Author Topic: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn  (Read 80769 times)

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #30 on: December 20, 2011, 03:30:20 PM »
Senri literally just saw a girl run up and smack Tetsumaru's arm in an attempt to foist his trusty canesword off him. Now, that person must have had a good eye to try and steal it off the poor kid like that, but she must also be incredibly crazy to just up and do that thinking she could get away with it. Senri eyed the girl and gripped his own weapon firmly, but this time thinking she needed to knock it off, and decided to settle it the way he knew best - intimidating her with making sure she couldn't get away with that ever again. "You blistering thief! Don't think you can get away with foisting something like that off my friend!" Senri cried out, hefting her large blade and bringing down the cloth-wrapped flat of it down by the girl, but not right on her, in an attempt to get her to back off hopefully without her having already taken the cane sword. "And don't think you can take my weapon either, you probably couldn't lift this damn thing!" Senri growled, hopefully he didn't underestimate her strength, though she did muster up the power to... just do what she did. In fact, as a precaution, Senri tied one of the ends of the cloth tightly around his wrist so it could never be yanked off him without taking he himself with whoever it was that tried to take his weapon! "Stealing is bad, you know!"

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #31 on: December 20, 2011, 05:32:03 PM »
Pain. Sudden, piercing pain. For a second, the grip on his cane loosens. Then immediately it tightens, forced habit after years of training. Never drop your weapon, never drop your tools. The lessons his father smashed into him, almost literally, serve him well. Though he crumples to the floor, he gets back up immediately, shikomizue drawn in a shaky grip. It hurts, it hurts a lot, but it begins to fade. His breaths are short, his eyes narrowed. His chest heaves up and down with sudden, unexpected adrenaline.

He watches his friend Senri draw the ridiculously large sword and threaten the assailant with it...thief? Apparently. Upon Senri's last words, he lamely adds, "Yeah!"
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #32 on: December 20, 2011, 06:12:08 PM »
Laresa knew exactly what had happened, exactly why the essence of the ability had shifted. Such a thing was normal. When a general ability-manipulation of density, in this case-was being applied in a specific way-in this case, to make people gather-it was the specific application she copied. When an ability was focused in a certain use, that use dominated the essence, but when its use ended, there was a brief period where the use faded back into the essence, leaving the general ability at the front. But whose ability was it, and what was the purpose behind gathering everyone?

Damn it, girl, focus, Laresa told herself. But that was hard, had been hard ever since- No, damn it, don't go there. Focus. Focus. Okay. Manipulation of density. Brief test run. She concentrated, and the pebbles on the ground began to gather at her feet. Her test done, she stopped it. Localized effect. Likely possible but harder at a distance. This strong an effect would be unlikely. Which means the one responsible is here somewhere. But I didn't see anyone unfamiliar. So the one responsible is hiding somewhere. But where? With this many people, someone's likely to stumble on even the best hiding place, so you'd have to hide in... plain... of course. She did another test run. And even briefer and smaller one. She knew better than to attempt any noteworthy alterations to herself with an unfamiliar ability, but she didn't need to. It only took a minor change, a very small application of the ability to her own finger. And it worked; she felt it expand. She reverted it immediately. That's it, then. She-In Gensokyo, it was often safe to assume that an unknown was a female-[/i] is here. All around us. She's simply lowered her density enough that she's not visible. She's spread out all around us.[/i]

Laresa ducked behind a nearby home, not hiding but out of sight of the crowd. "Okay, whoever you are," she said, "I know you're here. And I know you've gathered everyone here. Show yourself. I will not attack you unless I determine your intent to be harmful, but we need to talk. If you fail to do so, I will have to assume that you do indeed have harmful intentions and react accordingly."

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #33 on: December 20, 2011, 07:49:03 PM »
That strange feeling in Hotaru's head was gone. Unfortunately, there was now another problem to deal with. The boy fell from her hands, but stood up before she could help him up. She instead looked at the assailant, the thief. The boy and his friend (Hotaru presumed) drew weapons. The thief similarly had a knuckle-based weapon that she used to attack. With swords out, she didn't feel like drawing her own knife or sling.

 She could only silently nod as the man's comment about thievery while she checked if anything in her bag was gone,

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #34 on: December 21, 2011, 08:13:03 AM »
Her attention muted by the odd buzzing in the back of her head, Kohaku barely noticed the crow descend upon her. It wasn't until she heard the sound of the string of her ocarina snap, and Hyozan's sharp bark, that she snaps out of her reveire. Blinking and shaking her head sharply, she snaps her head in the direction of the winged thief.
"Hey!" she yells after it, while Hyozan takes a more proactive approach, chasing after the little bastard directly, barking as he goes. Obviously this draws a few eyes, people don't miss Hyozan when he's announcing his presence.

Kohaku for her part prepares to fling a chain at the bird to bring it down. Gentle soul or no, NOBODY touches that ocarina unless she let's them, and heaven help anyone, even an animal, that tries to make off with it. As she produces a chain, however, she hesitates. At that range, given the size of the target, scoring a hit is hardly assured. So she settles for simply chasing after the bird, hoping she doesn't get stuck behind people. She spares a glance up at the roofs around, trying to find a place to fling a chain and draw her up, give her a  more aerial view of the thief. But she reconsiders that as well, as she recalls that she always had a bit of an issue getting DOWN under duress or in a hurry, and she's presently both. Koryu never let her live down the time she landed on top of him and broke his nose.
Plus, Kohaku's never been to fond of flinging chains willy nilly when there's people around, just in case a miss tags someone in the head. Getting a length of chain upside the head is no laughing matter, no matter who you are. Well, except maybe Keine-sensei, and that white-haired woman that hangs around her from time to time, but they're an exception to a few rules. So Kohaku has to settle for trying to keep pace with the black-winged thief, and hope that Hyozan, who can move when he wants to, can catch it before it gets away. Or that she can get within range for a clear chain shot before it gets away.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #35 on: December 21, 2011, 10:07:31 AM »
Nanaya:

"...Right. A hat." The girl backs away, her shocked face turning into one of happiness. The girl lunges forward, grabbing the hat and tries to pull it out of the ground. The hat whines and tugs back with force, but somehow, eventually, the girl manages to pull the hat out and places it on her head. She spins once in joy, She adjusts the hat, pokes around with it and pats the hat between the eyes. Her smile widens.

