So I stopped at #70, before I decided to stop dallying and just get right to the part where I bust your head open with a rock.
Not because they were intolerably bad (
despite this being the case) but because Dial-up don't like 'em enough to let 'em load fully, and Chrome's full refresh is bugged, and I didn't feel like emptying my cache over and over again to see 'em. I need that thing.
Anyways, up til this point, I am mostly amused. I accept boomies to be an valid onomatopoeia Also your Marisa x Alice interactions are hella cute. =]
I'll try to give useful criticisms when I figure it, since I don't wanna end up telling you something you've already fixt. Now let's get to work!
* Diamonds busts yo head in with a rock