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Re: Orphan
« Reply #30 on: July 24, 2011, 04:43:22 AM »
Of course, I can't really know about that without knowing who you're guessing that she is.
 
 
 

 
 
Chapter 15
The Other Side
 
 
"The demons have split up," Wriggle said. "Nochai and Ketaa are on their own again. They're going to keep Orphan under observation while the others return to Makai and report."
 
"Which group should we go after?" Cirno asked.
 
"We can split up and take both," Rumia said. "The groups are of two and three, right?"
 
"Right," Wriggle said. "And going by their performance in the battle, any one of us could take either group."
 
"I'm staying with Rumia," Cirno said.
 
"In that case, you two go for the trio. I'll handle the pair staying behind."
 
"Sure," Rumia said. "Um, we don't know where to go, though."
 
"We can just have Wriggle tell us which way," Cirno said.
 
"That way," Wriggle said, pointing. "They're going pretty quickly, so you'll need to move fast yourselves in order to catch them. If they change course, I'll use a swarm of insects to redirect you. Don't worry about taking them alive; just take them out. The leader's one of my pair, and he's the one we'll want alive."
 
"Got it," Rumia said. "Come on, Cirno, let's move!"
 
The two of them flew off in the direction Wriggle had indicated, followed by Daiyousei. "Cirno, wait! Wait up!"
 
"I guess she's worried about Cirno," Wriggle said as she and Mystia began moving themselves. Tewi went after Cirno and Rumia, saying that she'd already seen Wriggle's new power in action and now she wanted to see that of the other two.
 
"And I'm worried about you," Mystia said. "And besides, didn't we say we were just going to take a look?"
 
"I think all of us knew that we'd end up getting involved."
 
"But why?"
 
"I would assume that Cirno, Rumia, and myself each have our own reasons," Wriggle said. "I can't speak for them, but as for me, well?"
 
"You want to help," Mystia said. "Gensokyo may be in danger, and you want to help."
 
"Yes. I've always been weak; you know that. I couldn't do much. I could barely even protect myself. I just had to hope that any problems were dealt with by others. I couldn't do much, no matter how hard I tried, but I just went along with it, just passed it off as the way things were. It took a threat to you for me to realize that I was wrong. I don't have to be helpless. I don't have to just sit back and let others handle things now, and I'm not going to. If there's a threat to us, to any of us, I can face it now. And what we face now seems to be a threat to Gensokyo. Our home. And I'm not going to just stay back and let others handle the problems. Not anymore."
 
 


 
Neither group put up much of a fight; clearly, the battle against Orphan and Utsuho had taken its toll on them. Cirno and Rumia had taken out their targets, although one of the demons had done something first, likely somehow sending some sort of message to another demon. But their targets were down, so they, along with Daiyousei and Tewi, were heading to Wriggle's location, directed by Wriggle's insects.
 
Wriggle had killed the demon named Ketaa, and was now facing the incapacitated leader, Mystia standing beside her. "Okay," Wriggle said, "start talking. Why do you want Orphan dead?"
 
Nochai just laughed. "Do you really think I'm going to tell you anything?"
 
"Not without some? encouragement."
 
"I suppose you're right," Nochai said. "Anyone can be made to talk. So perhaps it's best that I ensure you have nobody to question."
 
"Don't think you can escape," Wriggle said.
 
"Oh, I've figured out that I can't get away from you. And I can't hope to beat you, either. So?" Nochai began an odd chant, and his eyes started to glow.
 
"I don't know what you're up to," Wriggle said, "but don't expect it to- ah!"
 
Nochai exploded.
 
 


 
Wriggle and Mystia were sitting near the Sanzu River, and Cirno's group was on their way.
 
The pair just sat in silence for a few minutes. "Okay," Mystia said, "um, what the hell did that thing do?"
 
"It? it must have been some sort of suicide spell," Wriggle said. "Probably something set up ahead of time as a last resort, for use in case of capture. And set up to be done fairly quickly; that chanting probably just activated a spell that was already ready. I think that was a special force, and Nochai in particular likely knew things that Makai really doesn't want their enemy-us-to know. So they provided him with a last-ditch safety measure, a way to keep the information safe if he fell into enemy hands."
 
"And he did, so he used it, and it?"
 
"Yeah," Wriggle said. Then she got to her feet and turned to meet Cirno's group as they landed in front of her. "Hi."
 
"Hi," Tewi said. "Um, I thought you were going to keep the leader alive. Where is he?"
 
"Um? um, he? well, he killed himself. Pre-prepared suicide enchantment."
 
"Oh," Rumia said. "Wait, what?"
 
"He must have known something important, then," Tewi said.
 
Wriggle nodded. "Yeah, we think so, too. But now we can't find out what it was."
 
"Actually," Tewi said, "we might just be able to. Remember, these demons were out to kill Orphan, and indications are that Orphan is someone important from the mountain. We may be able to learn more from someone there. Although if I'm there, we run the risk of Aya accusing us of all kinds of crazy shit."
 
"I'm not worried about her," Wriggle said. "Let's wait until tomorrow, though, since it's getting late."
 
"Yeah," Cirno said, "let's head back to my place. You coming, Tewi?"
 
The rabbit shook her head. "Nah. Taking a break from all the crazy was nice, but I shouldn't be away from Eientei for too long. There's no telling what might happen next. I'll meet you tomorrow morning, though; I'm curious about all this myself."
 
"'Kay," Cirno said. "See you in the morning."
 
 


 
The night had been uneventful, and as Netese had said, the caravan had gotten going first thing in the morning. They'd been underway for several hours, and were now in Tonall.
 
A demon came into the room Shanghai had been given. "Lady Netese would like me to inform you that we've rendezvoused with Lady Nekiei's group. She's explaining the plan to Nekiei, and she requests your presence."
 
"Sure,' Shanghai said. She followed the demon out of the carriage and over to Netese's, entering into the same room she'd previously met Netese in. This time, there was another demon present.
 
"I have brought her as requested," the messenger said. He bowed, then exited.
 
"Ah, Shanghai," Netese said. "Have a seat." Shanghai did so. "Nolaria, this is Shanghai, the one I was talking about. Shanghai, allow me to introduce Nolaria Nekiei."
 
"Osira here tells me that you're the one who'll be luring Alice in," Nekiei said. "I have to say, it's quite a pleasure to meet you."
 
[They seem quite familiar with each other,] Alice noted.
 
"Likewise," Shanghai said. "You're the one who's going to kill Alice. I'm very pleased to meet you."
 
"Oh, I'm just leading the attack," Nekiei said. "There's no telling who'll actually get the killing blow."
 
"You're the one who's going to do it," Netese said. "You are going to be using our 'special method', remember?"
 
"Yeah, but you should always expect the worst. Besides, do you really think she won't be able to counter it?"
 
"We have altered it from Shinki's form. It will work."
 
"Well, maybe, but maybe not. Obviously, I'm hoping you're right-and I'll be very surprised if you aren't-but I do want to be ready. That's why I brought such a large force, you know." Nekiei turned to Shanghai. "Anyways, there are a couple things I'd like to discuss with you, Shanghai."
 
"By all means," the doll replied.
 
"Okay, so first of all, you told Osira that Alice's portal will open in Mekis. I assume that means the portal's location is fixed. Is this correct?"
 
"As far as I know. Alice can't make a portal like that herself, so she has to be using a spellcard."
 
"Ah, I see. We must try to take this spellcard, then. Having a second entrance to Gensokyo would be most helpful. Where does the portal open there?"
 
"Outside of Alice's home."
 
"Ah, of course. That's good, I think. A good second location. Anyways, on to the second thing. Alice has been bringing dolls to life now. Do you know how many she has?"
 
"At least seven," Shanghai said. "The link she used to do it existed initially on myself and seven others, the first dolls of her seven model types-and she has modified them as she's made refinements to the models, so don't think they'll be easier opponents just because they were made early on. Alice may have brought others to life, but I don't know for sure."
 
"Okay. And how many do you think will accompany her?"
 
"Three or four. Copenhagen and Hourai were built for physical and magical combat, respectively, and Holland was built for durability and defense. I'm certain those three will be present. London, the scout model, may or may not be there; she was built for speed, not combat, but I expect that she could still put up a fight-and speed, of course, can be quite useful in battle. I don't expect to see the other three, though. Moscow's designed for espionage and would be of little use in an actual fight, and the other two are labor models. So it's only those first four I'd expect to see, although if she's brought any more of those models to life, they'll probably come along as well."
 
"In addition to numerous non-living dolls, of course."
 
"Of course, although again, I'd expect to see only those first four models, and even then, only a few of the London model, if any."
 
"Yes. And Osira here tells me that you yourself will be unable to assist us in battle?"
 
"Most likely. But I want to be there when she dies."
 
"Yes, Osira filled me in, and I understand completely. As long as you're sure Alice can't turn you against us, it's just fine with me."
 
"I'm sure."
 
"Good. Okay, so on to the plan, which is really pretty simple. We'll position ourselves-concealed, of course-to encircle the arrival point. Once Alice comes through, we close the appropriate side in to get my people between her and the portal's location in order to prevent her from escaping through it. Then I come out and do my thing, and Alice is dealt with if it works, although we'd still have her living dolls to deal with, though I doubt that'll be a problem. And if it doesn't work, of course, we'll just have to take her out the old-fashioned way."
 
"I'll make sure I'm nearby and visible," Shanghai said. "She'll be expecting to find me anyways, and since she'll come to me, we'll know what direction she'll head in after exiting the portal, making it easier to get between her and it."
 
"Good idea. Now, then, you're certain that she will take time to prepare before coming through?" Shanghai nodded. "Well, in that case, go ahead and do your thing, then meet me outside." Nekiei got to her feet. "I'm going to get the troops mobilized."
 
 


 
Higan was, in a word, consistent. There was absolutely no variation, just the same seemingly endless expanse as far as the eye could see. Aside from the river, of course, which Utsuho and I continued to move along. We were looking for a shinigami, someone who ferries the souls of the dead across the river, so remaining by the river was a necessity, for obvious reasons.
 
"Man," Utsuho said, "what is it with this place? Why's it so big if there's nothing here?"
 
"Perhaps it's simply larger than what is needed for Hell," I said. "However, I think it's more likely that it's simply due to the properties of this realm. We already know that certain things work differently here; who's to say that this seemingly endless expanse isn't simply a result of that?"
 
"I still don't like it. It's boring."
 
"Well, then let's hope we find someone-okay, that's a bit of an eerie coincidence. Look, there's someone over there. Come on. And remember: no matter what happens, do not attack unless I say so."
 
 


 
"I'm here," Tewi said as she entered Cirno's house. "We ready to go?"
 
"I think so," Rumia said. "Have you been to the mountain before, Tewi?"
 
"No."
 
"Then it's only Cirno who has," Wriggle said.
 
"She's been there?"
 
"There's a lot of frogs there," Cirno said. "I'd always go freeze 'em, although that frog-lady likes to attack me when I do. Although I haven't seen her in a while. Although I guess I haven't been there in a while. Although-"
 
"We get it," Mystia said. "Now, are we going or not?"
 
"We'll head to the mountain shrine," Wriggle said. "If anyone knows who Orphan is, it'll be the mountain god. Come on, let's get moving."
 
 


 
The woman looked up as Utsuho and I approached. "What the-"
 
We landed in front of her. "Greetings," I said.
 
"You're not dead. How did you get here?"
 
"You probably won't believe it, but we flew over the river. Or I did, at least; my companion couldn't fly at all while above it, so I had to carry her."
 
"And you shouldn't have been able to, either."
 
"I couldn't, really. I kept more of it than my companion, but I was still unable to maintain my altitude."
 
"Right. Okay, um, there's a lot I could get into about that, but I think I'll go with: why did you want to cross the river?"
 
"We did not," I said. "We were attacked, and when our attackers realized that we were winning the battle, they drove us over the river, obviously intending to use it to kill us. And they were able to fly over it without any problems, by the way."
 
"Yeah, and that's impossible, too. Only shinigami and the Yama can fly above the river."
 
"Does that hold true for those from Makai?" I asked. "Because it was demons that attacked us."
 
"Yes, it hold true for demons. And it should hold true for you, too. You could not have escaped the river's curse, not even to the extent you claim to have. Although you shouldn't be here anyways. You should never have been here, not even in death. But you are here, and that much I can't deny. Man, and today was looking like an easy day, too."
 
"You are a shinigami, I take it?"
 
"Yes. Komachi Onozuka. And you?"
 
"I am Orphan,' I said, "and my companion is Utsuho. We desire only to leave this realm and return to Gensokyo, but we do not seem able to do so."
 
"Can't get around that, huh?"
 
"Correct. But shinigami can, so we decided to find one."
 
"And you found me. Great. Man, I'm glad I don't actually have to decide anything here even if you are telling the truth. Sorry, ladies, but I can't help you. I can get myself back across, but that's it. You try riding along in the ol' boat here, and you'll find yourselves in the river. Only the Yama can get someone else across. So, thankfully, whatever's going on with you two isn't my problem."
 
"Then I must ask you where we can find a Yama."
 
"If you have to ask," Komachi said, "you can't get in. You can't see any of it, can you?"
 
"Yeah," Utsuho said, "all we see is a whole lot of nothing. It's really boring. You should get some stuff in here."
 
Komachi chuckled. "There's actually quite a lot here. You just can't perceive it, 'cause you're still alive. Only the dead, as well as shinigami and the Yama-we perceive as both the living and the dead do-can. The path to the place of judgment, where the Yama waits, is clear, and the dead can't stray from it. But you can't even see it, so you cannot get there."
 
"Then I must ask you to carry a message to the Yama," I said. "Surely the Yama could come to us."
 
Komachi laughed again. "Yeah, um, sorry, lady, but not happening. Hell, how do I know that it's not something about her that's why you came here in the first place? I have no reason to believe you, you know."
 
"Then allow the Yama to judge our story."
 
"Yeah, no. Sorry, but even if I did believe you, I really don't have time for this. The boss'll have my ass if I waste any more time. I'm her shinigami, and she's not going to be happy if I screw around again. So as much as I hate to say it, I have to get back to what the hell are you doing?"
 
I had interposed myself between Komachi and her little boat. "Preventing you from leaving," I said. "I'm sorry, but we need to speak to the Yama."
 
"What're you gonna do, fight me? You don't exactly have a lot of room to work, you know. You can't even enter the place."
 
"Then the Yama will have to come here."
 
"Yeah, and you can't really make me go get her."
 
"I believe I can."
 
"Yeah? Sorry, but even if you fight me and win, you can't get in."
 
"If we cannot go to her, then we must have her come to us, whether you're willing to bring her or not. If you refuse to bring her here, then you'll have to be forced to."
 
"Not happening. And if you fight me, well, she'll know. I'm her shinigami; she'll know if I'm being attacked."
 
I would assume that Komachi hoped this would intimidate me into backing down, but as far as I was concerned, it was actually good news. "I would doubt that she'd abandon you. If she knows that you are under attack, then would she not come to your aid?"
 
"Oh, shit," Komachi said, "please don't tell me you're serious."
 
I formed my weapon. "I am. Utsuho, stay out of this, please. I will handle this fight myself."
 
Um, okay," the hell raven said, "if you're sure."
 
"I am." I took a step towards Komachi. "You might want to draw your own weapon."
 
Komachi did so, taking her scythe in her hands. "Come on, lady, please don't do this."
 
"If you refuse to get the Yama, then I'm afraid I must."
 
I attacked.
 
 


 
Nekiei's force was about to depart when a messenger landed. "Lady Netese! Oh, and Lady Nekiei, too? And who's that?" The messenger indicated Shanghai."
 
"She's going to help us kill Alice Margatroid," Netese said. "Now, I assume you have a message for me."
 
The messenger nodded. "Yes. I'm attached to Lady Malachi. An observer came through last night with a message from some special force. Malachi communicated the message to Lord Tokekei, then sent me to deliver it to you."
 
"And what is the message?"
 
"This is the message." The messenger's voice changed. "Message begin: 'This is Oseka, a member of the special team headed by Nochai. The target was accompanied by an extremely powerful bodyguard whom we were unable to defeat. We tried to force them into the Sanzu, but they somehow made it across. We have confirmed that they're stuck, but they are still alive. Nochai and Ketaa remained to observe, while the other three of us were sent to report. We are currently under attack by unknown individuals; the other two are buying me time to flee, but these enemies are fast, and escape may not be possible-shit, one of them's already after me. Um, I was at? right. I am sending this message in the-shit, that was close!-quite likely event that I do not survive. Oseka, out.' End message." The messenger's voice returned to normal. "Any return message?"
 
"No," Netese said. "I'll be going there myself. Nekiei, I wasn't going to accompany you on the Alice mission, anyways, so nothing changes there. I'll figure out what to do about Orphan."
 
"Is she really that dangerous?" Shanghai asked.
 
"She could be a significant problem. I know who and what she is, and she could potentially undo the work we've done dividing Gensokyo."
 
"I see."
 
"You don't need to worry about her," Netese said. "You all just go ahead with the plan against Alice."
 
"Understood," Nekiei said. "Shanghai, are you sure Alice isn't going to be suspicious about you being in distress for hours?"
 
"No," Shanghai said. "I'm going with a general distress and call for help, not anything that gives a sense of immediate danger. She'll come, don't worry."
 
"I see. In that case, I think it's about time we got moving."
 
 


 
I ducked underneath Komachi's scythe and attempted to strike her with my own weapon, but she ducked to the side and took another swing at me. I managed to block it, although only barely, and attacked again, but Komachi blocked it.
 
Komachi should have been at a disadvantage in this battle, as a scythe was a poor weapon for this sort of fight. And she was following my lead in not attacking with whatever power she had. At first, I found this odd, seeing as how she had seemed so against the idea of fighting me, but once the battle started, I could tell that she was enjoying it.
 
Komachi wasn't using her powers to attack, instead limiting herself to her weapon as I was-but she was, I was certain, using them. The disadvantage her weapon of choice gave her was countered by? well, by whatever she was doing. The speed at which she moved it seemed to change frequently and instantaneously. She could attack, then move her scythe into a blocking position faster than should have been possible. It was obvious that she couldn't mess with the laws of motion-other than the inconsistent speed, her scythe behaved exactly as it should have-but she was clearly doing something. It almost seemed like- Wait, of course! She has power over distance! That's how shinigami can cross the river! But then why couldn't they take others back with-
 
Komachi attacked while I was distracted by my realization. I barely avoided her strike, and she pressed the attack relentlessly, forcing me onto the defensive. And then?
 
"What do you think you're doing? Komachi!"
 
The look on Komachi's face could best be described as 'oh, shit'. She backed away from me quickly. "Shiki! I-I-I-I-I-I-I'm sorry! I didn't want to fight, but she just-"
 
"No excuses!"
 
This was not the reaction I had expected. I was the one who attacked, and yet it was Komachi who was being blamed. "Do not get angry with her," I said. "I am the one who attacked her. She did not want to fight me."
 
"Oh?" The speaker-Shiki, Komachi had called her-came into view and landed in front of me. "And who might you be?"
 
I examined Shiki, who was presumably a Yama. She certainly looked suitably impressive. "I am Orphan," I said. I motioned Utsuho over. "My companion here is Utsuho."
 
"I am Shikieiki Yamaxanadu, highest judge of Hell, and the one you attacked is my shinigami. And there's also the fact that you're here while alive. And you're not human, either. So I must ask that you explain yourself."
 
"I apologize for attacking Komachi," I said. "I did so only because I had to. Neither of us wanted a battle."
 
"I think Komachi, at least, found it quite enjoyable."
 
That much I couldn't argue with. "I got the same impression. Anyways, allow me to begin with how Utsuho and I came to be here while alive." I gave her the same explanation I gave Komachi.
 
"We will address the truthfulness of this account shortly. For now, please continue."
 
"Certainly. Utsuho and I decided to find a shinigami in hopes that such an individual could get us back across the river. We found Komachi, here, who told us that only a Yama could do such a thing. And since it would seem that the living cannot perceive much within this realm, we were unable to go to you, so I asked Komachi to bring you to us. She refused, insisting that she had to return to her work."
 
"So you challenged her to draw me out."
 
"I hoped the battle might do such a thing, but my initial intent was to simply defeat her in order to get her to bring you to us. There was no malicious intent, and I regret that a fight was necessary."
 
"I see. Let us turn to the truthfulness of this account. What you described happening to Utsuho is supposed to happen to anyone who passes above the river aside from shinigami or a Yama. The partial resistance you described on your part is not supposed to be possible, and neither is the complete immunity these 'demons' supposedly displayed."
 
"So you don't believe me."
 
"Actually, given all that, I'm inclined to think you are telling the truth, at least as you believe it. Nobody would try to use something that far outside the realm of possibility as a deception. I think you're probably wrong about what all happened, but I do not believe you to be lying. That being said, however, I'm afraid that it doesn't really matter too much at the moment. Shinigami and the Yama aside, none may cross from Higan back to the realm of the living."
 
"I see," I said. "Well, that may not be the answer I was hoping for, but I suppose it's not surprising, and I believe that I understand your position. The fact remains, however, that Utsuho and I are determined to return to the realm of the living."
 
"You did manage to enter in a manner that is not supposed to be possible, so I suppose it is also possible that you will find a means of exit. I cannot help you, though."
 
"I doubt that such a way exists," I said.
 
"At this point, it is your only option."
 
"Not quite. Utsuho? Engage."
 
 


 
I am Eiki Shiki.
 
I am a Yama, a judge of the dead. In fact, I am Yamaxanadu, highest of the Yama and effective ruler of Hell. I say 'effective' because there is little here for a ruler to do. Hell is a place of residence only for Yama and the shinigami. The souls of the dead may reside here for a time, yes, but in the end, they are all judged, and they then move on. Acts of ruling are effectively unneeded.
 
The title of Yamaxanadu is not, however, a mere formality. As Yamaxanadu, I hold authority over all the other Yama. Decisions of policy and procedure are up to me, and it is I who selects new Yama when necessary. It is also my right to overturn the judgment of any other Yama. The need for this is quite rare, but it does happen. Even a Yama's decisions can be subject to subjective influences. One reason I was selected as Yamaxanadu is because of my extreme determination to avoid such a thing myself.
 
There is such a thing as true, objective justice-we Yama are proof of that-and although it may sound somewhat clich?d, it is the duty of the Yama to uphold this justice. In the end, however, we are still people, and even a Yama can fall. I was chosen as Yamaxanadu because I have, during my time as Yama, shown not just an unshaking devotion to that duty, but also the restraint to keep that devotion under control (there have been Yama who have taken such a devotion too far). Consistency is also a part of it; I have shown not just that I have devotion and restraint, but also that I will remain that way. Nothing I have seen in my millennia of life has shaken my beliefs, and I've seen things in my time as Yama that you couldn't imagine.
 
As Yamaxanadu, it is also my role to make policy, procedure, and other decisions. It was I, for example, who made the decision to relocate Hell to a separate realm. But the necessity for such decisions is extremely rare. Most of my time is spent doing the same thing as any other Yama: judging the souls of the dead that are brought before me. And it is, of course, the shinigami who bring the souls of the dead across the river to Hell. Each Yama has her own shinigami; Komachi is mine.
 
Contrary to the belief of many, one is not born a shinigami or a Yama. They are positions that one is selected for. Becoming one, however, entails more than just assuming the role. Our existence is different than that of others; our duties necessitate that we exist simultaneously in the realms of both the living and the dead. Our beings are distinct from those of other youkai and of humans; becoming a shinigami or Yama requires leaving behind what one used to be.
 
The positions of shinigami and Yama are not permanent; the changes to one's being are irreversible, but one can resign the position, or lose it for various reasons. And though rare, the latter does sometimes happen; in fact, my previous shinigami was such a case. He was engaging in forbidden activities, so he was banished from Higan; I believe he eventually took up residence in Makai.
 
