Author Topic: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [Discussion Thread]  (Read 133037 times)

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #210 on: December 08, 2011, 01:18:37 AM »
Trance. Red eyed doesn't look all too great....

I don't really care :derp: It's fine.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #211 on: December 08, 2011, 01:20:55 AM »
I'm pretty easy to impress.

Because I like to sprite and see characters visually. It helps me imagine them correctly.

GoodyGoods huh... Idk what does she consider Goodygood?

As for eye color. I think Blue (Meiling) looks nice

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #212 on: December 08, 2011, 01:27:02 AM »
Quote from: Sonae
I'm pretty easy to impress.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #213 on: December 08, 2011, 01:28:55 AM »
Oh yay, the other Library Assistant is here, now there's double assistants!

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #214 on: December 08, 2011, 01:31:12 AM »
Well. Untill I decide which one.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #215 on: December 08, 2011, 01:34:55 AM »
Oh, no buddy in the library ;_;

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #216 on: December 08, 2011, 01:38:06 AM »
I'm too tired to make decisions atm.

Btw. Reposting this since no one commented last time.



....

I see everyone hates my graphics.

Here ya go Trance.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #217 on: December 08, 2011, 02:20:34 AM »
Well it looks...great? I'm not so good at talking about art. I guess it fits the RP well?

...Where's my game?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #218 on: December 08, 2011, 02:21:29 AM »
Oh god those sprites are so cute.  :blush:

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #219 on: December 08, 2011, 02:42:09 AM »
Wow, those are pretty neat! Looking forward to the other sprites!
The graphic's nice too, but I like the sprites a lot more.

...Then again, I grew up on the SNES so...
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #220 on: December 08, 2011, 02:46:48 AM »
Well....yeah
Here's Marou's Character



Also. This is a fair warning to all of you.
Once I post my own profile, Sign Ups will CLOSE. Please finish any revisions that need to be made within the next 24 hours or so.

On another note. Yay my profile is like 5 pages long \o/
/sarcasm

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #221 on: December 08, 2011, 02:54:23 AM »
Seven Nights Requiem Kickass has been accepted. Oh yeah.

<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
[18:48] <Warma> There must have been a new depth, where you've sunk as a person. Then you dug through that.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #222 on: December 08, 2011, 03:00:03 AM »
Looks like I'd better do those last few edits and tweaks I've been meaning to do then.
...If I could just remember them.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #223 on: December 08, 2011, 03:04:08 AM »
Well, I'm not sure what else to improve/tweak other than some more corrections.

...Where's my game?

Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #224 on: December 08, 2011, 03:21:26 AM »
Quote
heavyset woman

....WHAT?

Also.

GOODAMN ITTTTTTTTTT
I OVERDID THE BACKSTORY.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #225 on: December 08, 2011, 03:23:01 AM »
Yes big women exist


Though yeah, maybe just lower that to "slightly" I guess.



And how does one overdo the backstory?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #226 on: December 08, 2011, 03:27:47 AM »
Making it way too tragic and overdramatic/climatic.

OKAY SCRATCH THAT 5 PAGES THING.
IT'S THE LONGEST PROFILE OF THEM ALL
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #227 on: December 08, 2011, 04:09:08 AM »
Ah, I'm a tad jealous, I can't really extend any of my writing.

...Where's my game?

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #228 on: December 08, 2011, 04:38:17 AM »
I just added a few minor details in the Others section, nothing too big. Mostly about his means of using other runes aside from Thurisaz. And his rather large sweet tooth.
Sweets are serious business yo.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #229 on: December 08, 2011, 05:16:31 AM »
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #230 on: December 08, 2011, 05:22:58 AM »
D. Phoenix: I can't control it!!
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I'm taking the Aspiring Hermit, though I'm thinking of something along the lines of a weapon-specialist smith-guy(most of the magic capabilities are in the weapon)...some guy in a mask...yeah....slightly mad...living in the mountains...but wait.

Before I start writing, is gunpowder(or anything close) allowed?

You derpface. I'm the Aspiring Hermit. Whose name is Seven Nights Requiem Kickass.

<Nietz> Anyway, sex toys alone won't come up to 11k.
[18:48] <Warma> There must have been a new depth, where you've sunk as a person. Then you dug through that.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #231 on: December 08, 2011, 05:23:47 AM »
Dammit, I didn't see the position in strikethroughs.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #232 on: December 08, 2011, 07:06:05 AM »
And I put in some more stuff I just remembered.

Maybe I can talk my friend into picking Taoist, he's got another character he can repurpose for that too.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #233 on: December 08, 2011, 07:38:41 AM »
Maybe I can talk my friend into picking Taoist, he's got another character he can repurpose for that too.

More villains is always good.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #234 on: December 08, 2011, 08:09:27 AM »
The guy he's intending to use is a decidedly good guy.
A bit weird, but nothing out of the norm for Gensokyo.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #235 on: December 08, 2011, 08:22:00 AM »
Taoist implies being a crony of Miko, though.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #236 on: December 08, 2011, 08:47:10 AM »
Not necessarily, do keep in mind that a long time has passed since Miko's unsealing.
In terms of relation, he'd be closer to Kyouko in terms of things. He'd be there yes, but he'd probably be trying to make sure that the peace either remains, or is made.
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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #237 on: December 08, 2011, 08:57:02 AM »
Btw. Reposting this since no one commented last time.


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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #238 on: December 08, 2011, 09:08:49 AM »
Maybe it's just a personal bias of mine, which I admit I am capable of, but I can't help but see Miko as a villain of touhou. Most of the others, except Mima of course, have at least one or two extenuating circumstances around them when you confront them, IE Utsuho, who was unfortunately insane at the time. Miko, however, had none of that. She's as bad as Mima, or worse. Probably start another religious war in gensokyo, if it'd get her back in charge of a nation.

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Re: On The Boundary ~ Legend of Illusionary Paradise [SignUps OPEN]
« Reply #239 on: December 08, 2011, 09:37:26 AM »
The way I see it, she's a two-bit hack compared to the other genuine villains.
And do note, Mima warmed up and became a playable.

Sure, Miko could be a villain, but there's a whole host of folks who would be more than happy to give 'er a good smack if she started something.
And from what I can understand from the endings, she's decided "Well screw this. There's what, four folks who beat me? Two of which are mere servants. That's it, it's done."
Then again, we've gotta wait for that new book to get translated to see how Miko goes about things.
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