"Hello talking hat. Nice'ta meet you. I used to have a hat once. Then I took an ar-"

The ground mumbles. The girl looks down.

"Hat. Why is the ground making noises?"

No response.

"...The ground... Uhh... You're from that shrine there? Moriya." The ground groans and eventually, a girl bursts out of the ground. Nanaya doesn't seem surprised. Instead, she sighs. "You're not Kanako. Kasen-sensei said Kanako was tall and had blue hair." The girl eyes her chest. "And has a big chest. Who're you?"



Amaya:

"Wait Suwako-..." but Suwako is gone, before Amaya can't stop her. "Does she always have to sneak up on visitors, mmh Vin?" she says to VIn while tickling his head.
Amaya gets her shoes on and follows Suwako to the shrines courtyard. She isn't really in hurry so she walks in a normal speed.

Amaya sees a purple haired person. She moves closer. "She doesn't look like a youkai." Amaya says to herself. She notice the sword in the hand of the woman. 'Shouldn't get to close to her, Suwako is nearby anyway'
"Good morning." She says to the person when she was close enought to speak to her. "You look human, we rarly have humans up here on the mountain. Did you came to visit the shrine?"
Amaya smiles at the visitor.



Nanaya:

"Clearly I am an oni like Kasen I...Uhh... Yeah. I'm a human. I guess. I live around the right of here." The girl tilts her head to the right. "I guess I just passed by and found this talking-but-not-talking hat." She fakes a laugh. Suwako is visibly annoyed by having her hat stolen by this visitor.

"Any~Way~ I guess I'm here for a visit. I mean, I wasn't meant to but whatever. Also, who're you? Kasen-sensei never said a girl as tall as me lived here. And who's this other girl who came up from the ground? I thought only Kanako and that taller green-haired girl lived here." She's being cautious. It's there in her voice. There's also just a tinge of fear. And a lot of curiosity.

The girl shakes her head and walks forward, ignoring Suwako. She then reaches Amaya, She rests the back of the blade on her shoulder, smiling. "Also, what am I surposed to do when I visit a shrine? I've never really been to one... Besides that old red shrine what-you-call-it."
« Last Edit: December 21, 2011, 10:36:36 PM by Super Yuuka »

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #36 on: December 22, 2011, 12:46:07 AM »
Obvious exits: back, left, right, and through them. There's always the girl's bag, but they'll catch me. The two don't have anything on them, either. Unfortunately, their weapons were the only baggage they had brought, which were going to cost her new cuts.

"Aw, that's cute," she smirked, glancing at the wrapped sword and at the cane-sword, "Well, it's too bad none of you have anything else for me to steal, so I guess I'll be leaving." The heavy blade was still by her left, and it could sweep her out of the way easily.

Eyeing the woman's bag, Kisei noticed it was a sling bag. Right turn.

In one clean move, the thief dashed that way, lifting the strap of the bag off the woman's shoulders. Obviously, the woman was still holding it. With her side of the strap, Kisei, without looking, pushed it down against the woman's palm and tried slipping it past her fingers.

If she didn't get the bag, she would continue in that direction, into the crowd of people. They won't catch me if I get deep enough. The problem is if their swords could reach her, but who's thinking about that?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #37 on: December 22, 2011, 03:19:52 AM »
Hotaru wasn't prepared to be the target. She tried to resist, but the thief made her bag slip from her fingers. "Ah!" she made a sound in surprise. What can I do? knife would be too much, and I can't sling anything with how crowed it is...


 In a rush, she tried to visualize people blocking the thief's path. Hopefully  she would try to take a different path, or maybe even pause slightly of these images. If she even takes notice...

...Where's my game?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #38 on: December 22, 2011, 10:47:19 PM »
Sanaya turned her head when she heard someone call her name and came face to face with the first person she recognized out of this entire crowd. "Ah Sensei" She gave a short bow. "I did not expect to meet you here."

She glanced around before continuing, feeling like she was just about to state the obvious. "Although it seems like the entire town has gathered so I guess I should have expected that, how have you been?"

Sanaya had a fair deal of respect for this girl. Despite her being younger than Sanaya she was probably a considerably better fighter than her. Not that they had ever seriously duked it out, any time their weapons had clashed it had been strictly for the purpose of practice or as the occasional demonstration that she sometimes participated in on the rare occasion that she visited the dojo.

"Oh?" She now took notice of the empty scabbard at the girl's side. "Did you always carry just a scabbard? You'll have to apologize my forgetfulness, it has been a while though has it not?" She almost instinctively bowed again as she apologized. Resisting the urge she instead posed another question on top of the dirst one. "And I presume you do not know why everyone are gathered here either, I was trying to find Keine but..." Sanaya glanced through the crowd again.

