Author Topic: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]  (Read 33006 times)

FinnKaenbyou

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?!
« Reply #360 on: March 17, 2011, 12:33:38 AM »
>Do we know about Satori and Koishi's connection with earth spirits? If so then ask them if they can retrieve a specific one.

My fucking god Rou I didn't know the enter key could do me so much harm.
>Yes and no respectively. The spirit is likely in Hakugyokurou.

>"Yeah.. I understand... but, could I please talk to Mommy for a while? Just us two? At least... let me have that.
I haven't gotten any chance to since I was born.

Please... just wait until after that.. ok?"

I want to ask Rikako why she and Kanbei wanted to make an android in the first place.
The robot that would turn out to be Rou-tan, it's original purpose.
>Kawashiro nods. She'll give you that much, and lets you continue your discussion for a bit longer.
"It was...Kanbei's idea. He saw puppeteers playing with dolls when he was a boy, and since then the idea fascinated him. He studied every human textbook there was, and a lot of the kappa archives as well. He was talented, too - finding ideas and revolutions where the youkai had struggled.
What did we want to do? He defined it as 'a puppet without strings'. An artificial being, but one that had its own will and personality. One that could be mistaken for a living thing by passersby. It was a beautiful idea, and I wanted to help him see it through."
She sniffles.
"...I failed there again, didn't I? I was scared. Scared that if you knew it all, you'd run away from me. That what I'd do to help you, to make you everything Kanbei wanted, would be enough to frighten you and make you my enemy. And it did - you turned against me, you made everything fall apart. It just goes to show I don't deserve your love, doesn't it?"

>Say in a more serious tone "Mommy, You did do some really bad things, But you also did a lot of good things too. You make me proud to be my Mother."
>"Wait, I have an idea! Cant me and the dolphin go out and try to clean the water? I really dont want to see Mommy to go to jail, but if we fix the water wont she come out a lot sooner?"
> Mother looks at you, frowning.
"Y...You don't mean that. You're just saying that because that's what I programmed you to say. I raised you like I thought every parent raises their child - obedient, and willing to punish them every time they make a mistake. All I need to do is this, and..."
Mother removes a plate on your head, and starts hastily rewiring the insides. Kawashiro holds her arm out to stop her, but it's already too late.
There's a loud clicking, and suddenly the Zeroth Law of Rou-tan ceases to exist.

"...There. Free will, and your own morailty. That's what you were looking for when you hit the Unlock button, wasn't it?"

Mother - no, Rikako - looks horribly glum now. She stands up and walks towards Kawashiro, sighing deeply.

"In that case, Rou-tan, let this be my final gift to you. I give you the one thing I have left to offer - I give you the right to do whatever you want."

She looks back towards you, her heart slowly breaking in two.

"Don't worry about me. I'll be dead in the next fourty years or so anyway. Nothing compared to everyone else in this room, right...?"

Kawashiro starts to slowly lead her out the door...

Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?!
« Reply #361 on: March 17, 2011, 12:39:30 AM »
> ... What do we want to do...?
> ... Well, one thing's obvious. Catch up to Mommy and Kawashiro, and take Mommy's hand.
> "Mommy, there's a lot I wanna do. I wanna swim around and help Current Dolphin, 'cause I feel bad about hurting her and about the water being dirty. I wanna learn about everyone, and find new skills." Use Covert Form (Cat) to create nekomimi momentarily, then retract them. "I wanna to show the world the superior power of suplexes over nuclear power."
> Give Mommy our first sincere smile.
> "But most of all, I wanna stay with the one I love, myu~♥!"

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?!
« Reply #362 on: March 17, 2011, 12:51:05 AM »
I fucking d'aww'd everywhere. This is why i dont want it to end.

>"I still love you Mother, weither it was just the way you made me or not. Dont forget that, okay myu~♥!"
>Hug her.
>and then proceed the robot/loli/maid/swimsuit/catgirl smexy tiems

FinnKaenbyou

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?!
« Reply #363 on: March 17, 2011, 12:52:18 AM »
> ... What do we want to do...?
> ... Well, one thing's obvious. Catch up to Mommy and Kawashiro, and take Mommy's hand.
> "Mommy, there's a lot I wanna do. I wanna swim around and help Current Dolphin, 'cause I feel bad about hurting her and about the water being dirty. I wanna learn about everyone, and find new skills." Use Covert Form (Cat) to create nekomimi momentarily, then retract them. "I wanna to show the world the superior power of suplexes over nuclear power."
> Give Mommy our first sincere smile.
> "But most of all, I wanna stay with the one I love, myu~♥!"
> Mother is shocked for a moment. Then, slowly but beautifully, a look of sheer joy rises to her face.
"Rou-tan...Rou-tan!"
Another embrace; this time with all the excitement of a new parent. The squad taking you in is cautious, but otherwise willing to go along with it. Komeiji confirms that Mother no longer has any ill intent, and thus they no longer have a reason to suspect you either.
Maybe you're too happy considering you're going to spend most of your Mother's life in prison. But honestly, you'll be together, and that's what matters.

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EPILOGUE

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In the end, the authorities place you and Mother together in one prison cell. It's more or less escape proof, and (much to your disappointment) suplexproof, although you convince the guards to pass you rocks to practice with. [These rocks are usually replaced once every six hours.]
To work off your time, you do community service alongside Current Dolphin, or Sango as you've since learned to call her. The kappa have relieved you of most of your offensive abilities - your suplexes can only knock out a youkai at best now, but that doesn't stop them being fun to do. The LOLI engine still works as advertised as well, and you're allowed some 'parole time' if you finish your work with Sango early.
But despite this - despite having a chance to see all of Gensokyo, the whole world your mother wanted you to see - your favourite time of the day is when you come home and see the glint in Mother's eyes as they fall upon you.
It's a look of total, utter happiness.
"Welcome back, Rou-tan. How was your day?"