Some of the others think I should replace Komachi as my shinigami, but I have no intentions of doing so. While it's true that Komachi is a slacker, she is also quite excellent at her job; despite her lazing around, she still manages to get just as much done as any other shinigami. I do sometimes need to keep a fairly close eye on her, but I feel that the tradeoff is worth it.
 
There are dealings with some in the realm of the living. I do sometimes have business with those in power there, usually gods, although I also find myself dealing with Yukari Yakumo sometimes. And Yuyuko Saigyouji as well, of course; as the ruler of the netherworld, her position and mine are strongly related. But in general, what happens in the realm of the living is not my concern as a Yama, but as a person, I can't help but be concerned by the events that seem to be taking place there. Still, interfering is forbidden, even for me; I may make the rules, but that does not give me the right to break them. I will certainly take any action I can, but that will, unfortunately, be very little.
 
 


 
Utsuho channeled the force of a nuclear blast to blast herself forward, slamming into Shiki and carrying the Yama a fairly good distance away from the river. A good move; this way, she could fight without having to worry about staying away from it.
 
I followed them, of course, as did Komachi. Once we caught up to them, Komachi immediately moved to assist Shiki, only to be knocked to the ground by a large chunk of earth. "Out of my way," she said as I landed in front of her.
 
"Sorry," I said, "but I'd rather not have my companion forced to take you both on simultaneously. I'm afraid you'll have to deal with me."
 
"Good enough for me. I don't know what you're up to, but it won't succeed." She took hold of her scythe again. "I'll admit that I enjoyed our little match, but this time, do not expect me to hold back."
 
"Indeed," I said. "This fight is for real."
 
"Then take this!" Komachi swung her scythe, sending a blade of energy at me. I leapt to the side and retaliated with a blast of earth energy. Komachi, however, avoided it fairly easily. In fact, she ended up a good distance away.
 
Komachi's distance ability did indeed make her a dangerous opponent, but thanks to our previous fight, I had already seen it in action, and I had at least some idea of how it worked. Distance seemed to be all that she could manipulate; the laws of motion still held. Sure, she could alter distance such that, say, her scythe moved through the course of a swing quickly even if the slash was slow, but its speed would still be low. She couldn't use it to land a decent blow against me, as if she did, her strike would not have much momentum behind it and would be pretty much ineffective. Her power was more useful defensively; momentum wasn't necessary to block an attack, and distance is what matters most when trying to evade. I did expect her to use it to get her blasts to me more quickly, but she didn't, and thus presumably couldn't. Maybe there's something about energy that's different, that prevents her distance manipulation from working on it-although I wouldn't know what that might be, of course.
 
Komachi remained in the path of my next blast. "Ritual of Ecstasy!"
 
I was expecting something that would counter my blast. I was not expecting to find my and Komachi's positions switched, and in my surprise, I failed to evade and was hit by my own attack. Except that I wasn't; it didn't do anything to me. The attack Komachi had taken advantage of my confusion to launch, however, did.
 
I didn't know why it was that my blast didn't harm me. Maybe it somehow recognized me as its source, but that seemed? weird, somehow. But I guess most things in Gensokyo are a bit strange. But at the moment, the why didn't really matter.
 
Komachi closed the distance between us quickly-I assumed she'd simply shortened it-and came at me with an overhead swing of her scythe. "Narrow Confines of Avici!"
 
I sidestepped the strike, and Komachi's scythe struck the ground. I moved in to take advantage of this, but then a large column of violet light shot up from the ground, both of us within it. Komachi seemed able to move freely within it, but my own movement was? well, I could still move freely, but my location didn't change. This light is more of her distance manipulation.
 
Komachi sent more blades of energy at me. Being unable to move horizontally, I instead attempted to rise over the blasts. And it worked. It only affects horizontal movement. Too bad it seems to keep going higher. And if I rose too high, Komachi could just step in underneath me and attack. Wait, it came from-
 
I dropped quickly to the ground, but I didn't stop there. I didn't create a tunnel into the ground, either. Instead, I allowed myself to pass into the ground. It was a difficult thing to do, and I could only manage it for very short periods, but it was enough. And I found that I was correct; the effect of this 'Narrow Confines of Avici' did not extend into the ground. So I passed beyond its range and emerged behind Komachi, hitting her with a blast at point-blank range.
 
Komachi should have gone flying a fair distance, and I suppose she technically did, but she manipulated that distance such that she landed within her restricted-movement area. I readied myself for a switch in positions, but Komachi didn't do that, which surprised me; yes, she'd seen that I can escape, but she could still possibly land a hit or two before I could do so if she did it right. Can she not do it freely?
 
I formed chunks of earth and sent them at Komachi. She responded by locking them in place with her distance manipulation and blasting them to pieces. Then she noticed me charging into the field, directly at her. I couldn't reach her, of course, but her distance manipulation didn't seem to work on energy, and I was close enough that she didn't have time to react before my blast hit her dead-on.
 
As Komachi recovered from the blast, I moved out of the field as I had done before. Although I didn't need to, as it faded away as I emerged from the ground. "An interesting trick," I said.
 
Komachi made to charge at me again, but broke off as Utsuho tackled Shiki to the ground right between us. Utsuho pushed off into the air as the Yama attacked with an odd beam spread. There was one main beam and several angled to the sides, but too far out to really restrict movement. Not that Utsuho tried to dodge. She aimed her control rod at Shiki. "Mega Flare!"
 
'Mega Flare' was not similar to Giga Flare, despite the similar names. Mega Flare was simply a huge beam. It met Shiki's main beam and easily overwhelmed it. As this happened, the angled beams closed in, revealing their purpose, that of tricking people into thinking they had more room to dodge and then constricting in an attempt to catch them. Not that it mattered here; Utsuho's attack blew right through the Yama's and straight into her.
 
That had to've hurt, but Shiki recovered quickly, firing a spray of shots as she took to the air. Komachi dashed in towards me, but I had expected this, and she ran head-on into a hastily-formed wall of earth-I thought I noticed some sort of energy shift as she hit it, but nothing seemed to happen. I then rose a pillar of earth from the ground, sending her into the air, and followed this by dropping a large rock on her. Except that she switched our positions, and being a physical object, I was fully vulnerable to getting hit by it. Which I did.
 
The connection wasn't hard to make. She switched right after that energy shift. The switching is different from her regular distance manipulation; she may have to do some sort of channeling, or maybe she needs the aid of something like a spellcard, or-okay, doesn't matter. The energy shift means that she can switch again. And with that to serve as a warning, I had an idea for how to beat the switching.
 
Our battle continued, and before long, I felt the energy shift again. Good. Go time. Komachi probably didn't realize that I could tell when she could switch again, which was good; she wouldn't expect me to know when she'd do it. I sent rocks at her again, and as I'd hoped, she switched our positions. Expecting this, I dropped below the rocks and opened fire on Komachi. And Komachi was unable to dodge, due to being stuck halfway into the ground.
 
As I sent the rocks at Komachi, I had passed partway into the ground. When Komachi switched our positions, she ended up stuck in the ground. But she, unlike me, couldn't move through it, and thus was trapped. It didn't take her too long to break free, but by the time she did, I was right in front of her, and I slammed my pole down onto her head. Then I leapt above her and fired straight down. And then I hit her with another rock before landing in front of her.
 
Komachi stumbled forward, planting her scythe into the ground and using it to steady herself. "Ow."
 
"You have some interesting tricks," I remarked.
 
Komachi tried to swing her scythe at me, but ended up falling to the ground. "Damn."
 
"I'd tell you to go get Shiki now," I said, "but she's already here."
 
As if to emphasize this, Shiki came crashing into the ground. The two of us turned to look, Komachi picking herself up as she did. Utsuho landed in front of her, aiming her control rod at the Yama. "Man, I don't know what I was so worried about. You're powerful, yeah, but not as powerful as me. I thought Yama were supposed to be unbeatable or something, but yeah, I guess not."
 
"I'm not finished yet," Shiki said.
 
I approached her. "Your ally is. You're already losing, and now you'll also have me to contend with. I would recommend admitting defeat, although if you believe you can still win, then go ahead and try."
 
"No," Shiki said. "I still have a good deal more in me, but you're right; I am losing. So I will admit defeat." She got to her feet.
 
"Good," I said. "Stand down, Utsuho. You won."
 
 


 
"So," Shanghai said, "it's Netese who's really in charge, not this 'Tokekei'?"
 
Nekiei nodded, the two of them flying far enough ahead of the main force to speak without being overheard. "That's right. Netese is the real leader of Makai now."
 
"Huh. I bet this 'Malachi' person's force'll be surprised by her arrival. Having one's ruler show up unannounced ought to be worth a shock."
 
"Not that big of one. Netese has spent time with all the existing forces. She is going to be leading our army into Gensokyo, after all."
 
[That's some interesting information,] Alice sent. [It looks like making 'small talk' has indeed paid off.]
 
"Hold it," Shanghai said. "That's not the best idea, is it? What happens if she gets killed? There's a reason the leaders don't fight, you know; they have to lead."
 
"Nekiei's a warrior, not an administrator. Why do you think it's Tokekei in Pandemonium instead of her? Her authority is the highest in Makai, but Tokekei's the one who's actually doing the work of running things; Netese much prefers the role she has now."
 
"I see. So she's going to be leading the attack against Gensokyo personally, then."
 
"Yes."
 
"Huh. So if she prefers a position of military leadership, then why is she the one at the top of the hierarchy? In fact, why rebel at all?"
 
"I don't know why she joined our little coup, but she ended up in charge because she's very good at the whole 'winning people's support' thing. And I think she's okay with having the authority; it's all the little administrative duties that she doesn't want, so she passed those on to Tokekei."
 
"I see. And what of Alice? Is she just a scapegoat, or is there more to killing her?"
 
"Well, I've never liked her all that much, but yeah, she's basically just a scapegoat. Although I think Netese has something personal against her. And yes, it was her decision to use Alice as the scapegoat."
 
"I see."
 
"And, of course, we did kill Alice's mother. That can't be something that'd make her all that happy. So yeah, we'd like to see her dead for at least that reason. And I guess it's thanks to you that we've got our chance, isn't it?"
 
"Yes," Shanghai said, "it is."
 
 


 
"Shou and Nazrin are in position," Byakuren said as she reentered Alice's house. "The rest of us are ready, too."
 
"Good," Alice said. "Now all we have to do is wait on Nekiei's team."
 
"Indeed." Byakuren paused. "Alice, let me ask you something: what is your reason for doing this?"
 
"Is my mother's death not reason enough?"
 
"No," Byakuren said, "it's not. A desire for vengeance is understandable, if regrettable. But is vengeance your only motive here?"
 
Alice thought for a moment. "Well? it is all because of my mother's death, but not in the sense of vengeance. Do you know why I left Makai for Gensokyo?"
 
"Yes. Shinki wasn't sure how to deal with it; we spoke about your decision in length. She never intended to stop you, but she wasn't sure how to handle the whole situation. She always thought you'd made the right choice."
 
"Yeah, I know. But yes, I moved to Gensokyo for the experience of another world, one where I wasn't anyone special, where I could experience life as someone ordinary. It's been a valuable experience, but now it has to come to an end. Living in Gensokyo has helped prepare me for this, I think, but now the preparing is done." Alice produced a large tome seemingly from nowhere. "It was as during the farewell ceremony that she gave me this."
 
"Yes," Byakuren said. "We discussed that, as well. Although I never was very clear on what power the grimoire holds."
 
"Significant power," Alice said. "I've only used it once-the day I left was? eventful-but that was enough. But there is more to it than just raw power. If I can get to Pandemonium, the center of my mother's power, I, being her daughter, can use this grimoire to alter my being and make myself as she was."
 
"Oh."
 
"My ordinary life has come to an end, Byakuren. I must now ascend to my mother's throne."
 
 


 
Yeah, so those first scenes with Wriggle and her group probably would've fit better at the end of the last chapter, but whatever.
 
Anyways, I have to say that I'm surprised and dissapointed by the lack of comments on the last chapter. I was especially hoping for comments on the fight scene, since I always feel like I need to improve on that sort of thing, but, well, it didn't happen. Oh, well. Maybe I'll get some feedback on this chapter's fight scene[/hint]. But any feedback is appreciated.

Re: Orphan
« Reply #31 on: July 25, 2011, 04:08:15 AM »
I am on chapter 10 and I think shes shiki.
I have...a terrible need...shall I say the word?...of religion. Then I go out at night and paint the stars.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #32 on: July 25, 2011, 08:04:25 AM »
YAAAAAAY MOOOOOOOORE

I totally can't wait for Alice's final confrontation :o

I am on chapter 10 and I think shes shiki.
Spoiler:
Nope.


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Re: Orphan
« Reply #33 on: July 25, 2011, 04:52:17 PM »
(Do you want some critiques? I love the story, but I want to see it better.)
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Re: Orphan
« Reply #34 on: July 25, 2011, 04:53:35 PM »
Which only makes it harder to guess who she as, As there's quite a few people who live on the Youkai Mountain.

Shes either Shiki or Hina...
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Re: Orphan
« Reply #35 on: July 25, 2011, 05:53:46 PM »
(Do you want some critiques? I love the story, but I want to see it better.)

Yes. Absolutely. As long as they're thought-out, of course. Just saying 'I don't like this' isn't very useful.

Also, I think you mean Shinki, not Shiki.

Re: Orphan
« Reply #36 on: July 26, 2011, 04:08:36 PM »
At first I thought it was Tenshi, But now i'm thinking its Sanae or something like that. I really dont even know who it is at this point.

Okay now that I am here it is obvious that it is Sanae.
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Re: Orphan
« Reply #37 on: July 26, 2011, 04:36:07 PM »
Yes. Absolutely. As long as they're thought-out, of course. Just saying 'I don't like this' isn't very useful.

Also, I think you mean Shinki, not Shiki.

A number of the talking scenes feel a little too pat. Too Saturday morning cartoon moral. Does that make any sense? Though given who orphen is . . . maybe that's intentional.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #38 on: July 27, 2011, 02:08:09 AM »
Um... I'm not really sure what you mean. Could you go into more detail?

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #39 on: July 27, 2011, 07:02:27 AM »
Also, I think to better distinguish interjections, you should type them in with two dashes instead of one, like so:
"Out of anger, Reimu tossed a yukkuri in Mima's face-- and a curling iron, too, for good measure-- despite knowing that Mima can simply phase through them."


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Re: Orphan
« Reply #40 on: July 30, 2011, 01:06:28 AM »
Um... I'm not really sure what you mean. Could you go into more detail?

Maybe I am a bit cynical..but she feels to insightful and people accept her insights too easily.  Like with her conversation with Moku..it just feels too fast..people don't accept insights like that they fight them chew on them yell at someone..then like hours or days or years later start acting differently.

But that's just my opinion.
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Re: Orphan
« Reply #41 on: July 30, 2011, 02:31:53 AM »
I see. Well, the most notable case of that is with Mokou. And remember, at that point Mokou was already wrestling with her conflicting feelings. All Orphan really did was give her a way to reconcile them. And Mokou desperately wanted this, so yes, she accepted it fairly quickly.

The only other case I can really think of is Yuugi and Parsee, but there, the situation wasn't resolved. Orphan simply realized what was going on between Parsee and Yuugi, pointed this out rather forcefully to Parsee, then left the two of them to themselves. As for Orphan's willingness to involve herself in such situations, well, it's been stated that such things are familiar to her, and when her identity is revealed (which should be in the chapter after next), the reason should become pretty clear.
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Re: Orphan
« Reply #42 on: July 31, 2011, 03:51:27 AM »
Really? I could have sworn there was another scene..
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Re: Orphan
« Reply #43 on: July 31, 2011, 04:50:07 AM »
You may be thinking of the scene with Keine, where Orphan learned about Mokou and Kaguya. You know, the one where Orphan came up with her idea for how Mokou could reconcile her feelings? But in that one, Keine ended up saying more than she'd originally intended just because she really needed to say it, to have someone listen. And do also remember that she wanted the conflict over, too, so she was also quick to accept Orphan's solution.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #44 on: August 02, 2011, 12:32:42 PM »
I take it the hat that the character wears is important. If so then my guess is Suwackers.
Also great job so far! This is such an awesome story. Though I only read parts I found interesting/got me hooked along the way. So basically the Alice story, some of the backstories, most of Orphan's adventures plus some of the sidestories. I haven't started reading Team 9 yet but I've read most of the rest. I was really hooked when they started learning how to use danmaku and spellcards.
And IMO your fight scenes are very good.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #45 on: August 19, 2011, 02:44:56 AM »
Chapter 16
Questions of Vengeance
 
 
The force landed in the forest. "Find positions," Nekiei ordered. "Shanghai, indicate the portal's location." Shanghai did so, firing a shot at the ground in the spot it would appear. Then she took her position, where she would be waiting for Alice. "Good. That's where Alice will appear, and she'll head straight for Shanghai. Position yourselves such that she won't be able to see you."
 
 

 
"The enemy is in position," Alice said. "We'll wait for a bit, then head in."
 
 


 
I would like to know more about you," Shiki said. "There may be something that would explain how you were able to cross the Sanzu."
 
"Unfortunately," I said, the memory loss issue makes that somewhat problematic. Hmm? well, first of all, is it true that only shinigami and Yama can cross the river?"
 
"Almost. Yuyuko Saigyouji cannot actually cross the river, but she can effectively do so, as she is able to travel between here and the netherworld freely. There are also the curse gods who placed the curse upon the river; it's their power that prevents others from crossing, so of course they can cross-although not even they could get back out. But none of them have gone missing."
 
"And what about this enemy force?" Komachi asked. "How did they move above the river?"
 
"Your boat can ferry people across," I said. "Is that something any such thing could do, or is there something special about the boat of a shinigami?"
 
It was Shiki who answered. "Charms are placed upon the boats when they are made. These charms are extremely specific, in order to prevent others from using them to cross. And even without that, they cannot be placed upon living beings. Or dead ones, for that matter."
 
"And nobody's tried to find a way to adapt these charms?"
 
Shiki was silent for a moment. "I have to admit that right now, I feel fairly stupid for not having thought of that."
 
"Um, boss," Komachi said, "what are you talking about?"
 
"Komachi, how much do you know of my previous shinigami, the one I selected you to replace?"
 
"Nochai? Not much. Just that he did something bad and got kicked out because of it. Well, that, and I also heard that he ended up going to Makai."
 
"He may be involved. The reason he was removed from his position is because he was trying to do exactly what Orphan just suggested. He was trying to adapt the charms for more general use-and no, I do not know why. I think, though, that it was less about the charms themselves and more about the concept of the border of life and death."
 
"You probably should have kept better track of him," I said, "if you were so concerned about what he was doing."
 
"It was thought that what he was attempting was impossible. It's not just a matter of creating an appropriate charm; the charms were actually built into the curse as it was placed, something that only the curse gods could do, and only those charms can protect from it. Altering the charms would result in them no longer being recognized by the curse."
 
"And general curse nullification wouldn't have helped?"
 
Shiki nodded. "We were? thorough. And this is no ordinary curse, either. It was specially crafted by the curse gods themselves. I suppose one could compare it to the difference between, say, water magic and the powers of a god of the water. Its nature is too different for anyone but the curse gods to affect."
 
"Well, it would seem that this 'Nochai' found something that worked."
 
"Yes. But we can set that aside for now. This is something for us to deal with; it is not your problem."
 
"If he's working with Makai now," I said, "it might be."
 
"Ah, yes, the demon attacks. I believe that a full assault from Makai is imminent."
 
"That's the impression I'm getting as well. And I have been told that I may be the only one who can unite Gensokyo against this threat."
 
"I see," Shiki said. "Yes, you did mention memory loss."
 
"It happened five years ago," I said. "I awoke in a forest in the outside world with no memory, and was there until finding my way to Gensokyo a few days ago."
 
"I see. And now you are searching for your identity."
 
"I've been doing that for the past five years. It is my search that led me to Gensokyo. And though I've been in Gensokyo only a short time, I seem to have made significant progress. I've been directed to the Moriya Shrine; apparently, the god there knows who I am."
 
"The Moriya Shri- wait, and five years ago. That? are you-"
 
"Um, boss?"
 
"Not now, Komachi." Shiki faced me again. "This is? who told you to go to the shrine?"
 
"Satori Komeiji," I said. "She apparently knows little besides my name, and I do not want to know that until I know the rest of who I am. So she directed me to the shrine, and sent Utsuho here with me as a guard, as she feared I might be attacked on my way there-which, of course, I was."
 
"Yes, she would know to send you there." Shiki paused, then bowed to me. "It seems I owe you an apology. I did not know who you were, but that does not excuse the disrespect I have shown you. And I apologize on Komachi's behalf, as well."
 
Um. This was an interesting development. It had already seemed that I was someone fairly important, but even so, I would not have expected the ruler of Hell to react in this manner. Neither, it seemed, did Utsuho. "Unyu?"
 
"Woah," Komachi said, clearly just as stunned as Utsuho and I. "Okay, um, boss, what's going on here?"
 
"That can wait," Shiki. "She has said that she does not want to know her name yet, and I will respect that. She has been shown enough disrespect already."
 
"It's not a concern," I said. "It would have been nice to avoid the battle, but I understand why you acted as you did."
 
"A battle would have happened regardless," Shiki said. "Even knowing who you are, I would still have to give you the same answer. Being the one who makes the rules here does not exempt me from following them. It would, however, have been a more formal battle, probably a danmaku contest. Less dangerous and less disrespectful than the battle we ended up having."
 
"I see. How much do you know about me?"
 
"Not a lot," Shiki admitted. "When you disappeared, a certain god paid me an official visit-it happens rarely, but there is a mechanism in place for such a thing. She was worried that you had died, and came to me to learn if you had. She provided me with your name and description-although I see that your appearance has changed since then, though I think you may still be somewhat recognizable. I also needed to know your kind, human or youkai, and if youkai, what type. So she told me, and knowing what you were, I was able to confirm that you had not died."
 
"So you know what I am, but not much about who I am?"
 
"That is correct. Would you like at least that much information?"
 
I thought about it. "No, I don't think so. If that's all you could tell me, then I will wait until the shrine and learn it all at once."
 
"Understood. In that case-"
 
"Hey, Eiki!"
 
The four of us turned towards the new voice. I didn't recognize the woman flying towards us, and I don't think Utsuho did, either, but Shiki and Komachi seemed to. Shiki stepped forward. "Lady Yuyuko."
 
"Who's that?" Utsuho asked.
 
Shiki turned back to us. "Ah, yes, introductions. Lady Yuyuko, this is Utsuho Reuji, and this is Orphan. Orphan, Utsuho, allow me to introduce Yuyuko Saigyouji, the ruler of the netherworld.
 
"Oh, come on, Eiki," Yuyuko said, "don't be so formal all the time."
 
"There will be time for friendly relations later. I am currently engaged in business."
 
"Oh?" Yuyuko looked at us. "Oh, that's why I'm here, too. I felt a feeling. Something messed-up messed up something. A screwy life-and-death thing. I didn't know what it was, but these two are alive. That has to be it, right?"
 
"Most likely."
 
"Okay. How'd they get here?"
 
"They crossed the river while alive," Shiki said, "and I think I may have figured out how, too. If you wish to know more, please wait for me in the usual spot, and I'll tell you everything you wish to know once my business with these two is concluded."
 
"Oh, okay," Yuyuko said. "Try not to keep me waiting too long, okay?"
 
"I apologize for her behavior," Shiki said as Yuyuko flew off.
 
"It's not a problem," I said. "She did seem to be an? interesting individual. So she is able to come here at will?"
 
