Author Topic: Guilty Alice! ROUND 14 OVERRR  (Read 251184 times)

pasu

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #660 on: June 25, 2013, 05:30:07 PM »
+1 Suikama
+1 Kitten4u

i should probably get to changing my sig but im too lazy

art thread / yukkuri quest thread

Vento

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #661 on: June 25, 2013, 05:32:16 PM »
kracko why'd you put sixten's entry and not mine-
Distasteful Tater Elites 1st division

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #662 on: June 25, 2013, 05:37:54 PM »
dammit there are so many good entries it's hard to pick just two


but for now I'll say:

+0 HakureiSM - for no entry

and i'll do it for every week you don't enter :smug:

KrackoCloud

  • I don't mean to be greedy...
  • ... but white rice is my favorite food.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #663 on: June 25, 2013, 05:41:12 PM »
kracko why'd you put sixten's entry and not mine-
whoops!

AnonymousPondScum

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #664 on: June 25, 2013, 05:43:22 PM »
+2 Freeze-Ex
+1 Kitten4U

HakureiSM

  • Reimu is all of it
  • I suddenly feel like I ate a crowbar.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #665 on: June 25, 2013, 06:01:12 PM »
+2 Suijackass
+1 K4U

+0 HakureiSM - for no entry
Look at all the fucks I give: .
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
                                                                                   .

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #666 on: June 25, 2013, 07:07:45 PM »
+2 Freeze
+1 k4u
+0 HakuSM

DX7.EP

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #667 on: June 26, 2013, 01:37:55 AM »
Count me out of judgement on this one. I'm not entirely content with it being a proper entry. (criticisms, however, are encouraged nonetheless)

+2 K4U
Simplistic approach works very well - gives just enough details to decorate, but not too many so that it detracts from the general style.

+1 Pirate
Well-approached, both stylistically and pose-wise. Not too many details, but the ones that are there are well played for the most part. A few of them could be cut out without detracting too much from the overall form.

+cookies Suikama
Recursion. Recursion. Recursion. While the figure is overall decent, I feel that the shading conflicts with a minimalist appearance.

-1 HakureiSM
For lack of participation. Get working!



Desu_Cake: Figure is well implemented, and stylistically it fits. I do believe one more detail could've been added, namely the silhouette of the parasol. As it stands now, the parasol appears to take up the entire background.
Sixten: That would make a great pin-up button, but I feel Reisen is too detailed for the style.
Arkeden: Good interpretation on the theme. Something about the sparks coming from Sekibanki's eyes doesn't resonate well for some reason.
KazeSenshi: Could be good for a colouring book. Cleaning up the lines, darkening the background, and maybe removing the hatch pattern from her shirt would help.
Freeze-Ex: Looks brilliant. But I can't by any means call this minimalist.
Merp: GJ not drawing Sakuya. :V It's pretty well done and minimal in colour usage, but I feel there's still way too many details to match the requested style.
Vento: Nice outfit and good thematic interpretation. Good attention to detail too - just enough to flesh out the character. Shirt shading seems to have too much contrast.
Delfigamer: The style does fit. But the body - particularly the abdomen and hips - appears to be flattened. Get to basic pose practice.
Pasu: That would make a great button. Reducing the details on Sakuya and increasing the contrast of her outline might help the style a bit more.
Nia: Very interesting take on the subject - adds complexity to the characters in a stylistically appropriate way. Koishi's eye doesn't seem to serve much purpose in the picture other than as completeness filler.
« Last Edit: June 26, 2013, 01:43:10 AM by ゲイベン Steam Power »
C:DOS> ayayaya.mid
Bad command or file name

C:>_

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #668 on: June 26, 2013, 03:50:32 AM »
+2 Desu_Cake

I don't usually vote, but I really liked the picture when I saw it so here I am.

