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Aoshi-shi

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #240 on: May 23, 2011, 11:28:46 PM »
Well thanks a lot for the tips about the hands; drawing hands aren't my forte.  :ohdear:
I'll try to draw them more often...

Meanwhile, enjoy an Alice.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #241 on: May 23, 2011, 11:47:11 PM »
Alice has no eyes
its not alice its the first living doll EVERYONE RUN AHHHH

On a serious note, it's good as always Aoshi, though you kinda forgot shanghais toothbrush :V

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« Reply #242 on: May 27, 2011, 09:43:44 AM »
Why must you do those epic artworks? D8

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« Reply #243 on: May 27, 2011, 03:20:44 PM »
what noname is saying is that you should never draw again

right?

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« Reply #244 on: May 28, 2011, 01:42:40 PM »
what noname is saying is that you should never draw again

right?

lol no :V

But seriously, I for one agree that you have greatly improved.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #245 on: May 29, 2011, 03:21:54 AM »
you know

if you made some nice laminated copies of bag ran

I'd buy one

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #246 on: May 29, 2011, 11:33:10 PM »
you know

if you made some nice laminated copies of bag ran

I'd buy one

Laminating those sound like a good idea. The one that I printed out for the picture and for Tekkoshocon ripped clean in half when I was going down the stairwell once. (Someone returned the other half on the last day.)  :V

Here, have something cute.

Tried something like cell shading on Reisen's hair, the same result doesn't really show up on Tewi, but I think it looks pretty cool, but it takes so long to do.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #247 on: May 30, 2011, 01:14:12 AM »
Neat! Nice experimenting with the style...maybe that's why Tewi's hair is brown?

There's a little too much contrast in the hair compared to the other parts of their bodies though. A bit visually distracting.

I need to get my stuff posted....
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #248 on: May 30, 2011, 03:55:39 AM »
Neat! Nice experimenting with the style...maybe that's why Tewi's hair is brown?

There's a little too much contrast in the hair compared to the other parts of their bodies though. A bit visually distracting.

I need to get my stuff posted....

Wait, who's hair? Tewi's? Reisen's? Both?

So if I give darker shadows to the clothes and everything, will that make it less distracting?
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #249 on: May 30, 2011, 04:36:11 AM »
Wait, who's hair? Tewi's? Reisen's? Both?

So if I give darker shadows to the clothes and everything, will that make it less distracting?
Both. And yes, I suggest darkening the shadows to improve consistency.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #250 on: May 30, 2011, 05:35:09 AM »
Both. And yes, I suggest darkening the shadows to improve consistency.

Hm, is this any better? I think I made it worse.  :colonveeplusalpha: :colonveeplusalpha:
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #251 on: May 30, 2011, 05:55:12 AM »
you darkened the shadows nicely but you also gave the skirt and dress a rather jarring hue

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« Reply #252 on: May 30, 2011, 05:56:19 AM »
Hm, is this any better?
Aside from Reisen's incredibly bright skirt, yes. Yes it is. But it seems to fit with Tewi's dress.

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« Reply #253 on: May 30, 2011, 06:05:09 AM »
Hm, is this any better? I think I made it worse.  :colonveeplusalpha: :colonveeplusalpha:
Worse? No, not at all. It really does look better this time around. Looks nice.

Odd that Reisen and Tewi's outfits are more saturated in colour now. Plus Reisen's shirt seems to have a bit too much contrast and maybe not enough graduation between the tones. Just saying.
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #254 on: May 30, 2011, 06:09:28 AM »
aoshi stop making such good art its overloading my heart with moe
Also something seems... iunno, off about reisen. I think its the arms. But other then that, I love this picture. Dont ever stop please.

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« Reply #255 on: May 30, 2011, 06:11:37 AM »
I really like Reisen's hand!
Also, Tewi ears are cute. Her hair is too bright, though.

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« Reply #256 on: May 30, 2011, 06:13:13 AM »
I don't post here much because I usually have nothing to say other than "Aoshi, your art is soooo cute~" but that doesn't seem to be stopping some people, so!

Aoshi, your art is soooo cute~<3

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« Reply #258 on: May 30, 2011, 07:30:50 AM »
That's better, but Tewi's dress is still too hot of a hue. I think it should be carnation pink.

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« Reply #259 on: May 30, 2011, 09:40:30 PM »
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #260 on: May 30, 2011, 10:58:14 PM »
I really liked the Inaba picture (Tewi's dress kinda looks more purple to me), and the Youmu picture... way too cute. @_@;

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« Reply #261 on: May 30, 2011, 11:11:44 PM »

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #262 on: May 30, 2011, 11:22:23 PM »
Yeah, I'm probably going to leave it like this.
Tewi's dress still looks a little bit eye-burning...  :ohdear:

Shy Youmou AKA "I hate anatomy and drawing hands forever."
I think this version is best.

As for Youmu, yeah anatomy and hands are a bitch. Cute face, but hands a tad small....
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #264 on: May 31, 2011, 12:35:07 AM »
A-O-SHI! <3

You have been making me happy with your art so far; so I have a request for you.

Youka.

Yes, I am referring to loli Yuuka. If anyone can do cute and moe, it's you. The cute innocent smile. The moe. Please can you do this? XD

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« Reply #265 on: May 31, 2011, 12:58:07 AM »
A-O-SHI! <3

You have been making me happy with your art so far; so I have a request for you.

Youka.

Yes, I am referring to loli Yuuka. If anyone can do cute and moe, it's you. The cute innocent smile. The moe. Please can you do this? XD

Sure thing, I'll do that as soon as I get to the other requests that I have accidentally missed.  :V
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #266 on: June 03, 2011, 10:25:22 PM »
Doodles~

Kasen.

Tewi.

Mystia fail, hurr durr.

I really don't know. (I'll draw a serious Furret next time.)  :ohdear:
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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #267 on: June 03, 2011, 10:32:13 PM »

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« Reply #268 on: June 03, 2011, 11:06:41 PM »
AOSHI!

Your Kasen...

Oh gosh your Kasen!  :*

I demand more Kasen from you because I love that picture. XD

Also, I like the Tewi a lot too.

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Re: [Art] Aoshi does her best.
« Reply #269 on: June 03, 2011, 11:29:29 PM »
AOSHI!

Your Kasen...

Oh gosh your Kasen!  :*

I demand more Kasen from you because I love that picture. XD

Also, I like the Tewi a lot too.
this this this times fucking ten That was a great Kasen and that dress is so yes.
Dont ever stop drawing Aoshi this is all way too good.