There had been a though lingering in the back of her mind ever since she had come to the realization that the entire village was here. "If that many people are here, then maybe people from outside the village are here too..." Her train of though trailed off as she scanned the crowd once again. This time she was keeping her eyes out for something resembling the faint images from her past. That bright white hair...
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #39 on: December 23, 2011, 03:49:06 PM »
'This person is annoying...'
"I'm Kochiya Amaya. I'm the shrine maiden of the Moriya Shrine, pleased to meet you.", she introduce herself with a polite gesture.
You can pray and donate to the goddess of the shrine and have faith in her. Buy some amulets and other protective items or try out a omikuji of course.
I can also make some tea if you want something.
Well now would you give me your name?"
« Last Edit: December 23, 2011, 08:12:58 PM by Sonae »

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #40 on: December 23, 2011, 09:05:39 PM »
---Sourfang

The girl and her faithful dog dash after the feathered fiend as it flies off through the streets. It flies high enough for the dog not to be able to grab it, but low enough so that Kohaku couldn?t launch a chain at its small body without hitting someone that was uninvolved. Fortunately for the girl, the crowd had begun to thin, and the crow wasn?t flying fast enough to lose them. As a matter of a fact, the crow seemed to be flying very steadily, so much so that it seemed mechanical. However, Kohaku was too worried about the ocarina to care, or even think about such things.
As the crow comes to the end of the street, Kohaku can see a large gate in the distance. At first she doesn?t think of it, but as she approaches, she realizes where it leads.
It?s the gate that leads out of the village.

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---GuyYouMetOnline

Despite Laresa?s negotiations, there was only silence. Nothing appeared before her, nor did anything sneak up on her from behind. If anyone had seen her shouting, they might have thought she had lost her mind. Would they be correct? Well, only time could reveal that.

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Back at the center of the village, people had begun to spread out, leaving the crowd and going about their days as if nothing had happened at all. With the nagging gone, the villagers regained their free will and began to head to wherever they needed to go.

Just then, the mist began to retreat from the village, sneaking away as silently as it had come in.

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---Marou

The girl smiles and laughs a faint and weak laugh.
?I didn?t really expect to be here either? She says. ?Though after no one showed up, I was a little worried? not to mention something was urging me to close up the Dojo?  She says, furrowing her brow slightly, puzzled by the urge she had that had now vanished without leaving a trail. After a few seconds of pondering, she shakes her thoughts away and brings her attention back onto the woman standing in front of her.
?Ah I?ve been fine. The Dojo is the same as you remember it, except people have come and gone just like yourself? the girl says with a faint smile.
As Sanaya asks her next question, the girl smiles and waves her hand in a gesture.
?No no, I just don?t like to bring it with me during errands. Carrying a sword at your side is rather intimidating don?t you think? Not to mention there?s a lot of thieves around these days?? The girl says.
With the next question, she gazed out over the crowd.
?Nah, I have no clue. And even if I did, all I have is this? She says, gesturing to her sheath. She seems to show hints of regret and envy, but they are soon overpowered by kindness. She smiles warmly as she turns back to Sanaya
?After all, I?m not lik-?

Just then a commotion starts a short distance away from the two girls. Instinctively they both look in the direction of the ruckus.
There they see two guys wielding swords and one apparently unarmed woman. In front of the trio stands a small girl.
As the girl hears their shouts, her eyes sharpen and her expression becomes dead serious. She places a hand on her sheath, pulling it out slightly. As she does so, Sanaya notices a handle on the sheath.

As two of the three draw their weapons towards the small red one, the girl begins to slink away from Sanaya. Before disappearing into the crowd she whispers to Sanaya.
?Don?t worry?I?ve got this one? She says with the faintest of grins.
With that she vanishes into the crowd, no one else but Sanaya knowing where she had gone.

As the red haired girl mocks the two before her, standing with their swords drawn, she fixates her gaze on the woman?s bag.
And in one smooth sprint, she launches herself towards the group, slipping past the guys before they could strike her down. She heads straight for the woman, slamming into her and forcing the bag out of her grasp.
The red haired grins smugly as she continues her dash into the crowd. As she slips through the first wave of people, she comes to a small clearing. Without paying it any mind, she steps out of the first wave of people and into the clearing.

!

Before the red haired can react, a brown haired girl leaps out into her path.
The girl spares no time. With her sheath in hand, she swings.
In one swift movement, the sheath slams into the red haired girl?s side, knocking her light body to the ground with ease.
The small girl hits the ground with a heavy thud, landing on her right side. The bag slides away from her, lying on the dusty ground a short distance away from her.

Villagers back away, fearing the tussle could cost them a few bruises. This clears the path for the woman to grab her bag.
The brown haired girl looks down at the thief, her eyes sharp and cold. Her expression is stern and unrelenting. She holds the sheath tightly in her right hand, ready to attack if the girl should retaliate.

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---Hanzo

As you parade your way into the village, you soon come to a large group of people gathered in the village center.  You can see two people with swords drawn, and another standing before a downed girl. People keep their distance from the four, as if scared to stand close to them.
It seems like you?ve missed all the fun.

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With the influence of the mist no longer present, people begin to leave, returning to their business. Within a few minutes, the once dense crowd becomes no more than a sparse spread of people.
Now that the crowd has, for the most part, cleared, it is now possible to travel past them to your destinations.

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---Dorakyura and Kat

Suwako leaps up from the ground, bugged by the girl?s seeming lack of sense towards the possessions of others.
The goddess ignores the girl?s blunt comments, not paying them any mind.
As Amaya comes around the corner, Suwako glances at her, soon returning her attention back to the hat thief.
As the girl takes her attention off of Suwako, the goddess takes her chance and quietly dashes towards the girl.
Before the girl can turn to meet her, Suwako stops a short distance before her and leaps into the air. She does a half spin, ending upside down as she passes over the girl?s head. She reaches out, taking her hat off the stranger?s head and placing it on her own as she begins to descend to the ground.
Suwako spins the rest of the way around, landing on her feet as she hits the ground. She lands in a frog like position. After a moment she stands and dusts herself off. She lifts her hat off her head and shakes it a bit before dusting it off aswell.
?There? Suwako mutters to herself as she places her hat atop her head and adjusts it. As she finishes, she turns towards the so called visitor.
?I?m Suwako Moriya, the real god of this shrine? She says with a smile.
Upon hearing the girl had never been to a shrine before, Suwako speaks up.
?You?ve never been to a shrine!? Then you need to start praying right away! Don?t worry, we Japanese gods accept all kinds of followers! There?s over eight million of us after all, so we can?t really do any refusing?? Suwako finishes with a weak laugh.
Amaya introduces herself next. As she explains what one does at a shrine, Suwako nods energetically in agreement.
?Amaya makes good tea too! Though she?s still in training? Suwako says as she moves about.
?So we introduced ourselves? Suwako says, slowing down as she looks towards the girl with a smile. ?Now it?s your turn!?

