Maidens of the Kaleidoscope

~Hakurei Shrine~ => Alice's Art Atelier => Topic started by: Aoshi-shi on August 02, 2013, 03:08:31 AM

Title: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 02, 2013, 03:08:31 AM
Previous Thread. (http://www.shrinemaiden.org/forum/index.php/topic,7775.0.html)

Hello again. o/

I haven't done too much in the last few days - pretty much a drawing of the protagonist (http://i.imgur.com/V09CErE.png) from Lone Survivor.

I also went back to redraw something from the first page of my old thread to see how much of a difference three years has made. (In other words, Improvement Meme)

Here's the drawing from November of 2010. (http://i.imgur.com/QuhKJal.png)
Here's the drawing I finished today. (http://i.imgur.com/fElEu5Y.png)

Oh, I will also take requests if anyone wants them.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Suikama on August 02, 2013, 03:12:38 AM
Oh, I will also take requests if anyone wants them.
draw a pasu ● ‿ ●
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on August 02, 2013, 04:24:45 AM
Oh, I will also take requests if anyone wants them.

avvy-proportioned c (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=206)a (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=207)r (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=208)b (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=209)u (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=210)ncles?

Gratz on the new thread, btw! o7 (since this is the first time I saw it happen in real time so  :derp:)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 02, 2013, 04:45:23 AM
draw a pasu ● ‿ ●
help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)

avvy-proportioned c (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=206)a (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=207)r (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=208)b (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=209)u (http://www.puzzledragonx.com/en/monster.asp?n=210)ncles?

Gratz on the new thread, btw! o7 (since this is the first time I saw it happen in real time so  :derp:)
Just for clarification, all of them, or can I pick whichever ones I want?  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on August 02, 2013, 04:51:05 AM
Just for clarification, all of them, or can I pick whichever ones I want?  :ohdear:

Yes, all of them for reasons of waifu~  soz for the confusion  :qq:

e:

help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)

fuzzywuzzy
as cute as pasu so o7
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jana on August 02, 2013, 04:52:15 AM
help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)

Your style is just fine as it is~
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: HakureiSM on August 02, 2013, 04:52:32 AM
help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)
Well done
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Phlegeth on August 02, 2013, 05:12:24 AM
Remi also looks like she aged about three years.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on August 02, 2013, 05:13:22 AM
I don't know if you changed your style a lot but it seems that you drew the newer Remilia using a different style (different proportions) so it's harder to compare them. Excluding the color both looks pretty good, the newer one shows that you improved in coloring.

help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)

-poof poof-  :derp:


If you have some free time you could draw some Youmu or Sunny Milk :)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 02, 2013, 06:13:20 AM
I don't know if you changed your style a lot but it seems that you drew the newer Remilia using a different style (different proportions) so it's harder to compare them. Excluding the color both looks pretty good, the newer one shows that you improved in coloring.
Maybe it's just me, but I see the style of newer Remi just as a logical extension of older one. Main elements (eyes, hair, node, limbs) in both pictures are basically drawn the same way. Yet, the newer one seems like it was drawn by more steady hand.
So, Aoshi became more experienced, that's for sure.

UPD
Quote
request
Ah, forgot.
Kuroneko. :3
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: AnonymousPondScum on August 02, 2013, 07:04:12 AM
I haven't done too much in the last few days - pretty much a drawing of the protagonist (http://i.imgur.com/V09CErE.png) from Lone Survivor.

I like this.  :3

As for requests, could you please draw an amusing pic of a Touhou of your choice juggling something else also of your choice?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Nicole Artist on August 02, 2013, 08:45:57 AM
I like how on the first one remi is like, I'm all spiffy with my cup and the second, don't touch my cup I will cut you

Can you draw a super kawaii yuyu-sama?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 02, 2013, 08:57:59 AM
Indeed she can. (http://aoshi-shi.tumblr.com/post/44433211372)
More kawaii? Oh yes, even if Kuruneko will have to wait. There's never too much kawaisa.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: DX7.EP on August 02, 2013, 09:55:16 AM
Here's the drawing from November of 2010. (http://i.imgur.com/QuhKJal.png)
Here's the drawing I finished today. (http://i.imgur.com/fElEu5Y.png)
Noticeable improvements all around!

help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)
I think my heart skipped several beats upon looking at this.

