Well, shit's happened and I'm kinda back on track now. I won't go into details, suffice to say the last few weeks sucked ass.
I'm liking the feedback and the new take on Asa.

This is a pretty old picture that I promised Fawkes a while ago...not sure what happened but it was where I took the design before shit happened.
I also like the sun pattern on the shirt, nice way to add some details. I like the parts that happen on the end of her sleeves. I believe some detail can be added (along with that part generally being thicker) but it's completely optional. ZUN tends to over design, so I reckon on that point more = more. I really like the new skirt design, though the best of both worlds would be indeed fewer pleats, the cloth in the middle and some eye designs per pleat. Could probably tone it down depending on how much attention we want to draw to her crotch... My original goal that didn't come across when I drew it (because I didn't draw it lol) was to have the top half match the bottom in detail by having a sort of hyroglyphics type stuff on her shirt. Oh well, swings and round-a-bouts.
In general, I'd say definite changes are -
fewer pleats on skirt (making it heavier/thicker in material, less creases and folds)
sun print on shirt, either side works (it's better when the shirt joins on one side rather than the centre)
stronger head dress.
points to be decided -
neck/collar area
shirt orientation (not sexual), centre, left, or right (influences neck area)
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Anyway, post your thoughts/pictures on those Jimuko, hopefully we'll get the design down after that. I was going to do a sprite as well...but I forgot who... maybe Yukari?
Oh yeah, here are some of the emotes I said I'd do. Open to more suggestions on what other emotes I could do as well as how to improve/change the ones I've done. It's all pretty experimental right now.