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FIN

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #364 on: March 17, 2011, 12:55:40 AM »
So it ended anyway.
Cut way too short, I say.

That said.
Roukan I love you, I hate you, and goddamn Rou-tan is cute.
Oh, by the way. I've found some new tea.

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #365 on: March 17, 2011, 12:57:06 AM »
So it ended anyway.
Cut way too short, I say.

That said.
Roukan I love you, I hate you, and goddamn Rou-tan is cute.

That.

It ended too early, I want more Rou-tan~

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #366 on: March 17, 2011, 12:58:14 AM »
Rou-tan for playable character in TH14. Someone fund it.
Oh, by the way. I've found some new tea.

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #367 on: March 17, 2011, 12:59:13 AM »
D'awww, Are you sure its over?
I'd love to use rou-tan in a fanfic, Unless she's an ORIGINAL CHARACTER DO NOT STEAL

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #368 on: March 17, 2011, 01:03:52 AM »
Call up AAA, get some fuckin' fanart in this shit

As a lurker of most of the boards here, I have to say that you create some of the best storylines (Rising Star cough cough) I've ever seen, story or game.

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #369 on: March 17, 2011, 01:10:12 AM »
Rou-tan fanart summoning NOW
Hell, even a DMF character would me nice.

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #370 on: March 17, 2011, 01:34:23 AM »
And so Utsuho and Rin were left to fend for themselves in the harsh wilderness of the maintenance corridor.

Also, thirding fanart.

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #371 on: March 17, 2011, 01:37:09 AM »
fifthing fanart.
I'm kewl like that

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #372 on: March 17, 2011, 01:42:26 AM »
REQUESTING FUCKING SEQUEL
Or even permission to do it myself damnit
i don't want it to end yet ;_;

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #373 on: March 17, 2011, 01:53:09 AM »
REQUESTING FUCKING SEQUEL
Or even permission to do it myself damnit
i don't want it to end yet ;_;
now that
that
THAT

I agree with 100%. Make it yourself man I dont want this to end

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #374 on: March 17, 2011, 01:56:49 AM »
I Kipth fanart and sequel.
Oh, by the way. I've found some new tea.

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #375 on: March 17, 2011, 02:04:10 AM »
If someone does make a sequel
make it so we never went to jail
Since I cant see why rou-tan went to jail for more then a month at most, since all she did was kidnapping, and even then it was out of her control

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #376 on: March 17, 2011, 07:07:02 AM »
Welp.
If I learned anything from this, its this

SCIENCE rules all.
Suplexes are more powerful than nuclear fusion.
Koishi can be defeated with if you just tell her to F off.
Don't hesitate to kill.
And if Nitori tells you to push a button. DON'T. FUCKING. PUSH. THE GODDAMNED BUTTON.
Told ya the remote needed to be crushed. :V
Oh, by the way. I've found some new tea.

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #377 on: March 17, 2011, 07:08:15 AM »
yeah but then we wouldn't get the touching end
nor would you see me FLIP THE MOTHER FUCKER OUT.

Still though, I'd like to see this continued.

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #378 on: March 17, 2011, 07:10:30 AM »
A sequel huh?
Well, I'd say it'd have to be set after the jail time in order to remain in the same continuity wouldn't it?
Plus, Rou-tan could have picked up some new skills in the timeskip.
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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #379 on: March 17, 2011, 07:36:32 AM »
Just means next game, we get to break Mom out!

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #380 on: March 17, 2011, 07:36:44 AM »
I'll simply vote for Rou-tan cameo in Dolphin Rider Koishi :3
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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #381 on: March 17, 2011, 09:13:13 AM »
Now that I like.
Hmm....Now that reminds me....maybe it'll work.
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FinnKaenbyou

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #382 on: March 17, 2011, 09:14:34 AM »
If someone does make a sequel
make it so we never went to jail
Since I cant see why rou-tan went to jail for more then a month at most, since all she did was kidnapping, and even then it was out of her control
>To be fair, the charge on Rou-tan is rather light in comparison to Rikako's, but she was still an accomplice to a crime so she's got time to serve. Even then, for the most part I was aiming for her wanting to stay in prison for longer than she needed to just so she could keep her mother company.

Sequel? Maybe. Just not right now.

Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #383 on: March 17, 2011, 11:27:23 AM »
> So, BGM time.

> BGM for Character Creation
> BGM for Rou-tan's Awakening
> BGM for Current Dolphin
> BGM for the Race!
> BGM for roybaty.worm infection
> BGM for Fight against Okuu and Orin
> BGM for the countdown
> Credit Roll BGM

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #384 on: March 17, 2011, 11:30:45 AM »
>run credits.gif

Kips McKipzerson

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #385 on: March 17, 2011, 12:26:04 PM »
>Make Rou make credits for the end of this chapter
>We all know rou is going to make a sequel.


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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #387 on: March 17, 2011, 05:54:34 PM »
I had a few ideas; find them if you wish.

> BGM for Kawashiro's store
> BGM for tiny Rou-tan
> Unused BGM for giant Rou-tan (I was never really sure if Rou-tan could grow huge as well as shrink down; if she can't, then ignore this one)
> Unused BGM for the Bad End (if we had gotten the code wrong)

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Re: I, LOLI - Cyborg Quest?! [Complete]
« Reply #389 on: March 18, 2011, 07:03:23 PM »
Awesome game Rou~  Congrats! :3

> BGM:  SUPLEX!
> BGM:  Three Tunnels

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