No particular requests at the moment.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: pasu on August 02, 2013, 10:34:38 AM
oh n
o

im

hnngh
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on August 02, 2013, 11:43:40 AM
Assertive IaMP Yukari please.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Suikama on August 02, 2013, 04:35:19 PM
help i can't do Pasu Level cuteness (http://i.imgur.com/x8RKkB6.png)
Just for clarification, all of them, or can I pick whichever ones I want?  :ohdear:
● ‿ ●
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: HakureiSM on August 02, 2013, 05:45:03 PM

Sensei approval
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 04, 2013, 07:29:06 AM
Youmu (http://i.imgur.com/3e0U23Z.png)

First Carbuncle (http://i.imgur.com/MNjTA00.png) (Mars Light)
If you were expecting it in color, I can only apologize.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on August 04, 2013, 08:28:24 AM
Youmu (http://i.imgur.com/3e0U23Z.png)

First Carbuncle (http://i.imgur.com/MNjTA00.png) (Mars Light)
If you were expecting it in color, I can only apologize.

<<33
yeah i don't mind black n white so o7

dat srs youmu face
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on August 08, 2013, 02:51:19 AM
Yay a cute youmu, thanks  :3
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: draganuv15 on August 10, 2013, 12:11:45 AM
Can I request Weiss Schnee plz?  :blush:
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 10, 2013, 12:30:24 AM
Alice juggling dolls. (http://i.imgur.com/blo88mw.png) I think.

Mercury Light Carbuncle (http://i.imgur.com/3kmTGOA.png)

Yuyuko (http://i.imgur.com/kgdvEiP.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on August 10, 2013, 02:26:15 AM
Ohhh that flying dolls are so cute  :ohdear:

BTW nice job coloring that Yuyuko and creating that details
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Tamashii Kanjou on August 10, 2013, 12:36:15 PM
Everything about the Alice picture is ADORABLE!

Them dolls~ XD
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: AnonymousPondScum on August 10, 2013, 06:44:15 PM
Alice juggling dolls. (http://i.imgur.com/blo88mw.png) I think.
Eeeeeeeee. :3

Quote
Yuyuko (http://i.imgur.com/kgdvEiP.png)

Pretty coloring work!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on August 11, 2013, 12:31:33 AM
Mercury Light Carbuncle (http://i.imgur.com/3kmTGOA.png)

amg :*

o7
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Drake on August 11, 2013, 01:52:50 AM
(http://i.imgur.com/vKgpSJT.jpg)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on August 11, 2013, 03:07:35 AM
Phallic shape alarm -poof poof-
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on August 11, 2013, 10:01:41 PM
That Alice is ALL THE DORBLS~
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 22, 2013, 10:37:23 PM
Phallic shape alarm -poof poof-
:ohdear:

I finally finished up with my AWA scroll piece \o/

Now here's some stuff:
Earth Light Carbuncle (http://i.imgur.com/JxskBUV.png)

IaMP Yukari (http://i.imgur.com/9wVNKsn.png)

Request from Tamashii (http://i.imgur.com/P07nLwx.png) (Forgot Ran's shadow, derp.)

Weiss (http://i.imgur.com/7kNlrWN.png)

Sukuna (http://i.imgur.com/P4WFMy8.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on August 23, 2013, 12:36:40 AM
Earth Light Carbuncle (http://i.imgur.com/JxskBUV.png)

IaMP Yukari (http://i.imgur.com/9wVNKsn.png)

Request from Tamashii (http://i.imgur.com/P07nLwx.png) (Forgot Ran's shadow, derp.)

Weiss (http://i.imgur.com/7kNlrWN.png)

Sukuna (http://i.imgur.com/P4WFMy8.png)

*insert previous reactions to carbuncles*

Jegus, that's a badass Yukari.

Then Chen must be on the edge of a cliff
and Mamizou must be hovering over the pit! It's so simple!  :derp:

DAT PONYTAIL... :o

Badass Sukuna, but those eyebrows look bizarre to me.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 23, 2013, 06:01:26 AM
Can you draw a super kawaii yuyu-sama?
Kuroneko. :3
Shameless reminder. :V

IaMP Yukari (http://i.imgur.com/9wVNKsn.png)
Is it me, or this Sukima does indeed seem to be too masculine? :/

Mamizou
Ran
Erm?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 23, 2013, 06:20:15 AM
Shameless reminder. :V
Oh, the painted Yuyuko was not cute enough?  :ohdear: I will have to try again then.
(I haven't gotten to Kuroneko yet, sorry.)

