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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #690 on: January 22, 2012, 04:56:57 AM »
Wait what so he reproduces on his own.

^This

So a pretty woman would have no effect on him? ):

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #691 on: January 22, 2012, 05:28:36 AM »
^This

So a pretty woman would have no effect on him? ):

He prolly doesn't have any reproductive organs on him and just splits himself into two once he matures and gets of age.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #692 on: January 22, 2012, 05:30:45 AM »
Don't forget the 'cloud of spores' theory.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #693 on: January 22, 2012, 05:33:53 AM »
Don't forget the 'cloud of spores' theory.

That is a marvelous theory indeed.

<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
[18:48] <Warma> There must have been a new depth, where you've sunk as a person. Then you dug through that.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #694 on: January 22, 2012, 05:36:00 AM »
I spat out. All my tea. You guys owe me a two liter of Oi Ocha. :V I hope you're all joking.
Well, Tetsu's not interested in romance in general. He'd probably get flustered if someone was like stripping right in front of him, but only due to social conventions and not physical attraction. There's also the 'clueless meathead' factor. He's very focused on smithing.
There's a back story reason to it, but said back story doesn't have any effect on what's going on now unless Sonae is interested and wants it to.

Yog is pretty spot on though. It's definitely possible that he'd find platonic companionship in one person.
« Last Edit: January 22, 2012, 05:38:35 AM by Amra »
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #695 on: January 22, 2012, 05:41:51 AM »
Or he can just become a hydra.

<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #696 on: January 22, 2012, 08:21:13 PM »
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(That little dialogue you see when you're picking someone in the newer touhous.)
Flavor Quote: "Hey now, why bother with Danmaku when I can just beat your face in? Come on, it'll be fun! I punch your face, you pass out! It's a win-win situation! I get to beat your face in, you get to take a nap."

Isn't that more like a win quote?

DAMN IT TRANCE AND YJ
WHAT ARE YOU? DEAF OR STUPID?
I SAID to STOP posting so goddamn fast.
Fuck, I go to sleep and wake up to ten replies from just the two of you to read.
This is a damn order now.
NO. MORE. POSTING.
« Last Edit: January 23, 2012, 12:20:40 AM by Sonae »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #697 on: January 23, 2012, 04:38:08 AM »
Isn't that more like a win quote?

DAMN IT TRANCE AND YJ
WHAT ARE YOU? DEAF OR STUPID?
I SAID to STOP posting so goddamn fast.
Fuck, I go to sleep and wake up to ten replies from just the two of you to read.
This is a damn order now.
NO. MORE. POSTING.

:V Why do you rage from us posting I don't understand. Isn't reading stories fun? :V. Take it easy and stop raging. Anyway you don't really have to read it since It doesn't really involve anything plot-related... Much.

<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #698 on: January 23, 2012, 10:21:42 AM »
:V Why do you rage from us posting I don't understand. Isn't reading stories fun? :V. Take it easy and stop raging. Anyway you don't really have to read it since It doesn't really involve anything plot-related... Much.

You are going too fast.
I've already said that things will be slow cause it;s getting busy here.
It's not very respectful on your part to ignore my earlier, kinder requests.
So I will request again.
Please slow down on posting.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #699 on: January 23, 2012, 10:46:15 AM »
Um... Can you like explain it properly? Because like me and Trance aren't going THAT fast as we're not progressing the main plot in any direction at all and stuff. Also you don't really even have to read it since it doesn't affect the plot... Also I write EoG updates during finals, so :V

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #700 on: January 23, 2012, 11:58:17 AM »
Also I write EoG updates during finals, so :V

Well I'm not you ^^'
Plus I actually need to get high marks this year. Seeing as it is my final year.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #701 on: January 23, 2012, 02:06:53 PM »
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Name: Nanaya Rekuiemu Kikasu
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Ability: Ability to manipulate Crystals
Occupation: Aspiring Hermit

