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A New World, Book 3 - Complete -
Iced Fairy:
--- Quote from: Zelinko on August 07, 2011, 11:04:07 PM ---What of the Moon? When Humans eventually get back there will they find the Moon of Armstrong and Aldrin or the Moon of the Lunarians?
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Little of column A, a little of column B. The Lunarian capitol will be mostly running on battery with a battalion of rabbits keeping the place going. It'll be a little weird, since the moon rabbits set how the moon should look, and they're used to the strange dichotomy.
--- Quote ---what happened to the moon rabbit that was captured by the SDM?
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After the invasion end Flopsy returns to her maid training and ends up being Remilia's personal maid. Her ear gets regenerated but she never shakes the name.
Mr. Rabi:
Congrats on finishing the ending! I'm going to have to go back through the other two stories again...
nintendonut888:
Mmm hmm hmm.
Well, this was quite a wonderful thing to read over Winter Break. I've always been a little skittish about reading the fanfiction of those I know, but I'm glad to have taken the plunge. It's kind of hard to say what hasn't been already said in various places, but you have a wonderful style, and I would definitely like to say I've learned a thing or two from your writing. You are very good at conveying emotions, and painted battles in a way even my sad little mind could follow. :D
All in all, great read. Though I'd have liked to see more resolution on everybody, I think that's how "distant future" epilogues should work: A minimal focus on the aftermath. That makes it all feel mysterious and intriguing. :3
And uh...yeah. Thanks for writing this, and sorry it took so long to start and then finish it.
Alfred F. Jones:
This is over a year after completion, but I lost track of this story before the end and Donut reminded me that I needed to finish the story at some point. So I went back and read all three books in about as many days.
This is such a good story, oh wow. I wish you did long works like this more often, because you are damn good at this world-building business, dropping hints and allusions that the audience might not notice the first time around and leaving plenty of stuff up to interpretation. Well done!
Iced Fairy:
Ah, I didn't realize I'd lost you along the way, since you were still commenting in third book. Well thanks for finishing the story and the compliments.
As for longer works... I just am kinda bad with them. My vision of Gensoukyo is a lot more slice of life and episodic. It's probably why my crossover fics end up longer then my head cannon ones.
Maybe I should consider compiling a link set of all my shorts though. Most of them have some interconnection, and I probably could put together theme sets for stuff. Like stuff centered on Hatate or Marisa. Might give a better idea of the continuity and connections in my headcannon.