Erm?
Whoops I meant "Ran."  :V
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 23, 2013, 07:38:56 AM
Oh, the painted Yuyuko was not cute enough?  :ohdear: I will have to try again then.

Yuyuko (http://i.imgur.com/kgdvEiP.png)
Ow, sorry. ^^" I forgot.

Well,
there's never too much kawaisa
, however. :3
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 28, 2013, 11:05:32 PM
Kuroneko. :3
Does this Kuroneko look good enough? (http://i.imgur.com/YB6Xohx.png)  :ohdear:

Quote
kawaisa
Come again? Kawaisa = Cute Marisa?
Sorry I am so dumb.
  :qq:

Here's a Benben in the meantime. (http://31.media.tumblr.com/bc1a76555e2e0355648e9d2560147512/tumblr_ms8grrRH2P1ry6yl7o1_1280.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 29, 2013, 01:40:52 AM
Does this Kuroneko look good enough? (http://i.imgur.com/YB6Xohx.png)  :ohdear:
Indeed she does. :3
I think I'll grab her home to avatar soon...

Come again? Kawaisa = Cute Marisa?
Sorry I am so dumb.
  :qq:
kawai + -i -> adjective
kawai + -garu -> verb
kawai + -sa -> noun
Something like this.
Though I guess it would sound like "to cute" in English. :V
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 29, 2013, 08:29:11 AM
I... ugh (http://imgur.com/L0qoFCk). As expected, I am not Aoshi and am not Aoshi Level. ._.
So, do you think I may use this ^, or I'll better place original pencil? :ohdear:

Quote from: a denizen of sos-dan.ru
What a loooooong body.
Quote from: another denizen of sos-dan.ru
Google "LongCat." Pelvis could be more definite, because the clothes accentuate her waist. The neck should be not so visible with that standing collar. The chest is put rather high, like a male's one (and I thought Ruri had greater one), and maybe her arms could be a bit thicker?
Haven't noticed anything of that kind. ._.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 29, 2013, 11:53:46 PM
I... ugh (http://imgur.com/L0qoFCk). As expected, I am not Aoshi and am not Aoshi Level. ._.
So, do you think I may use this ^, or I'll better place original pencil? :ohdear:
The colored version is quite nice~

Haven't noticed anything of that kind. ._.
Strangely, Kuroneko was a bit difficult for me to draw.
I tried redlining the drawing. Better? Worse? (http://i.imgur.com/PTiNTSU.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 30, 2013, 12:48:09 AM
I, uh, well, I don't know. For me, the original was quite nice already.
>_>
<_<
...Well, let's see what those guys say themselves. ._.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: [Y]oukai [J]esus on August 30, 2013, 03:30:32 AM
Weiss (http://i.imgur.com/7kNlrWN.png)

I would just like the point out that
Good job it's excellent
Although I find the ponytail a little too... You know. Solid.
Also, nice Myrtenaster, even if it is a little off in places.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 30, 2013, 06:41:59 AM
...Well, let's see what those guys say themselves. ._.
Quote from: Быдло-кун
Seems better. Arms' thickness is okay. The chest is still a bit higher than it should be. If she put her arms down, her chest would be above the center of the humerus. Thouhg, if she wears a bra with cotton wool or a corsage, then it's fine.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: OverlordChirei on September 10, 2013, 01:46:58 PM
Oh wow, didn't realize you got a new thread.

Posting before class, so not even sure where to start commenting on here, but you're still doing good work as always, I see.

Keep it up!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on November 16, 2013, 03:12:14 AM
*Kicks down door*

HEY THE CABLE FINALLY CAME IN FOR MY SCANNER SO LET'S BUMP THIS THREAD
Also I haven't done a lot between then and now, so there isn't much to see. Sorry  :ohdear:

Miko (http://i.imgur.com/zNFac8l.png)
Futo (http://i.imgur.com/8781gba.png)
Reimu (http://i.imgur.com/OoBkHQl.png)
Yoshika (http://i.imgur.com/4UPXO7h.png)
Sakuya (http://i.imgur.com/wAkosmc.png)
Wriggle (http://i.imgur.com/oqybWR0.png)
Reisen (http://i.imgur.com/CSoYiR4.png)
An unfinished Akyuu (http://i.imgur.com/YvMIe9w.png)
Unfinished Raiko (http://i.imgur.com/8oEfgy5.png)
Basara derp (http://i.imgur.com/BqnjUl8.png)
Yatsuhashi (http://i.imgur.com/DSZb4Ok.png)
Yuyuko (http://i.imgur.com/FDW1BR4.png)
Yuyuko, as requested by Tamashii (http://i.imgur.com/EoiG5hL.png)

I sort of wanted to make stickers from at least the first six, but I don't know if they're, er, too tall in scale for stickers?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on November 16, 2013, 11:10:20 AM
Wow so many cool drawings :O

Yuyuko 100/10

Post the stickers photos when you have them :)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on November 16, 2013, 12:08:10 PM
The shading on Yuyuko is <3

You've improved so much! Keep it up~!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on November 16, 2013, 01:42:20 PM
I almost began to miss your art.