Appearance: Nanaya has long, flowing light blueish hair. Her eyes are a coloration of gold surrounded by black, slit pupils. Also, whenever she smiles, she smiles to her fullest, and most people that see it can't help but feel happy too. Shes about 164cm tall, with a B, almost C bust size. Her right arm is wrapped in red ribbons, from the shoulder blade down to the tips of all over her fingers, almost as if it's covered in bandages. This somehow reduces the recoil when attempting to use magic. Nanaya wears a tight purple shirt, that has black zig-zag symbols running from her chest to her shoulders. She wears a white kurokote over it. Her waist is covered with something which resembles autumn leaves, and she wears a long, red and white skirt that starts from right under the autumn-leave things. Her ankles and feet are presumably wrapped in bandages of some sort, and Nanaya doesn't wear shoes. Nanaya has a necklace which has a turquoise embedded in it. It is said that that is what gives her her incredible luck. She looks a little frail and too small to fight, but can put a good one up if forced to.

Personality:  Nanaya is just like a hyperactive child. Very enthusiastic about almost everything, willing to do anything to have fun, but she is very stubborn when it comes to changing her manor of "Fun" once it has been initiated, like how she trained on magic instead of swordsplay, and how she stuck to it to the end... However, her said Fun, could be just about anything as well! Being the incredibly curious little girl she is, she sticks her head into almost everyone's trouble, even if it means breaking into their house just to say "Hi". Believe me, she does do that. Impulsive and happy-go-lucky, she doesn't really care about her lifestyle and such. Nanaya is also a hoarder of sorts, never willing to pack her home, in the mountains. Her current cave is currently overflowing with somewhat useless - and useful, junk. She collects random items just because they look nice or their names sound catchy.

However, away from the hyperactive side of her, is a part that is fearful of the world. Fearful of people, their thoughts, their actions, and everything. In most cases, this side would appear straight out when meeting a stranger or when Nanaya is in a place that she had never been before. In this state, she is a lost child, innocent and afraid of everything. Curious of most things normal people would consider, well, normal. She opens up to her friends(If she has any) easier in this state, but talks much less. Nanaya doesn't know what are the norms in society now, so she will react... Differently then others.

History:  Nanaya was born to a family of Samurai. As a female, she was never allowed to watch or train in the arts of the sword, so she turned to the more magical side of things. Even when her father finally allowed her to be an Onna-Bugeisha, or female samurai, she refused without hesitating to think, as she found her new abilities more... Fun, in a sense. Her father disliked this, alot, as their family was always comprised of Samurai, and all of them had expert swordsmanship.

Soon enough, at the age of 11, she was forced to learn how to wield a sword into combat. Nanaya hated it. She despised having forsaken training her now honed mysterious skills in exchange for swordsplay, but she had no choice, she had to do what her father wanted. Day after day, she had trained on the katana, hating it more every time she saw it. Every night, she would go outside and meditate, storing more energy inside of her, until it could build up and she could use it to fight instead of having to wield a blade. On her 12th birthday, she had to fight her father for the honor of upholding the clan. Her father was considerably aged, because she was late-born. He had noticed that Nanaya's skill with the blade was improving, but it wasn't because of the constant training. It was because of the energies her body had stored.

Nanaya battled her father, and won just by luck. His expertise in the way of the sword was unmatched by anyone else in the household, but Nanaya's magical enhancements and pure luck, made her successfully win. She was presented with the Arasoi no Ion, her family's heirloom. That night, she went out to the garden with the blade, sat, and practiced her magical abilities. Little did she know, her father was watching... Her father shouted, then ran towards her. Nanaya froze, turning to see her father's eyes... filled with anger... She grabbed the Arasoi no Ion, and fled to the wilderness outside the village, running, running, never stopping, reaching the mountainside...

Nanaya stayed there as a hermit, training never on her sword, but on her magic, eventually being able to use it properly. When she was 14, she ventured deep into the mountains, seeing the almost-abandoned Hakurei Shrine, ignoring it, and going deeper... She entered a cavern filled with glowing light, crystals, statues of mythical beasts... In the center, was a gauntlet... The Eien no Haretsu. Nanaya grabbed it, and walked out, feeling a strange aura from the cave behind her. The next day when she went there, the cavern had colapsed on itself, much to the surprise of Nanaya. She made her home in the mountains near the Hakurei Shrine, beside the colapsed cavern, training as a Yamabushi without using the Arasoi no Ion much. Apparently her father never sent anyone to look for her... So she forged her own path, meeting people like Kasen Ibara, who she respects as her mentor and caretaker of sorts. Life was peaceful.