"Yes. She is actually the ruler of the netherworld, as little as she acts like it."
 
"I see."
 
"So you truly do not know who you are, then. Despite being? no, you said you wanted to wait on that information."
 
I nodded. "I do. Of course, I'll need to get back to Gensokyo first. You can return me there, correct?"
 
"Yes. Ordinarily, it's not something I would do even after losing a battle, but given the circumstances-some of which you are not yet aware of-I believe that allowing you to return is the proper action. I think the situation-especially the fact of what you are and the fact that your being here at all is in a sense my responsibility, since it was my former shinigami who attacked you-warrants an exception. Come with me; I will open the way back."
 
 


 
I guess I have to be serious for a bit, here, don't I? Well, fine. My name is Yuyuko Saigyouji, and my story really has two beginnings.
 
It began before my birth. I was conceived beneath the Saigyou Ayakashi. My parents didn't know what it was, as it appeared to be simply an enormous cherry tree. They never knew what it really was, not even when it killed them.
 
From the moment I was born, I had an unusual connection to death and the dead. My parents thought it was simply a power I had as others have their own powers, but that did not change their concern for me. And I suppose it's understandable that my behavior caused concern. I spent a good deal of time in cemeteries, for example, apparently preferring the company of the dead to that of the living.
 
It was in my thirteenth year of life that I began to realize that my connection to death came from the Saigyou Ayakashi. I could feel? something between it and myself. I'm not sure how to describe it. There was a link there, but I didn't know what it was. I began spending more time there, attempting to figure this out.
 
On one of my visits, I accidentally stumbled upon my parents doing something beneath the Saigyou Ayakashi. I didn't know what it was, but it was what prompted them to explain about sex, which of course is the act they were engaged in. I was told that beneath the tree was one of their favorite 'private spots', and then I realized what the connection was. I asked them if the time they'd made me had been beneath the tree, and they said that it probably had.
 
Being conceived beneath the Saigyou Ayakashi, I had been close enough that a link formed between us. And as time went on, I began to realize the nature of the link, and of the tree itself. I realized that the tree contained death.
 
The tree was the reason I had a connection to death, but there was more to the link than that. The Saigyou Ayakashi was sealed within the form of the tree, and it was using me to break the seal. And I learned this because my condition became frail. The tree was drawing on my life, intending to use it to break the seal. I fought against it as best I could, but I could tell that I was losing. Slowly, but I was losing.
 
My parents didn't want me to be alone, so they began bringing people to our home for me to meet. I didn't really like them, but my parents didn't give up. And eventually, I did meet someone. I was fifteen when we met, him being a few years older. We got along well from the start, and as time went on, we came to love each other. I believe he intended to marry me-I understand it's unusual these days for a woman to be married so young, but this was thousands of years ago, and it was normal back then.
 
I knew how much he loved me, and I loved him just as much. But we couldn't be together, I knew that much. The Saigyou Ayakashi was going to kill me. But I didn't tell him this. I didn't know what he'd think if he knew I was linked to the tree of death. But then something happened.
 
I don't remember what it was about; it was just another ordinary overly-dramatic teenage-girl-disagreeing-with-her-parents fight. But then something happened. Something came from me, and my parents died. I didn't know what I had done, but then I realized that it wasn't truly me that did it. My link with the Saigyou Ayakashi connected me to death, and gave me the power to kill. It was the tree's fault, not mine.
 
The man I loved came to visit later that day. He didn't know that anything had happened, and I didn't tell him. But I did tell him something. I told him goodbye.
 
I didn't know who would die next; it might even be him. And I didn't know how many would die if the seal on the Saigyou Ayakashi was broken. But I knew that I didn't want the tree to break free, and I knew that I didn't want to live as what the link had made me. So I told him goodbye, then went to the tree. I told him that I was going to die.
 
I pushed what remained of my life through the link, but not into the tree itself. I used my life to reinforce the seal, to ensure that the tree could not break free. But doing so, of course, cost me my life. Which brings us to the second beginning, that of my existence as a ghost.
 
As a ghost, I knew that I had been alive, but I couldn't remember much of it. All I had were general impressions. But I didn't care. As I would later learn, I was much more carefree as a ghost than I had ever been while alive. Not remembering much about my life simply wasn't important. But then he showed up.
 
It turns out that the man I loved was devastated by losing me, and found himself unable to go on without me. So he came to me. But he did not kill himself. This man made his way into the netherworld while still alive.
 
By this time, I had been approached by the Yamaxanadu-not Shiki; her predecessor. See, my connection to death remained with me as a ghost. I am no longer connected to the tree, but the power that connection gave me remained. And because of it, I was actually able to manipulate the netherworld, to alter it. Which, the Yamaxanadu told me, was supposed to be impossible. But she then told me that this ability made me uniquely qualified to take a position as the netherworld's ruler.
 
I was already the ruler of the netherworld when he arrived. Seeing the man brought back memories, caused me to recall some-but not all-of my life. It was my time with him that I recalled, and my feelings for him. But we were of separate worlds now, and he couldn't simply die and come to mine. There was no guarantee that he would even become a ghost; most do not. And even if he did, there was no telling how long he would remain as one before passing on to the next life. I am the only ghost who will never pass to the next life; my connection to death ties me to the netherworld and keeps me here, another reason I'm uniquely qualified to rule over it.
 
He could not die to be with me, but if he remained in the netherworld while alive, it would be only a few days before he died, as the living cannot remain here for very long. But he wanted to be with me, no matter what. And as it happened, there was a way.
 
He knew that he could never 'have' me physically, but that didn't matter to him; he just wanted to remain with me. I knew I couldn't simply abuse my position to keep him with me, but I was able to take him in as my servant. And to allow him to remain in the netherworld, I changed him. He could remain, but only by ceasing to be truly human. I placed the essence of the dead within him, making him the first half-ghost of the Konpaku line.
 
This change had the additional effect of greatly extending his life, but he did still die eventually. However, his descendents continue to serve me in his place, his half-ghost nature carrying on through his line. They do so not out of any loyalty to him, but because they believe me to be someone worth serving. In fact, my current servant, Youmu, has developed feelings for me similar to her ancestor's-while, I will we mind you, were emotional, not physical.
 
Anyways, there was another incident with the Saigyou Ayakashi. See, although killing myself severed my link with it, it was still brought into the netherworld with me. But I didn't remember what it was. Eventually, though, I got curious because of the fact that it never bloomed, so I investigated. And I felt the presence of someone within it, some person. And, of course, I also felt the seal, but I didn't know why it was there or what it contained. So I decided to break it.
 
I had Youmu go into Gensokyo and gather the essence of spring, which I then gave to the tree. This, as it turns out, extended Gensokyo's winter, which drew in a trio of individuals to take the spring back. But by the time they arrived, I had enough. Or so I thought. The seal didn't actually break; it simply reverted to the state it had been in before I killed myself, and the person I felt within it turned out to be me. It was at that time that I remembered what the tree was and what I had done. Fortunately, the seal hadn't fully broken, so I just put my life right back into it and then gave Gensokyo back its spring.
 
Good, the serious stuff is done. I don't like being like that. Sure, I take my duties as ruler of the netherworld seriously, but that doesn't meant I have to be all serious about it, right? What would that get me, anyways? It's just so boring to be serious all the time. Yes, I'll do my duties, but why shouldn't I enjoy myself while I do, huh?
 
I don't know what's going on in Gensokyo right now, but it's not really my concern. If it ever reaches that point, sure, I'll do something, but that's not my realm. The netherworld is, and so that's where I'm staying.
 
 


 
The portal opened, and four people came through it. They fanned out and approached Shanghai. "Copenhagen," Shanghai said. "Hourai. Holland. London. Where is she?"
 
"Right behind us," Holland said. And she indeed was.
 
Alice emerged from the portal and went straight over to Shanghai. "Shanghai. I didn't think I'd see you again."
 
"Just shut up," Shanghai said. "I don't want to hear it."
 
"Then why did you call me here?"
 
"Because I had to," Shanghai said. "There's trouble, and you're the only one I could think of who could help."
 
"It must be something major to get you to resort to asking me for help. I thought you hated me."
 
Nekiei stepped out of her concealment. "She does. The problem she wants help with is you still being alive. Ah-ah-ah," she added as Alice took a step backwards, "no running. You, um, might want to look behind you."
 
"No need," Alice said. "You've got people between me and the portal. Surely you didn't think I'd fall for Shanghai's trick."
 
"You already have," Nekiei said. "Emerge!" At her signal, the demons of her force emerged from their concealment. "You're not escaping, and you're not winning this fight. You're going to die, Alice Margatroid."
 
"No, she's not," Alice said. And then three things happened at the same time. First, 'Alice' started shimmering, and her form changed. Second, another Alice emerged from the portal surrounded by dolls, the portal closing behind her. The new Alice tore through the surprised demons that thought they were blocking her escape. And third, the living dolls leapt into action against the nearest targets.
 
'Alice' laughed as she completed her change. "Sorry," Nue said, "but I'm not Alice. You've, um, kinda been tricked."
 
"Not really," Nekiei said. "You still lose. Second wave, attack!" More demons came out of hiding. "I'm well aware that our setup was suspicious. I was quite prepared for you to see through it."
 
"Yeah? Well, guess what? We're ready for you, so bring it on!"
 
 


 
"Okay," Wriggle said, "here we are. The shrine's just at the top, right?"
 
"Right," Cirno said. They and the others were at the base of Youkai Mountain, ready to begin the ascent.
 
"Cirno," Rumia said, "you won't be immediately attacked by the 'frog-lady', will you? Because we're here for information, not a fight. So don't start one, either. Meaning no freezing frogs."
 
"Oh, fine. Come on, let's go." Cirno led the way up the mountain, Rumia close behind. Daiyousei and Tewi followed them, and Wriggle and Mystia brought up the rear, far enough back that they could talk without being overheard.
 
"Wriggle," Mystia said, "what if this is really nasty? What if there's more danger?"
 
"I'm not backing down, Mystia," Wriggle said. "I told you; I'm not going to do that anymore."
 
"I know," Mystia said. "I just don't like it. I don't like having to watch while you risk yourself, Wriggle. I? Wriggle, I want to fight with you."
 
"Mystia, you can't. You're?"
 
"Weak," Mystia said. "I know. But you were weak, too. Now you're not. You can fight now, and I want to fight with you."
 
"I can't let you do that, Mystia," Wriggle said. "I? I would love to have you at my side, fighting with me, but if you try to fight?"
 
"They'll kill me. I know. I'm like you were, too weak to actually fight. But you found power."
 
"I claimed power that was rightfully mine to begin with. I doubt you have any such thing."
 
"I don't, and it's driving me crazy. I? Wriggle, I can't just sit back and watch you risk yourself!"
 
"But you don't have the? power? to? Mystia."
 
"Huh?"
 
"I have an idea," Wriggle said.
 
 


 
Nue impaled a demon on her trident. She swung it around, using the demon to block an incoming blast from a second one. Nue then pulled her trident out and blasted the demon herself, sending it flying into the second demon. She sent UFO familiars at them and turned her attention elsewhere.
 
A demon grabbed hold of Ichirin, then quickly dropped her as he evaded a punch from Unzan. Ichirin opened fire, but the demon evaded. And then he got an anchor to the back of the head, courtesy of Murasa.
 
Holland leapt into the path of a blast aimed at Hourai and raised her shield to block it. Hourai leapt above Holland and launched a counterattack. The demon tried to move, only to find Copenhagen holding him in place. And as Hourai's blast hit, London came shooting down with a kick to the head before quickly rising back into the air.
 
Alice ducked under a sword strike and punched the attacking demon in the face. Another one came in behind her, only to be swarmed by Copenhagen dolls. The first demon formed a ball of energy and threw it at Alice, who moved Holland dolls in to block it. A third demon tried to intervene, only to find itself occupied fending off a horde of weak but troublesome and hard-to-hit London dolls as Alice combined with Hourai dolls to blast the first one.
 
"This isn't what I understood the plan to be," Shanghai remarked. She and Nekiei had drawn back and were watching the battle.
 
"That fake Alice changed things," Nekiei said. "I couldn't hit Alice with the special trick when she wasn't there, you know. Then she brought her help in, so I called out our second team and the battle began. I'll move in against Alice when I have a good shot, but I wouldn't be surprised if she came at me first. After all, I am one of those responsible for killing her mother."
 
"Yeah, but would she know that?"
 
"Wouldn't surprise me. And you said she had spies, right? Osira mentioned something like that."
 
"Moscow is the only one I know of, and I think that only started recently. I'm not sure how many of your little group she's identified."
 
"Well, if she doesn't come to me, then I'll move in. Don't worry, Shanghai; she won't live through this."
 
Nue touched down near where the portal formed. She had her trident stuck through the dead body of a demon, and was using said body as a club. She smacked away a demon that leapt at her and sent a UFO after it, then swung to the side and hit another. A small group of demons came up from behind her, one of them taking hold of her. Nue couldn't break loose, so she shrunk herself and ducked away before returning to normal size. Then she flung the impaled body free from her trident, sending it into the demon.
 
More demons landed in front of Nue. "Man, there's a lot of you guys. You just don't give up, do you?"
 
"You talk tough," one of the demons said, "but do you really think you can take all of us?"
 
The demon got blasted from behind by several UFOs. "Yeah," Nue said, "so come on!"
 
Alice sent a group of Copenhagen dolls ahead of her, knocking a pair of demons out of the way. Hourai dolls fired behind her as she moved away from the main battle.
 
"See?" Nekiei said. "Here she comes."
 
"I'll let you handle her, then. I'd rather not get knocked out; I want to actually see this."
 
"I know. Just leave her to me."
 
 


 
"Okay," Cirno said, "why are we stopping here?"
 
"I'm trying something," Wriggle said. "We'll continue on afterwards."
 
"And what exactly are you doing?"
 
"Mystia wants to fight, too," Wriggle said.
 
"I don't think that's a good idea, Mystia," Rumia said. "Remember, the three of us are a lot more powerful now."
 
"I know," Mystia said, "but Wriggle thinks she has a way around that particular problem. We ready, Wriggle?"
 
The insect youkai nodded. "Let's do it."
 
Cirno raised her hand. "Um, question: what are you doing?"
 
"I believe it's possible for me to lend a portion of my power to another. I am going to attempt it with Mystia."
 
"You can do that?" Tewi said.
 
"I know it's possible," Wriggle said. "I know what I can and cannot do, although I don't necessarily know what I can do until then. I know it'll work, but I don't know if it'll work."
 
"That didn't make any sense."
 
"She's tried to explain it," Mystia said, "but she can't figure out how to."
 
"Um, right."
 
"Remember, Mystia," Wriggle said, "this will be my power, not yours. Your own abilities won't be enhanced, unless you count having more raw power to draw on when using them."
 
"So my night-blinding won't be improved," Mystia said. "I doubt I'd be doing much of that, anyways. It's the raw power that I need in order to fight."
 
"You'll need to practice in order to determine what you can do with the power I'm giving you, but I should be able to help you with that. You ready?"
 
"Yeah. Do it."
 
Wriggle nodded. Her spear appeared in the air, and she moved the tip across both of her hands, drawing blood. Mystia held out her hands, and Wriggle did the same thing to her. Then the two of them clasped their hands together.
 
The two of them rose a few inches off the ground, and Wriggle began to glow with a green light. Then the glow began to spread slowly into Mystia. "I can feel it working," Wriggle said. "Mystia?"
 
"Eeeeeeeeeeeiiiiiioooooiiiuuuuaaaaauuuuu."
 
"Woah," Cirno said, "is she okay?" Mystia nodded. "Oh."
 
"UuuuuiiiieeeeeeeiiiiaooeeeeeeaaaaaooooaaaaAAAAAHHHH!"
 
The glow faded. Wriggle landed gently on the ground, but Mystia fell flat on her face. "Ow."
 
Wriggle helped Mystia up. "It worked."
 
Mystia nodded. "Yeah. It feels like? well, now I understand how hard it is for you to explain what gaining power was like. I don't have the expanded awareness you have, but the power? yeah, I can feel it."
 
"You shouldn't have any new abilities. All you have gained from this is raw power, but that's what you needed. When we get a chance, we'll practice, get you a feel for its use."
 
"Yeah. Um, how long will this last for?"
 
"As long as I want it to. I can recall the power to myself at any time, but unless I do, it should remain within you."
 
"Okay. Um, this doesn't make you too weak, does it?"
 
"No. I only gave you a fairly small amount. Relatively, at least; I'm still amazed by how powerful I am now. And I think I still haven't realized what all I'm capable of now."
 
"Even though you know what you can do?"
 
"Even though I know what I can do."
 
"That still doesn't make sense," Tewi said
 
 


 
I don't know what Shiki did, but Utsuho and I found ourselves back in Gensokyo. "There," Shiki said.
 
"Thank you," I said, "and I am sorry to trouble you."
 
"Do not worry about it. It was due to circumstances beyond your control. Now, you were bound for a certain destination, were you not?"
 
I nodded. "Yes. The shrine atop the mountain. I was told that I can learn who I am there."
 
"And that is correct. But I think you already know that there will be more to come after you do."
 
"It seems likely. Satori said and I may be able to unite Gensokyo against the demons, and given that they just tried to kill me, it seems that they may share that belief."
 
"They are correct," Shiki said. "You are able to unite Gensokyo against them. The question is whether or not you will."
 
She had a point. I'd only been in Gensokyo for a few days; was I really ready to take such drastic action in its defense? But I already knew the answer. "I may only have arrived here a few days ago, but there are fragments of my memory present. I may not remember my life here, but I know that I belong here. I know that Gensokyo is my home. So I will do everything I can to protect it."
 
 


 
Nekiei had kept her distance from the battle, which was just fine by Alice; this way, she wouldn't have to worry about the other demons while battling their leader. And she told them to leave me to her, anyways.
 
Nekiei came forward as Alice approached. "Well, hello there. You must be Alice."
 
"You're responsible for my mother's death."
 
"Oh, not really. I only came up with the means; I had little to do with the plan's execution. Maorol is the one who landed the killing blow, although I understand that Malachi did most of the actual work."
 
"Maybe so, but they were just help. The ones truly responsible are you and Netese. She's the one who led the usurpation, I understand. She's the one who decided to kill my mother, and you're the one who told her how. Both of you are going to pay for it. Although I think I'll be having a? meeting with this 'Maorol', as well."
 
"You know," Nekiei said, "I never really thought you were the type for pure vengeance."
 
"This isn't only about vengeance."
 
"Oh? You know, even if you manage to kill Netese, you're not exactly going to throw us into chaos."
 
"I'm well aware that your leadership structure would survive her loss. I imagine her position as leader would pass to Tokekei. But that is not my goal."
 
Nekiei laughed. "What are you going to do, assault Pandaemonium? You'd die within a minute."
 
"I think you underestimate me."
 
"Oh, not really. Not that we'll find out, of course. I mean, hell, the whole point of this little operation here is to kill you."
 
"And you think you can? My side seems to be winning."
 
"Oh, I'll fix that. After I've dealt with you, of course."
 
"And just what makes you think you can do that?" Alice asked, despite already knowing the likely answer.
 
"Oh, not much. Just a little trick I picked up from your dear mother." A coin-like object adorned with various symbols appeared in her hand. "I don't suppose you know what this is, do you?"
 
"An amulet, presumably sensitized to my mother's energy. An attempt to take some of her power."
 
"Oh, very good. You're right. We made quite a few of these. None of us have figured out how to ascend to your mother's state of being yet, so none of us actually has her power, but these do the trick. This variety in particular is quite useful. They are, sadly, limited in number, as they're a bit trickier to make then the other types-we actually had to draw on your mother's remaining essence to make these, so what we have now is the entire supply. So I guess you should really feel honored that I'm going to use it; we aren't exactly wasting these."
 
"As I thought," Alice said. "You're going to attempt to use my mother's command over her creations to control me. Well, sorry, but I'm not precisely normal in that regard. I'm not just a creation of hers, not in the sense that you are. Yes, she made use of her power to conceive me, but I was born like any other. All she did was eliminate the need for a male. I am truly her daughter, and as one-the only one-who shares her blood, I think you'll find that she didn't have such power over me."
 
Nekiei gave another laugh. "You don't really think that didn't occur to us, did you?" She spoke a word, and the amulet flew at Alice. Alice brought in a Holland doll to intercept it, but it simply veered around the doll and hit Alice, seeming to melt partway into her skin. "Sorry, dear," Nekiei said, "but those don't just have your mother's essence. That amulet has a little of my essence, too. That's how the power knows I'm the one control is given to, but it also has the quite convenient effect of altering things a bit. Not much, but I don't think your mother's blood is going to protect you from it."
 
Before Alice could reply, the pain began, and she fell to her knees. "AaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"
 
"Don't fight it," Nekiei said. "I think you know that's futile."
 
"Don't? think? you've? won."
 
"Oh? Yeah, you've got some capable allies, but that won't be enough. Especially not when you turn against them."
 
"That? won't? happen."
 
Nekiei was about to reply when there was another scream of pain. But this one came from behind her. She quickly glanced over her shoulder to see Shanghai fall to the ground, screaming. "What the hell?"
 
Alice stood up. "There is a link between us."
 
Nekiei faced Alice again. "What the hell?"
 
"The process I use to bring my dolls to life results in there being a link between me and them. I'm sending the magic of your little amulet through that link." She grasped the amulet and pulled, but it refused to come off. "Well, that much I expected."
 
"How long can you maintain the transfer, Alice? Because you won't be removing that thing any time soon."
 
"Long enough." In fact, Alice herself wasn't doing anything at all. Shanghai was the one doing it. She was, through the link, fighting the control in Alice's place, preventing Alice from being affected by it. Not that either of them planned to tell Nekiei that. "I can remove it. Sure, maybe you've added your own essence to it, but it is my mother's that gives it its power, and I can remove my mother's essence from it. It'll take a little time, but that just means I'll have to kill you first. And now that I think about it, that might be enough on its own to remove the thing, since you have your essence in it as well."
 
"Not just me," Nekiei said. "Your side may have been winning the battle, but now you have me to deal with. Which means you're out of that particular fight. Can your allies continue to win without you?"
 
 


 
"It's time, Byakuren," Nogales said. "Get in there."
 
 



 
"Shit!" Netese exclaimed as the portal opened again. "Don't tell me you're a fake, too?"
 
Alice laughed. "What? You think only I can open that portal? It's a spellcard, and I gave the card to another before coming here."
 
"You're right," Nekiei admitted as Byakuren exited the portal, which closed behind her. "That was dumb of me. It's still not a problem, though. It just means that I'll have to intervene once I'm done with you."
 
"You won't win." The grimoire appeared in front of Alice. "Do you know what this is?"
 
"A magic tome, from the looks of- wait, is that-"
 
"My mother gave this to me upon my departure," Alice said. "I've only used it once before, so I'll admit that my knowledge of its spells is rather limited, but fortunately, it comes with a way to fix that."
 
The grimoire opened to the first page, and the text on that page began to glow. As it did, Alice's eyes seemed to flash, and if someone was able to look closely enough, they'd see that the flash was actually the glowing text appearing briefly on Alice's eyes. The age turned, showing more glowing text, and Alice's eyes flashed again. As the pages began to turn faster and faster, the flashes seemed to meld together into a constant glow.
 
Nekiei launched a large sphere of energy at Alice, but Alice moved in a group of Holland dolls to block it. Then some Hourai dolls opened fire, forcing Nekiei to evade as she returned fire.
 
When the Grimoire reached the last page, it closed and vanished. "Time's up," Alice said. "My turn."
 