Yuyuko 100/10
She's definitely the best in the pack, that's for sure. :3
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Tamashii Kanjou on November 16, 2013, 04:05:21 PM
Echoing everyone here; that Yuyuko is stunning!

And that's before she even hops into a tank the following picture, which was amazing for your first time drawing tanks. It certainly made Jeff (my best man) very happy on his birthday~ XD
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Phlegeth on November 16, 2013, 06:04:20 PM
Those are all awesome.  Like everyone else said, especially that Yuyuko.  But my favorite is Yoshika.  I think it's her face, for some reason to me it looks like the face people make when they don't want their picture taken.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Nobu on November 16, 2013, 11:25:59 PM
That Reimu really calls out to me. I am in love with her expression, simple as it is. :3

If you're still taking requests Aoshishishi, may I ask for Koishi in fall clothing? Maybe Suwako too?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on November 17, 2013, 12:23:27 AM
amg ur back!!!!
o7

Such improvement on shading, especially Reisen :* That tank is also pretty freakin' sweet also!

(also I do hate to persevere about it but are you able to do the last 2 carbuncles, or no?)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on December 19, 2013, 07:13:54 AM
Last few weeks were, erm, quite unproductive.

Carbuncles (http://i.imgur.com/0ShuTJF.png)
Irisu (http://i.imgur.com/Z2rY6S5.png)
Utsuho. (http://i.imgur.com/OjrJc4B.png) Bonus: Utsuho from 2009. (http://i.imgur.com/r1bdvV6.png)
Sadly, it's still the year of people mostly facing 3/4 to the left. (http://i.imgur.com/RWcRTPr.png)   :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KaiserKnuckle on January 02, 2014, 04:31:21 AM
Last few weeks were, erm, quite unproductive.

Carbuncles (http://i.imgur.com/0ShuTJF.png)
Irisu (http://i.imgur.com/Z2rY6S5.png)
Utsuho. (http://i.imgur.com/OjrJc4B.png) Bonus: Utsuho from 2009. (http://i.imgur.com/r1bdvV6.png)
Sadly, it's still the year of people mostly facing 3/4 to the left. (http://i.imgur.com/RWcRTPr.png)   :ohdear:

amg how did i not notice this sooner?!?!?!?!?

ilu for this (the rest of the carbuncles i mean) and everything else is as awesome as always!!! keep it up, aoshi-sama! <3 <3 <3 <3
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on March 24, 2014, 12:30:57 AM
Bump. (http://i.imgur.com/huMKsFq.png)

Fall (http://i.imgur.com/o3Ch38H.png) Touhous, (http://i.imgur.com/P7lWc6S.png) I think. I'm not a very fashionable person.  :ohdear:
Rin (http://i.imgur.com/9NcgEmb.png)
Some KanColle (http://i.imgur.com/c4LIEqQ.png)
Hakutaku (http://i.imgur.com/DiyQlK0.png)
Misayama Hunting Shrine Ritual (http://i.imgur.com/GVl2VEz.png)
Alice (http://i.imgur.com/t6zKEkf.png)

...And I think that was all I did between December-now?  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Suikama on March 24, 2014, 12:47:46 AM
Misayama Hunting Shrine Ritual (http://i.imgur.com/GVl2VEz.png)
dem lips oh baby
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: DX7.EP on March 24, 2014, 04:29:02 AM
'tis not too much, but still a good update with signs of progress!

I'd advise focusing on hands a bit more for future works.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on March 24, 2014, 12:19:20 PM
dem lips oh baby
wow she's hot

I'd advise focusing on hands a bit more for future works.
Indeed.
I took me some effort to bend my index that way. :derp:

I think. I'm not a very fashionaaabluh person. :ohdear:
Koishi really looks strange, but Suwako is fine for me.
_

I see you've got a new cute avatar. :3
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on March 24, 2014, 12:26:24 PM
Hammer draws the cutest Yukari's, I swear.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: OverlordChirei on March 24, 2014, 03:53:05 PM
Oh, you're still drawing! I was wondering where your thread had gone.