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---Sourfang

Kohaku and her faithful mutt chase the crow relentlessly down the overgrown forest path, never giving up. Kohaku was determined to get that ocarina back, whether she had to take the crow down or not.
The crow kept a constant speed and height from the ground, making sure to be far enough off the ground so that Hyozan couldn?t leap into the air and snap onto the bird, and far enough ahead so that the pair wouldn?t lose sight of the feathery fiend.
As the chase dragged on, Kohaku began to notice something unusual about the bird, but before she could think deeper of it, a large staircase came into sight in the distance, and the crow was heading right for it.
As the bird approached the stair case, it swooped lower, giving Hyozan enough of a chance to snap at the bird. However the bird immediately began to rise up the stairs, flying up them with ease.
As it reached the top, it seemed to stop, as if glancing at its pursuers, before it dove off, heading to where the stairs lead.
At the top of the stairs, Kohaku could see a large red gate standing proudly. It was a gate she had never seen before, at least not one of that size and majesty.

As the crow flew on, it began to slow, eventually stopping and resting on a large box that stood on a veranda that was raised off the ground.
Like a crow would, it fidgeted slightly, looking about quickly. Eventually it began to nudge the ocarina with its small beak, attempting to shift its position. It slowly nudged it ever closer to the edge of the box, as if it was trying to drop it inside.
As it did so, it silently glanced towards the stairs, as if it was waiting for the girl to come after it.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #41 on: December 24, 2011, 02:21:26 AM »
It's the mist. The culprit dispersed herself into this mist.

The mist began to drift away, but Laresa was on to it now. She followed it. She could track it visually, but she didn't need to do so. The manipulation of density was still in use, although at the moment the dispersal was dominating the essence. But that wasn't important; what mattered was that the ability was still in use, and thus Laresa's copy of the essence was being continually refreshed. Using the copying as a guide, Laresa could keep track of the mist's location easily, which would be handy if it tried to lose her by passing through objects she could not, or by dispersing beyond visibility.

The mist wasn't exactly moving at a rapid pace, so it wasn't hard to catch up to it, and she then proceeded forward, passing within it. "Reform yourself, please," she said. "We need to talk."

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #42 on: December 24, 2011, 04:04:10 AM »
There isn't even any thought to the action. The apprentice swings his sword into a reverse grip and pursues, too slow to prevent the theft. "You're mine!" he yells, chasing after the girl as she dashes into the crowd.

He's too large to get past the first wave. They don't part, for whatever reason. He snarls and narrows his eyes. 'Ideally...these people would get out of my way...but if not, I'll just go around-wait, what?'

Much to his surprise, they begin to seperate. Whether it's because of his severe expression or the gleaming steel in his hands, he doesn't know. Doesn't care. Enough time has already been wasted.

Tetsumaru makes it just in time to see the theif get sent flying. His eyes fly; from the theif, to the bag, to the sudden interloper. Sliding the shikomizue back into its scabbard, he gives this brown haired young woman a look.

"Who are you?"
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #43 on: December 24, 2011, 05:21:43 AM »
It was worth a try at least Hotaru remarked as the thief simply continued. The boy started to chase, and she followed suit. As she began, the illusions slowly started to dissapate. Hopefully I can stay in sight of her...

 The crowd also started slowly leaving. This made it a lot more easier to continue pursuit of that thief. Hotaru didn't think much of this, focusing on getting her bag back.

 Suddenly, someone attacked the thief, knocking her down easily. Hotaru's bag slid a short length away. With the other people backing away, Hotaru simply went towards her bag, and held a tigher grip on it.

"Er, um.." Hotaru wasn't sure what to say to the newcomer. The girl had a sheath with no visable blade, and she looked ready for a counterattack. "...Thank you, I think." she finally said.

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #44 on: December 24, 2011, 10:56:41 AM »
The force of the slam flung the red-hair off her feet, sending her to the side with a disturbingly loud thud. Every part of her mind told her to stay down, and the pain that came agreed. The arm which she landed on didn't hurt as much as it should have, but it still felt weak.

Dang, the bag flew out. The owner of the bag stood where it had fallen. She had probably taken it back. Whatever was inside would remain unknown.

Her right arm now dangling limply, Kisei stood up. The one who had ambushed her- even thieves were prone to being ambushed by others- had a sword drawn.

"...that's not a sword," the thief said in disbelief. There was no hilt or blade; it was just a scabbard. While she wasn't afraid of blunt weapons, Kisei's mind began to imagine how fast she can spank me with that thing. Oh great, magic! I'm not gonna mess with her. She wanted very much for a tussle, but it wouldn't be fair if the other side had magic. That fight wouldn't be worth it.

She smoothed out her sleeves, making sure her hands were hidden but ready to smash the scabbard out of the way. "Who the hell are you?"

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« Last Edit: December 24, 2011, 11:01:06 AM by Gummi Crow »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #45 on: December 24, 2011, 10:19:43 PM »
Sanaya made her way around the crowd in an attempt to catch up to the dojo owner. She thought for a moment about how she carried her weapon openly at the moment.

"Well, it's not like I usually take it with me. Today something seemed off after all." She thought to herself as she approached the clearing in the crowd where everyone was standing around.

"Wh- what happened here?" She tried to process what was going on in front of her, wishing her ability would kick in so that she was not just standing around like a bufoon while she did it.