The ground turned red, and a wave of flame swept quickly across it. Nekiei leapt into the air to avoid it, only to find that a ceiling of fire had formed above her, one that had a similar wave sweeping over it. Nekiei made her way between the two waves, but this distracted her from the shots Alice was firing, and she got hit. Alice ended the spell and immediately followed up with another. Ice shot out of the ground, sending Nekiei into the air. Alice then sent out five violet orbs, which immediately began firing bolts of electricity. Nekiei managed to avoid this one, dropping underneath the blasts. And then Alice took a hit.
 
Alice bounced back up to see Nekiei surrounded by orbs that looked exactly like the ones she'd used. And the blasts they fired confirmed her suspicions. She's copying my spell! "You're a mimic."
 
"I am," Nekiei said. "What are you going to do ab-shit!" Nekiei evaded as ice crashed down from above her. Then she was hit by a sudden and extremely strong gust of wind from behind, which sent her right into the ice.
 
Nekiei mimicked the wind, attempting to blow Alice into the ice. Alice, however, expected this, and covered herself in a barrier of flame. She flew through the ice, putting her momentum into a kick to Nekiei's chest.
 
A human would have been killed, but Nekiei was a youkai, and she recovered fairly quickly. Alice formed more orbs and sent them spinning around Nekiei in varying orbits. Beams connected the orbs as they spun, requiring evasion, and if Nekiei moved out of the encirclement, they moved along with her.
 
Alice sent out another blast of wind, attempting to knock Nekiei into the beams, but Nekiei countered with a gale of her own from the opposite direction, canceling Alice's out. Alice cut hers off, but Nekiei stopped hers at the exact same time. "Did you really think I couldn't mirror you perfectly? I am a mimic, you-"
 
The orbs disappeared at the exact same time as a large chunk of earth hit Nekiei on the head. Alice created a gust of wind to blast herself forward, tackling her and throwing her downwards, where a group of hammer-wielding Copenhagen dolls was waiting. They hit her back up to a diving Alice, who grabbed her and slammed her into the ground.
 
"It's called a distraction," Alice said, standing over Nekiei. "You know, I really don't think you were the right choice to come after me. I think Netese underestimated me if she thought you could take me. Although I guess she probably did, since I've only used the grimoire's power once before. I wouldn't be surprised if she failed to take that into account."
 
"It? doesn't? matter," Nekiei said. "You won't? be? getting out of? this." She managed to send a flash of light into the air, signaling a third group of demons, who'd been hanging back, to rush towards the battle. "You still? lose."
 
"Oh? You might want to double-check that."
 
Nekiei looked towards her approaching third group. As the group passed between a pair of crystal trees, the trees suddenly opened fire, tearing into the demon group with lasers. And as they did, the illusion faded. "What? the hell?"
 
"Simple," Alice said. "They've been there the entire time. I happen to have a few very handy little objects called Seeds of Non-Identification. You and your force expected to find only the crystal trees of the forest when you arrived here, so crystal trees are what you saw when laying eyes upon those two who have seeds attached."
 
"Oh? yeah? And are you? sure? that just those two? will be? enough?"
 
"I'm in the battle again, as well, since you've been dealt with. I will, of course, be restraining you, and I'll have some questions for you once the battle's done."
 
"I won't? tell you anything," Nekiei said. "And know this: you may have? bested me, but Netese is? far more powerful. Don't think you can defeat her."
 
Nekiei began chanting, but was interrupted by a kick to the chest from Alice. "Let's not be trying anything."
 
"Too late," Nekiei said. "Only the first words matter. The rest is? just to make people think they stopped it in time. It means 'fuck you'."
 
Nekiei exploded.
 
 


 
"Okay, Wriggle," Cirno said, "why are we stopping this time?"
 
"Change of plans," Wriggle said. "Orphan just entered my range, and she's on her way to the mountain. I'd assume her destination is the shrine, and I don't know if we should get ourselves involved with whatever will happen when she arrives. Let's just hold back, and I'll observe what happens."
 
"The cautious approach," Rumia said. "I see."
 
"Right," Mystia said, "let's find a good place to wait, then. Maybe somewhere that'd be a good place for me to get some practice in."
 
"I've already found a spot," Wriggle said. "Follow me."
 
"Mystia has power now, too," Daiyousei said. "I'm really beginning to feel left out."
 
"You could always ask Wriggle to do the same thing for you," Tewi said.
 
"No way. I'm perfectly happy staying out of the fight."
 
"I see. Well, come on. I think they'll leave us behind if we don't get moving."
 
 


 
A demon narrowly avoided a laser from Shou, only for Nazrin to slam her in the head with a dowsing rod. Two more moved in, and Shou attacked them with more lasers. The demons attempted to evade, but Shou's favorite trick wasn't limited to danmaku, and she curved the lasers into her targets. They weren't particularly strong blasts, but they did give Nazrin an opening to apply metal rod to head.
 
Byakuren took hold of a demon that was charging at her and tossed it over her shoulder. Another came at her from behind, but she interrupted his charge with a punch to the face. She took hold of it by the arm and threw it into a demon group. Then she turned back to the first one, driving her elbow into its chest before landing a kick to its head.
 
Copenhagen swung a giant hammer into a demon, sending it flying. She changed her weapon into a spear and threw it at the demon, impaling its arm. Murasa dove in and smacked the demon with her anchor, sending it back a Copenhagen. Copenhagen formed a hammer again, and the pair began hitting the demon back and forth.
 
Alice finished off the last of the demons attacking her, then examined the battlefield. Just a few of them left. I think it's safe to say that we've won this fight.
 
 


 
I bid farewell to Utsuho when we reached the mountain, and began my ascent. I didn't remain alone for long, though. Soon after beginning my ascent, I was approached by yet another woman with a hairstyle that was distinctive even for Gensokyo, although in this case, it was a deliberate stylistic choice; she had her green hair tied in front of her.
 
"So it's true," the woman said. "You have returned."
 
I nodded. "You know who I am, then."
 
"I do, but I suspect you would rather hear that from the god of the Moriya shrine. She knows more about you than any other."
 
"Then yes," I said, "she's who I would like to speak to. Can you take me to her, um?"
 
"Oh, I forgot to introduce myself. Sorry. I am the curse god Hina. You are going by the name 'Orphan', correct?"
 
"I am. Anyways, Hina, could you take me to this god?"
 
"Yes," Hina said after a brief hesitation, "but, well, I don't think she'd be very happy with me."
 
So I'll have to fight my way in, then. "So you're going to try and stop me."
 
Hina laughed. "Oh, no, and not just because I know you'd defeat me. She may be the ruling god on this mountain, but I am not under her command. Only one has the right to command me, and she wants something different."
 
"Which is?"
 
"Well, what do you want?"
 
"As previously stated," I said, "I want to proceed up the mountain."
 
"That is what she wants."
 
"So I can proceed unimpeded?"
 
"I will not try to stop you," Hina said. "You may-"
 
"Who's this?"
 
Hina and I turned to face the newcomer, a blue-haired woman that Hina seemed to recognize. "Laqara. What do you want?"
 
"Nothing from you," Laqara said. "I just made a delivery to the human village, and now I have to get up to the shrine."
 
"Convenient," I said. "My name is Orphan, and I am also headed for the shrine. Can you-"
 
"No time for requests," Laqara said. "Can't be a guide today. Takes too long, and I'm running late. Bye!" She flew off.
 
"What was that about?" I asked Hina.
 
"That was Laqara," Hina said, "a kappa. I guess she has business at the shrine, too. A shame she wasn't willing to take you there."
 
"It's not hard to find, as I understand," I said. "It's just at the top of the mountain, right?"
 
"Right," Hina said. "And, Orphan?"
 
"Yes?"
 
"Be careful. I suspect that the god will attack you when you get there. I don't think she'll take a final strike against you, but you'll be in danger while any battle is ongoing."
 
"Another told me much the same thing," I said. "I think I understand why she's likely to attack me, although I'll need to meet her before I can say for sure. But I assure you, I am quite ready to fight her if I must."
 
"Good," Hina said. "Get going, then. And good luck, Orphan."
 
 


 
Alice helped Shanghai up. As she'd predicted, the amulet had fallen off upon Nekiei's death, but fighting its effects had taken its toll on Shanghai. "I'm sorry to make you do that," Alice said. "Are you all right?"
 
"I'm? fine."
 
Byakuren and her group approached. "The battle's done. A few ran, but the rest have been taken out."
 
"The runners are dead," Alice said. "My children have been dealing with them. If any escaped, they did so unseen."
 
"I? don't think that was necessary."
 
"The less information Netese gets about what happened here, the better. If all she knows is that she never heard from her force, she can't know how we beat them. It'll leave her in the dark as to my capabilities. And, of course, there's the fact that any of them we kill is one less they'll have for the attack on Gensokyo."
 
"?True," Byakuren said, "but I still don't like it. And what of Nekiei? I thought you intended to leave her alive."
 
"I did. She had a suicide spell prepared."
 
"Oh."
 
"We won't be able to get information from her as I'd hoped," Alice said, "and in addition, I'm pretty sure that losing her will not set Netese back too much. She wasn't a hugely capable fighter, and I doubt she'd be used as a commander in the attack. That's probably another reason Netese chose her to come against me."
 
"We'll have to hope that Orphan can act fast, then," Byakuren said, "because if we haven't bought any time, then we probably don't have much time left."
 
 


 
OOC: Yes, I had Yuyuko show up just so I could do a backstory for her. I got the idea for it from the song I linked to and decided that I wanted to include it, so I did. Also, is it just me, or does Simone Simmons (the female vocalist) have the perfect voice for Yuyuko?
 
Anyways, get your final theories about Orphan's identity in now, because in the next chapter, it will be revealed.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #46 on: August 19, 2011, 02:47:43 AM »
I have been waiting for this. brb readan.
EDIT: This was really awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter.
« Last Edit: August 19, 2011, 03:21:29 AM by J.O.B »

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #47 on: August 21, 2011, 12:29:23 AM »
This chapter is, like every other chapter, engrossing. I went back and forth from breakfast just to keep reading @_@


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Re: Orphan
« Reply #48 on: September 25, 2011, 03:04:58 AM »
Chapter 17
Faith
 
 
 
The kappa Laqara watched the mountain god depart her shrine and make her way down the mountain. Looks like she knows.
 
Laqara waited until the god was out of sight, then emerged from the bushes and entered the shrine, whose remaining occupant was waiting. "Laqara."
 
Laqara bowed. "I am here."
 
"So, 'Orphan' has arrived at the mountain."
 
Laqara nodded. "She has. I saw her myself. Um?"
 
"Yes, I'm sure about this."
 
"Forgive me," Laqara said. "It's just that? well?"
 
"I understand."
 
"Are you sure you want to do this?"
 
"I don't see any other choice. We need her-the real her."
 
"Yes, I suppose we do," Laqara said. "I'm curious, though: why me? I understand why you aren't doing it yourself, but why did you choose me? I'm not the best fighter on the mountain, you know."
 
"Perhaps not, but you're close. And more importantly, you are the best magic-user on the mountain, and this must be done with magic."
 
"Ah, of course."
 
"Just remember the most important part, Laqara: do not hold back. You? you have to?"
 
"I know," Laqara said. "I have to fight to kill."
 
 


 
"We need to find Orphan," Byakuren said. The group had returned to Gensokyo, and Byakuren's followers had returned to the temple, only Byakuren herself remaining with Alice.
 
"No need," Alice said. "I dispatched London dolls towards the mountain before we sprung our trap. They've already returned, and they saw Orphan. She's heading to the right place."
 
"I see," Byakuren said. "In that case, I think it best that we wait. We may be short on time, but this is not something we should interfere with."
 
"Agreed," Alice said. "We'll head up the mountain tomorrow."
 
 


 
"They're on a collision course," Wriggle said.
 
"Do you think they'll fight?" Tewi asked.
 
"Yes."
 
 


 
I proceeded up the mountain, and before long, I ran into another person, someone who looked similar to Laqara. Another kappa, probably. "Hello, there," I said.
 
"Holy shit!" the kappa exclaimed. "It's actually true!"
 
"Apparently," I said. "I-"
 
The kappa, apparently, felt it at the same time I did. "Oh, shit, she's coming!" And with that, he sped away.
 
There was no doubt as to who was approaching. It had to be the mountain's god. And as she drew near, I saw that she certainly looked suitably impressive. The metallic? things on her back were odd, but they actually fit pretty well with the overall image. The shimenewa's a nice touch, too.
 
"It's true," the god said as she landed. "You do look like her."
 
"I would say that it's nice to meet you," I said, "but I understand that you already know me."
 
"You're not her. You can't be her. She's dead. I saw it happen."
 
There's definitely rage there, but it looks like she's holding it back for now. Still, it looks like Satori and Hina were right. "I did not die, but I did end up in the outside world with no memory. I was told that by coming here, I would be able to learn who I am."
 
"Who you are? No. You're not her. She's dead. She's dead! And now you show up here, wearing her face!"
 
"I do not know what happened," I said, "but I am not-"
 
"Silence! You dare show yourself here and pretend to be her? I suffered because of her death, and now you would bring it all back? Would have me suffer more?"
 
"Why are you so sure I'm not her?"
 
"I?" She hesitated. "I saw it. I saw it happen. She died for me, do you understand that? It happened because of me!"
 
She blames herself. She must have buried her feelings, but now that I'm here, it's all coming out, and I'm the cause, so I get to be the target now instead of her. "I'm not dead."
 
"Because you're not her. You're just a mockery of her. So I'll give you one last chance: if you leave and never return, I won't kill you."
 
And the anger comes out in full. "I did not come this far to back down," I said. "I came to learn who I am."
 
"You're a fake! A mockery of her! And you will pay for her death!"
 
"I did not come here to fight, but if you insist on battle, then I will not back down."
 
"You would stand against me? I am a god! What makes you think you can survive against me?"
 
"I have faith in myself."
 
She laughed. "Faith? You would lecture me on faith? You know nothing of it!" The wind picked up as she rose into the air. "I will show you the power of faith!"
 
I struck first, forming a large chunk of earth over her head and dropping it on her. She summoned an immensely strong gust of wind above her, sending the rock towards me. I broke it up before it reached me and sent the fragments at her. She called up another gust of wind, but the fragments were too small for her wind to control them as she had with the big one, so she simply blew them aside.
 
I sent a storm of earth fragments at her from all sides. She called up a whirlwind around herself, deflecting the shards. And then she got wet. One may not expect being hit by water to hurt, but one would be wrong. Water is strong, and when properly concentrated, it can hit just as hard as the earth I'd been using. I formed the water directly above my opponent. Clearly not expecting it, she was unable to evade, and the blow knocked her to the ground, breaking her concentration and causing her whirlwind to dissipate.
 
She picked herself up. "What the hell?"
 
"My power has changed," I said. "I know that much. Don't think you know my abilities."
 
"I? I know them," she said. "You have her power. First you wear that form, and now you copy? how dare you? You would make a mockery of her?"
 
Yes, Eirin had said my change in power was likely a copy of another's. "I do not know whose power I copied, but it was not intentional. I would assume it's connected to whatever happened to-"
 
"Silence!" She formed blades of wind and sent them at me. I raised a wall of earth to block them, then sensed the water approaching behind me. I took to the air to avoid the deluge she had summoned, and she rose in pursuit.
 
 


 
"Okay," Cirno said, "clouds don't normally form that fast, right?"
 
"It's her doing," Wriggle said. "She's a god of the sky, and she's angry. I don't think this will give her any advantage in battle, but it certainly adds an effect."
 
"What about lightning?" Cirno asked. "Can't she use that?"
 
"I doubt it," Tewi said. "Lightning is an electrical phenomenon, and I don't think her domain encompasses that."
 
"She can use the water, though," Rumia said.
 
"So can Orphan," Wriggle replied.
 
 


 
I raised a chunk of earth at her from below. She evaded, of course, but I had expected this. The earth broke into several smaller pieces, one of which did indeed connect. I took control of the other pieces, sending them all into her.
 
She used a gust of wind to send herself towards me. I formed an earthen barrier in front of myself, but another gust of wind pushed her over it, and she hit me with a blast of concentrated wind energy as she passed overhead.
 
I hit the ground hard. I fired shots blindly as a distraction while I recovered, but she wasn't occupied for long. She called a torrent of water down from the skies at me. I passed into the ground, emerging after the water had passed.
 
She landed again. "How did you do that?"
 
"I told you. My power has changed since we last saw each other."
 
"Don't give me that. Power isn't enough to do what you just did. It is her being that allows it, not just her power. How did you do it?"
 
"I know only that I can."
 
"No, you can't! The only other who even might be able to is dead!"
 
It was easy to deduce that she was referring to who I really was. "I am not dead."
 
"You're not her! She's dead, and you're about to be!"
 
I leapt out of the way just in time, and a strange pillar crashed into the ground where I'd been standing. What the hell? How did she do that? How's a pillar related to the-wait.
 
I realized that aside from its size, the pillar was virtually identical to the objects on her back. Some sort of divine item she possesses.
 
I moved again, narrowly avoiding another pillar's impact. I used the earth under it to knock it into the air, where it collided with an approaching third one, and at the same time, I hit the first one into her.
 
She surrounded herself with swirling blades of wind and charged. I met her head-on, and at the last second, formed a spherical barrier of earth around myself. She smashed directly into it, which when combined with the blades was enough to shatter it, but it had served its purpose. My charge continued, and I slammed into her, taking hold of her and throwing her to the ground.
 
She rebounded quickly, blasting back into the air and forming a whirlwind around herself. I encased myself in earth and charged right through it, slamming into her from below. As the wind dissipated, she sent another pillar at me. I moved very slightly to the side, grabbed hold of it, and flew downwards with it, swinging around and channeling its momentum to spin around and throw it back at her.
 
 


 
"Orphan just gave her opponent a big stone pillar to the face,' Wriggle said. "That can't feel good."
 
"Man," Daiyousei said, "just how much of a beating can those two take?"
 
"A big one, I guess," Mystia said. "They've been going at it for, what, almost an hour now?"
 
"They're not at my level," Wriggle said, "but their power is still quite significant."
 
"One's a god," Tewi said. "That's to be expected."
 
"I think they're both gods," Cirno said.
 
"Then it's to be expected from both of them."
 
"Ouch," Wriggle said. "Orphan just got knocked face-first through a bunch of trees."
 
"But she's still fighting."
 
Wriggle nodded. "I don't think this one's ever going to give up."
 
 


 
She fired a blast of wind energy at me. I erected a barrier of earth to block it, simultaneously forming several large rocks and sending them at her. Her blast destroyed my wall, but I wasn't there. I had passed inside one of the rocks, and I emerged and tackled my surprised opponent as the rocks came in.
 
She raised a barrier of wind at the last second, deflecting the rocks. I took hold of her to toss her into the ground, but she constricted her barrier of wind into me, catching me off-guard. Then one of her pillars struck me dead-on, and I was the one who fell to the ground.
 
I picked myself up, and something came to me. Not much; just a word. That sense of familiarity had been strong through the entire battle, but only now had it produced something. Just one thing. One word. A name, but not mine. Hers. I knew, somehow, that it was her name. "Kanako!"
 
I rocketed upwards, weaving around the blades of wind she sent at me. She summoned a torrent of water from above. I moved to evade, but a second torrent was coming at me, blocking my evasion. I almost dove downwards, intending to shelter myself within the ground, but then the realization hit me. She's not-
 
I let the water engulf me, but it did not harm me. I quickly gathered as much of it as I could and sent it back at my opponent. Kanako was caught completely off-guard, and didn't even have a chance to dodge before it hit her. And I was right behind it, grabbing her and once more tossing her into the ground.
 
I landed in front of Kanako as she got to her feet. "How? how did you do that? How did you take the water from my control?"
 
"It was not under your control," I said. "You commanded the torrent to come, and it did. As a god, the water obeyed your command, but you never took direct control over it. I doubt I could have overridden your commands with just commands of my own, but I was able to control it directly in the absence of such control from you."
 
"That's not possible," Kanako said. "My command should suppress any control another has."
 
"Kanako," I said, "I remember your name now. You're? you were important to me, I think. Please, don't make me fight you any longer."
 
Kanako's anger had faded; the battle had given her a chance to let it out. "You? are you really her?"
 
"You know the answer to that," I said. "You knew it the whole time, I think, but you were too angry to accept it."
 
"No. No, I wasn't angry with you."
 
"I never said it was directed at me. You blamed yourself for my supposed death, didn't you?"
 
"I? yes, I did. Even after I had Suwako check with the Yama to see if you'd arrived in Higan, I still thought you had to be dead. You? you vanished upon taking a hit that was meant for me."
 
That explained much. "You thought it was your fault that I had to do so, so you blamed yourself."
 
"I thought I'd dealt with my feelings, but?"
 
"But I came back, and the anger you had suppressed resurfaced. And became directed at me. That's why you attacked."
 
"I? yes, you're right. But you won the battle. I? I shouldn't have attacked at all. I-"
 
"You needed to, Kanako," I said. "Don't feel guilty. The battle helped me to remember you, too, so there is that. And besides, I won."
 
"Even being her," Kanako said, "what you did with that water shouldn't have been possible. Suwako-you fought me using her power."
 
"Suwako. Another familiar name. That's the name of the one whose power I copied?"
 
"Yes. I? I never would have made that mistake if I'd been fighting her. As a god herself, she could have overridden my command with her control, but? none short of another god tied to the water could have done so, and you-"
 
"She is every bit as divine as you and I."
 
The two of us spun towards the new voice. There were two people there, one of whom I recognized as the kappa that had passed by while I was talking with Hina-Laqara, that was her name. The other I didn't immediately recognize, but she triggered that sense of familiarity, and quite strongly. Her hat, especially; as the ourobouros design-the snake eating itself-of the brim made my hat stand out, so did the eyes on her hat.
 
It was Kanako who next spoke. "Suwako. And?"
 
"I am Laqara," the kappa said.
 
"Introductions can wait. Explain yourself, Suwako. What did you mean?"
 
"Laqara," Suwako said, "do it."
 
 


 
"Okay," Wriggle said, "um, I'm going to go with 'what the fuck?'"
 
"Did Suwako do something? Tewi asked.
 
"She just gave the kappa an instruction, and now Laqara is?"
 
"Is what?"
 
"Is attacking Orphan at Suwako's command."
 
 


 
Laqara's surprise attack caught me off guard, but I reacted quickly. She attacked me with flames, and I wasn't able to avoid being hit, but I struck her with earth before she could follow up on it.
 
Kanako sent a blast of wind at Laqara, but Suwako raised a wall of earth to block it. "No," she said as she positioned herself in front of Kanako. "This fight has to happen."
 
"Out of my way."
 
"Or what? You're exhausted, Kanako. You can't take me when you're already so worn out."
 
I ignored their conversation, focusing my attention on Laqara. Like Kanako, I was worn out from the previous battle, whereas Laqara was still fresh. I needed to end the fight quickly, because I knew that my opponent could outlast me.
 
I sent a wave of earth at Laqara. She leapt over it and into a large rock I'd formed above her. The wave of earth had passed, so she landed again, then moved out of the way when I tried to drop the rock on her. I sent a storm of earthen shards at her, but she blew them away with a cone of wind before aiming another come at me. I rose the earth in defense.
 
Something was strange. Fire and wind? I thought kappa had powers of water. That's what Nol said, at least. So how...
 
Laqara attacked with fireballs, forcing me to evade. And as the fireballs passed close to me, I? felt them, and not physically. I was sensing them somehow. But I haven't been able to do that. What's going on?
 
 


 
"Suwako," Kanako said, "what the hell has gotten into you?"
 
"I don't intend to let her be harmed," Suwako said, "so don't worry about that. Although Laqara is fighting her with such intent. One of the reasons it's her instead of me. I'm certain I couldn't bring myself to do it, not to her."
 