Beanie Koishi is adorbs
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Kaze_Senshi on March 25, 2014, 08:59:02 PM
Misayama Hunting Shrine Ritual

dem lips oh baby

dat knives oh baby
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Phlegeth on March 26, 2014, 10:36:51 PM
Tr?s fashionaaabluh!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on April 14, 2014, 12:06:29 AM
Hammer draws the cutest Yukari's, I swear.
Yes yes yes

Also, some (http://i.imgur.com/OP8l2Oz.png) stuff (http://i.imgur.com/uGoILVi.png) I've been working on.

The scanner made the watercolors look darker than they actually are, I need to figure out how to fix that.
And if anyone know how to do some decent skin tones with watercolor, please give me some tips.  :ohdear:
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Dizzy H. "Muffin" Muffin on April 14, 2014, 02:49:12 AM
Cute~

*also snuggabirthdays*
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: DX7.EP on April 14, 2014, 03:14:55 AM
Shimakaze looks a bit on the tanned and plump side. :V In either case, a fancy showing as usual, and I'm noticing more attention to body form which is pretty nice.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on May 19, 2014, 09:42:19 PM
Hello I have made a background disaster thing. (http://i.imgur.com/62UV4XO.png)
I probably should have looked up more videos on how to paint an ocean, heheh. (Some masking fluid would have helped too, but I can't afford a bottle right now.)  :ohdear:

Finals are next week + Packing up and going home so I'll see you guys in June. o/
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 12, 2014, 03:00:20 AM
haha bump

Redrew one of the earlier drawings I made waaay back in my earlier days of MotK: 2010 (http://i.imgur.com/ZnQE9jx.png), 2014. (http://i.imgur.com/fO3SY1X.png)

Ayakashi Ghost Guild crap: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/4sVaGr6.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/URn7NTK.png) (Didn't really like how the skin turned out on this one.)

A Kancolle (http://i.imgur.com/IdsPblx.png)

Iroha, (http://i.imgur.com/yX70g6V.png) JQ's creation from the Create Your Own Touhou Thread.

Reisen (http://i.imgur.com/DKZ6I04.jpg)

Watercolors: Youmu (http://i.imgur.com/nkwZLGD.png) and Seiga (http://i.imgur.com/lHj6wqs.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Freeze-Ex on August 16, 2014, 06:28:04 AM
those pencil shading are very sexy
and also dat 4yrs different style
awesome keep up the good work
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on August 16, 2014, 07:44:06 AM
I just noticed, but your Yukari avatar is beaufitul
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on August 16, 2014, 05:36:34 PM
I think girls in the newer drawings seem shorter and... wider? Thicker?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Ragathol on October 22, 2014, 11:04:31 PM
Nice boats. And witches. That's quite some progress in 4 years!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on October 23, 2014, 04:12:42 AM
When is that Ceres going to get posted here? :V
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on October 23, 2014, 05:24:36 AM
You know for a moment I thought we had an epic revival here
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Ragathol on October 23, 2014, 08:59:27 PM
No one's posting in this forum, so someone's gotta do it.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 24, 2014, 02:33:35 AM
When is that Ceres going to get posted here? :V
Once I find some free time in between class projects, which is now I guess!

Nice boats. And witches. That's quite some progress in 4 years!
Thank you!

I think girls in the newer drawings seem shorter and... wider? Thicker?
I hadn't really noticed at first, so I guess they are my accidental creations of compressed girls.

Being in an art slump really sucks! I've been trying to force myself out of it lately

Kancolles: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/BWhhpY7.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/OuI7sNr.png)

Some scribblings: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/KFwVaRR.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/tLVAFSE.png)

May this drawing of Archangel ward off any future Cupid/Angel pulls from the REM (http://i.imgur.com/5O8U5qE.png)

WIP of Ceres (http://i.imgur.com/M5gqPko.png)
I'm sort of new with this "painting" style. I don't really think I have a solid grip on it yet, so if anyone has any critique/advice about this so far I would greatly appreciate it!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on October 25, 2014, 08:10:15 PM
Being in an art slump really sucks! I've been trying to force myself out of it lately

I'm sort of new with this "painting" style. I don't really think I have a solid grip on it yet, so if anyone has any critique/advice about this so far I would greatly appreciate it!
When in a slump, stretch it out! (It's the best time to try something new)
Not so good with painting, but it allows for a great 'fleshy' feel to it.

