder... Is this the same Aya that was in your other story?
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Tengukami

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Re: Because I'm Home - Part One
« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2011, 06:00:27 AM »
Quote from: Hideki on June 30, 2011, 05:24:06 AM
I wonder... Is this the same Aya that was in your other story?

You mean this one (shameless plug)?

I don't know myself. Maybe! Guess we'll find out together.
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Re: Because I'm Home - Part One
« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2011, 02:07:05 AM »
Short, but this is looking good.
I want to see more of this, especially since more could stand to be explained. (i mean, yeah the character hasn't opened up yet, that last line just means "more!")
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Tengukami

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Re: Because I'm Home - Part Two
« Reply #4 on: September 13, 2011, 03:44:32 AM »
And only a little over two months later! Will have to copy/paste here until I remember my blog password ...

Edit: Found it.

http://tengukami.blogspot.com/2011/09/because-im-home-part-two.html
« Last Edit: September 13, 2011, 03:58:21 AM by Tengukami »
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Re: Because I'm Home - Part Two
« Reply #5 on: September 13, 2011, 03:56:39 AM »
Nitori was thinking with Portals! If she found the blue crystal then she could control where she ended up.
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