"Start making sense. Now."
 
"Your battle with her helped her awaken, but she's only come part of the way. She's beginning to remember us, remember her past, but that's not enough. Kanako, you know as well as I do that we're never going to get a defense against Makai ready in time, not with the way things have been going. Unless someone new enters the equation."
 
"And what the hell does that have to do with attacking her?"
 
"That's the main reason I couldn't do it myself," Suwako said. "I am incapable of attacking her in the necessary way. So are you. There's a reason I chose Laqara specifically. She has significant skill with magic, far greater than that of anyone else on the mountain."
 
"So?"
 
"It has to be magic, Kanako. Surely that part makes sense, at least."
 
"Maybe it would if you stopped speaking in riddles."
 
"I've already told you," Suwako said. "Or do you not remember? It was just a few days before she vanished. I told you what I'd come to realize about her, remember? About her divinity?"
 
"She's just your descendant. She's not truly a-wait, you did say that you thought-"
 
"Exactly. Do you understand now?"
 
"Of course not. You're still not being clear."
 
"Well, let me say the practical part, then: her true nature has until now lain dormant. After what she's already gone through, and with her memories beginning to return, being attacked by Laqara should trigger her awakening."
 
"'Awakening'. Explain yourself."
 
"It's simple," Suwako said. "She's?"
 
 


 
It didn't take me very long to figure out that Laqara was attacking me with magic. A far greater mystery was the way I was able to feel her attacks. But it was a mystery that would have to wait.
 
I tried to avoid a blast by passing into the ground, but I was exhausted by that point and lacked the energy for such a thing, so I was hit. I attacked with shards of earth. Laqara blew them away again, but they did buy me time to close in. I formed my weapon and struck, but Laqara formed a weapon of her own, a staff, with which she blocked my attack. She thrust her hand forward, and a wave of force sent me flying. And as the wave hit me, I realized what I was sensing. I was feeling the magic she used. Not the attacks she sent at me, but the actual magic within them. The energy, not the manifestation. I guess I'm not really sure how best to describe it.
 
I hit the ground. I tried to pick myself up, but I fell to my knees as Laqara approached, a ball of fire between her hands. "Not bad for someone who just fought Kanako," she said. "Sorry, though; I kind of have to do this."
 
As she threw the fireball at me, something changed.
 
 


 
"Orphan's down," Wriggle said, "and Laqara's moving in for the-what the hell?"
 
 


 
"Suwako," Kanako said, "what the hell is going on here?"
 
"She's awakening," Suwako said.
 
"So she's going to be a-"
 
"She always was. Her divinity was simply dormant. It had to be drawn out. That's why it had to be a magic-user who attacked her. Your fight with her helped, but more was required. She's starting to remember her past, awakening to those memories. By pushing harder, and with the proper method-magic-her divinity has been brought forth."
 
"That's why you attacked her?"
 
"I had to."
 
"She could've died! Are you really okay with doing something that could have killed her? Risking her life like that?"
 
"No," Suwako said, "but it had to be done. That's the problem with you, Kanako; you have trouble seeing the big picture. That's why you waited so long before moving the shrine to Gensokyo. Even your conquest over me was motivated by an immediate desire for faith-and when that backfired, you ended up having to keep me around anyways. It doesn't matter if I want to awaken her, because it needs to be done. Or can you think of anyone else who could unite Gensokyo in time to face Makai's forces?"
 
"?No," Kanako said. "I can't."
 
 


 
Laqara's fireball came apart, the magic that formed it dispersing. A burst of energy from me knocked her back.
 
I felt the energy come from within me and from around me, and as it lifted me off the ground, my exhaustion vanished. And then my appearance changed. I felt my body fill out. My eyes, I somehow knew, had become a deep green that seemed to glow. My hair became long and flowing, and it, too, was now green. My clothing changed, too; I found myself wearing long, flowing robes. I was wearing a headdress, as well, although my hat had been knocked off during the battle and thus was not itself altered. My weapon, too, changed; instead of the simple pole I had wielded, I was holding an elaborate staff. But the greatest change was my power. Gone was the connection to and power over earth and water. My sense of and control over them was gone, and something new was in its place. I could sense the power all around me, the magic that was in Gensokyo's nature just as it was against the outside world's.
 
Laqara launched more fireballs at me as I touched the ground. I gathered energy into a sphere and fired it at her, blasting right through her fireballs and knocking her to the ground. But she was not my true opponent; that was the one who had sent her against me.
 
Kanako was just staring at me, stunned by what she had just seen. Suwako was less so, but it was still there, and I took advantage of it. I charged her, moving faster than I could before, and swung my staff into her hard, knocking her into the ground.
 
Laqara came in from behind me. I couldn't see her, but I felt the energy she was gathering as she approached, the magic she was forming into a beam. I sensed it, and I sent my own power into it. The sudden energy surged the spell beyond Laqara's control, causing it to detonate and knock her back.
 
I stood over the downed Suwako. "Explain yourself."
 
"Laqara," Suwako said, "stand down. This battle is over."
 
"Why did you have her attack me?" I asked as Suwako got to her feet.
 
"To awaken your true being," Suwako said. "You often called yourself a 'living god', but you were not truly a god. That part of your being was dormant within you. Now it is not. But maybe at should start at the beginning, since you don't have your memory."
 
"I'm beginning to remember some things," I said. "The two of you, for instance, I am beginning to recall. Kanako, I served as the maiden of your shrine, didn't I?" Kanako nodded. "And Suwako, you? you're my ancestor, I think."
 
"Yeah," Suwako said. "Very distant, but yes."
 
"And you're both gods."
 
"Also yes. I am a god of the land and the water, and Kanako is a god of the sky-which, of course, also includes water. And you're a god, too, although not just in the sense you used to think, which was basically the sense of being descended from one."
 
"You two know me well, then."
 
"You've lived with us for your entire life."
 
"Then let's go through it. I would like to know about my life."
 
"Let's not just stand around here, though," Suwako said. "Come on, let's go for a walk up the mountain while we fill you in. Oh, and Laqara, you've done your job. Thank you for your service."
 
"Let me know if you have need of it again," Laqara said as she flew off.
 
Suwako turned back to me. "Right. Let's walk and talk."
 
 


 
I am Kanako Yasaka.
 
Suwako and I have shared a shrine for thousands of years. I gained ownership of it when I defeated her in battle, but the people who followed her were unwilling to accept my rule over hers. So I reached an agreement with her. The two of us now share the shrine, and we share our faith.
 
The idea of a separate land of magic was proposed in the year 500. Many were seeing a trend of increasing skepticism, and were afraid that if things kept going that way, magic would die out. They decided to preserve such things by designating a location to be the land of magic and separating it from the rest of the world, a place they chose to call 'Gensokyo'. This is marked as year 0 on the Gensokyan calendar. Exactly one year later, the borders were set, and the land of Gensokyo existed. At that point, though, it was more of a separate country than a separate world; the true border wouldn't be established for some time.
 
Gensokyo formed over a period of four hundred years. Migrating every youkai to one place isn't exactly something that happens quickly. And, of course, there were issues to sort out, most notably the means of separation. Gensokyo couldn't be disconnected completely; ever separated, it would remain a part of the world. It needed to be separated without a complete disconnection.
 
It was, to nobody's surprise, Yukari Yakumo who found the means to separate Gensokyo. She used a shrine within Gensokyo, the Hakurei Shrine. She and the Hakurei maiden at the time, Miyako, channeled their power into the shrine, using it as the anchor for what would come to be known as the Great Hakurei Barrier.
 
Yukari's power of boundaries was needed to start things along, but once the process was begun, it was up to the Hakurei maiden to finish it. This took centuries, and the task passed through several generations of Hakurei maidens.
 
During this time, the migration to Gensokyo was proceeding. At first, it was a small trickle, but then the pace picked up as word of the new land spread. And then it slowed down again, as the youkai who were willing to migrate had done so. But as the centuries passed, the trend of skepticism continued, and it became more and more apparent that the world outside of Gensokyo was becoming one inhospitable to youkai, and as a result, migration to Gensokyo picked up again.
 
It was not just youkai who came to Gensokyo. There were humans among the migrants, as well, mainly near the end of its formation, as any humans alive earlier in the process would be dead by the time of its completion. Many were magicians or others with power who felt that their place was in the land of magic. Others were scholars of magic who did not want their studies to become useless. And many came simply because they were following family members or other loved ones. In fact, incidents of violence against human-youkai couples dropped almost to nothing, simply because almost all of those couples moved to Gensokyo.
 
Only a few gods made the move to Gensokyo; most remained in their native lands, myself among them. The absence of magic would not harm us; gods are sustained by faith, and magic is no part of our power. And despite an increasingly skeptical attitude towards magic, belief in the gods remained strong, and very few thought that this would change.
 
The barrier was ready a few years before the 400-year mark, but wasn't activated until that mark, giving people one last chance to move there before the separation. And on that 400-year mark, the separation happened. The barrier was activated, and Gensokyo was gone, the only remnant being the Hakurei Shrine, which served as the anchor between Gensokyo and the 'outside world' and so now existed in both. Its maiden, though, was in Gensokyo, so another was chosen. The Hakurei maidens of the outside world have none of the power that their counterparts have; they are no different than any other maidens in outside-world shrines.
 
It should be said that since most gods had not moved, their maidens still had access to the divine powers of the ones they served. And it remained this way for some time. But even we could not last in the outside world.
 
We were correct in thinking that religion and belief in gods would remain, but we didn't expect the shift in those beliefs. Oh, we'd seen the spread of religions such as Christianity, but we hadn't thought this would have the effect it did. Such religions didn't worship the gods that existed in the world, but we thought that enough would remain who did worship us. Many gods had faded from the world, yes, most notably the pantheons of Greece and Rome, but that had happened a long time ago, and we thought that faith in us would endure as it had.
 
We were wrong.
 
Oh, people still followed the old religions. Or tried to, at least. But their beliefs changed over the generations, and though religions such as Buddhism, Hinduism, and Shintoism kept their names-and at least some of the basics-they were very different from what they had once been. Ideas changed, thoughts changed, and people's faith changed. Fewer and fewer people were believing in the gods as we actually existed, and more and more of us faded away. Suwako and I were among the last, sustained by a few small villages that remained faithful to us. But we knew that it was only a matter of time before we, too, faded.
 
The only reason we remain is because of Suwako. She had advocated moving to Gensokyo from the start, certain that faith in us would eventually fade. Since we shared a shrine, she had no choice but to remain with me, but she was certain that eventually, we would be forced to relocated to Gensokyo or fade away.
 
Passage to and from Gensokyo was, of course, possible, although not easy. People and objects do sometimes slip through the border, and a gateway does exist for those who know how to open it, but that knowledge has been lost to the outside world. Not to myself and Suwako, of course, or to other gods, but we can't simply pass through it. Moving there was more complicated than that.
 
You see, gods are bound to their native lands. We can go wherever we desire,, though, as no matter where we are, our connection to them remains. The problem was Gensokyo's separation. The connection would be unable to remain through the barrier, and with it broken, we would fade away. And yes, it's possible for a god to bind herself to a new land, but one must be in that land in order to do it, so we'd need to go to Gensokyo, at which point we'd fade before the binding could be done.
 
Unlike most gods, Suwako had been working on this problem, and by the time we needed a solution, she had one. The concept was simple, and was one that other gods had tried: if we had to remain bound to our mative lands, then we'd simply need to bring those with us. All who tried this, however, failed. Except for Suwako, who'd been working on it for fifteen hundred years. By the time we needed a way, she had one.
 
Our shrine was beside a lake. We moved both with us to Gensokyo. It was difficult, and even with the proper method Suwako had found, we almost failed. It took everything the two of us and our maiden, Sanae, had, but we managed to do it.
 
I quickly established myself among the gods of Gensokyo, many of whom Suwako and/or myself had known before the separation-Suwako's reunion with Hina was especially? notable, and is something I'm never going to forget. I turned my efforts to gathering faith from the humans and youkai of Gensokyo, but my initial, forceful approach was? resisted, at least by those beyond the mountain our shrine was now at the peak of; the tengu and kappa living on the mountain were much more welcoming. But we settled our differences with the rest of Gensokyo, and before long were accepted as a part of it.
 
I thought our maiden had died when the demons attacked our shrine, even after the Yamaxanadu informed us that her soul had never entered Higan. But now she has returned. I don't know how she ended up in the outside world, or how she lost her memory. I do know that she's back, but she has changed, and not in the sense of losing her memory. Apparently, her line has been fully divine from the start, but that divinity was dormant in the outside world even before Gensokyo's creation. It wasn't until coming to Gensokyo, where all magic was concentrated, that her divinity began to awaken. I don't know how things are going to proceed from here, but I do know that even if she's changed, she has returned.
 
 


 
"They're just going over her life now," Wriggle said.
 
"I guess she'd want to know about that," Mystia said, "but I'd rather they get to the interesting part."
 
"They've said enough for a basic idea of what happened. Orphan's a god, but her divinity was dormant within her. The purpose of Laqara's attack was to force it out, and this succeeded."
 
"I still want to know more," Tewi said. "Like, what exactly is she a god of that let her screw with Laqara's magic like that?"
 
"Patience," Wriggle said. "I'm sure they'll get to it eventually."
 
 


 
"?but that sort of thing is fairly normal here," Suwako was saying. "Anyways, for your birthday that year, we made this for you." She held up my hat, which she'd picked up before we departed the battle site.
 
"So it was a gift," I said. "That's what I'd thought."
 
"You remembered that?"
 
"I knew only that the hat was important to me."
 
"Ah. Anyways, that's pretty much it; you disappeared later that year."
 
"I see. Let's move on, then."
 
"Of course," Suwako said. "I'm actually surprised you let me give your life's story first. I thought you'd want to know this a lot more."
 
"I thought it best to know my life first," I said. "It should help me to understand other information about myself, should it not?"
 
"Good point. Well, we'll start with you using my powers."
 
"I copied them somehow," I said. "Eirin, at Eientei, told me about such things. It probably happened as a result of whatever caused me to lose my memory and end up in the outside world."
 
"Seems likely," Kanako said. "It wasn't before that; you had your own power up until then."
 
"Well, not quite," Suwako added. "I thought I told you about this, Kanako."
 
"Well, excuse me for not being an expert on something I only found out about a little while ago."
 
"Hey, I told you about it after she disappeared! You just didn't remember it!"
 
"I had other things on my mind."
 
"Let us get back on track, please," I said.
 
Suwako chuckled. "Yeah, sorry about that. Anyways, before your disappearance, your power appeared to be that of miracles."
 
"You should elaborate on what that means here," I said. "In the outside world, most of what I've seen here could qualify, depending on one's definition of the word."
 
"A miracle is an act of the gods," Kanako replied unhesitatingly. "It is a manipulation of nature in a manner that only a god is capable of."
 
"Yeah, that's a pretty good definition," Suwako remarked.
 
"It's not a definition. That's what a miracle is. The fact that some people have a poor understanding of the concept does nothing to change that."
 
"Yeah, yeah, yeah. Anyways, you did things, usually without intending to, that we couldn't think of anything else to call. Your entire line has been that way from the start, from my direct child. We assumed it was an effect of being part god."
 
"And as our shrine maiden," Kanako added, "you could draw upon our powers, allowing us to work miracles through you."
 
"Yes, that added to the confusion. Anyways, your ability wasn't any more pronounced than it was in the rest of your line. Once we moved the shrine to Gensokyo, though, your 'miracles' became more common."
 
"Clearly a natural effect of being in Gensokyo."
 
"Yeah, that's what I thought, too, at first. Things like miracles do happen more easily in the land of magic; Kanako and I certainly have an easier time with ours. But what caught my attention was the fact that your miracles were becoming not just more frequent, but more controlled. Which also could've been an effect of being in Gensokyo, but it did get me to look more closely at what you were doing. And when I did, I saw that many of your 'miracles' weren't actually miracles. The things of the type you'd been doing in the outside world were-and those were also happening more frequently and with more control-but the ones that were really becoming increasingly common and controlled weren't miracles. They were works of magic."
 
"Works of magic," I repeated. "So you're saying that being in Gensokyo allowed me to use magic. How would just being here give me a new ability? I know magic is a relatively common power, but if one could get it from just being here, then wouldn't everyone have it?"
 
Suwako was silent for a moment. "Ah, wait, of course. You may not know. Um, what do you know about Gensokyo?"
 
"Nol, Reimu's assistant, gave me the basics."
 
"Ah, of course. That explains it. He doesn't have any power of his own; most people like that don't really understand."
 
"Then please explain."
 
"Certainly," Suwako said. "It's pretty simple, really; the term 'magic' has two meanings. It's used as a general term to refer to any sort of power, but there's also a specific type of power called 'magic'. That's what Laqara used, the specific power called magic. It gets a bit confusing, though, when you add in the fact that the power of magic is present to some extent in almost every other form of power-which, of course, is what led to the term being used for power in general.
 
"Anyways, no, being in Gensokyo can't give you the ability to use magic or any other power. But miracles are one of the only types of power that don't include magic. That's what caught my attention, because you shouldn't have been able to use magic at all. So I looked even closer, and eventually, I realized that even your miracles included magic."
 
"Wait," Kanako said, "that's not possible. Miracles include no magic."
 
"Magic is a part of nature," Suwako said, "so it is possible for miracles involving it to occur."
 
"And how is that?"
 
"I am a god of the land and the water, so my miracles affect those. You, Kanako, are a god of the sky, so your miracles affect the sky. Magic is the same way. Miracles that affect magic can be performed only by?"
 
Suwako trailed off, and I filled in the rest. "By a god of magic. That's what you're saying."
 
"Yes, you're correct."
 
"Say it, then," I said, "and when you do, use my name. I think I've learned enough to earn the right to know it."
 
"Your name," Suwako said, "is Sanae Kochiya, and you are a god of magic."
 
 


 
And the winner is... Nolrai2! Sorry, everyone else, but Orphan's not Suwako. I'll admit that I thought about having her be Suwako, though. I first wanted to use Sanae, but then I thought of a good idea for how Suwako being Orphan would play out. I still wanted to use Sanae, but I couldn't think of a good way to do it. Obviously, though, I eventually did, so I did end up using her. And if there's anything you're confused by or that you don't think fits, well, feel free to say so, but do know that I already plan to address most of the things that could be that in the next chapter.
 
Now, I have to say that I'm surprised at some of the things people missed. I thought I was being way too obvious with Orphan's line 'No miracles, only my own power' way back in chapter 2, but nobody seemed to pick up on that (or on the other times the word was used). What surprised me the most, though, was that everyone seemed to ignore the fact that Orphan's power had changed when she lost her memory. It was mentioned in the first chapter, although at that point failing to notice it (it was a brief mention) is understandable. But it was mentioned a few more times, and still seemed to be ignored or unnoticed. And then I had Eirin go into details about how such a thing would work, and people still ignored it. And the point of the change was to allow me to describe her power in action without giving away her identity (although I wouldn't have done it had I not had a way to fit it in with the story), so yeah. The hat served a similar purpose; I didn't want the presence or absense of a hat to be a clue to her identity, which is why I repeatedly stated that it may have been given to her just before the memory loss, the idea being that because of this she could be a character who doesn't generally have a hat, or one who does, since she didn't actually know when she first got it.
 
I'm also kind of surprised that nobody got the idea of Orphan being Kanako, especially given how I was carefully avoiding using Kanako's name.
 
Anyways, congradulations, Nolrai2! And yes, there's a prize: pick a character (Windows-era only), and I'll work out a backstory segment for that character (although there are characters I won't do one for, mainly ones like Cirno and Rumia, whose pasts we've already learned a good deal about).
 
And if you weren't expecting me to use Gods Bound by Rules at some point, then you have not been reading my contest entries, because I've made no secret of the fact that I consider that one of the best video game BGM tracks I've ever heard.
 
And, of course, any comments are appreciated (especially those that go into detail about the fight scene).

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #49 on: September 25, 2011, 08:28:35 AM »
This chapter was so awesome!! The reason I thought it was Suwako was the hat and the fact that she had her powers. I did pick up on the fact that her powers had changed but I still thought it was Suwako because of the hat.

And that fight scene was awesome.
Can't wait for the rest of the chapters.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #50 on: September 29, 2011, 03:34:23 PM »
Bah, my guess was Suwackers as well. I'd like it if you made a "beginnings and endings" (like, basically an extended epilogue featuring minor characters) segment.

As always, impeccable quality.


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Re: Orphan
« Reply #51 on: October 09, 2011, 01:23:38 AM »
Nolrai2, the deadline for claiming your prise is whenever I get around to posting the next chapter, so if you have a character to give me, please do so before then.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #52 on: November 06, 2011, 03:44:49 AM »
Chapter 18
Return
 
 
"Well," Tewi said, "I guess that explains that. Although I didn't hear anything about why Makai wants her dead."
 
"Not that it's hard to figure out," Daiyousei said. "Orphan's someone who's known throughout Gensokyo, and not only is she returning, but she's a god now. Makai thinks she can succeed where Kanako and Remilia and Kaguya failed."
 
"And they may be right," Tewi said. "If Orphan, or Sanae, or whatever, is smart enough to do things the right way, then yes, she could do it."
 
"What 'right way'?" Cirno asked.
 
"Kaguya and the other two have been trying to unify Gensokyo under themselves, which, um, isn't working. Byakuren came by recently saying that we should instead be trying to get everyone in Gensokyo to simply stand together against a common threat. If Orphan's smart enough to do it that way, I think it'll work."
 
"That's it, then, right?" Daiyousei said. "We're done here, right?"
 
"No," Cirno said, "it's not. At least not for me and Rumia; we're going to fight."
 
"Wriggle and I are, too," Mystia added.
 
Daiyousei sighed. "I'd complain, but I think I knew this would happen. Actually, I'll probably complain anyways, but that's it. It's not like I could stop you, anyways."
 
"Are you going home, Dai?" Cirno asked.
 
"No, I don't think so. There's no way I'm fighting, but I'll stick with you guys. We're a team, right?"
 
"I've got to decline," Tewi said. "I kind of have other responsibilities."
 
"That's fine," Cirno said. "Don't feel like you shouldn't come just because you're new, though. You still count as one of us."
 
"I'll keep that in mind," Tewi said as she took off down the mountain.
 
"Right," Daiyousei said, "so, um, we're not going to Orphan right now, are we? Because I don't think we should."
 
"Agreed," Rumia said. "She's kind of had a big day. And she hasn't actually started doing anything yet, either. We should wait until she does."
 
"Head back home, then? Either that or we'll need to find a place to spend the night here."
 
"I don't think we need to find anything," Mystia remarked. "Wriggle?"
 
"I have two good spots," Wriggle said. "One's pretty close, but it'd be a bit cramped with all five of us. There's a better spot a bit farther up."
 
"We'll do that one," Mystia said, and the others nodded in agreement.
 
"Very well," Wriggle said. "We will use that location. I have no doubt that Orphan will choose to act in Gensokyo's defense, and when she makes that decision, we will go to her, and we will offer our aid. Nothing will be able to stand against us, and all who try will fall before us."
 
"Okay, Wriggle," Cirno said, "you're kind of starting to worry me here."
 
"Oh, come on," Wriggle said, "there's nothing wrong with enjoying myself a bit. You should try it. Play things up a bit. Let's have a little fun when we offer our aid tomorrow, all of us."
 
"Maybe I will try it," Mystia said. "Let's just go find that cave or whatever right now, though."
 
"Agreed," Wriggle said. "Follow me."
 
 


 
Netese knew that her arrival had not gone unnoticed; Malachi's scouts had no doubt seen her approach. So Netese wasn't surprised when Malachi herself came out to greet her. Malachi gave a deep bow as Netese landed in front of her. "Lady Netese."
 