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #669 on: June 26, 2013, 04:07:53 AM »
+2 Suikama

because recursion is amazing


Thanks to GreenVirus for the Siggy.
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pineyappled

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #670 on: June 26, 2013, 04:09:46 AM »
+2 Suikama
Drawing isn't the best, but plus points for effort and the idea.
mine is still sitting in my hard drive

Kaze_Senshi

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #671 on: June 26, 2013, 12:15:43 PM »

+2 Sixten
+2 Desu_Cake
+1 Suikama
+0 HakureiSM
for the lol

Some fast feedback:

Arkeden: I think that it would look better if you colored her head.
Delfigamer: Her knee joint looks strange or you didn't let clear that there are two knees aligned there
NotaPirate: I think that there is something strange in her hips, it looks like her right leg isn't connected with the body. Maybe her thighs are too thin.
pasu: Is her neck too short?
My youtube channel with my creations: https://www.youtube.com/user/KazeSenshi2929
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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #672 on: June 26, 2013, 02:27:23 PM »
+2 Nia
+1 Pasu

Kitten4u

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #673 on: June 26, 2013, 03:08:37 PM »
+2 Pasu
+1 Nia
My favorite mythical creature? The honest politician.
A life cool.. where can I download one of those?
Hurray for apathy!

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #674 on: June 26, 2013, 03:15:19 PM »
Niapasu Pasunia

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #675 on: June 26, 2013, 11:44:11 PM »
+1 Desu_Cake
+1 Kitten4U


Desu_Cake: If I had to say, simply perfect and perfectly simple
Kitten4U: Same as Desu_Cake. The black and red really bring out an eerie night vibe

EP: It's minimalistic, though not effectively, I think. Otherwise, same advice as usual.
Delfigamer: I always try to spell your name as Delphigamer for some reason. Anyway, it's not bad, but like EP, the minimalistic style choice serves no purpose. Personally, I feel that there should be a reason why one would choose a certain style over another, especially if you choose to forgo detail and decide to use a minimalistic approach. I'd say minimalism generally tries to emphasize certain key qualities of whatever it's trying to portray (or use the minimalistic style to make an artistic point).
Nia: I decided to append myself here because I felt a bit hypocritical after typing the above. Can't say mine is quite minimalistic either.

Others:
Sixten: What I like the best about this is that black guitar jack in cord
Arkeden: Unique, I like it
KazeSenshi: Being that it's just a pencil outline, I can't really say that it's minimalistic or monochromatic (art-wise)
Freeze-Ex: I just realized that this was a gif; I thought my screen brightness was glitching out, haha. This makes me think that Patchoulli has a crystal ball so she can check up on Flan from time to time. I like the messy ink brush-y wings
Merp: I think you're getting better at hair. It looks a lot smoother and like it's flowing. I like the picture in general (and also her bone bat wings).
Vento: I you made mug coasters with this design, I'd totally buy one. It has that noir-ish flavour to it, and the brown makes it quite pleasing to look at. (also, kakkoii, technically)
NotaPirate: It looks pretty cool
Pasu: Same as NotaPirate. I think you're getting better too.
Suikama: Looks cool. But I can't help but feel whether the concept makes sense in the context of her character.

Forgive me, people near the end. I'm starting to get tired of writing this since I started like an hour ago.
Naked expression; purple raspberry flavour

Delfigamer

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #676 on: June 27, 2013, 02:32:06 PM »
I always try to spell your name as Delphigamer for some reason.
The nickname had been used during those old times when I misspelt Delphi (programming language, derivative of Object Pascal) as "Delfi". Haven't got a reason to change it since then. :V

What do you guys think about me posting an ugly (drawn by me) Raymoo every week HakureiSM doesn't participate? We may start just now. :derp:

The Jealous Witch did nothing wrong.

Arkeden

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #677 on: June 27, 2013, 05:20:52 PM »
+2 Freeze
+1 Nia

I'll edit the feedbacks in.

