Maidens of the Kaleidoscope
~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: LuKo on June 10, 2010, 04:42:16 AM
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just coming here to show my Touhou related work.
I am Lady Byakuren's disciple, so I will happily accept any critique^^
Small sprites
Mari
(http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/169/c/d/MATC___Marisa_Kirisame_by_Tioluko.gif)
Big sprites
Suwako-chan
(http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/159/f/6/Su_Su_Suwako_by_Tioluko.png)
Nue with....scythe?
(http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/088/f/2/Nue_got_a_Scythe__by_Tioluko.png)
Patchcon styled sprites
Okuu
(http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/153/b/a/Chibi_Utsuho_by_Tioluko.gif)
Nue
(http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/064/0/8/Chibi_Nue_by_Tioluko.gif)
Youkai Jesus
(http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/075/2/8/Chibi_Byakuren_by_Tioluko.gif)
Thanks everyone just for seeing^^
If you like too see my other works visit here
http://tioluko.deviantart.com/ (http://tioluko.deviantart.com/)
See ya
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Wow. Those are... really good. Nue's dress looks especially neat for some reason.
There are some issues though. Patchcon!Nue's hair looks too flat at the top (needed to be more rounded), big!Nue's head looks too pointy and big!Suwako's seems too wide, also both heads have awkward shading on the left side (probably too much of it)
Additionally, Suwako's hat's eyeballs seem a bit awkward around the edges, but I can't blame you since they're kind of small. Also, the way Nue holds the scythe seems kind of... awkward, unless I'm looking at it the wrong way.
Edit: Now that I think about it, Suwako's hanging arm seems a bit long as well...
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Huh
wow, thank you very much for all those tips^^
I really have lots of touble with these anatomy things xD
I may fix these issues for sure^^
And I am happy that you liked Nue (hehe...good dress, I see xD) She was my first touhou drawing ever *-*
Thanks again and
See ya
ps: ok...I need an avatar... these 10 posts will be a problem xD
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The only thing weird I noticed was that Suwako's eyes are too far apart.
I mean, her right eye is too far too the right(observer's left), considering she's supposed to be looking a bit sideways.
That Nue is
That Nue is
... :yumemi: perfect.
huhwhat dear, I think you're looking at it wrong, because the way she's holding that scythe is really well done. :3
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huhwhat dear, I think you're looking at it wrong, because the way she's holding that scythe is really well done. :3
It's mainly her right hand (our left), it just looks really awkward to me. It may be the hand itself rather than the actual way she's holding it, idk.
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With awesome sprite-art like that, I don't think you'll have a problem accumulating 10 posts. :D Go hop over to the intro thread (http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php?topic=5285.msg277156#msg277156) and say hello.
Also share your secrets. +_+ Do you do that all from scratch? I love sprite art.
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Hope we'll see many more of those, because they look very nice~
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Nobu
Ah, thank, I already introduced myself there.
And well, they are all from 0
I just have trouble doing the lineart...
Since I started with the spriting thing on january of this year, I am still bad with it : p
I may make Okuu or "Jesus" soon *-* (yea...I am just making my favourites for now xD)
Moe Moe
Sure 'o'
I also have a lot of non touhou related things, If you look on my DA you will see xD
I am just training whith sprites doing touhou things for now 'o'
Thanks
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Okuu
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Oh, wow. These are incredible. I love pixel art.
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Matsuri♡Sakuragi
Haha, thanks^^
(I love too :3)
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I just made an little Marisa sprite 'o'
(http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/169/c/d/MATC___Marisa_Kirisame_by_Tioluko.gif)
See ya
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The tip of the hat's animation seems somewhat awkward to me. At one point it seems like it's stretching downwards, which looks kinda awkward.
Otherwise, that's adorable.
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owo Partner!!!!
You made a spriting gallery here ^o^
I wanna make mine too owo