"Three girls and a boy... No, two girls two boys." She took in the details of the people gathered. "I might have seen that boy before. At the smith?" Her eyes switched over to the one she had mistaken the gender of "And he's... from the teahouse maybe? That sword looks rather big for him." Her eyes darted over to the dojo owner yet again. "But what's going on? Why has sensei drawn her scabbard?" She followed the gaze of her sensei back towards the red haired girl just as she spoke.

"I would advise you to watch your tone when speaking to the master of the village dojo." She glared at the red haired girl for a moment before continuing in a more mellow voice. "Now would someone please tell me what happened here?" She tugged on one of the straps to her weapon's cover, making sure that it would not accidentally fly off if she swung it.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #46 on: December 25, 2011, 03:15:59 AM »
Sora bides her time as she waits for the crowd to clear. Her mind wanders about frantically, her nervousness growing with each passing moment.
As the girl waits, a commotion is raised near the close edge of the crowd. At first she doesn?t notice, but as her thoughts clear she sees two people, weapons drawn and pointed at a young girl.
The girl mocks the people before her, making a dash forward and into the crowd.
Sora blinks, not quite understanding what had occurred. She tries to see what has happened, but gives up when she can?t see.
As her attention leaves the uproar, she notices that the crowd has cleared enough for her to get through. A pleased smile flashes across her face as she starts to move, walking faster as she moves out of the shadows.
Without further delay, the girl continues on her journey to the Devil?s manor.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #47 on: December 25, 2011, 01:44:51 PM »
Nanaya:

"My name...?" The girl mumbles, before shaking her head slightly, looking on the ground. Her arms tremble slightly. What's this feeling? A mixture of fear and sadness? The girl looks back up, a small smile on her face. Her gauntlets hung on the hilt of her blade jingle softly in the wind. They're almost like bells.

"Nanaya." She shakes her head, before sighing. "Yeah. My name's Nanaya. Kasen Ibara's disciple."

Nanaya perks up, remembering Suwako's greeting. "O-Oh! So you're Suwako. Kasen said there was another god here but she doesn't um... doesn't... ahh whatever." Nanaya's smile widens, and she lifts the sword up from resting it on her shoulder, swinging it down. "I thought you would be bigger. I thought all gods were big. Like Kanako!" She then looks at Amaya.

"Amaya... Never heard of you from Kasen. She said only that um... What's her name..." Nanaya mumbles to herself a little while more, before sprouting "Sanae! Yes. That's her name. And also, should'nt we go in if I um... Have to pray or something?"



Amaya:

"Kasen Ibara? Mom never mentioned her in her storys, as far as I can remember. Anyway, Nanaya, just follow me." Amaya leads the visitor to the stairs to the shrine.
"Since you never were to a shrine, you usually wash your hands and mouth at the washing basin. You wash your left hand then the right hand and rinse your mouth."
Amaya leads Nanaya to a water basin on the left side of the shrine.
"The water may be cold, I hope that's not problem." Amaya smiles. "But please don't spit back into the water supply..."
She now points at the front of the shrine. "When you are done, you go to the front of the shrine, you put your hands together and do a small bow. Just think of your prays and your wishes. When you have 100 yen you can also take an omikuji. You want some tea right? I havn't been able to set things up yet so please wait warmly. I may leave you with Suwako now."
Amaya makes a small bow and walks into the shrine.
She takes off her shoes and walk straight into the kitchen. "Such a werid customer, right Vin?" Amaya leaves Vin on the table, fires up the cooking place and leaves the kitchen with a can to get some water from the backyard.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #48 on: December 26, 2011, 10:00:49 PM »
The tip of a chain slides out from Kohaku's palm as she mounts the stairs, having caught up to Hyozan. Both he and his owner had paused at the site of the shrine. Kohaku doesn't know why the dog slowed down, perhaps he lost the scent or something, but as for the human....
Even with the task at hand, she had to stop and take stock of where she was. She had never ventured all that far outside the village before, and had never seen any buildings outside its confines, let alone anything quite like the one on the other side of that bigass gate. Or the gate itself, for that matter. Ocarina or no, Kohaku was on strange ground. And more, that crow seemed to come here with a purpose, if such a thing was even possible with simple animals like birds. The young woman's senses were on alert.
Spying the crow sitting atop the box in front of the temple, Kohaku lets out a couple more feet of chain, but also takes a moment to breathe deep a time or two.
"Calmly, Hyozan. We don't want it flying off with the ocarina again, might not catch it this time."
The dogs growl drops in pitch, but doesn't stop entirely. Kohaku interprets this as 'I understand, but I don't like it.' Taking her chain in both hands, she sets off forward, but at a measured pace, not wanting to spook her quarry.

Said quarry, for its part, simply sits atop the donation box, its eyes darting back and forth between its loot, and the female it belonged to. And sure enough, here shecomes, slower this time. If it noticed the big dog, or even cared, it gave no outward indication. It simply gave the instrument one final push, tipping it forward into the donation box. Hearing the clunk of wood upon wood, its task was complete. Giving the human female and the male dog no further heed, the crow spread its wings and simply departed the shrine for the open skies.