What do you guys think about me posting an ugly (drawn by me) Raymoo every week HakureiSM doesn't participate? We may start just now. :derp:

But that drawing looks nice to me  ???

Just started drawing! Visit my deviantart
-> http://arkeden.deviantart.com/

Delfigamer

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  • of course the best girl never wins
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #678 on: June 27, 2013, 05:24:36 PM »
But that drawing looks nice to me  ???
:/
Strange. We need the HSM's reply for analysis then.

The Jealous Witch did nothing wrong.

KrackoCloud

  • I don't mean to be greedy...
  • ... but white rice is my favorite food.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #679 on: June 27, 2013, 08:19:48 PM »
+2 Nia
+1 K4U


I really like Nia's! Desu Cake's is very fitting too. Freeze-Ex's is cool, but sadly feels too excited to be called minimalist.

HakureiSM

  • Reimu is all of it
  • I suddenly feel like I ate a crowbar.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 VOTING
« Reply #680 on: June 27, 2013, 08:54:18 PM »
What do you guys think about me posting an ugly (drawn by me) Raymoo every week HakureiSM doesn't participate? We may start just now. :derp:
How about you drop that shit? This is getting a bit out of hand, isn't it
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
                                                                                   .

KrackoCloud

  • I don't mean to be greedy...
  • ... but white rice is my favorite food.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 RESULTS!
« Reply #681 on: June 28, 2013, 06:21:54 PM »
Guilty Alice Week 8 Results!

The winner is...
Suikama!
With Kitten4u at a close second!

Looks like we got a new winner this week! Congrats to Suikama.

Also, backing HSM here. Please remember that art is voluntary - fun is voluntary. Continually annoying someone into playing GA completely ignores the reasons the game was even started.

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 RESULTS
« Reply #682 on: June 28, 2013, 06:47:19 PM »
oh shit what *-*


welp time to think of some contest ideas then >:D

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 RESULTS
« Reply #683 on: June 28, 2013, 07:35:03 PM »
Okay I got it


Week (9): Touhou Koumakyolo - Embodiment of Swaggalicious xX666Devil666Xx

Draw Touhou if #yoloswag culture invaded Gensokyo(lo), where things like shutter shades, baggy clothing, excessive bling, miniature snoop dogg/lions, and an overall disregard for basic human dignity have taken over.

For example (note: don't actually use blingee, draw that shit yourself :V)

HakureiSM

  • Reimu is all of it
  • I suddenly feel like I ate a crowbar.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 RESULTS
« Reply #684 on: June 28, 2013, 07:44:33 PM »
You see, you fucker? You see? That's why we love you <3


e: oh of course you get to decide week (9)
« Last Edit: June 28, 2013, 07:59:54 PM by HakureiSM »
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
                                                                                   .

Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 RESULTS
« Reply #685 on: June 28, 2013, 08:31:07 PM »
e: oh of course you get to decide week ⑨
but of course BV

Vento

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 8 RESULTS
« Reply #686 on: June 28, 2013, 09:19:35 PM »
Distasteful Tater Elites 1st division

Vyrien

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Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 9!
« Reply #687 on: June 29, 2013, 12:27:53 AM »
Congregation of Impertinent Drama Queens.


Art threadLivestream | Pixiv

HakureiSM

  • Reimu is all of it
  • I suddenly feel like I ate a crowbar.
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 9!
« Reply #688 on: June 29, 2013, 05:15:39 AM »
plus two ventow
[20:45:19] Ciryano: come and behold why they call it the Panzerfaust
[20:45:39] Hakurei Reimu: ... because it shoots once and then you throw it out?
                                                                                   .

Delfigamer

  • * Merry, bride, absolute (HR)
  • of course the best girl never wins
Re: The Guilty Alice Weekly Social! ~ Week 9!
« Reply #689 on: June 29, 2013, 06:26:21 PM »
Ah, I am totally unfamiliar with the thing, expect me doing it wrong. :/

The Jealous Witch did nothing wrong.