Weapons:
- Arasoi no Ion, The Aeon Of Strife.
The Aeon Of Strife is a katana. Shorter then most other katanas, but still able to be classified as one. Half of the blade is entirely gold, while the other is green. Runic symbols are carved upon the blade, telling the story of Nanaya's clan... She however, cannot read. The blade itself is designed like a spike, the back of it being entirely just for parrying and blocking other weapons, while the front of it for either slashing or aggressive pushes. The front of the blade is sharp and deadly. A single slash from it, if used by a skilled user, could very likely cause mortal wounds on even a youkai. The hilt of the blade is metal, enclosed by wood and finally wrapped around in red cloth. Whenever someone wields the blade, their have to wrap the cloth around their fist. In Nanaya's case, she just attaches the cloth to the blade. That is, in a formal battle.

- Eien no Haretsu, The Rupture Of Eternity.
The Rupture Of Eternity is a fingerless glove covered by a spiked gauntlet. Black in color, with eight symbols of legendary monsters of the land, surrounding a turquoise, circular gem. It can be used to deliever a staggering blunt force, or break blades if Nanaya successfully blocks a blade in between the spikes, jamming it's movement. If this happens, Nanaya can swiftly bend her arm towards herself, creating enough force to snap a sword. It isn't that hard to jam blades in between the black spikes, but still, it requires skill. Most normal weapons of any kind can be broken with the Eien no Haretsu, even things like spears or polearms, when they hit a sufficient amount on the gauntlet, the weapon will shatter, like glass. However, weapons that are abnormal, Senri's blade for example, cannot be broken by the Eien no Haretsu unless it is used by someone with around five times as much strength as Nanaya.

In time, Nanaya will learn how to use the gauntlet to it's fullest. It will enhance Nanaya's trained magical skills. If forced to, she can concentrate all her power into her punches or blocks, allowing them to "sprout" energy. In this "mode", movement from the Eien no Haretsu leaves trails of gold energy. The "sprouted" energy can both shield(Think Sanae Hisoutensoku) the user, and damage the attacker(Think Meiling Hisoutensoku)

Other:  She likes mushrooms. Alot. She also likes frogs. Even more. Most of her training was on the Eien no Haretsu, and magical abilities, so her swordsmanship isn't so... trained up. You could easily knock the Arasoi no Ion out of her hand, and she doesn't knock how to parry with blades too. Because of her weird clothes and unique eye colouration, some people think she is actually a Youkai, when she is in fact, just a human. Having been away from her old home for an incredibly long time, she had forgotten the names of everything and everyone, their faces, their personalities, everything. Everything except what she was forced to do. What she enjoyed and what she hated.

Her greatest fears are Loneliness, and Being hated.
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« Last Edit: January 24, 2012, 02:45:26 AM by Nanaya Kikasu »

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #702 on: January 23, 2012, 02:29:08 PM »
Tch, I stay off for a bit, and the threads explode. :V
Like the chief said, slow the 'eff down!

Also, Takuma's straight, surprisingly enough, going by everyone else. :V
He's just too violence-minded for most girls. He solves most problems by punching them in the face. Hard.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #703 on: January 23, 2012, 02:42:16 PM »
How is it fast at all? :V Explaaaain man.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #704 on: January 23, 2012, 04:39:07 PM »
just slow down if the GM requests it.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #705 on: January 23, 2012, 07:53:29 PM »
Oh, and while everyone are stating their preferences I might as well go ahead and state that Sanaya is straight... and she's gonna have to hook up with Takuma at this rate :] (jk)
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #706 on: January 23, 2012, 08:40:56 PM »
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Ability: Ability to manipulate Crystals to amplify Magical and Physical prowness

Denied ^^'

I haven't thought about if I want romance for Sora or not

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #707 on: January 23, 2012, 11:03:43 PM »
No comment, but I will shoot Crow if he puts me in one of those shenanigans. *twitch twitch*

Speaking of which, he's waiting for the feast before he posts again in the RP. I got nothin' to do now.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #708 on: January 24, 2012, 02:46:46 AM »
Denied ^^'

You do realize the original is basically tHe same once Nanaya can use the crystals on her gauntlets and necklace, right?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #709 on: January 24, 2012, 10:50:02 AM »
Ability to MAnipulate Crystals to do w.e is too specific.
It makes it hard for me to match it with other things.
Like for say, battles.