At the sight of the crow taking off, Hyozan lets out a sharp bark, and moves to chase after the bird again.
"Hyozan, wait!" Kohaku cries, bringing the dog to a screeching halt. "Look. Look at its talons, it doesn't have my ocarina anymore." She pauses in stride as well, eyeing the box the crow was sitting on. "Wonder if..." she mutters, before raising her voice with a "Wait here." to Hyozan, and walks up to the box. Not seeing her instrument atop the box, she walks closer, now a little worried, and looks inside. Immediately, she lets out a big sigh of relief, nearly disengaging her chain from her body. Wasting no more time, she manipulates her chain into the box, curls it around her ocarina, then reels the chain in, bringing the ocarina to rest in her hand.
Examining it for damage, and smiling when she finds none, she quickly deposits the instrument inside her kimono, in a little interior pocket, and spares a moment to be relieved the crow didn't tear her kimono in the act. Wouldn't have done well for the Daidouji heir to be running across town while diaplaying the goods. "Any guesses what that was about, boy?" she calls back to Hyozan, turning to depart this place, but pauses when she sees the dog. He's still standing at alert, still growling softly. Something still has the big malamute's hackles raised. Kohaku prepares to produce another length of chain. When Hyozan's on his guard, there's almost always a good reason.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #49 on: December 27, 2011, 09:29:48 AM »
'Tch, just my luck today. I miss out on another fight. So not the greatest of cools.'
In retrospect, today really wasn't his day. Perhaps tomorrow would be a better day. He'd have to consult the runes before he went to bed if he wanted to know though, that was for certain.
For starters, he woke up to find that all he had in the way of food was a halfway moldy roll of bread. Then the rest of the day up to now had happened.
"Man...today's been a pretty bad day...I figured that rune reading last night was bad news."
He then resumes grumbling and muttering imprecations under his breath as he resumes walking through the square, and towards the market.
Of course, as he passes by the group, he could be heard to be grumbling about how he'd missed out on another fight.



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It only has a 5% chance of being right anyhow, like how a busted clock will still be correct twice a day. (So it really can't be considered reading the future.)
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #50 on: December 28, 2011, 02:13:15 AM »
---Sourfang

?Ah?!?
Kohaku hears a voice exclaim from behind her. As she turns around to meet the voice, she sees a girl with short black hair and red eyes. She?s wearing a simple blouse and a black skirt. In her hands she holds a notebook and a strange leaf-like fan. As Kohaku lowers her gaze she sees that the girl is wearing large red, single toothed geta. As Kohaku brings her gaze back to the girl?s face, she spots a small red hat with red string dangling from it atop her head. There?s a slight sense of nostalgia from those items, as if Kohaku has seen those geta and that hat despite not recognizing the girl wearing them. Upon her face is a shocked and surprised expression. But before Kohaku can say anything to her, she speaks again.
?Ah!? She says, moving into an overly surprised position
?A Thief! It?s a Thief! There?s a Burglar targeting the shrine!!!? She shouts loudly. Before Kohaku can correct her or even move to stop her, she takes off. As she does so a sudden gust of wind blows outward from her former location. Startled, the human shuts her eyes for just a moment.
And that moment was all it took for her to completely vanish from sight.
As the wind subsides, silence returns.
Kohaku and Hyozan are left alone at the building.
The building that girl had called a Shrine.

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---GuyYouMetOnline

Laresa raced after the mist, calling out to it in hopes of conversing with the being.
However, despite her shouts, the mist didn?t seem to pay her any mind.
Laresa by now had begun to get slightly irritated. She considered taking action, but before she could do so, the mist began to rise.
Within seconds of its ascent, Laresa could feel the ever refreshing essence come to an abrupt halt as the mist departed the ground.
It didn?t take long to the essence to end as the mist got farther into the sky. Before long, she completely lost its trail, both it?s visual one and the one left by the ability?s essence.
Unable to pursue her lead any further, Laresa was left with a dead end.

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8:36 A.M. Location, Village Center.
By now, the crowd that once filled the area was completely gone, as if it had never been there in the first place. If anyone were to just arrive in the village?s center, they wouldn?t have the slightest clue that nearly the entirety of the town had been gathered here just minutes prior.
People continued on with their days, walking towards whatever destination they had in mind. Save but six people, no one remained in the village center after the gathering.

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The brown haired girl stood firmly, never taking her sharp gaze off of the thief before her.
The bag?s owner, a tall woman with short black hair, promptly rushed over to retrieve her bag. She thanked the girl as she passed by her, heading out of the way incase any further assaults were to ensue.
The young man wielding the shikomizue, slid the blade back into it?s holder, gazing at the girl with cautious interest.
As he asked his question, the thief began to stir.
The red haired slowly begin to rise, lifting herself off the ground with some difficulty
The girl tightened her grip on her weapon, prepared for any sudden counterattacks.
As the thief glares at her attacker, she mutters something aloud.
The girl ignores it, staying alert and focused.
With obvious irritation, the thief smoothes out the wrinkles that had formed from the impact with the ground.
As she finished doing so she turned her annoyed gaze to the girl before her.
?Who the hell are you?? She says, contempt clear in her voice
?I would advise you watch your tone when speaking to the master of the village dojo.? Sanaya  snapped at the red haired girl
?Sanaya? The girl spoke up, casting a sideways glance at Sanaya for a moment. ?It?s alright? She said as shifted slightly, relaxing her body for a second. As she did so she shot her sharp gaze at the girl before her.
With a sudden shift she slammed the tip of the scabbard against the ground. A thud rang out from the impact.
?I am Miyoshi Tsukasa, The sole heir to the Miyoshi Dojo!?

