Author Topic: [Art] Aoshi does her best. (Read 166323 times)

Yukarin · « **Reply #180 on:** April 27, 2011, 06:01:55 PM »

OMG AOSHI IT'S GOOD TO SEE YOU BACK

Definitely improved though. Are you sure you weren't skipping classes just to improve now? You've been away for too long.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #181 on:** April 28, 2011, 01:00:52 AM »

If I hadn't accidentally locked myself out of my TinyPic account, I would have set it up to upload via the phone while I was computerless during the month. :V But oh well.

Reimu, Marisa~!

Jana · « **Reply #182 on:** April 28, 2011, 01:09:22 AM »

~~ReimuLegs!~~

I like the bright colors in that picture. You use those kind a lot, yes?

Zengar Zombolt · « **Reply #183 on:** April 28, 2011, 01:33:38 AM »

LEEEEEEEEEEEEEGS
Your drawings are quite adorable.

[HJD]Red_Herring · « **Reply #184 on:** April 28, 2011, 09:41:37 PM »

I,,,I am surprised, another update from Aoshi! Now my day is complete.

Good stuff, as usual: strong composition of figures, well drawn and colored. However, I am getting the feeling of Marisa's legs are little twisted in the way they were not supposed to. Also, the shading

of Reimu's hair gives the unnatural feeling. Maybe that is just me going crazy. Still, nicely done and those damn thighs...(bleeding profusely)

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #185 on:** April 28, 2011, 10:03:26 PM »

Quote from: [HJD]Red_Herring on April 27, 2011, 04:21:21 AM

Anyhow, I also see some fine paper you are using. May I ask what brand you are using?

I have one of those Strathmore Sketchbooks, they're a really good brand of sketchbook. ~~You should get one, seriously.~~

Quote from: [HJD]Red_Herring on April 28, 2011, 09:41:37 PM

However, I am getting the feeling of Marisa's legs are little twisted in the way they were not supposed to.

Hm, now that I look at it, it sort of does look twisted. :colonveeplusalpha:

Quote from: [HJD]Red_Herring on April 28, 2011, 09:41:37 PM

Also, the shading of Reimu's hair gives the unnatural feeling.

Hmm, unnatural how? :ohdear:

[HJD]Red_Herring · « **Reply #186 on:** April 28, 2011, 10:13:10 PM »

I really can put my finger on it, but the shading gives the texture of hair is closer to that of polished metal. I'd tone down the highlight and decrease the contrast between each shade of color used.

That's just my thought. Hope it did not offend you in anyway.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #187 on:** April 28, 2011, 10:17:47 PM »

Nah, it's fine.

Just wanted to see what I did improperly so I can improve on that. Thanks, though.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #188 on:** April 29, 2011, 12:58:51 AM »

Oh hey, this is going to be a sticker. :3 :3 :3

Hm, I think I drew long enough sleeves to cover her hands.
Her waist looks a tad thick, but I sort of intended for her shirt to be loose. Looks like it didn't turn out well. :derp:

Suikama · « **Reply #189 on:** April 29, 2011, 01:04:19 AM »

Quote from: Aoshi-shi on April 29, 2011, 12:58:51 AM

Her waist looks a tad thick

Fa*yinyanged*

Jes_Isaive · « **Reply #190 on:** April 29, 2011, 01:06:08 AM »

~~Needs more armpits~~
The only thing I want to mention is that the bottom of the orb seems like it's getting squished. :ohdear:

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #191 on:** April 29, 2011, 01:10:15 AM »

Quote from: Jes Isaive on April 29, 2011, 01:06:08 AM

~~Needs more armpits~~
The only thing I want to mention is that the bottom of the orb seems like it's getting squished. :ohdear:

Oh, I think that's because the shadow or the bottom of the ball is too dark. I'll fix that later.

EDIT: Or I can't draw circles. Maybe that.

Sality · « **Reply #192 on:** April 29, 2011, 06:34:52 AM »

Quote from: Aoshi-shi on April 29, 2011, 12:58:51 AM

Oh hey, this is going to be a sticker. :3 :3 :3

Reimu looks cute there, though I feel the need to point that some folds are kinda weird (one example is at the end of her sleeves).

Good job, nonetheless ;p
Don't you think that her hair ribbon is too big ?