"Greetings, Lady Malachi," Netese said as Malachi straightened.
 
"I was not expecting you to come here personally," Malachi said. "I wish I had known; I sent another messenger to you just a little while ago."
 
"Oh? Did something happen?"
 
"Yes," Malachi said, "and because of it, I think your decision to come here in person is quite fortunate."
 
"Did Orphan make it out of Higan?"
 
Malachi nodded. "She did. The Yamaxanadu herself was seen with her."
 
"She convinced the ruler of Hell to aid her. Unfortunate."
 
"Indeed. My Lady, there must be something going on here that we don't know about. Orphan is Sanae Kochiya, maiden of the Moriya Shrine, and she's not someone I'd think the Yamaxanadu would give a personal escort to."
 
"She's the descendant of a god," Netese said.
 
"Really? Huh. Well, still, Shikieiki's accompaniment of her is unexpected."
 
"Unless my theory about her is correct."
 
"Theory?"
 
"It came from something during the disrupting attack. It was something in the attack team's report. Apparently, Sanae showed? unusual abilities. In particular, she was somehow interfering with the team's magicians in ways that shouldn't be possible for anyone short of a god."
 
"Wait, so you think she's-"
 
"A true god, not just the descendant of one. Yes, I do. I don't know if she was aware of it, but the disruption effect may well have hit her-we were directly affecting the shrine she served, which may have affected her in some way. It's likely that our attack is the reason she lost her memory and the reason her powers changed. It may be that this disruption hit her divine nature in some way, somehow stimulated it."
 
"You think she's awakened as a god, then."
 
"I think it's possible. I hope I'm wrong, because her return is bad enough already. She will be a fresh figure urging Gensokyo not to unify, but to stand together against us. Even as a shrine maiden, she'd likely be able to gather a significant force, but if she does this not as someone serving another but as a separate authority, well?"
 
"That would be bad," Malachi agreed.
 
"Yes. How many of the forces have gathered here?"
 
"Only Naima's has arrived, but most of the others could be here within a fortnight. Kanth's is still a ways out, though. That's assuming a direct course here, though; they do still have soldiers to pick up from recruitment-slash-training centers."
 
"Get messages out to all of them," Netese said, "and immediately. Both the forces and the centers. Everyone is to proceed directly here as quickly as possible. We need to move as soon as we can; the longer we wait, the larger a force the enemy can assemble."
 
"The recruit teams are expecting to join with other forces. It'll take some time to mobilize them individually."
 
"But not as much as the original plan would take. We'll need to move before they've all gotten here, so we'll just fit them in as they arrive. We'll change some assignments to make sure the important positions are full. I know this'll create some organizational confusion, but we'll just have to deal with it."
 
"What about Kanth's force?"
 
"We're moving out in two weeks, so he won't be here in time. I'll have to put your force in his place, and he can take the defensive position here. I know your force is smaller than his, but it'll have to be enough."
 
"I think it will be," Malachi said. "I don't like the effect all these sudden changes are likely to have, but I think you're right; waiting around would be worse. Besides, this is one of the reasons we're taking the overkill approach, right? I think we'll be fine."
 
 


 
Sloppy of them, Alice thought. There's no way Moscow should've been able to get that close so easily. I know it's hard to be on alert in safe territory, but still, this is just embarrassing. Fortunate, though. "They plan to move in two weeks," she said.
 
"Not a lot of time," Byakuren said.
 
"True. They are, however, rushing things a bit to give Orphan less time, and that'll throw their organization off-and it sounds like some of their troops won't have arrived by the time they move, so there's also that."
 
"Still not good."
 
"Indeed," Alice said, "but don't forget our own advantages. The average resident of Makai is notably weaker than the average resident of Gensokyo, and we also have a greater variety of powers than they do. But even more importantly, Makai does not have the constant fighting that Gensokyo does. They'll have numbers and training, but we'll have power and experience. Sure, our battles aren't generally to the death, but it's still more real combat than Makai's troops have seen. I think we can do it. It won't be easy, but I think we can do it."
 
 


 
As we continued towards the shrine, the conversation turned to what I could expect my abilities to be as a god. "Complete mastery of magic goes without saying, of course," Suwako said. "This should come naturally to you. You may want to practice a bit to see just what you can do, but you'll know what you can do, and that really sounded confusing."
 
That was certainly true. "I think I understand, though."
 
"That's good, because it's really hard to explain. Anyways, yeah, nobody could match you as a magic-user even without taking your divine abilities into consideration. And those, of course, are significant. You already saw that you can directly influence the magic of others, cancelling it out or overloading it. You can probably even take direct control of others' spells. I don't know how much influence you have over other forms of power, though-I don't think the traces of magic in those are enough for you to really do anything with. Of course, you should have more than enough raw power to make up for it."
 
"You think so? I'm not sure where I stand in terms of raw power. Although now that you mention it, I do feel as though my power is significant."
 
"A god's power comes from faith," Kanako said. "The more faith you have, the more powerful you will be."
 
"And you've got a lot," Suwako said.
 
"I've only just awakened as a god," I said. "How much faith could I have?"
 
"In the old days, before skepticism and science took hold in the outside world, everyone believed that nature was solely the work of the gods. If it rained, that was seen as the work of sky gods, such as Kanako. When crops grew, that was thought to be because of the harvest gods . If one was unlucky, people's thoughts turned towards curses rather than just pure chance. Today, people in the outside world have an understanding of nature. Before, they had faith in nature. It was not faith in any particular gods directly, but it was faith in their domains, and that's sufficient."
 
"Sadly," Kanako said, "even in Gensokyo people no longer think that nature is entirely the work of the divine; they see it as simply being influenced by us. Faith still comes from them, but not to the same extent."
 
"But your situation is different," Suwako said. "You're a god of magic, and though magic is a force of nature, it's a bit different. It's easier for regular people to make use of, and as such, even magicians usually don't think of it as a force of nature; only the scholars do. People may not know that there's a god of magic in Gensokyo, but everyone knows that Gensokyo is the realm of magic, and the people do have faith in it, not an understanding of it. Not in any god of magic, but in magic itself."
 
"And since I'm the only god of magic here," I said, "that faith all comes to me. I see."
 
"I don't think you've got much to worry about in the power department. I'm not saying there's nobody who could match you, but there certainly aren't many. Although more than just raw power matters in battle, of course. You've always done just fine in battle, though, so I see no reason to expect anything diff-"
 
"Boo!"
 
"GAH!" Suwako struck out in surprise, connecting with a young-looking girl who'd just popped in out of nowhere and sending her into a boulder.
 
The girl got to her feet. "Owwww. Why'd you do that?"
 
"Hey, you're the one who showed up in my face! What were you expecting me to do?"
 
This girl had a number of features that would have made her stand out in the outside world, but not in Gensokyo. There was one, however, that did make her stand out even here. That looks like the third eye Satori has. Although this one's closed. I approached the girl. "Who are you?"
 
"Who am I?"
 
"Yes. Who are you? You look a little like someone I met recently, although her eye? thing was open."
 
"Wait, you know sis?"
 
Interesting. "You're Satori's sister?"
 
"Yeah. I'm Koishi."
 
"Well, it's nice to meet you."
 
"I can't share that sentiment," Suwako said. "What the hell were you trying to do, anyways?"
 
"Just playing. Kogasa's right; surprising people is fun. That's all I was doing. It certainly wasn't anything you needed to hit me for. Overreact much?"
 
"This is not a good time to go around surprising people," I said. "There have been attacks, and they are getting more frequent. Many are likely to react to a surprise just like Suwako did."
 
"Well, then they're just no fun."
 
"Perhaps you should return home. Your sister and her pets would probably be much more willing to play with you."
 
"Maaaaaaaybe."
 
"We're busy at the moment," Kanako said, "so please leave us be. Go play at the tengu village. They've all been extra stuck-up lately, so they could use a little surprising."
 
"Oh? Maybe I should go get Kogasa, then."
 
"That sounds nice. Go play with your friend."
 
"Yeah, I'll do that. Bye!" She vanished as suddenly as she had appeared.
 
"Right," I said, "that was odd."
 
"Not by Gensokyo's standards," Kanako remarked.
 
 


 
Hi! I'm Koishi!
 
I'm a satori, but I'm not Satori. That's my sister's name, not mine. Well, okay, it's not really her name. Her name's Naoshi; she just calls herself Satori. She says she does it to make a statement, but the only statement I see is 'I like weird names'. Satori is the name of our kind, not of a person. But sis is strange like that.
 
Anyways, satori can read minds. That's why we run the underground, but it sucks, too, because people hate us for no reason. We can read minds, so everyone hates us. Why they think I'd even want to read their minds, I don't know. It's all boring stuff, anyways. Although some of it's more depressing. Or disturbing. But whatever. I didn't like it anyways, so why should I care?
 
I didn't like reading minds, and I didn't like people hating me because of it, so I thought, 'hey, why should I even read minds at all?' So I closed my third eye. Other satori have done it. I didn't really get why until I experienced things for myself, but then it made sense, and I decided that I'd do it. I wouldn't have to read minds, and I wouldn't be hated because of something I didn't even like in the first place. I think I messed it up, though, because it didn't work the way it was supposed to.
 
What was supposed to happen is that my third eye would close, and then no more mind-reading. But, well, my eye's closed, yes, but I think I did something wrong with the mind-reading part, because I can still do that. Just differently. Other satori read people's conscious minds; whatever I did to mess things up made my eye look deeper in, and now I read people's subconscious minds. Which isn't nearly as bad, so whatever I messed up, I think I'm okay with it. I can do some cool new stuff, now, too. Like make people not see me, which is fun. Okay, so that's not quite true. They still see me; I just make them not notice me. Works just the same, though.
 
Now, yeah, there are people who like having their subconscious minds read even less than their conscious minds, but you know what? I don't really care anymore. Besides, a lot of people find it easy to ignore my new ability, since, well, the subconscious is subconscious. It doesn't feel like there's anything there, so they don't think about it, and so they don't think to care that I can read it. Oh, and there are also people that have asked me to help them sort things out, figure out what's bothering them and stuff like that. So some people are glad that I can do that. But you know what? I don't care anymore.
 
I don't care what people think of my ability, and I'm not really sure why I ever did. Sis is responding to people's feelings by throwing her ability in people's faces. I responded by trying to get rid of it, but now I don't care what they think, and I can't understand why I would. I'm just going to do whatever I want to, 'cause why shouldn't I?
 
 


 
"Our current shrine maiden is named Seina," Kanako said as we neared the shrine. "Seina Kochiya. She's actually your daughter, at least biologically."
 
"I have a daughter?"
 
"It's more complicated than that," Suwako said. "No, you've never had a child. The thing is, your line's been our maidens ever since it began, and we both wanted to continue that, but you didn't have a child. So we had to work at it a bit. We called in a bunch of favors, took out some that we owe people now, and basically went to a hell of a lot of trouble. Kanako even got a message sent to a fertility goddess she knew in the outside world that hasn't faded yet. Which is fortunate, since we couldn't have done it without her aid."
 
"Basically," Kanako said, "we took a man's seed-we found one we thought you would have approved of-got your contribution to the process from a combination of various magic, miracles, and other powers, and impregnated a surrogate with the resulting embryo. That was easy enough. The hard part was getting what we needed from you."
 
"Magically-assisted pregnancies are common in Gensokyo," Suwako said. "In case you haven't noticed, the majority of the population here is female. Lesbian couples are pretty common here, and, naturally, a lot of them want children. Getting a pregnancy from two women is actually pretty easy; you just have to magic the eggs together. There's a little more to it than that, but not much, and it's not important here anyways.
 
"Anyways, the problem we had was that we didn't have any eggs from you. We had genetic material-we got it from hairs-but not reproductive cells."
 
Hearing even basic genetics terms seemed out of place in Gensokyo, but apparently, these two-myself, too-had lived in the outside world until a few years ago, so them knowing it did make sense. "How did you solve that problem?"
 
"That's where Luria-the fertility goddess-came in," Kanako said. "She was able to create reproductive cells from what we did have."
 
"She couldn't just make them on her own?"
 
"Of course she could have, but then it wouldn't have been your child, just a child. Which she's done quite a lot, of course."
 
"Yeah," Suwako said, "one time she did that and it ended up starting a new religion. Jesus Christ wasn't the son of any god, but he was born to a virgin-although Mary was Jewish and mistook Luria for an angel."
 
"Wait," I said, "so Christianity got its start from her?"
 
"It would've happened anyways," Kanako said. "They were intensely trying to find a savior, so they would have, whether there was one or not. There'd have even been plenty of virgin births to choose from-it's never been as uncommon as most people think. But yes, it did. Which made it really funny when missionaries, thinking she was an ordinary human, tried to convert her. Me, too, actually; I was visiting her at the time. We've never stopped laughing at that one."
 
"I see. Well, let's get back on track."
 
"Right," Kanako said. "Anyways, once we had the reproductive cells, the rest was easy."
 
"I disappeared five years ago, though," I said. "How would this child be old enough to act as your maiden?"
 
"Time magic. We got the lunar princess Kaguya, who has power over eternity, to make an area for us where time moved faster, and Suwako and I raised her there."
 
"You can't have been there all the time, though, right?"
 
"Suwako and I alternated. She was there for four years, normal time-sixteen from her perspective. We had a kappa act as our maiden for that time. We didn't want to accelerate things too much, as large enough temporal differences can be? interesting."
 
"Does she have the same divine nature as I do?"
 
"No," Suwako said. "The divinity was passed down the line from me all the way to you, but your child wasn't conceived in the normal manner. We used your genes, yes, but that's not enough to carry divinity. Seina's fully human."
 
"I see. Um, does she know about the? circumstances of her birth?"
 
Kanako nodded. "We've told her. I'm not quite sure how she'll react when she sees you, but, well, we'll find out."
 
 


 
Night had fallen.
 
Mystia and Daiyousei were with Wriggle in the cave she'd led them two, but Cirno and Rumia were outside, seated together on a large rock and looking out over Gensokyo. "This is all crazy," Cirno said. "Wriggle's got some ancient power, you and I were both different people or whatever, Makai's going to attack, the frog-lady's miko is a god, and who knows what else is happening."
 
"Don't forget that we wouldn't have discovered our pasts if not for the demon thing," Rumia said. "And it sounds like the demons had something to do with Orphan, too. And they're what prompted Wriggle to get her ancestor's power. It seems like a lot, but the events are related at least somewhat."
 
"Oh, I wasn't saying it was all unlikely," Cirno said. "I was just remarking on things."
 
"I kind of was, too. It is a lot to take in, isn't it?"
 
"Yeah. At least deciding what to do about it is easy. If these demons want our home, they'll have to go through us."
 
"That they will," Rumia said. "We'll do our part."
 
"Just be careful, Rumia. I don't want anything to happen to you. I?"
 
"I know. I know."
 
 


 
Kanako and I were seated in a guest bedroom at the Moriya Shrine-Seina, naturally, was using my old room. "We'll need to get you a shrine of your own now," Kanako remarked. "I think having three gods here may be pushing it a bit."
 
"I'll need a shrine maiden," I said.
 
"That you will. Maybe you should go with Aloris, the kappa we used as a temporary maiden. She knows the duties already."
 
"Maybe. I think we have more important things to worry about right now, though."
 
Kanako nodded. "What are you going to do?"
 
"Think things over," I said. "I have a lot to take in. I... well, I think I'll likely decide to fight, but I do want at least the night to think things over."
 
"Then we'll talk about it in the morning."
 
"That works." I paused. "Kanako, what happened, anyways? When I disappeared."
 
"We were attacked," she said. "By demons. I don't know why, but they did? something. They weren't trying to take us out or take over the shrine or anything; they just showed up, did whatever they did, and left. We fought them, of course; you, me, and Suwako. At one point in the fight, you?"
 
"I took a hit meant for you, right?"
 
Kanako nodded. "You pushed me out of the way, and the blast knocked you into the middle of the ones doing whatever it was. At the instant they did it. I assume you got caught up in whatever it was."
 
"But what were they doing that would send me to the outside world? The Hakurei Shrine is the one connected to the border, right?"
 
"The energies of a shrine are such that such connections come easily. Ours may not be connected to a border, but it has the capability to be. That, I guess, was enough for whatever they were doing."
 
"It involved the border, whatever it was. Eirin said that it looked like someone had used the border to attack me."
 
"Well, I don't think it was that, but yes, the border may well have been involved. But yes, that's when you disappeared."
 
"I see." I paused. "Kanako."
 
"Yes?"
 
"I know it was hard for you to lose me like that. I'm sorry."
 
"It wasn't your-"
 
"I'm sorry anyways."
 
Kanako was silent for a moment. "I'm just glad you're back. Even if you have changed."
 
"Speaking of that, do gods sleep?"
 
"We don't need sleep absolutely, just rest. Sleep's the most efficient form of rest, though, so yes, most of us sleep. You may need actual sleep, though; you are something of an unusual case. Feeling tired?" I nodded. "Then get some rest."
 
 


 
Come the next morning, Alice and Byakuren were ready to depart. "Let's hope Orphan's willing to do what needs to be done," Alice said.
 
"I think she will be," Byakuren said.
 
"How well did you know her?"
 
"She was one of the ones Nue's prank drew in. Of the three, she was the most willing to help me. And afterwards, she got Kanako and Suwako to help with converting the ship into the temple. She visited sometimes. Liked to stop by when she was in the village for whatever reason. I wouldn't say I knew her exceptionally well, but she was a friend."
 
"And you think she'll do it?"
 
"I do."
 
"Well, let's go find out."
 
 


 
Apparently, gods don't truly need to eat, but like with sleep, it's helpful. So Kanako, Suwako, and I ate breakfast with Seina, the only one present who actually required food.
 
"I'm still confused about a couple things," I said.
 
"Like what?" Suwako asked.
 
"Well, first of all, while I was your maiden, I went all around Gensokyo, right? So how is it that nobody noticed I'd gone missing?"
 
"Well, some people knew, but only a few. Aside from us, there's Aloris, our temporary maiden. Reimu knows, too."
 
"So I should have waited for her at the start after all. Figures."
 
"Actually," Kanako said, "there's still been no sign of her, at least last I heard. It hasn't been long enough to be a big problem-especially since nothing's happened to the barrier-but it is a little worrying."
 
"Right. Is there anyone else who knew I'd vanished?"
 
"Byakuren did," Suwako said.
 
"Byakuren did?"
 
"Yeah. Why?"
 
"I ran into her at Eientei. She didn't know who I was. Although now that I think about it, she did say that she found me familiar."
 
"Well, I guess she just didn't make the connection. Anyways, nobody else knew you'd vanished. Everyone on the mountain thought you'd simply died, and we didn't say anything to the rest of Gensokyo. You went out frequently, yes, but your visits to any specific location were unpredictable and infrequent enough that few really noticed that you'd stopped coming."
 
"I see."
 
"Anything else bugging you?"
 
"Well, there is one question I still have," I said. "I mentioned my? unplanned detour to Higan, right? Shiki-and Komachi, too-said that it shouldn't have been possible for me to have made it across the river. Apparently, I should have fallen like Utsuho did. But I didn't. I wasn't fully resisting the effect of the river's curse, but I was resisting it. When Shiki realized who I was, she seemed to think that was related to how I did so."
 
"Oh," Suwako said, "yeah, that'd be because of me. Did she tell you about how the curse gods did that particular curse?" I nodded. "Then you already know that it's a special curse, one that only the curse gods could have placed. Well, it just so happens that a long time ago, I challenged and defeated a bunch of them. That gave me the right to their allegiance, and the right to their power. I'm not actually a curse god, but I pretty much am one effectively, although there are limits. I don't think I could have made a curse like what the Sanzu has, but I'm curse god enough that it doesn't affect me. I'd assume that you, being my descendant, have a little of that effect yourself. I don't think you can use any special curse god powers, but you may very well have some level of curse resistance. Not enough to nullify the river's curse, but enough that you could resist it."
 
"Ah. I see."
 
"Any other questions?"
 
"Not right now," I said.
 
"Well, if you think of any more, don't hesitate to ask."
 
"I won't," I said. "But right now, we have other concerns."
 
"That we do," Kanako said. "You're going to do it, aren't you?"
 
I nodded. "I'm going to do it. I'd like to take some time to adjust to all of this, but we don't have time."
 
"That we do not. Makai will surely attack as soon as possible. They'll hurry their end along in order to give us less time. Which will mean they won't be fully prepared, but still, we can't waste any time."
 
"First, we need to get the word out, announce my return and my intentions and ask for people's aid."
 
"We'll want to reach all of Gensokyo at the same time," Suwako said.
 
"Is that possible?"
 
"Well, there is magic for communicating over distances. You could probably work some sort of miracle with that."
 
"I can help, too," Kanako added. "I can carry your words on the wind. They won't reach all of Gensokyo that way, but I can cover the mountain and its immediate surroundings. Do you think you can do the rest?"
 
Somehow, I knew. "Yes, but I'd rather do it differently. Your power would be better used in helping me spread the miracle through all of Gensokyo. Suwako, you should be able to do something similar to help it reach underground."
 
"I can do that," Suwako said. "Man, this should be interesting. Everyone in Gensokyo's going to know there's a god of magic here now. I expect you'll get a lot of visitors, Sanae-oh, um, is it okay to?"
 
"It is," I said. "I have yet to drop the name of Orphan entirely, but you may use my true name if you prefer."
 
"Got it. Anyways, yeah, you can expect a lot of magicians coming to you seeking your blessing. Probably people without power, too, hoping you could give them some. And who knows, maybe you can. Most gods can't, but again, magic is different from other aspects of nature, so maybe you actually can."
 
"Yes, by flooding the body with magical energy," I replied without hesitation. "That energy would pass through one's body, but it would have the effect of sensitizing one to such energies, enabling their use. They would, of course, still have to learn how to do it; I can only make it possible for them to do it, not give them skill with it. With those who can already use magic, the effect would differ on a case-by-case basis, with weaker magicians usually seeing more of an effect." I paused. "Huh. I guess that's what you meant by innately knowing what I can do, even if I don't actually know I can do it."
 
"Pretty much," Suwako said. "Anyways, yeah, you'll get a lot of people looking for that, I think. You probably shouldn't do it too much, though. Although I guess that's your decision."
 
"It's one that can wait," I said.
 
"True enough. You have any idea what you're going to say?"
 
"I have a basic idea. It'll probably be fairly clich?d, but it should serve its purpose. Which is all I need from it."
 
 


 
"Wriggle's changed," Rumia said as she and the rest of the group followed the insect queen up the mountain.
 
"Really?" Cirno replied. "I think she still acts like herself. Sure, she's started telling people to do things, but that's all."
 
"It not her actions as much as it is her attitude. She got, I think, even more power than we did, but it was more than that to her, I think. She thinks of herself as a ruler now."
 
"Wasn't she always an insect queen?"
 
"Not in her mind. And it's a lot different now, anyways, a lot stronger. And she's confident now, too. She's not worried about going into battle or anything like that, because she knows that she can handle it now."
 
"We're stronger, too, though."
 
"And we've changed a bit ourselves, but not as much as Wriggle. I don't think Wriggle realizes just how much she's changed, but she has."
 
 


 
"I'm ready," Kanako said.
 
"Me, too," Suwako said.
 
I nodded. "Good. Begin? now."
 
 


 
"People of Gensokyo!
 
"Don't bother looking around; I'm speaking to you through magic. My name is Sanae Kochiya. Most of you should know that name, but for those who do not, I was the maiden of the Moriya Shrine. I have been? elsewhere for the past five years. Many of you didn't know that I had vanished, and most of those who did thought I was dead. But I understand rumors of my return have been circulating, and they are true. I have returned.
 
