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I said this in the other thread, but you should unfocus more during the stage portions. Yukari's shot doesn't lock on unless you're underneath the enemy, whereas Reimu's amulets will hit stuff anywhere on the screen. The beginning of stage 2 and some of stage 4 would be easier and more profitable for you if you'd use Reimu instead of Yukari there. In stage 4 this has the added benefit of killing most of the enemies before they can shoot at you, which means you don't have to dodge things and you can POC if you feel like it.
Not sure why you were timing out random stuff in the early game. It won't really do anything for you score and it just adds more margin for error, so I wouldn't recommend it. If you want to improve your score, it's best to work on minimizing your deaths and bombs first. Capturing extra spells will give you way more time orbs than grazing stuff, and the extra bombs/lives will help your end of game bonus as well.
Keine would be easier for you if you'd use Reimu to shoot down some of her familiars. The midboss part isn't too bad if you focus the whole time but her bossfight noncards are real hard if you do that. Since there's that long gap directly beneath Keine in both of them, you can just sit there and fire unfocused for a while to blow up her front row of familiars. That makes her much, much more manageable.
For Kaguya's last spells:
1) I position myself right below the line under the spellcard name when it shows up on the screen. Then, just slowly tap down when you need to avoid the big bullets. If you time it right you can do this no-horizontal, but if you move down a little too much there's time to move left or right near the end of the card.
2) You seem to understand how this works (move somewhere where the bullets aren't going to hit you and stay there) but it's hard to pull off in practice. If there's a good method to capture this consistently I don't know it :X
3) This one is just timing your dodges. I do this novert to keep it simple. Just hang out for a bit until it looks like you're gonna get hit soon, then move left or right into a new 'space'.
4) It's best to start this one on the far left or right side, so you can stream the big red bullets when they start coming out. This is a hard card to capture, but if you last a bit longer you won't lose as much time on your clock.
5) This is probably her hardest last spell and you captured it, so hell yeah :D
So, yeah! You did pretty well on a lot of hard stuff (you handed the Marisa fight pretty well, for example) but if you're looking for places to improve your run these are some things you could look at. If there are any specific spells that give you a really hard time you should ask about those in the spellcard help topic; IN has spell practice mode so it's not hard to learn and practice new methods for stuff.
oh and uh I'm assuming when you were asking for people to 'shit on your accomplishment' you meant 'help me find ways to make my numbers go up' so that's what this is; if this isn't OK let me know :> I'm not tryna say your run wasn't good, I'm just trying to help you get even better!