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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #690 on: November 14, 2012, 10:02:44 PM »
>"Controls?"

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« Reply #691 on: November 14, 2012, 10:07:39 PM »
>"Controls?"

>"She means that Satori doesn't let Eagle do anything, or make any wagers, that would harm this temple or any of us." Isumi informs you. "There's really nothing that goes on here that Satori isn't aware of."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #692 on: November 15, 2012, 06:13:08 AM »
>"I'm surprised she can keep Eagle on a leash like that."

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« Reply #693 on: November 15, 2012, 07:42:51 AM »
>"I'm surprised she can keep Eagle on a leash like that."

>Isumi nods. "I used to think that way myself. She's not a tall woman, not a large woman, not a strong woman. I didn't used to think she had much power or control at all. I was wrong."
>"The mind is stronger than body in world of humans." Anya says. "Satori have strong mind."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #694 on: November 15, 2012, 08:58:05 AM »
>"So I see. Eagle's mind is not a thing I would underestimate, either..."

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« Reply #695 on: November 15, 2012, 09:08:03 AM »
>"So I see. Eagle's mind is not a thing I would underestimate, either..."

>"There, we are in agreement." Anya says with a short nod.
>The human miko whom Isumi called Maiko enters then, placing her PSP in her pocket, as Isumi says to you, "Eagle's a cunning sort, yes, but I trust Satori. Even if Eagle is working an angle of her own, I believe Satori can keep her from doing us a mischief."
>"The Manari has to." the human chimes in. "She's here on probation, after all."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #696 on: November 15, 2012, 09:16:56 AM »
>"I think that repeating things such as that have a way of becoming a self fulfilling prophecy, don't you?"

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« Reply #697 on: November 15, 2012, 09:18:35 AM »
>"I think that repeating things such as that have a way of becoming a self fulfilling prophecy, don't you?"

>Isumi and Maiko exchange a look. "What's that supposed to mean?" the youkai asks you.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #698 on: November 15, 2012, 09:42:07 AM »
>"Well, you say she must be up to something, and talk about her being here on probation as though it were some mark of immense shame. If I were in her position, and heard people saying things like that about me, it would give me severe doubts that I should even try to do anything, after seeing so many minds made up against me. What would be the point of trying to improve, if people have already made up their minds."
>Shrug.
>"One might as well just run out the clock, figure out how to avoid getting caught next time and not even bother trying anything else since it's doomed to fail."

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« Reply #699 on: November 15, 2012, 09:49:18 AM »
>"Well, you say she must be up to something, and talk about her being here on probation as though it were some mark of immense shame. If I were in her position, and heard people saying things like that about me, it would give me severe doubts that I should even try to do anything, after seeing so many minds made up against me. What would be the point of trying to improve, if people have already made up their minds."
>Shrug.
>"One might as well just run out the clock, figure out how to avoid getting caught next time and not even bother trying anything else since it's doomed to fail."

>Isumi starts to say "Haven't you been-" but she is cut off sharply.
>Maiko's eyebrows narrow when she interrupts her fellow miko, "How dare you talk to shrine maidens that way. Just because you're Eagle's friend doesn't give you the right to talk to us so disrespectfully."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #700 on: November 15, 2012, 09:55:45 AM »
>Shake our head.
>"Forgive me. I meant not to insinuate that you actually feel this way, but rather if I were to hear people speaking this way while in her position, I would assume it's the case and find it very difficult not to just give up on trying to change."

Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #701 on: November 15, 2012, 10:06:24 AM »
>Shake our head.
>"Forgive me. I meant not to insinuate that you actually feel this way, but rather if I were to hear people speaking this way while in her position, I would assume it's the case and find it very difficult not to just give up on trying to change."

>Isumi places her hand on Maiko's shoulder. The human still looks upset, but she seems to settle down a little bit at the touch. "This is a good night, Maiko, let us not let defensiveness spoil it."
>"Sorry, Hayami-sama." Maiko mutters after a moment's contemplation.
>Isumi then says to you,"What you say makes sense, Byakuren." she says in a conversational tone. "And that's one of the upsides of her being here, as opposed to working at some other job. You see, Satori has done this before, offered youkai employment that have had trouble with the law of society. I have served here since she arrived, and I have seen many with Eagle's background spend time. Some with even worse backgrounds than her. And working here has done them all good. I won't tell you that all of them 'saw the light', to borrow the expression, but all of them left here as better people than when they arrived."
>"And until that happens," she adds, in Anya's direction, "Satori will keep an eye on her. Our elder helps people, and believes in second chances, but always makes sure to keep an eye on them in the meantime. She is as vigilant as she is wise. She lets people like Eagle be herself, without doing so at the expense of those that serve here."

Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #702 on: November 19, 2012, 01:10:39 AM »
>You hear the door open behind you, and then Chie's voice sounds, "Byakuren?"

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« Reply #703 on: November 19, 2012, 01:15:56 AM »
>Nod. Then jump just the slightest bit. Not quite out of shock, but more of realization. "Oh yes, the chopsticks! I have them."
>"Well, I'll have to leave this discussion here for the time, I have to finish helping out after all."
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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #704 on: November 19, 2012, 01:21:50 AM »
>Nod. Then jump just the slightest bit. Not quite out of shock, but more of realization. "Oh yes, the chopsticks! I have them."
>"Well, I'll have to leave this discussion here for the time, I have to finish helping out after all."

>Isumi nods. "Of course. Just keep in mind what I said. Despite what Kiku might tell you, or what Anya fears- and she has her reasons- we have actually enjoyed the presence of the Eagle since she arrived. And she herself is in good hands with Satori."
>"Just wish she'd lose a bet now and then." Maiko mutters with a smile tugging at the corners of her lips.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #705 on: November 19, 2012, 10:58:53 AM »
See what happens when I get sick? I forget things. Also, con weekend then more sick. Sorry  =I

>"I'm glad to hear that. Pardon me."
>Head back and give Chie her chopsticks.

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« Reply #706 on: November 19, 2012, 11:54:40 AM »
See what happens when I get sick? I forget things. Also, con weekend then more sick. Sorry  =I

>"I'm glad to hear that. Pardon me."
>Head back and give Chie her chopsticks.

I took the opportunity to put more work into another game, and tweak episode three of this one a bit. Which, I might add, I sincerely hope to start before the new year, but, we're getting there.

>Chie retreats back into the other room as you follow after her shortly after. You hand her the utensils, but the feline youkai sniffs curiously as you come close to her. Accepting the chopsticks, she says, "Why do-" She cuts herself off suddenly, looking around you back towards the kitchen, then back to you. She finishes her thought in a voice little more than a whisper, "Why does Byakuren smell like Kiku?"

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #707 on: November 19, 2012, 05:21:10 PM »
>"I was with her a little while ago. We had our evening meal together."

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« Reply #708 on: November 19, 2012, 06:45:28 PM »
>"I was with her a little while ago. We had our evening meal together."

>"Oh." The young catgirl seems satisfied with that answer. "Smell not strong, didn't notice before. Chie is curious, did Kiku say why she will return to temple?

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #709 on: November 19, 2012, 09:41:38 PM »
>"She had some other matters to take care of, we parted ways not too long ago really."
>Then smile in our usual warm and caring way. "She'll be back soon enough though, so just be patient."
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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #710 on: November 20, 2012, 12:22:57 AM »
>"She had some other matters to take care of, we parted ways not too long ago really."
>Then smile in our usual warm and caring way. "She'll be back soon enough though, so just be patient."

>Chie returns your smile. "That's good." The feline miko starts to lay the chopsticks down next to the other items she'd laid down. "Kiku was doing hard job outside temple. We're celebrating her good work." Glancing back at you, she adds, "Chie doesn't know if someone not a shrine maiden should stay. Celebration might be for us. But if Byakuren wants to stay, Chie can ask Isumi."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #711 on: November 20, 2012, 06:30:15 AM »
So I ran into Seamus and Damien Sandow today...

>"I probably shouldn't. I really have things I need to get done tomorrow. But I do intend to at least greet her."
>"If  may ask, though, are Kiku and Miss Satori are close?"

Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #712 on: November 20, 2012, 06:40:37 AM »
So I ran into Seamus and Damien Sandow today...

>"I probably shouldn't. I really have things I need to get done tomorrow. But I do intend to at least greet her."
>"If  may ask, though, are Kiku and Miss Satori are close?"