"I was the maiden of the Moriya shrine, but I am a maiden no longer. I am descended from a god. That divinity has lain dormant within my line, but it has now awoken, and I am now fully a god. I tell you this not out of any desire for faith, but so that when I say what I have to say, you know I am not speaking for another."
 
 


 
"Most of you know of the demon attacks that have been occurring."
 
"Demons?" Nol said to himself. "Is that what's been going on?"
 
 


 
"These attacks are not random acts, but a coordinated effort by Makai that precedes a full-scale invasion of Gensokyo."
 
"I am not the first to speak publically of this threat, nor am I the first to attempt to organize a resistance. Kanako, the god I once served, has been doing so, as have the vampire Remilia Scarlet and the lunar princess Kaguya Houraisan. All three of them have been attempting to unify Gensokyo under themselves. But this has not been to Gensokyo's aid. It has turned Gensokyo against itself, which is exactly what the enemy wants."
 
"So she's doing it," Wriggle said.
 
"Yeah," Mystia said, "she is."
 
 


 
"Three people are trying to unify Gensokyo under their rule, and this pits them against each other. But that is not all it does. The people of Gensokyo do not want to submit to another's rule. The looming threat has turned Gensokyo against itself, and they intend to strike during this time of weakness.
 
"Gensokyo does not need to unite under anyone's rule. It must simply stand together. Humans, kappa, tengu, oni, everyone must unite against a common threat. I ask not that we stand as one, but that we stand together."
 
Akyu walked over to one of her bookshelves. I'll do my part. Let's see here. What information will she need? Let's see? yes, the current reference editions for people. Definitely the index of abilities. Probably the location overview, too.
 
Akyu continued through her records.
 
 


 
"I intend to face the coming threat, but I cannot do it alone. We must all work together. I intend to lead Gensokyo into this battle, but that is all I intend to do. I am not asking for lasting allegiance, only for help standing against a threat we all face."
 
"Does that mean Aya was right about who Orphan is?" Keine said to herself. "Huh. First time for everything, I guess."
 
 


 
I signaled Kanako to speak.
 
 


 
"I am Kanako Yasaka. I hereby pledge my support to Sanae to stand against this threat."
 
 


 
I resumed speaking.
 
 


 
"Kanako has made the right decision. I ask you all to make the same decision, as it is only together that we can stand against Makai. Anyone who decides to stand with us will be welcomed, regardless of any abilities you may or may not have. We will all be needed if we wish to overcome this threat.
 
"I will be sending people throughout Gensokyo. Those who are willing to stand with me, present yourselves to them when they arrive, and they will provide further instructions. We will gather as one force and prepare for the coming battle.
 
"Gensokyo itself is at stake. Please lend your assistance in protecting it."
 
 


 
"Did I do all right?" I asked.
 
"I think you did fine," Suwako said.
 
"You can probably count on Kaguya's support as well as mine," Kanako said. "She should be receptive to the new plan. Remilia's the one I'm concerned about."
 
"She'll cooperate," Suwako said. "If we and Kaguya are both supporting you, she won't have much of a choice."
 
"Most likely," Kanako said. "Oh, and we have visitors. They're arriving at the shrine right now."
 
"You can tell that, then," I remarked.
 
"This is my shrine. Nobody can be here without me being aware of it. Let's go and greet them, shall we?"
 
I nodded, and Suwako and I followed Kanako out of the shrine.
 
There were five people. The one in front had some birdlike features, including wings, and was likely a bird youkai. Behind her was a regal-looking insect girl. To the insect girl's left was a fairy with wings of ice, and to her right was a young-looking blond-haired girl dressed entirely in black. Hanging behind the four was another fairy.
 
It was the insect girl who captured my attention, and not just because of her regal appearance. She had power; I could tell just by looking at her. This is a woman who's in control and knows it.
 
The bird youkai stepped forward. "Lady Kanako, Lady Suwako, Lady Sanae," she said, bowing respectfully to each of us in turn.
 
"This is unexpected," Kanako remarked. "I believe you're that night sparrow? Mystia, right? And I certainly recognize Cirno."
 
I noticed that Suwako and this 'Cirno' were staring at each other. Is there some sort of hostility between these two?
 
Kanako continued. "I'm afraid I don't recognize the rest of you, though."
 
Mystia turned to me. "The Holy Queen of the Night has come to offer her support to your cause."
 
It wasn't hard to figure out which one of them Mystia was referring to. I looked at the insect girl. "Then please, step forward."
 
The insect girl motioned Mystia back and approached. "I am Wriggle Nightbug, descendant of Lady Nisus and inheritor of her power and being."
 
I didn't know what she was talking about, but Kanako and Suwako seemed to. "Nisus?" Kanako said. "That's a name I haven't heard in a very long time. Her line was thought to have died out."
 
"Her descendants have lived as ordinary youkai. But her power did not die with her. Lady Nisus sealed away her power and being, and it has lain dormant, waiting until a time when one of her line had need of it."
 
She's playing a role, I realized. She's someone who's in control and knows it, but the way she's acting now is just an act. And one she seems to be enjoying. I suppose I might as well play along. "I see," I said. "Your assistance is most welcome. If I may ask, who are your companions?"
 
As she named them, Wriggle motioned them forward one by one. Most of them seemed to just be tolerating Wriggle's act, but Mystia seemed to be getting in on it herself. Although unlike Wriggle, Mystia looked like she was about to burst out laughing. "Mystia Lorelei is my champion, my chosen warrior. Cirno and Rumia are reincarnations of great powers of the past. And Daiyousei represents the fairies of the lake."
 
"It is a pleasure," I said. "Allow me, then, to formally introduce myself. I am Sanae Kochiya, divine sovereign over the domain of magic. Your aid is most welcome."
 
"We are pleased to give it," Mystia said. "There is no enemy that can stand before-" She started laughing.
 
"Way to ruin the mood, Mystia," Wriggle said.
 
"I-I'm sorry," Mystia said, still laughing. "It's just-how do you manage to keep a straight face? I mean, 'chosen warrior'? How does calling me a chosen warrior not cause you to laugh?"
 
"I guess I'm just better at keeping a straight face," Wriggle said.
 
This was starting to look more like friends hanging out than anything else. It's not, though. Her power, her status, her commanding presence, those were all real. "We don't need you to keep a straight face," I said. "You don't need to act different."
 
"Yeah. It's just fun."
 
"I see. Well, as I said, your aid is welcome. We're going to need all the help we can get."
 
 


 
I think I addressed any remaining questions, anything that might seem to not fit with Orphan being Sanae. If I missed anything, let me know.
 
Nolrai, if you have a character you want to see a backstory for, you have one week to name her. No more extentions.
 
Koishi's appearance in this chapter was brought to you by ShimmerMist, the one who got Orphan's identity right on FanFiction.net.
 
Also, I'm sorry it's been so long between updates. I have a job now, so I have a lot less free time, but I'm still keeping this story going, so don't worry about that.
 
And, of course, comments are appreciated.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #53 on: November 06, 2011, 03:47:07 AM »
Yay new chapter!
brb readan.
EDIT: Awesome as always Can't wait for the next chapter.
« Last Edit: November 06, 2011, 04:06:41 AM by J.O.B »

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #54 on: November 06, 2011, 11:08:21 PM »
YAY ANOTHER CHAPTER

I should've guessed it was Sanae. It just occurred to me that a goddess shouldn't be able to "grow"; Sanae's true nature would've been dormant at the time, so she'd still count as human.


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Re: Orphan
« Reply #55 on: December 13, 2011, 02:03:10 AM »
Chapter 19
The Coming Battle
 
 
"Seina," Kanako said, "we have visitors. A pair. And given the presence I'm sensing, I'm pretty sure I know who they are. Bring them in, would you?"
 
"Yes," Seina said, heading outside.
 
Kanako, Suwako, and I were inside the shrine, discussing the current situation. I, too, had felt the presence. "Who are they?"
 
"Two people who no doubt have ties to the current situation. I thought they'd show up, although not quite so soon after your little speech."
 
"Right," I said. "Anyways, you're certain about their support?"
 
"The tengu and the kappa follow me," Kanako said. "They'll stand with us. And we can make use of them right away. Tengu tend to be very fast; we can use them as our messengers."
 
"We'll need to get word to them right away," I said. "For now, we'll just tell people to get together with others who are willing to fight. We'll give them further instructions as soon as we can."
 
"I'll go," Seina said as she reentered the shrine.
 
"Please do," I said. "Also, tell whoever's going to the human village to find Heida no Akyu. If she's willing to come here herself, that's excellent, but if nothing else, I would like access to her records."
 
"Got it," Seina said. She motioned the two guests inside, then left.
 
Kanako and I got to our feet. "Alice, Byakuren," Kanako said, "welcome."
 
"Hello, Byakuren," I said.
 
Byakuren approached me. "Orphan. Sanae. I'm sorry I didn't realize who you are when we first met."
 
"It's not a problem," I said. "I made it here anyways."
 
"Still, I apologize."
 
"Your apology is accepted, then," I said. "I assume, however, that that's not the only reason you're here."
 
"Most certainly," Kanako said, "although I think it's her companion who has the most to say. Sanae, allow me to introduce Alice Margatroid. Alice, it just so happens, is the daughter of Shinki, the ruler of Makai."
 
"Wait, what?"
 
Kanako laughed. "Oh, don't worry, she's not here as an enemy. Not when Byakuren's accompanying her. It's Byakuren, after all, who was trying to tell Kaguya, Remilia, and myself to stop attempting to unify Gensokyo under us. She's opposed to Makai's actions, quite clearly."
 
"I am," Byakuren said. "It is unfortunate that bloodshed is necessary, but I see no other way."
 
"And you, Alice," I said. "Are you opposing your mother, or is something else going on?"
 
"My mother is dead," Alice said.
 
This time, Kanako and Suwako were the ones surprised. "Hold on," Suwako said, "isn't that impossible?"
 
"Normally, but there was someone who found a way to do it."
 
"Please elaborate," I said. "You say it should have been impossible to kill her; why is that?"
 
It was Suwako who answered. "Shinki isn't-wasn't-just Makai's ruler. She actually created Makai."
 
"Oh."
 
"She is-sorry, was-not like us," Kanako said. "She wasn't a god, at least not as we are. Nobody really seems completely certain precisely what she is-or what she was, I guess. She does-did-seem to be at least partially divine, but there was more to her than that. Alice, you're certain she's dead?"
 
"I am," Alice said. "The ones who killed her are now in charge of Makai. The people have bought their story that Gensokyo is responsible for it."
 
"Man," Suwako said, "how did they even manage to do it?"
 
"I assume you remember the attacks on the Hakurei and Moriya shrines five years ago," Byakuren said. "Alice was able to discover that the purpose of those attacks was to use the shrines to access the Hakurei Barrier and channel its energy into Shinki, disrupting her being enough for Netese-the one who led the attempt, and the one who will be leading Makai's army-and her people to kill Shinki."
 
"How did you learn this, Alice?" I asked.
 
"Netese explained it to someone who just so happened to be there as a double agent," Alice said.
 
"Alice and I have been attempting to get to the bottom of what's been going on," Byakuren explained. "We discovered that Shinki was killed for reasons we do not yet know-I suspect that everyone involved has their own reasons-and her death was blamed on Alice. The people of Makai believe that, rather than Alice acting on her own, this was a planned action by Gensokyo. Over the last five years, they've been building up an army in preparation for a retaliatory invasion."
 
"Hold on," Kanako said. "Are you saying that this entire war is part of a cover up? That just sounds crazy."
 
"I agree," Byakuren said. "If a cover-up was the only objective, saying that Alice acted alone would have been enough."
 
"Unless the people thought it was more than that," Suwako said. "It may be that public opinion swept Netese up. That's probably not all of it, though. Some of it, maybe, but not all of it. The rest, well, that I don't know."
 
"Neither do we. But regardless of the reasons, Makai is going to attack."
 
"Which is why we need to move fast," I said. "Do you have any idea how long we have before the attack is launched?"
 
"Two weeks from yesterday," Alice said.
 
"Not a lot of time."
 
"Netese is rushing a bit," Alice said. "She's launching the attack early to give you as little time as possible to organize an opposing force. She won't have quite as many people as she originally planned, and last-minute reassignments likely to cause at least some confusion."
 
"Perhaps, but I expect we'll be face with a formidable force."
 
Alice nodded. "That is a certainty. It will be a large force; Makai is much larger than Gensokyo, and has a correspondingly larger population. They will have the advantage of numbers, and they've been preparing for the past five years. They will be better organized than any force we can assemble. But we have our own advantages. First, the average demon is notably weaker than the average resident of Gensokyo. Second, Makai's population is far less varied than Gensokyo's; they do not have anywhere near the variety of people and abilities that Gensokyo has."
 
"We'll need to use those advantages, then," I said.
 
"Yes, and there is one more. You're aware of how common battle is in Gensokyo, I assume."
 
I nodded. "It's difficult to miss it."
 
"Yes. Well, Makai is different. Combat is much rarer in Makai than it is here. It happens, but it's not the norm. In Gensokyo, it is. Most demons haven't fought even once, and it's very rare to find one that's been in more than just a few battles. They may have the advantage of training, but we have the advantage of experience. We know what battle is like. True, our battles generally do not involve much actual risk of death, but they are still battles, and we have that experience. The enemy does not."
 
"Good," I said, "because we're going to need every edge we can get."
 
 


 
Akyu was quick to answer the door when she heard the knock, and was not surprised to find that her visitor was a tengu.
 
"Greetings," the tengu said. "Are you Heida no Akyu?"
 
"Yes," Akyu said. "Been expecting you."
 
"Sanae Kochiya requests your assistance in her efforts to repel the coming invasion. She would like for you to join her at the Mor-" the tengu was cut off when Akyu tossed a bag at her.
 
"Already know," Akyu said as the tengu caught the bag. "Been expecting you. Already said that. Carry that."
 
"Um?"
 
"Books. Volumes from my records. Information Sanae has use for. Know everything in them, but she does not. Can answer questions, but she lacks knowledge. May not always know what questions to ask. Having books helpful."
 
"Right," the tengu said. "Um, well, if you're ready to depart, then follow me."
 
 


 
"The strategic situation on Makai's end is fairly simple," Alice said. "They'll want to force battle as soon as possible, give us as little time to prepare as they can. They'll come through the portal and head straight for our force."
 
"What would happen if we attempted an ambush at the portal?" I asked.
 
"I recommend against it," Alice said. "They'd just come through attacking, and although we'd still have the advantages of power and experience, we'd lose a straight-up fight like that. They'd just keep coming, sending fresh warriors in while ours wore out and became injured and our numbers slowly dwindled. We'll need to fight smart if we want to win this. Use the variety of people and abilities we have here and the fact that we can set up ahead of time to our advantage."
 
"They'll expect us to have a few things planned, then," I said.
 
Alice nodded. "They'll some in waves, force us to play our cards one at a time. But we have an advantage. My spy's keeping an eye on them, and while we know they've got scouts in Gensokyo, they don't know that I've been looking into things in Makai. They don't think we have any information on their force."
 
"That's fortunate," I said.
 
"Yes. Do keep in mind, however, that we've only seen the two forces currently at the portal. There's no telling how large the others are, so my estimates of how large a combined force we'll face are very rough."
 
"It's still a lot better than nothing."
 
"Certainly. Anyways, they'll likely use just a small number of waves, but keep the waves large enough to ensure we play a card in response to each one."
 
"We won't be able to prepare too many surprises," I said. "Not effective ones, not when they have to be on a scale this large. Setting traps for individuals or small groups is a lot different than setting traps for an army."
 
"Then we need to prepare as many as we can and hope it's enough."
 
"More company," Kanako said. "Just one person. A celestial. Yes, I can tell; they have a different sense about them than other youkai."
 
"Tenshi," Alice said. "No other celestial would involve herself in a war."
 
"And no other celestial would barge right in like she's in the process of doing."
 
Sure enough, the newcomer let herself in. For Gensokyo, she didn't look particularly distinctive, with the exception of the fact that she had peaches on her hat. Her sword, though, had a very? strong sense about it. The weapon had power; there was no doubt of that. "Hi," she said, looking at me. "I guess you don't remember me, but we've met. Tenshi Hinanai. I understand you're fighting a war."
 
 


 
I am Tenshi Hinanai. I am a celestial, a resident of heaven. And I hate it.
 
I ascended to heaven and became a celestial along with the rest of my family. Other celestials basically thought I only ascended because of my family, that I never could have become a celestial on my own. And you know what? Maybe they're right. I don't really care, 'cause I don't like it here anyways.
 
Oh, sure, it was fun for a while. No violence, no strife. Some responsibilities, but very little. Constant parties, festivals. Mostly it's just relaxing, and who doesn't dream of a life like that? Hell, even now, I don't object to that. And it's certainly great that nobody ever wants for anything; I'd never say there's anything wrong with that. No, what I have a problem with is the boredom, the monotony. Life in heaven is always the same, and yes, it took a couple hundred years, but eventually, I just grew sick of it. I don't know how all the other celestials can stand it.
 
I started watching what was transpiring in Gensokyo-yes, we can do that. Life in Gensokyo was clearly far more interesting than life in heaven. Sure, everyone up here-except me, of course-is happy, whereas that's not true in Gensokyo, but Gensokyo was just so interesting. Hell, you could get into a fight pretty much whenever you wanted just by going for a walk in the woods. And then, of course, there were the incidents.
 
I watched as the vampire Remilia Scarlet spread her mist over Gensokyo. I watched as the ghost princess Yuyuko Saigyouji stole spring, which I didn't even know was possible. I watched as the lunar princess Kaguya Houraisan replaced the moon. I watched all of them. Someone would do something, and inevitably, the shrine maiden Reimu Hakurei and the witch Marisa Kirisame would come to stop whoever it was, sometimes with the aid of others. And I wanted in. So I caused an incident of my own.
 
I wield the Sword of Hisou, which grants me power over the weather. Using it, I spread a mist of my own over Gensokyo. This mist interacted with people to cause weather patterns around that person. For example, the mist caused the weather around Reimu to always be sunny, whereas around Marisa there was always a light rain, and around Yuyuko it was always snowing. And to ensure that I drew Reimu's attention-she can be pretty lazy, and sometimes it's quite some time before she decides to actually take action-I hit her shrine with a localized earthquake, bringing it down. Such a thing didn't affect the border, of course-that's linked to the shrine's spiritual properties, not its physical ones-but it did get Reimu moving. And the mist alone was enough to get many others moving. The oni Suika Ibuki, who apparently just wandered into heaven one day while drunk-which she always is-actually gave me a hand with that, although not until after giving me one hell of a good fight. She's strong, too; I didn't even hold back against her, and I still lost (although it could have easily gone the other way, and a later fight between us did). Not that I mind; I only care about it being a good fight, and that one was a very good fight.
 
I ended up in a lot of fights, although I did hold back in most of them. I knew how these incidents worked: as soon as Reimu and Marisa beat whoever was responsible, that person put an end to it. And I had no intention of messing up Gensokyo's weather indefinitely. So I let Reimu and everyone else who showed up win, although I did make them all work for it. And after the incident, I helped Reimu rebuild her shrine, only for the youkai Yukari Yakumo to randomly show up, destroy it, and fight me. That was another fight I lost even without holding back.
 
It didn't end with all of that. Suika told me it was a party to celebrate the restoration of the shrine, even though that hadn't happened yet. I thought she was just looking for an excuse to have a party. Parties with even one oni are far more interesting than the parties I was used to, though, so I went along with it.
 
As it turns out, Suika was telling everyone she invited that it was a 'beat-the-crap-out-of-Tenshi' party, so everyone who showed up challenged me right away. Too bad for them I didn't hold back that time. Even Suika lost. Yukari didn't show up, though, so I didn't get a rematch against her. Reimu didn't show up, either, so I went to her-which, incidentally, is when I learned that Suika was telling everyone to come beat me up. We ended up fighting, and I won that time around, although Reimu keeps insisting that during that fight she was holding back. But whatever.
 
I haven't caused any more trouble since then. I have been visiting Gensokyo more and more, and, of course, many of those visits include battle, which is kind of an everyday thing in Gensokyo. It's part of what makes the place so interesting. I don't think the other celestials really like the fact that I'm spending so much time in Gensokyo, but I don't really care what they think.
 
No, I'm not glad a war's about to happen. A lot of people are going to die. But yes, I want to participate in it, and yes, I'm looking forward to it. Yeah, it'd be better if there wasn't a war, but there's nothing I can do to stop it, so why shouldn't I enjoy it?
 
 


 
"I'd recommend the Barrens," Tenshi said. "Big expanse of nothing, and far enough from anything else that collateral damage won't be an issue. But it's close enough to the portal to Makai to entice the enemy to meet us head-on."
 
"You've been thinking about this," I noted.
 
"Well, yeah. It's not every day you see a war. Not in Gensokyo, at least. There hasn't been one here since before the barrier went up."
 
"Are you actually looking forward to it?"
 
"Also yes. Sure, it'd be better if there wasn't one, but there is one, and I can't stop it, so what's wrong with that?"
 
I decided not to address that particular comment. "Well, your aid is most welcome. We'll need everyone we can-"
 
Kanako cut in. "Someone's here. Two people. Probably Akyu and her escort."
 
"Wait," Tenshi said, "Akyu?"
 
"If I'm going to come up with a battle plan," I said, "I'm going to need all the information I can get."
 
"Oh. Yeah, that makes sense. Well, I'm not so much the strategic-thinking type, so I'll let you handle that part."
 
Akyu walked in at that moment, the tengu behind her looking exasperated. "I-I-I'm sorry, Lady Kanako. I tried to tell her to be respectful, but-"
 
"Do not worry about it," Kanako said. "Thank you for bringing her. You may go."
 
"Yes, my lady." The tengu bowed, handed Akyu the bag she was carrying, then left.
 
Akyu came straight to me. "Orphan. Sanae. Learned who you are."
 
"I did," I said. "Thank you for your assistance."
 
"Provided little assistance."
 
"It was still some, and I got to where I needed to go."
 
"True." Akyu held out the bag. "Brought reference texts. Should help you come up with plan. Have specific questions, ask me. Want to see what all there is, look through references yourself."
 
"Thank you," I said. "Time is short, so let's get started right away."
 
 


 
"We'll be moving in twelve days," Netese said. "Readiness estimate?"
 
"The transition's going fairly smoothly," Malachi said. "Of course, all my force really has to do is get an order of advance worked out. We aren't the ones who'll have to deal with shuffled assignments and missing people and the like. We weren't getting anyone more in the first place. And we've got the full two weeks to work with. We'll be more ready than any of the other forces. Although we aren't as large as the force we're replacing."
 
"You'll actually be taking Aroa's place in the offensive. Her force will replace Kanth's in the second wave, as it's about the same size, and yours will fill in for her in the final wave. Your lack of numbers won't be quite as significant that way, as it will be a smaller fraction of the total."
 
Malachi nodded. "Yeah, that works."
 
"Good."
 
 


 
"Since Akyu's arrival yesterday," I said, "I've gone over her information, and I think I have a plan, although I do have some missing pieces to fill in when it comes to the execution."
 
In the room with me were Kanako, Suwako, and Seina. Alice and Byakuren were also present, having remained at the shrine overnight, and the same was true of Akyu. Tenshi had departed for night, but she was currently present, having returned in the morning. Wriggle's team had done the same, spending the night in a cave on the mountain.
 
"Specify," Akyu said. "Will answer questions of how."
 
"Let me go over it all," I said. "First, a general concern: surveillance. I need a way to keep watch over the entire battlefield. Having lookouts in the air is one thing, but I'd rather have some way to keep watch over the entire area."
 
"I can do that," Wriggle said. "I will keep the area under watch."
 