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #193 on:** April 29, 2011, 09:40:43 PM »

Okay a made a few minor changes, I think it looks a little better.

Quote from: Sality on April 29, 2011, 06:34:52 AM

Don't you think that her hair ribbon is too big ?

B-b-but I like big bows~! They're cute! :ohdear:

[HJD]Red_Herring · « **Reply #194 on:** April 29, 2011, 10:12:16 PM »

Quote from: Aoshi-shi on April 29, 2011, 09:40:43 PM

B-b-but I like big bows~! They're cute! :ohdear:

Exactly, they are pleasurable to look at. However, you must repent your sin of covering that sacred armpit of hers. Your sentence shall be churning out more of your drawing!

noodles · « **Reply #195 on:** April 30, 2011, 06:36:09 PM »

....I totally didn't realized that the armpits were covered

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #196 on:** May 01, 2011, 12:47:33 AM »

Quote from: [HJD]Red_Herring on April 29, 2011, 10:12:16 PM

Exactly, they are pleasurable to look at. However, you must repent your sin of covering that sacred armpit of hers. Your sentence shall be churning out more of your drawing!

..... :V
Sentence accepted.

DX7.EP · « **Reply #197 on:** May 01, 2011, 01:01:51 AM »

Quote from: Aoshi-shi on May 01, 2011, 12:47:33 AM

..... :V
Sentence accepted.

I like Sanae's reaction. And now we find out that believers and donations aren't the only thing shrine maidens compete for!

[HJD]Red_Herring · « **Reply #198 on:** May 01, 2011, 07:24:40 AM »

Ah, yes...armpits in which the faith is gathered. Now, the world is a better place.

All jokes aside, it is nicely done and you are getting hang of figure drawing for sure. The current drawing gives the feeling that Reimu has unusually shaped rib cage, and that curve is the reason.

So, I would give some tweaks on the torso line connecting to the armpit area. Keep those drawings coming!

Molten · « **Reply #199 on:** May 01, 2011, 08:21:47 AM »

Love your drawings. Can't wait to see what else you may draw.

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #200 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:09:42 AM »

I wish I could churn out drawing after drawing after drawing like Slaves, but I don't have so much free time after school anymore. (That, or I procrastinate waaaay too much.)
Ah, well, too bad anyway. :3

Sketch dump, yay!

Suikama · « **Reply #201 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:14:39 AM »

* Suikama searches for insulin

Fetch()tirade · « **Reply #202 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:17:51 AM »

OHMYGODTHATBYAKUREN

Yakitori · « **Reply #203 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:27:05 AM »

I really like your art

(I meant to post in here before, but really couldn't find anything to say).

Anyway, your Suwako and Suika are really nice. :3

Jes_Isaive · « **Reply #204 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:38:35 AM »

~~HNNNNG~~
Suika and Byakuren need to stop staring into my soul with their adorable eyes. :ohdear:

DX7.EP · « **Reply #205 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:43:21 AM »

Love that Suika and Byakuren. It looks like you used a variety of pencil leads here...soft charcoal ones as well, maybe?

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #206 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:48:30 AM »

Actually, its just a custom brush in Photoshop. :V

...I suddenly want to cosplay Byakuren.

DX7.EP · « **Reply #207 on:** May 04, 2011, 02:50:42 AM »

Quote from: Aoshi-shi on May 04, 2011, 02:48:30 AM

Actually, its just a custom brush in Photoshop. :V

...I suddenly want to cosplay Byakuren.

Ah. Liked it anyways. At least in the Photoshop version you don't have to worry about smudging the lead

Kips McKipzerson · « **Reply #208 on:** May 04, 2011, 12:55:00 PM »

Quote from: Aoshi-shi on May 04, 2011, 02:09:42 AM

I wish I could churn out drawing after drawing after drawing like Slaves, but I don't have so much free time after school anymore. (That, or I procrastinate waaaay too much.)
Ah, well, too bad anyway. :3

Sketch dump, yay!

ohmygod everything in that picture is amazing. Also why is Bya holding a gun, or am I just looking at it in the wrong way like the dope I am :V

Gramity · « **Reply #209 on:** May 04, 2011, 12:58:32 PM »

I really appreciate your drawing and I wish I could do the same

Keep it up

Author Topic: [Art] Aoshi does her best. (Read 166323 times)

Jes_Isaive

Sality

Jes_Isaive

Gramity