What's a Damien Sandow?
Wait... Isn't the guy who's supposedly the second coming of the Genius?

>"That is polite, I think. Did Kiku say when she get other matters taken care of?"
>"Kiku is the second to Komeji-sama at this temple." Chie informs you. "Kiku and Komeji-sama work together all the time. Chie doesn't think the temple would run as well as it does if Kiku and Komeji-sama did not work so well together."

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« Reply #713 on: November 20, 2012, 06:56:06 AM »
That's the one. Intellectual Savior of the masses, and pretty much what I'd do if I were a pro wrestleman.

>"That is polite, I think. Did Kiku say when she get other matters taken care of?"
>"Kiku is the second to Komeji-sama at this temple." Chie informs you. "Kiku and Komeji-sama work together all the time. Chie doesn't think the temple would run as well as it does if Kiku and Komeji-sama did not work so well together."

>Nod.
>"I wonder if Kiku would be able to pick up the slack if miss Satori were to have a problem?"

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« Reply #714 on: November 20, 2012, 07:01:22 AM »
That's the one. Intellectual Savior of the masses, and pretty much what I'd do if I were a pro wrestleman.

>Nod.
>"I wonder if Kiku would be able to pick up the slack if miss Satori were to have a problem?"

I thought CM Punk's angle was savoir of the masses?
Well, then again, I am behind the times.

>"Chie thinks she can. Kiku is smart and disciplined." You've noted that Chie tends to elongate her words that use more than two syllables, like she doesn't feel entirely comfortable using them yet. Except for Satori's name, that one she nails constantly. "Sisters say Kiku too disciplined..." She fumbles about for a moment, evidently looking for the right word, before settling on, "Strict, they say. Chie knows she is strict because she worries. Kiku cares for us. If Kiku had to take care of problems that Komeji-sama could not, Kiku could."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #715 on: November 20, 2012, 08:23:06 AM »
But he's not the intellectual savoir! Essentially, Damien Sandow is a parody of what stupid people think that smart people are like.  He exists to troll them by getting them to react to the idea he's looking down at them, personally, and it's beautiful.

>"Ah, I take it that Kiku never really has had to step up and take Satori's place, then?"

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« Reply #716 on: November 20, 2012, 08:36:40 AM »
But he's not the intellectual savoir! Essentially, Damien Sandow is a parody of what stupid people think that smart people are like.  He exists to troll them by getting them to react to the idea he's looking down at them, personally, and it's beautiful.

>"Ah, I take it that Kiku never really has had to step up and take Satori's place, then?"

Sounds like the modern version of the Genius, all right. Can he wrestle, or is he all mic?
I'm trying to think now if WCW every had anyone like that... Been a lot of years.

>"Not while Chie has been here." The feline miko's ears twitch as she tilts her head to the side slightly. "Chie remembers. There was a day when Komeji-sama had the flu, and Kiku was leader for the day. Chie thinks Komeji-sama wanted to act as normal, but Kiku was worried for her health."

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #717 on: November 21, 2012, 02:34:43 AM »
Damien's alright. But I'm not knowledgeable enough to tell someone who's good from someone who's just mediocre. He's better than Cena, anyways.

>"I see. Hopefully, then, nothing is troubling Satori these days."

Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #718 on: November 21, 2012, 02:56:54 AM »
Damien's alright. But I'm not knowledgeable enough to tell someone who's good from someone who's just mediocre. He's better than Cena, anyways.

>"I see. Hopefully, then, nothing is troubling Satori these days."

Better than Cena isn't hard to imagine.
Speaking of which, this Ryback guy I see now and then. Is it just me, or is he Goldberg 2.0?

>"Chie hasn't seen Komeji-sama as much as normal for some days. But Chie thinks there something on her mind. Komeji-sama has been quieter, she looks like she thinks hard about something, and hasn't seen as many visitors as she normally does."
>"That is her choice." she adds after a moment's pause.

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Re: Magical Lotus - Mahou Shoujou Byakuren - Episode 2, part 4
« Reply #719 on: November 21, 2012, 05:24:50 AM »
According to my much more educated sister, Sandow is very good at what he does, which is ground and pound work. And yes, Ryback is exactly Goldberg.

>Nod.
>"Do you think anyone would know why?"