Author Topic: [Art] Yui Takenaka's Works (Read 18947 times)

Primula · « **on:** September 07, 2010, 01:39:32 AM »

Hello guys, I decided to post some of my pictures here since I'm improving from my last posts from some other threads here.

My DA here : http://vappie-steamtail.deviantart.com/
My pixiv here: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1413756

Here are some of my pictures that I did:

And pictures that I drew in pencil that will be edited on GIMP.

Yes, I am that same Shingyoku nut, but a bit more shy and careful. Comments will be appreciated. :>

flamezero16 · « **Reply #1 on:** September 07, 2010, 10:57:51 AM »

Interestin stuff amgio. Keep it up~

Primula · « **Reply #2 on:** September 10, 2010, 02:03:49 AM »

@flamezero Thanks!

Ah, sorry about not posting something in a while, I got a request from a DA person to draw someone. Hopefully I get it finished by Sunday but I have a test tomorrow, an assignment which is due next Wednesday and a project due on the 14th.

So yeah... I'll be coloring the second Cirno panel(the one that says 'Wow!') soon if I have time.

Mushyrulez · « **Reply #3 on:** September 10, 2010, 02:54:43 AM »

I can't tell the second frame properly... is that a reference to that 'LOL I'M CIRNO I'M PRO AND I CAN CALCULATE PI AND STUFF' picture floating around?

Primula · « **Reply #4 on:** September 10, 2010, 12:09:45 PM »

Quote from: Mushyrulez on September 10, 2010, 02:54:43 AM

I can't tell the second frame properly... is that a reference to that 'LOL I'M CIRNO I'M PRO AND I CAN CALCULATE PI AND STUFF' picture floating around?

Yes, it is. And I tried doing it by memory but I failed badly.

Primula · « **Reply #5 on:** September 13, 2010, 12:12:49 AM »

Good news, my big brother managed to scan my pictures(well, one to be exact because I wanted to scan my Reisen picture and I scanned the rest of my pictures afterwards), and I don't even have to go through the trouble to modify my drawings!

Mushyrulez · « **Reply #6 on:** September 17, 2010, 12:01:52 AM »

Her eyes/nose look a little bit too high...

Other than that, it's fine; but when I looked at the preview I thought she just had a □_□ face :V

Primula · « **Reply #7 on:** September 19, 2010, 03:33:57 AM »

Quote from: Mushyrulez on September 17, 2010, 12:01:52 AM

Her eyes/nose look a little bit too high...

Other than that, it's fine; but when I looked at the preview I thought she just had a □_□ face :V

Thank you for the comment.

If you were wondering why I'm not posting anything recently, it's just that I've been fooling around with LMMS Studio and procrastinating. Something tells me I'll eventually get a cold in the next few days..

Primula · « **Reply #8 on:** September 29, 2010, 11:10:35 PM »

Did a digital art version because the other picture was not enough. o3o

Primula · « **Reply #9 on:** October 03, 2010, 02:48:10 AM »

Kurumi sketch done and scanned.

Myukuu · « **Reply #10 on:** October 03, 2010, 03:29:11 AM »

Your Reisen looks very nice when colored digitally. ^ ^

Primula · « **Reply #11 on:** October 03, 2010, 03:39:30 AM »

Quote from: Myukuu on October 03, 2010, 03:29:11 AM

Your Reisen looks very nice when colored digitally. ^ ^

Thank you.

Primula · « **Reply #12 on:** October 04, 2010, 01:01:07 AM »

Koakuma sketch done.

Primula · « **Reply #13 on:** October 09, 2010, 10:37:18 PM »

(Somewhat) Rushed PC98 Reimu drawing. Just testing out the airbrush tool.

Primula · « **Reply #14 on:** October 16, 2010, 12:33:19 AM »

Room Room Roomia~

Infy♫ · « **Reply #15 on:** October 20, 2010, 09:21:29 PM »

Nice stuff Vappie! i think you should shorten their faces :O

also thanks for subscribing!

Primula · « **Reply #16 on:** October 22, 2010, 02:16:23 AM »

Quote from: Sercan on October 20, 2010, 09:21:29 PM

Nice stuff Vappie! i think you should shorten their faces :O

also thanks for subscribing!

Thank you~ Ah, no wonder Rumia seems to look odd. o-o

Also drew Patchy because it's Purple Day. Sorry if it looks funny but I wanted to draw her carrying a book but I didn't have much time since it's like bedtime right now.

Koakuma will be delayed because I wanted to draw something for Halloween.

Primula · « **Reply #17 on:** October 23, 2010, 04:06:56 PM »

Old drawing I finally finished. Hehe. *COUGH* Yukarin!

And an OC drawing.... I need to make him to look a bit younger, but I liked how the hair turned out.