Looks like our making some noise elicited a response time to do this with everyone else's thre (ry
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: OverlordChirei on November 18, 2014, 07:47:55 PM
Super late, but that Ceres looks great so far.

Why are all the evil girls so pretty
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on November 19, 2014, 05:34:33 AM
oh i cannot wait for that evil ceres
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Nobu on November 19, 2014, 02:42:04 PM
Ahhh :* Aoshishishi~ I love the leaps and bounds your art makes every time I come back around here! Those PAD pictures are amazing and inspirational!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on December 26, 2014, 10:12:16 PM
Some old stuff:

Madoka (http://i.imgur.com/Q1BFlFL.jpg) (I didn't feel like getting up to use the scanner, so bear with this phone pic.)

Evil Ceres (http://i.imgur.com/MCLJK7L.png)

More recent stuff:

Kosuzu design for the CPSS button (http://i.imgur.com/oCDLNKz.png)

Reisen button (http://i.imgur.com/efqvOZP.png)

Going to draw "Buddhist Diamond" every year 'til I like it (http://i.imgur.com/R55VbXB.png)

2014 in Review (http://i.imgur.com/m2RcV42.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jq1790 on December 27, 2014, 12:30:42 AM
Ah,so THAT was what Kaguya was doing in the pic I had seen the beginning of.

So, the real question:  do you need to draw it again in 2015, ot did 2014 break you free?(said youd draw it til you like it so...)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on December 27, 2014, 01:46:41 AM
The use of line weights in that Madoka one is fabulous
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: OverlordChirei on December 28, 2014, 10:45:39 AM
Ceres!

I'd already seen the version on Tumblr, but it's nice to see the official thread post. Keep it up.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on January 31, 2015, 04:45:22 AM
One-year progress. (http://i.imgur.com/gH85IEE.png)

Wanted to get back into inking stuff: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/Ut680gQ.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/ZeOOcZh.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on January 31, 2015, 04:57:36 AM
holy crap dat improvement

my god the inking is so nice too
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on January 31, 2015, 05:08:09 AM
I am like literally salivating that inking looks so good. It's so poofy looking!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on March 17, 2015, 06:45:04 AM
Haha I should have scanned stuff before going home.

More ink stuff: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/Envo6W4.jpg)  2 (http://i.imgur.com/4ArHlle.jpg)

So I watched a video from Sycra a while ago about choosing color and I decided to try it out. I think it turned out decently. (http://i.imgur.com/aHsPxIO.png)

Final project from one of my classes. (http://i.imgur.com/wodHxLf.png) Basically we were supposed to do a scene on a particular street in three-point. During a field trip, I took a photo of the angle I needed and put a perspective over it in Photoshop. Not sure which I prefer more... doing everything in Photoshop or drawing it by hand.

Although I think this is a thing that I definitely want to fix up and color later.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on March 17, 2015, 02:17:00 PM
poi looks great holy shit
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on March 17, 2015, 04:18:39 PM
So I watched a video from Sycra a while ago about choosing color and I decided to try it out. I think it turned out decently. (http://i.imgur.com/aHsPxIO.png)
SO COLORFUL
BRILLIANT
I feel an urgent need to know who she is.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on March 17, 2015, 04:31:33 PM
SO COLORFUL
BRILLIANT
I feel an urgent need to know who she is.

yuudachi kai ni from kantai collection
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on May 09, 2015, 06:51:56 PM
It somehow occured to me now is a good time to wander in and take a look at this thread again.
Request from Tamashii (http://i.imgur.com/P07nLwx.png) (Forgot Ran's shadow, derp.)
Ran
Erm?
...Took me long enough to notice the fluff ._."

Last few weeks were, erm, quite unproductive.
Gotta make it the motto of AAA.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on May 09, 2015, 07:08:28 PM
Gotta make it the motto of AAA.
:colonveeplusalpha:

I've been in a horrible combination of too busy/really lazy lately. (I've been meaning to bump my birthday thread with the rest of the requests today PLEASE FORGIVE ME)

I'll uh, post some stuff here too later I guess
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Tamashii Kanjou on May 09, 2015, 09:14:41 PM
...Took me long enough to notice the fluff ._.