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?Nanaya huh?? Suwako says, thinking deeply for a moment. ?I don?t remember Kasen having a disciple? Suwako says, a small frown on her face. She shakes it away shortly after however, and brings her awareness to the present.
As she hears Nanaya?s comment she leaps to her feet.
?But I am big!? She exclaims. ?Most gods are only thing big you know!? She says holding out her hands a short distance apart from each other. The space is as tall as her hat.
As Amaya explains the process of a typical shrine visit, she leads the strange girl around to the front most area of the shrine grounds, then to the washing basin to the left of the shrine. As Amaya asks for their visitor not to spit into the water, Suwako pipes up.
?If you spit in it Mishaguji-sama will come after you~? Suwako says with a devious grin.
As Amaya points to the front of the shrine and tells the girl how to go about praying, Suwako pipes up again.
?No no, Amaya!? She says with a faint pout. ?It?s two bows, two claps, one bow!? She says, doing the motions as she speaks.
As Amaya heads off to make tea, Suwako resumes sitting in her frog position. After a few seconds of silence, Suwako turns to Nanaya with a smile.
?So what are you waiting for? Let?s begin!?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #51 on: December 28, 2011, 02:31:53 AM »
Okay, then. Unfriendly intent is a distinct possibility. But  the gathering ended with no obvious effect. So why was it done? She gave herself a mental shake. Damn it, girl, stop just wondering. Act according to plan. Okay. Review information. People were gathered to the village center for an unknow reason by an unknown culprit. I don't even know what the culprit looks like, just that she has the ability to control density, and she could easily conceal that by simply not using it. I only saw her as mist, and there hasn't been anything like that around here that I can remember. Which meant that asking around for information was out; the odds that anyone would know even the slighest thing were extremely miniscule. None of her usual information sources would be of much use. Of course, she did have plans for such a case. If the culprit was a youkai, and odds were that she was, she could have been alive for a very long time. So it was quite possible that at some point in the past, similar unusual gatherings had happened. Which means looking into history, which means Keine. Laresa had worked with Keine in the past, but she'd never before asked Keine about history. But she knew that Keine was the right person to ask; who would know more about histry than the village schoolteacher, the only person in the village who actually had everyday use for such knowledge?

Keine would be teaching rnow, and the gathering would not have affected this; Keine wouldn't let anything interfere with her teaching. And if any of the kids tried to leave, they'd get a painful lesson. So class would still be proceeding as scheduled. Which means I'll have to wait until the next break for a chance to talk to her.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #52 on: December 28, 2011, 04:10:56 AM »
"Okaaaaaaay," Kisei said, unimpressed. She knew better than to pick a fight with this girl, although the show of force wasn't necessary.

Exits were by and behind her, but she couldn't glance at those sides. Maintaining eye contact was important in a contest to intimidate, but there was really nothing to do here. A dead-end alley was probably behind her, the right would lead outside the village, and the left would lead her back to the square.

She yawned. It was about time for her to go to sleep.

"Well," she covered her mouth, "I guess I'll be leaving now. I'd appreciate it if you wouldn't chase me, but I guess that won't be helped, would it?"

Kisei darted to the left. The square had cleared up, so she could pick up the pace, unlike earlier. She prepared to roll, in case the swordswoman would catch up with her and take her down. That would be a fun fight.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #53 on: December 28, 2011, 04:34:35 AM »
Tetsumaru blinks, not expecting that answer. There was a sense of awe, then relief. Someone with authority, who'd be able to make some sense of this situation. A strange mist, a massive crowd gathering for no reason, then this strange occurence with a thief. "Finally, someone who can handle this better...," he mutters.

He'd never heard of the dojo's heir. Never really heard of the dojo itself proper, either...wait.

That was suspicious. He'd lived in the village for as long as he could remember, and he'd never heard of the Miyashi dojo having an heir...admittedly he didn't even bother with most of the village most of the time...

The thief ran. "Oi, don't think you can get away!" he cries, breaking into a run after her immediately. Even though he could've easily let this newcomer deal with it...that felt wrong. Somehow. "You're not getting off easy!"

His shikomizue is locked in place already; he doesn't even bother unsheathing it. He's not trying to kill anyone...wait, what is he trying to do? Pick a fight? That's not...that's not like him...was it? Something nagged at him, like a distant echo in the back of his mind.

'...ill...ght...ki....tack...stru...eed...'

It's too distracting. Too...consuming. Before he knows it, before he can even take note of what his body is doing, he's raised his cane in preparation for his first attack...!
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #54 on: December 28, 2011, 08:20:17 AM »
Hotaru slowly backed away from this confrontation. She couldn't see anything she could do; She wasn't a decent fighter or something. She heard the girl say she was a heir to a dojo. She was interested in learning something more in self defense, but in a later time. Now she had to go. Everyone else left just as quickly as they came, so finally she had break in this delay.


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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #55 on: December 28, 2011, 08:28:46 AM »
At this point in time, Senri had quickly attempted to make chase, he had been distracted for too long, and he mentally chided himself for it, but in the end, he figured that he would at least permit himself to be a little late for work due to this little mishap. Someone had attempted to steal from his friend, and they were going to pay for it. Senri had followed Tetsumaru to wherever it was he was going, and the chase sort of ended abruptly, he could hear a rather powerful voice from nearby, someone proclaiming to be some sort of... Well, Senri didn't care. He caught a glimpse of the thief running into the direction leading back to the square. I just came from there! Ugh. Senri sighed as he decided not to deal with it anymore. He moved on forward to see Tetsumaru with his weapon at the ready... Something didn't feel right. Senri just decided to wait and see how things would pan out. Senri called out to Tetsumaru. "Heyyy!! Control yourself!!!"

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #56 on: December 28, 2011, 12:00:02 PM »
The human female blinks in surprise a time or two, her hair disheveled. "That was... different." she comments, blowing a strand of hair out of her face. She kneels down next to Hyozan, smoothing down his fur, when the dog gives itself a vigorous shake, making the human flinch. She then smiles and rubs the dog on the head, calming the malamute, at least slightly. "Bit more than eggs we've found today, eh, boy." The dog barks once in reply.
Giving her friend another pet, Kohaku stands and looks at the building that that woman called a shrine. The name rang a small bell, as well, though the Daidouji heir couldn't place from where, or in what capacity. So much happened today, none of which she really understands. That odd sensation in the back of her mind in town, the crow stealing her ocarina, only to bring it here, seemingly with a purpose... and then dumped it into this box, and fly off again? Birds didn't do that, Kohaku thinks, at least none I know of. Taking things to make a nest is one thing, but this was a whole 'nother quentil of fish. She ponders the possibility that the crow may have been a youkai, but discounts that, as she doesn't know of any youkai that can assume animal form in that manner, or if that's even possible. Perhaps the crow was a minion of a spellcaster, though Kohaku's knowledge of that is extremely limited.