Teewee · « **Reply #18 on:** October 24, 2010, 05:13:46 AM »

I like your stuff! Keep up the good work ^^b

Primula · « **Reply #19 on:** October 26, 2010, 10:54:06 PM »

Quote from: TidalEspeon on October 24, 2010, 05:13:46 AM

I like your stuff! Keep up the good work ^^b

Thank you!

Scanned a Kaguya.

And Hatate. But the eyes seems to be a little off. :O

Ermm.... Hopefully I can finish my Halloween picture because I have to do an annotation assignment. (I don't think I'm doing really well in that assignment.)

Teewee · « **Reply #20 on:** October 27, 2010, 07:42:14 PM »

Looked at those last two. I feel you've improved somewhat, which is great

The eyes seem somewhat better-placed, and the art feels a little cleaner. The bangs on both of those look great, and Hatate's camera ain't too shabby either!
Some contructive criticism:
I think it would be an improvement to enlarge the torso, about twice it was before. Its unusually small for manga, as where its at least slightly wider than the head or more, from those works of the amazing vector artists I happened to have discovered. But that torso width is A-ok for chibi, if you ever plan to draw that, you can even make it half that size XD

I hope this helps

Primula · « **Reply #21 on:** November 03, 2010, 01:57:03 AM »

Quote from: TidalEspeon on October 27, 2010, 07:42:14 PM

Looked at those last two. I feel you've improved somewhat, which is great The eyes seem somewhat better-placed, and the art feels a little cleaner. The bangs on both of those look great, and Hatate's camera ain't too shabby either!
Some contructive criticism:
I think it would be an improvement to enlarge the torso, about twice it was before. Its unusually small for manga, as where its at least slightly wider than the head or more, from those works of the amazing vector artists I happened to have discovered. But that torso width is A-ok for chibi, if you ever plan to draw that, you can even make it half that size XD

I hope this helps

Thank you for the comment. I shall work on that.

And here's a finished Koakuma, with a cruddy background hehehe.

Primula · « **Reply #22 on:** November 11, 2010, 01:15:23 AM »

Hello guys, I'm done annotating the book so I have more drawing time. :V

Here's a STG Frame for Danmakufu I whipped up for the fun of it. :3 (EDIT: Whoops! Edited the black into another dark color so no crazy transparency will be going on!)

If you guys were wondering why I'm not getting Kurumi done, I'm working on coloring (and doing some modifications :blush:) on Coin Spire's submission for the Atelier Album Project.
Yes, I know my coloring isn't that good.
Progress so far:

Primula · « **Reply #23 on:** November 15, 2010, 11:22:33 PM »

Another STG_Frame. :V

Okay.. I colored the yin-yang ball and I am making some progress on shading Reimu. I hope I get her done by the end of this week.

Primula · « **Reply #24 on:** November 19, 2010, 02:56:52 AM »

Some sketches I finished today. :derp:

Will be going over this in GIMP and submit this to the Atelier Album Project Submissions thread.

ShingyOkuu. Yeah, I'm that lame but I will enter this for a contest in DA.

Like the Hatate picture, I will go over it in GIMP and post it in the Atelier Album Project Submissions thread.

I will be doing more pictures for the submissions if I have time.. :/

Uhm.. I think I'm done coloring the Reimu picture. So here you go:

Aoshi-shi · « **Reply #25 on:** November 19, 2010, 03:49:45 AM »

Geez, why haven't I posted here yet? I feel like I'm missing out on some good stuff.

Anyways, I like what you've done with the Reimu picture, but have you considered putting highlights in her hair, maybe second level shading as well?
I feel as if the hair looks...one-tone-sh when you look at it from a distance.

Coin Spire · « **Reply #26 on:** November 19, 2010, 08:50:35 AM »

Quote from: Yui Takenaka on November 19, 2010, 02:56:52 AM

Uhm.. I think I'm done coloring the Reimu picture. So here you go:

It looks...beautiful. <3

Primula · « **Reply #27 on:** November 19, 2010, 01:21:51 PM »

Quote from: Aoshi on November 19, 2010, 03:49:45 AM

Anyways, I like what you've done with the Reimu picture, but have you considered putting highlights in her hair, maybe second level shading as well?
I feel as if the hair looks...one-tone-sh when you look at it from a distance.

Yeah but I kinda got lost on how to do it since I haven't done that on my other pictures. Maybe I should do that when I get home from school and post it in the submissions thread.

Primula · « **Reply #28 on:** November 21, 2010, 04:52:40 PM »

More sketches. :V

Drew some parts of Alice and her dolls without reference. :derp:

VIVIT looks like Marisa. I just drew her without the ribbon and maid hairband kinda on purpose.

Primula · « **Reply #29 on:** November 22, 2010, 11:14:30 PM »

She was too cute. :derp:

The eyes were done with cel-shade so I still need to work on that since I think doing it with all that smudging and stuff will not fit in to cel shaded hair and clothes. Technically this was done in two days so the anatomy is a bit messy.