I still love how that turned out; one of those 'if you don't look close enough, you may miss it' moments. It's why I love coming up with ideas and scenes like that, and love people like Aoshi who can bring that idea to life~ <3

And also, don't worry yourself too much, Aoshi. Take your time~ *hugs*
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on May 09, 2015, 09:36:27 PM
(I've been meaning to bump my birthday thread with the rest of the requests today PLEASE FORGIVE ME)
Quote
I've been in a horrible combination of too busy/really lazy lately
:colonveeplusalpha::colonveeplusalpha::colonveeplusalpha:
I feel you
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on May 10, 2015, 01:02:11 AM
haha but really

I should probably update

Another Kancolle related piece I'm in the middle of inking. (http://i.imgur.com/N3anNCM.png) I sort of went overboard with the water droplets by her foot so I might try to cover some of it up whenever I get to the watercoloring part.

An environment for a class project. (http://i.imgur.com/rYQjhp3.png) Might possibly ink later.
 Another one (http://i.imgur.com/cc79Tlv.png) I'm working on at the moment.

NEW TOUHOUUU (http://i.imgur.com/7RmAj1q.png) YEAHHHHHH
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jq1790 on May 10, 2015, 03:54:04 AM
Re: Shimakaze
So energetic.  Go, Rensouhou-chan~! 
and so secondary in the anime it's sad, at least in the first couple eps from what I recall; havent finished it

Re: environ 1
Holy crap the detail.  Looks very lonely there though.

Re: environ 2
The little menu thingies in the holder on the end of the table being out of alignment's a nice touch; I don't think they're EVER lined up right when one sees em...unless that's how they're supposed to be for visibility, I dunno.  Looks like a nice place for a meal with family and/or friends though in any case.

Re: new Touhou
Way to make me have to edit my post, Aoshiiiii...!  Anyway two thoughts.  1:  Geez, gotta go fast much?  Not even a day and you've already got art for her.  2:  ...well, what else can I say?  Crazy good work as usual.  Loving the flowingness of the cape, though I also liek everything else so *shrug*
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 01, 2015, 03:23:22 AM
I was going to bump this before I went home but I forgot :V

I made a cover for Muhyo and Roji's Bureau of Supernatural Investigation as one of my final projects. Here's the thumbnails: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/ECBln5V.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/idQX6u0.png) 3 (http://i.imgur.com/yEub1h5.png)

I liked 1 the best so I went with that. Working on the scenery some more. (http://i.imgur.com/QAuDilN.png)

Working on the scenery even more (http://i.imgur.com/kUVf5Fn.png)

Penciled version (http://i.imgur.com/wbszPi4.png)

Final inked version (http://i.imgur.com/QE0Ca8U.jpg) (Using a dip pen for this was quite fun!)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 04, 2015, 07:09:12 AM
Practicing with my tablet a bit. (http://i.imgur.com/g7jQyT8.png)

I also wanted to at least have some sort of background, although I'm not sure if it completely matches with Benben or not.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on June 04, 2015, 09:15:31 AM
I also wanted to at least have some sort of background, although I'm not sure if it completely matches with Benben or not.
Not very magical, or stormy. Or magical storm-y.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 18, 2015, 02:17:56 AM
Not very magical, or stormy. Or magical storm-y.

We must go magical-er. Stormier. Magical stormier??? (http://i.imgur.com/TwleNPM.png)

Trying to get more background practice in. (http://i.imgur.com/xDTQrFR.png) Redid an old drawing from a while ago, here's the old one for reference. (http://i.imgur.com/IROiq.jpg)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KrackoCloud on June 18, 2015, 11:38:28 PM
Trying to get more background practice in. (http://i.imgur.com/xDTQrFR.png)
Woah, this is great!
The color of the skin doesn't seem to work with the lighting of the background, but this is still way amazing! Especially envious of your ability to draw legs and feet.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 30, 2015, 01:30:07 AM
Woah, this is great!
The color of the skin doesn't seem to work with the lighting of the background, but this is still way amazing! Especially envious of your ability to draw legs and feet.

Oh? What seems to not work? Too much blue in the skin tone? I'm still pretty new to how local color changes under different lighting conditions so any tips or advice would be great!

Testing something out (http://i.imgur.com/z97Y0I8.png)

WIP of Ringo (http://i.imgur.com/vOUtt1T.jpg) (I really like her theme)
Bonus value study (http://i.imgur.com/WdckahY.jpg) (Her right arm looks funky now that I look at it so I'm going to change it later.)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: KrackoCloud on June 30, 2015, 06:28:04 AM
I'm not sure how well I can articulate, since I'm more novice than you. It could just be that the background is faded, while Tewi's pretty bright, and that makes her feel out of place? You could try darkening and muting the colors some, but I can't guarantee that would be the fix.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on June 30, 2015, 02:36:55 PM
Trees by themselves suggest a cloudy sky at dusk. They are lit so poorly that we get to see a specular reflection of the sky on the sides of their trunks.
Tewi, on the other hand, is well lit from all sides, like it's still a little past noon.