Wriggle had given me a summary of the abilities of herself and her friends. "That will aid you in the task I have planned for you, but it's not quite what I'm looking for. I want some method where I can view the battlefield as a whole."
 
"The tengu reporters," Kanako said. "We can have them take pictures."
 
"A good idea, but they'd then need to get the pictures to me."
 
"Spirit photography," Akyu said. "Hatate Himikaido."
 
"Spirit photography?"
 
"Hatate can take pictures of anything there's already a picture of," Kanako explained. "The other reporters can spread out and take pictures of the battle, and then Hatate can copy them and show them to you. A good idea, Akyu."
 
"Get word to the tengu as soon as you can," I said. "I'll also want people in the air to take out any enemy scouts. And preferably some way to hide ours so that the enemy can't do the same. I'm already planning to talk to the kappa; I'll see if they have any spare optical camouflage suits the tengu scouts can use."
 
"What about the actual plan?" Tenshi asked. "Let's get to that."
 
"I was about to."
 
 


 
"Step one: concealing an aerial force. I want to be able to fly a force in from above without it being seen. But whatever we use to hide it needs to look natural. I'm thinking a cloud cover is the best option. Tenshi?"
 
"Easy. I'll need some time to build it up in a way that looks natural, though."
 
"Begin the process whenever you need to."
 
"I'll do that."
 
"Good. Okay, here's the tricky part. The force can't just fly in from above the clouds; the enemy's sure to be keeping an eye out up there. The force will have to move in within the clouds, and they'll need to know where they're going without emerging above or below the clouds for even a brief look."
 
"They'll be able to stick together and move within the clouds," Kanako said. "We just need a marker of some kind where we want them to stop. I imagine you could take care of that."
 
"I could, but a magical mark would be too detectable."
 
"The magic of Makai is different from the magic found here," Alice said, "but yes, I imagine they'd detect it easily."
 
"Normal object," Akyu said. "Keep it airborne, use locator to direct force to location."
 
"Nazrin," Byakuren said. "She can do that."
 
 


 
Shou and Nazrin emerged to greet Byakuren as she landed in front of the temple. "Welcome back, lady Hijiri," Shou said. "How are things going?"
 
"The plan seems to be coming together. Actually, I'm here right now because I'd like to request the assistance of the two of you."
 
"Of course," Shou said. "What do you need of us?"
 
"We're going to hide a surprise-attack force within a cloud cover, but we need some way to guide them to the desired location. Shou, you will take position within the clouds. Nazrin, you'll be with the force. When you get the signal, lead the force into the clouds. Locate Shou's pagoda and use that to lead the force to her position."
 
"Sure," Nazrin said. "Not a problem."
 
"Once the force receives the signal to attack, you two can leave."
 
"We won't," Shou said. "We'll come find you."
 
"I thought you'd say that. That will be just fine."
 
 


 
"Second issue: concealing a ground force. I want to be able to move a force into the path of the enemy without them being seen."
 
"The kappa have their optical camouflage suits," Kanako said, "although I don't know if they have quite that many, especially if we're using some of them for the tengu scouts."
 
"We'll use whatever they have."
 
 


 
Seina entered the workshop. Jeez, Nitori, clean the place up for "Wah!" She slipped on a puddle of grease and fell, but kept herself from hitting the ground by quickly floating herself a few inches above the floor.
 
Nitori's voice came from the back. "Be careful! There's oil and grease and stuff all over the floor!"
 
"Yeah," Seina said, "I noticed."
 
Nitori, like many on the mountain, knew Seina's voice. "Ah!" the kappa exclaimed shortly before racing out of the back. "Lady Seina! I didn't know you'd be com-ah!" She slipped on the grease as Seina had, but unlike Seina, she didn't act in time to keep from hitting the ground.
 
Does she ever wash herself off? Seina wondered as Nitori got to her feet. She just fell into a puddle of grease on the floor, and I think it's the floor that got dirtier. "I'm not interrupting anything, am I?"
 
"Well, I've been keeping busy, but don't worry about it. How can I help you?"
 
"How many working optical camouflage suits do you have made, and could you have any more ready within the next twelve days?"
 
 


 
"I'll go see what Nitori has as soon as we're done here," Seina said, "but I think Kanako's right; we'll probably need more."
 
"Then we'll need an additional means of concealment. Akyu?"
 
"Sunny Milk. Can control light. Able to hide herself and others from sight. However, power is limited. Can only hide so many."
 
"We can use her in combination with whatever the kappa have."
 
"I'll talk to her," Cirno said. "I know her group. I don't think she'll come without Luna and Star, though."
 
"That's acceptable."
 
 


 
"Oh," Sunny said, "you want the three of us to help play a trick on the Makai people?"
 
Cirno nodded. "There's going to be a group of people we don't want them to see. We can hide some of them, but not enough."
 
"Sounds like fun," Luna said.
 
"Okay," Sunny said, "we'll do it. They won't see or hear anything."
 
"No noise cancelling," Cirno said. "There's going to be a lot of stuff making noise; a silence could give you away."
 
"We're still coming with her," Luna said.
 
"I thought you would."
 
 


 
"The later waves will likely be the larger ones," Alice said. "They'll draw out our ambushes with the first forces, then come in and overwhelm us. We'll need something capable of countering that."
 
"And I have something in mind. I'll see to setting this one up myself."
 
"What are you thinking?" Kanako asked.
 
"I'm going to pay a visit to the underground."
 
 


 
"Well," Yuugi said, "I don't know that I'd call myself a leader of the oni-Satori's the one in charge down here-but yeah, I can take a leadership role for this. The title of Deva does still command some respect, after all. Not that you'd have any difficulty down here without me; I don't think there's a single oni who doesn't plan to join the fight."
 
"That's good to hear," I said. "We'll need everyone we can get. For you, though, I was more thinking of having you lead an oni force during the battle. If you're right about how many will be joining the fight, then we should have plenty to put within our main force, but I'll want most of them in a concentrated force."
 
"With me leading them. That's not a problem. Might be if it was another oni-there'd be fights over who got to lead-but nobody's going to deny that position to a Deva. As far as getting us all to come, well, as I said, that won't be a problem. You might want to speak to Satori anyways, though; she is technically in charge down here."
 
"I was planning to," I said.
 
"I see. All right, then. You go talk to her, and we'll handle things down here. We'll probably be ready within just a couple days. And, Orphan? Or, um, Sanae?"
 
"Use whichever name you prefer."
 
"Right. Well, this isn't really related to why you're here, but? well, um, thank you. For Parsee."
 
Ah, of course. "I did very little."
 
"You did enough."
 
"I said thinks that I imagine you've already said. I just hit her in emphasis."
 
"Something that you'd really expect an oni to think of. That was after an extended battle between you two, though."
 
"I don't think that helped."
 
"Well, regardless, what you said after hitting her did help. It wasn't any sort of quick resolution or anything; this isn't fiction. But after you pushed her, she took the first step. There are still some, um, issues, but that's for me to worry about. You've done enough. And for what you did, thank you."
 
 


 
As before, there was no need for me to speak. "An interesting plan," Satori said. "Risky, but you know that. Tricky, too, but again, it would seem as though you have everything thought out. Timing it right, though, will not be easy. There's the preparation delay, of course, and you'll also need to get the signal through-ah, but it seems you've thought of that, too. Very well, then. I won't deny that I have certain? reservations about this plan, but I will agree to it."
 
Thank you.
 
"You're welcome. You can return to the surface. Yuugi and I will take care of things down here."
 
 


 
"We'll need to coordinate our forces," Byakuren said. "We'll need signals of some sort."
 
"General signals are easy. I'm more worried about instances where we don't want highly visible signals. I'd rather not use communication magic; the enemy may be able to detect it."
 
"Nitori may have something," Seina said. "I'll be sure to mention that when I go talk to her."
 
"Good. Kanako, get word to the tengu messengers. Find a good spot in the Barrens for a field headquarters, and tell them to lead everyone who's willing to fight to that location. All of you rendezvous there, as well. I'll head there as soon as I'm done underground, and we'll start putting our forces together."
 
 


 
The sudden frenzied activity took Netese by surprise. "Report!" she ordered the nearest guard as she ran outside.
 
"Maorol's force is here," the guard said.
 
"Good for them. What the hell is going on?"
 
"I don't know. I only know it's Maorol's force because I caught sight of him. My job is to stay right here."
 
"A fair point. I'll have to find someone who does know, then. Remain at your post."
 
"Understood," the guard said as Netese rushed off.
 
The commotion was easy to spot, and Netese headed towards it. Before long, she spotted Maorol, who was on the ground at the edge of the camp, speaking with Malachi. "Maorol, Malachi, report," she said as she approached the pair. "What's going on?"
 
Maorol gave a bow. "Lady Netese. One of our scouts found a spy."
 
"A spy?"
 
"Apparently, she was sneaking around quite close to the camp," Malachi said. "Close enough that I'm very surprised nobody saw her."
 
"With all due respect," Maorol said, "your guard is? lacking. My patrols have been far more intensive."
 
"And you didn't cut them even so close to here," Netese said. "I see you're just as paranoid as ever. Not that I'm complaining. Did you get a look at this spy?"
 
Maorol nodded. "I did, and she was? well, she'd look fairly normal if she didn't appear artificial."
 
"Artificial. Like a doll?"
 
"Yes. Like a doll. You think she's a tsukumogami?"
 
"Similar, at least," Netese said. "I don't know how she was made, but I think I have a fairly good idea of who made her."
 
"Alice," Malachi said.
 
"Indeed."
 
"Then Nekiei is dead."
 
"I had assumed as much, given that I had not heard anything from her. I already suspected that Alice had defeated her ambush; this simply provides additional evidence of that."
 
"I'm surprised we didn't at least hear of the failure, though."
 
"Alice must have wiped them all out," Netese said.
 
"Which she likely couldn't have managed unless she was ready. Looks like it was a trap."
 
"She used Shanghai, then," Netese said. "Alice must have been aware of what Shanghai was seeing and hearing. Shanghai, of course, didn't know that Alice could still do that even after bringing her to life."
 
Malachi sighed. "Netese, hasn't it occurred to you that Shanghai might have been faking the entire thing?"
 
"She wasn't lying," Netese said. "She couldn't have fooled me."
 
"If I may," Maorol said, "could I ask to be filled in? What has been happening with Shinki's daughter?"
 
"Well," Netese said, "a few days ago, one of my guards was approached by?"
 
 


 
The army of rabbits approaching from the bamboo forest was hard to miss, so I knew of their approach to our camp. And I was not very surprised when a trio flew ahead of them. Nor was I surprised to find, when I went to meet this trio, that it included Eirin and Kaguya. I hadn't expected Mokou, though; even if she was getting along better with Kaguya now, I wouldn't have expected her to be helping lead the lunar princess's army.
 
"Welcome," I said. "Thank you for giving me your support in this."
 
"Hey, I don't want Gensokyo to get taken over," Kaguya said, "and you're doing a better job of getting an army together than I was. Besides, I owe you one for Mokou."
 
"I did little," I said. "I merely pointed out something that she really should have realized by herself."
 
"But I hadn't," Mokou said. "You helped me realize what I needed to do, and I thank you for that."
 
"As do I," Eirin said. "The two of them have been getting along much better. There've only been three killings between them since that night-and yes," she continued upon seeing the look on my face, "that's an improvement."
 
"Right," I said. "Anyways, let's get to business. Makai's force is scheduled to move nine days from now, and we need to be ready."
 
"Yes," Eirin said. "I apologize that it took us so long to mobilize, but we had some work to do."
 
"It's not a problem. You have a force that's actually trained as a unified force."
 
"Not as much as Makai's force likely has been," Eirin said. "It was never a very intensive program, although it has been going on for much longer than Makai's. We've been worried mainly about raids from the moon, not fighting a war. But yes, our force is trained as a unified force. And our training program improved after Udonge arrived; she was able to update us on modern training procedures, some of which were downgrades and thus ignored. Some were actually improvements, though, so we integrated those into the program."
 
"That's good," I said. "As you might be expecting, I'll want your force to be in our main force. We'll use it as the core of the force and fill in around it. If we spread disciplined soldiers throughout the rest of the force, it should help with coordination and general operation; everyone can just follow the rabbits' example."
 
"I wouldn't call them 'soldiers'," Eirin said, "but yes, that sounds like a good plan. What sort of numbers are we seem to have a visitor."
 
I turned around to see Alice approaching. "Sanae," she said as she landed.
 
"Alice. What is it?"
 
"My spy was discovered. One of the enemy's forces got lucky."
 
"I see," I said. "What is her status?"
 
"She has evaded pursuit and is en route to the location of my portal. The enemy will be on guard now; I don't think she'll be able to get close enough to tell us much any longer. I will open the portal when she arrives-it will always open between Mekis and my house, no matter where I am when I use the spellcard, so I can do so from here."
 
"All right," I said. "Thank you for informing me."
 
"You're welcome," Alice said as she flew off.
 
I turned back to Eirin. "Sorry about that. Now, where were we?"
 
 


 
"This is all crazy," Seina said. "Have I mentioned that before?"
 
"About fifty times," Kanako said. "Today."
 
"Well, it's crazy. We're at the head of Gensokyo's first army, and the leader is my mother, who I thought had died before I was even conceived, which is kind of crazy itself."
 
"This is Gensokyo," Kanako said. "You may not appreciate just how crazy this place is, since you never lived in the outside world as I did, but believe me, crazy is normal here."
 
"Well, yeah, but an army is normal in the outside, and if crazy is normal, then normal is crazy, right?"
 
"I suppose you may have a point," Kanako said.
 
"Oh, and there's also the fact that you're working under your former shrine maiden, who's now a god herself. That's not normal anywhere."
 
"Stop chatting," Suwako said as she entered the room. "Sanae needs today's numbers. You've got them, right?"
 
Seina laughed. "Since when are you ever serious?"
 
"Since long before you were born," Kanako said. "She was a ruling deity herself once, you know. And yes, Suwako, we have the numbers. Fewer new recruits, but that's to be expected. Most of the interested people are already here, you know."
 
"Any additional people is a good thing," Suwako said. "the more we have, the better."
 
"We have the tengu and kappa," Seina said, "and the rabbits, and Sanae's secured the cooperation of the oni, as well. I think we're doing well."
 
"Yes," Suwako said, "but still, we need everyone we can get. Makai's been preparing for this for the past five years, you know. We're going to need everything we have to win this."
 
"I know," Seina said. "Okay, then, let's get the numbers to Sanae."
 
 


 
"Man," Sunny said, "I didn't know it was this serious. Cirno made it sound like you just wanted me to help play a trick on Makai."
 
"I suppose you could describe it that way," I said. "And she didn't tell you the rest because she didn't actually know it."
 
"Okay, sure."
 
"Can you do it, Sunny?"
 
Sunny thought for a moment. "Yeah. I've never done anything that wide before, but if this is really what you say it is, then yes, I can do it."
 
"Good."
 
"Can Luna and Star be with me when I do that?"
 
I nodded. "Just make sure they're looking away until you have your effect in place."
 
 


 
"With you here, Alozel," Netese said, "the only forces left are Mor's and Takline's. And Kanth's, but we'll be moving before his arrives."
 
"Who's replacing him?" the force leader asked. "Malachi?"
 
"Aroa, actually, and Malachi's replacing Aroa. The numbers work out better that way."
 
"I see," Alozel said. "We're moving in six days, correct?"
 
Netese nodded. "Mor should be here within the next two days, and Takline late in the evening two days later. Which gives us the next day to integrate our forces before moving the day after that. So yes."
 
"Not much time for integration," Alozel remarked.
 
"True, but everyone already knows their assignments. The ones we're changing already know and are adjusting, so they'll be ready. Yes, we would benefit from more time, but not as much as the enemy."
 
"I know. We may not quite be in optimal condition, but we will be victorious. That, I do not doubt."
 
 


 
"Okay," I said, "Makai's force will be here in three days. What do we do when they begin coming through?"
 
I was in the 'headquarters' tent of our encampment. With me were Kanako, Suwako, and Seina. Nitori was present, too, and Wriggle and Mystia were there as well. Also present were Tenshi, Yuugi, Sunny, Hatate, Byakuren, Eirin, Kaguya, Mokou, and the wolf tengu Momiji Inubashiri.
 
"The scouts see them come through and come here to report," Hatate said. "We bring them all in, get them fitted in optical camouflage suits, and send them out, cameras ready. Since we're using those 'digital' cameras from Kourindou, film isn't an issue, and a digital photo is good enough for my spirit photography."
 
"We give the signal to assemble as the scouts head back out," I said. "We assemble the force, and I give a basic before-the-battle speech. When the enemy is sighted, we give the signal. Kanako?"
 
"Everyone's learned the various signals," Kanako said, "including the fall back and retreat signals. And if anyone forgets any of them, well, there'll be enough others around who remember. I give the signal to advance, and we advance and meet the enemy in battle."
 
"It's our signal, too," Momiji said. "We wait at the mountain-we've already confirmed the signal will be easily seen from there. When we see the signal, we pass within the clouds."
 
"Shou goes up with the scouts," Byakuren said. "She heads into the clouds and stays in one spot. Nazrin is at the mountain with the tengu, and she leads them through the clouds to Shou's position. They remain with the tengu until the next signal."
 
"Which I give when the second force is approaching," Kanako said.
 
"I get rid of the clouds as soon as Kanako gives the second signal," Tenshi said.
 
"The dissipation of the clouds signals us," Momiji said, "as well will be unable to see Kanako's signal while within the clouds. We strike from the skies. We target the second force, weakening it as much as we can before it reaches the battle, at which time we pursue them into the fight."
 
"Yes," I said. "Nitori?"
 
"We split into two groups, Laqara leading one and Aloris leading the other. I go with Aloris's team, which is equipped with optical camouflage."
 
"I'm with Laqara," Sunny said.
 
"We move into concealed positions as soon as the assembly signal is given," Nitori continued, "and we stay there in case any enemy scouts get through our anti-scouts."
 
"Which they won't if we can help it," Mokou said.
 
"We stay hidden anyways," Nitori said, "just in case. After Kanako's second signal, Sunny does her thing and we turn on the camo, and we move into position, waiting on either side so that the third enemy force passes between us. When Kanako gives signal number three, we open fire, hitting them from both sides as they reach the main battlefield. Then we charge into battle ourselves."
 
"I don't," Sunny said.
 
"That's correct," I said. "Suwako?"
 
"They're ready," Suwako said. "When it's time, I'll pass down and give Yuugi the go-ahead."
 
"Yeah," Nitori said, "I'm sorry my communicators don't work through that much ground."
 
"No problem," Suwako said. "Your stuff can do most of what we need, and where it can't, I've got things covered."
 
"You're not as fast, though. How'll you get the timing right?"
 
"I've made some alterations to the land at several points along the route between the portal and here. I'll know whenever an enemy force reaches one of these points. It's not something that would work with individuals, but with the numbers we're going to be facing, the cumulative effect is more than enough."
 
"Are you sure that'll work?"
 
"We've tested it," I said. "It works. Yuugi, that brings us to the underground team."
 
"We wait until Suwako says go," Yuugi said, "then we go."
 
"Correct. Wriggle?"
 
"Mystia, Cirno, and Rumia are with me," Wriggle said. "I conduct a search through insects, identifying any demons that seem to have above-average power. When I find one, we go in and take it out. And I keep a close watch for any enemy squads that appear to be doing the same thing and prioritize them."
 
"Hatate?"
 
"I stay with you," Hatate said. "I rotate through the scouts with spirit photography and show you their pictures."
 
"Mokou?"
 
"Myself, Kaguya, and the other selected individuals stay in the air and take out any enemy scouts we see," Mokou said. "We also defend our own scouts if the camo malfunctions or the enemy is otherwise able to locate any of them."
 
"Eirin?"
 
"Field medicine," Eirin said. "My medics get to, pull back, and treat as many of our injured as we can, bringing them to me if it's something they can't handle on their own."
 
"Sounds like we know our jobs," I said. "That's good. We'll go over them again before the enemy arrives, but for now, you're all dismissed.
 
 


 
"All right," Netese told the assembled force leaders, "we move tomorrow. Everyone knows their new spots in the order of advance, correct?" There was a general murmur of assent. "Good. Does anyone have any concerns that have not yet been brought up with me?" Silence. "Also good.
 
"Remember, we will be facing more resistance than we originally expected, our force is still more than strong enough to win. The enemy is likely to rely on ambushes and other tricks, so don't let any such surprises throw you off balance. We'll proceed in the assigned groups, drawing out their surprises and wiping them out. It may be a fight, but we will emerge victorious."
 
 


 
"It'll happen tomorrow," Cirno said, "won't it?"
 
Rumia nodded. "Are you sure you want to do this?"
 
"Are you? I'm not the one who can die, you know. Do you really want to put yourself in that much danger?"
 
"I've made up my mind," Rumia said. "Don't worry; I'm just as much stronger as you are now, remember? And besides, you'll be there to make sure I'm all right, won't you?"
 
"Yeah," Cirno said. "I will."
 
 


 
"I will go along with this plan as I said before," Satori told me, "but I want to be present for it."
 
I was actually going to ask her to be there, so there wasn't any issue with that. "Good," Satori said. "Your preparations are complete, then? Yes, I see that they are. Good. And the area is large enough? Yes, that should be just right."
 
Thank you for doing this, Satori.
 
"Gensokyo is my home, too. I do not want Makai's invasion to succeed, so I will do all I can to stop it."
 
 


 
"You can still back out, Mystia," Wriggle said.
 
"So can you. But I'm not going to any more than you are."
 
"Yeah," Wriggle said. "Just stay close to me, all right?"
 
"You should really be more confident in your 'champion'."
 
Wriggle chuckled. "Well, maybe. But this is something none of us have experienced before."
 
"Are you worried?"
 
"Of course, and if you're not, you're a moron."
 
"Oh? What happened to 'nobody can stand against me'? Isn't this the part where you say that all your enemies are doomed to failure?"
 
"Too tense," Wriggle said.
 
"Yeah, I guess I can understand that. Well, I'll stick with you, Wriggle."
 
"Thanks, Mystia."
 
 


 
The scout entered the 'headquarters' tent a little after noon. "They're coming," he said. "The scouts are returning here as instructed."
 
"Good," I said. "You go get your own gear."
 
"Yes, ma'am," the scout said as he ran out.
 
I got to my feet. "Kanako, Suwako, Seina, let's go."
 
The four of us exited the tent. "Kanako," I said, "give the signal to assemble. It's time."
 
 


 
I hope all those scene changes weren't too confusing. I tried to mention which day it was whenever it changed. If there's a new scene without a mention of the day, that means it's the same day as in the previous scene.
 
Also, Tenshi's backstory scene is the final such scene of the story, as I really don't think it would work well to try and fit one in during the battle.
Anyways, the big battle is here. Yes, this means the story is nearing its end, but don't worry; I have another one I'll be starting once this one has finished. Until then, enjoy the rest of this one.
 
And as always, any comments are appreciated.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #56 on: December 13, 2011, 07:04:59 AM »
I am so pumped for this battle.

Also I really like the way you put the battle plan in italics, with the follow up on certain parts written normally.

Re: Orphan
« Reply #57 on: December 13, 2011, 09:47:06 PM »
Wow.
I have...a terrible need...shall I say the word?...of religion. Then I go out at night and paint the stars.

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Re: Orphan
« Reply #58 on: December 26, 2011, 05:02:39 PM »
Still waiting for that big update  :munch:


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Re: Orphan
« Reply #59 on: December 27, 2011, 01:47:16 AM »
It'll come as soon as I'm done writing it. And since I've gone from college to full-time employment, I've found myself with a lot less free time. That's why updates have been so infrequent. Don't worry; it's coming.