Also I imagined that it'd be expanding the crystal to create spikes.


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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #710 on: January 24, 2012, 01:38:56 PM »
Ability to MAnipulate Crystals to do w.e is too specific.
It makes it hard for me to match it with other things.
Like for say, battles.

Also I imagined that it'd be expanding the crystal to create spikes.

It's more like EoG manipulation of Crystals. Like that one fight of Nanaya vs Who was that again... Uhh... Yumeko?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #711 on: January 24, 2012, 09:52:00 PM »
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It's more like EoG manipulation of Crystals. Like that one fight of Nanaya vs Who was that again... Uhh... Yumeko?

.......huhwut?

Anyways. How would you guys feel about male NPOC youkai?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #712 on: January 24, 2012, 10:05:24 PM »
Eh, gives Takuma more stuff to punch, so I'm fine with it.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #713 on: January 25, 2012, 12:24:57 AM »
Why he wont punch a woman?

Anyways update is ready.

BUT Trance and Katatata aren't allowed to continue till I finish reading the posts they already have posted.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #714 on: January 25, 2012, 03:18:33 AM »
Anyways update is ready.

BUT Trance and Katatata aren't allowed to continue till I finish reading the posts they already have posted.

 ::) They're really not that long you know.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #715 on: January 25, 2012, 05:01:56 AM »
BUT Trance and Katatata aren't allowed to continue till I finish reading the posts they already have posted.

But this way you are preventing me and Trance from getting Yandere Nanaya and Senri Harem respectively :<

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #716 on: January 25, 2012, 05:44:13 AM »
Take things slow and savor~
That way the end will be so much better~
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #717 on: January 25, 2012, 06:11:46 AM »
Kanmaru
Species: Human/Self-Ascended
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Appearance: Same as Tetsumaru. Previous appearance was a tall, bald man with no wounds or scars or blemishes on his body, and striking blue eyes. It was an 'ideal' form.
Power: (Self Proclaimed) The Power to Create 'Perfection'
Status: Dead/Succeeded

A man who sought perfection, who grasped at it with the tips of his fingers before being ousted from his throne by the very beings he looked down on. In his death throes, he tried to create a new vassal to move his soul into, a perfect body that would accomodate his every need, but he failed. And as he watched that child form in front of him, that five year old who would grow to form his very ideals with his bare hands, he accepted death and passed away.

His ability was forged through hard work and suffering. To create perfection...what does that entail? Altering what exists? Creating something new?...even if he called that power his own, he still sought a way to 'perfect' even that. To him, everything was to be perfected...the form, the body, the thought, the soul, the world. Flaws existed everywhere, and all he wanted was to fix them...

Though he left a vestige of himself within that creation, that has now faded into nothing after the first, and final, conversation with his successor. What lies for him beyond the void is unknown, even with the defined after lives of Gensokyo, for he had succeeded humanity and yet never embraced youkai nature during his life. Now all that's left is his legacy, the child smith who wields a hidden blade...

(I wanted to get this out here because I didn't want anticipation of Tetsumaru's backstory meeting up with him bogging down my participation in the RP. He's left the suggestion of Tetsumaru's powers to the boy, but he'll have no further impact. The man is well and truly dead.)
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #718 on: January 25, 2012, 10:25:24 AM »
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A man who wished to grasp the so called Holy Grail of humanity.

Denied. ^^'
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]
« Reply #719 on: January 25, 2012, 04:27:31 PM »
You're getting too controlling again. If people want to get ideas from elsewhere, well, there's nothing wrong with that.