And then there's the building itself, which is odd. She'd never even heard of a building like this within running range of the village, which is very odd, given the size and apparent import of the structure. And now that she can focus, free of distractions, the building itself even has an eerie vibe about it. No... 'eerie's' the wrong word, but it's definitely unlike anything Kohaku's ever experienced before. Almost like the building is... bound. Bound to something, something more than the ground. What that something might be, why it feels that way, even why she can feel this, Kohaku doesn't know.
And then there was that black-haired woman that... Well, she didn't really attack Kohaku, per se, just ran off. Or rather, flew off, at a rapid pace. And without wings, no less. Perhaps SHE was a youkai, then. But what was she doing here? If she ran off, which she seems to have done, then she obviously didn't live here. Which makes Kohaku wonder just who DOES live here? DOES anybody even live here? If that crow (or whoever) brought Kohaku here, then for what purpose?
"Too many questions, Hyozan, not enough answers. Not out here, anyway." If Koryu were here, well, he'd be inside that shrine already, gung-ho as he is. His sister thinks that, this time, he'd have the right idea. She looks down at her malamute friend with a half-smile, half-grin on her face, and walks forward, towards the shrine, her friend walking just behind her. Time to see if there's some answers to be found.

Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #57 on: December 29, 2011, 05:20:51 AM »
The cry behind her caused Kisei to look back. She would have stopped dead in her tracks if it weren't for her sprint.

The boy she was trying to steal from was about to attack. Not halting, but turning, the thief jumped shortly, twisting her arm and slamming her knuckles square on the boy's jaw. Using her free hand, she followed it up with a punch to the abdomen. Sadly, Kisei's height wouldn't allow her to hit the more vital parts of the body.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #58 on: December 29, 2011, 02:09:47 PM »
Nanaya:

(Gonna take a guess and think the washing basin is like a normal shinto shrine's where there's a large granite square well-ish thing and water laddles/dippers are around it)

Nanaya nods to herself, sighing. She ignores the Suwako that sits in a frog-like position nearby. Her hands reach into the washing basin. Her sword sits beside her on the ground, places in between the gauntlets. She waves her hands around in the basin, feeling the water. It's cold, yet it's enjoyable. Nanaya closes her eyes. It's a shrine, and it should have some sort of divine power around it, or something like that. Just as how Kasen could feel spirits because they had an aura around them, maybe shrines have one too, as places of worship. Nanaya begins to feel calm, serene, perhaps lost within her own mind. Just water from a washing basin would enrob the girl's mind, and she soon drifted into the sea of memories.

It's almost like meditation. People were surposed to use the wooden dipper to wash their hands and drink from it, but Nanaya just didn't want to use them. Soon thereafter, she breaks from her silent adventure in her mind. She scoops water out of the basin using her hands and proceeds to drink it, before swallowing. She remembered that both Amaya and Suwako said that she could'nt spit it out, so it was the only choice left.

Finally done, Nanaya proceeds to the front of the shrine after getting her katana and gauntlets. Truthfully, she has been to a shrine, an old, run-down red building which somehow resembled one, even when nature took back it's original place. Placing her hands together, she bows. At first, it was much like an empty prayer. There was nothing in her mind. And then, she closes her eyes.

"Tracing through the depths of my memories, I fasten together my crumbling heart no place left to go. Come here once again and take my hand, take me away to the ends of eternity..."

Nanaya's chest begins to tighten. Yes, on this day, she had her first conversation with an actual person in a long time.

"Dashing forward I find a way to know the future. Time races ahead and I see tomorrow, but I cannot hide my heart now fraught with anxiety."

Her one and only friend after escaping from her home was Kasen, who she hadn't seen in quite a while. It was a happy life for those who loved solitude. But to her, it hurt without anyone else. She hasn't seen Kasen in a long, long time.

"My thoughts I release in a rasping voice Disappear into an unreachable void; I cannot grasp the heart. Return the memories I've captured in my eyes, Believe one day in the future we'll meet again...!"

The girl opens her eyes, her chest heaving and her hand clutching her heart. Sorrow fills up her very being, and, it finally drips out. Tears emerge from the windows of her soul, and drip onto the ground bellow. She whines softly as she lets the tears flow freely. That was her wish. To find happiness and friends.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Illusionary Festival for the Dawn
« Reply #59 on: December 29, 2011, 03:09:50 PM »
Sanaya was about to simply let the thief get away. "No need to cause a huge ruckus if she didn't get anything." She turns to Tsukasa. "Not often you see villagers stealing from each other, I wonder where she's from."

Any follow up to the statement was interrupted by the boy with the cane giving chase and his friend calling out after him. "You should listen to your friend, do not start a fight in the vill-" The end of the sentence got stuck in her throat as the loot-less thief swung around and delivered a punch to his face, followed by one to his stomach.

"Hey!" She is halfway through drawing her weapon when she turns to Tsukasa for a moment. "Excuse me sensei." She then dashes towards the two combatants, swinging her naginata out in front of her as she drops its harness on the ground. "This was not what I prepared for when I brought this." She thought as she made sure the sheath was tied properly once again.

With a burst of speed she positions herself in between the girl and the boy, placing the still sheathed blade down towards the thief, leaving the rest of the handle located above the head of Tetsumaru, set to stop any outbursts from either of them. "Okay break it up you two." She looked at Tetsumaru, trying to deduce his state. "Are you okay? I can respect that you want to get back at her for trying to steal from you but I would advice you to not start a fight inside the village proper."

Then she turned to the girl, disapproval written over her face. "And you. We don't see a lot of thieves around here, where are you from?" Her tone was more inquisitive rather than threatening. She did not come to the village often but even so this was the first time had encountered someone stealing in such an open fashion, not counting the occasional shoplifter of course.
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