I'm still pretty new to how local color changes under different lighting conditions so any tips or advice would be great!
Maybe not so useful, as it's an experimental idea I thought of only about a week ago myself; in the last two drawings I first dealt with pure lightning - filled a layer with some dark color for shadows, then put light patches here and there - and only then colored it on another layer, which was set to multiply, to grossly simulate how the light works.
...I guess you'd understand better if I just showed this. (https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/52018470/Temp/2015-06-22.sai)
To show something shiny (like hair), I imagine adding another pair of intensity*color layers specifically for glares, and setting them to "screen" with diffuse should work. (picking colors would be completely another story then though)
You can also add a pure additive layer for something that shines on their own.

So, basically, I simulate a Cel shader with brushes and pens. Oh well.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 14, 2015, 06:06:39 AM
I'm always motivated by new Touhous. (http://i.imgur.com/V3eMoE5.png) (Spoilers)

Since it's two in the morning I guess I'll finish this later
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on August 30, 2015, 07:56:24 AM
I'm going to let this go (http://i.imgur.com/BbwgmXC.png) before this goes from extreme turd polishing to super ultra turd polishing.

I suppose I got a little too ambitious with the background. Fun to play around with, though!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Firestorm29 on August 30, 2015, 12:54:53 PM
I still think it looks pretty good, I like how you had the trees gradient into the background, it's a nice touch.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Ragathol on September 06, 2015, 11:50:32 AM
That's pretty nice. Same problem as with Tewi though; She's lit way differently than the background. If you had a glowing fairy floating in front of her it would look alright, and explain her expression.
The moon really doesn't shine (well, reflect) very brightly, so it would never go to full brightness like on her skin and white ears. The things the light hit are only perceived as brighter because what isn't hit is completely dark (as light tend to work).
Check out Futon's works (http://utubuse.suppa.jp/frame.htm), he's a master of playing with darkness (character galleries in the side menu). I really like the spooky side of Gensokyo, so it's worth exploring.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Pirate on September 19, 2015, 01:27:04 PM
http://i.imgur.com/xBKw2xa.png

This is my take on the thing.

I think ragathol has a good point about the moon, but i'm not clever enough to figure out the lighting, so handwaved it as light from the top right of the canvas. I'm also pretty sure I worked in too red of a hue, but as I said, I'm not clever.

A great problem I have is how you've drawn and coloured her face. I never liked the proportions you used; they are too far apart and the cheek bone . And it's worse because you're trying to shade realistically on a stylised piece of work. The eyes are flat, and trying to colour in a tiny pin prick of a nose doesn't work too well. I went in and fixed the proportions, rounded the eyes proper and gave an actual nose that is easier to shade.  Other fixes include softening some of the shadows (the neck for example), fixing the stomach and hip area and thinning the calves.

In the end, it'll be best if you revised on the form of the human body. If what i'm doing to the face doesn't please you, then you'll probably do well copying anime figurines.

I don't know if this paintover will do any good, or if it's any good, but may as well.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on September 19, 2015, 09:11:58 PM
That's pretty nice. Same problem as with Tewi though; She's lit way differently than the background. If you had a glowing fairy floating in front of her it would look alright, and explain her expression.
The moon really doesn't shine (well, reflect) very brightly, so it would never go to full brightness like on her skin and white ears. The things the light hit are only perceived as brighter because what isn't hit is completely dark (as light tend to work).
Check out Futon's works (http://utubuse.suppa.jp/frame.htm), he's a master of playing with darkness (character galleries in the side menu). I really like the spooky side of Gensokyo, so it's worth exploring.

Thanks! I'll try to be more careful about this kind of lighting in the future.
I remember seeing a few of Futon's Yukari pics floating around a while ago so it's nice to finally put a name to the art.

http://i.imgur.com/xBKw2xa.png

This is my take on the thing.

I think ragathol has a good point about the moon, but i'm not clever enough to figure out the lighting, so handwaved it as light from the top right of the canvas. I'm also pretty sure I worked in too red of a hue, but as I said, I'm not clever.

A great problem I have is how you've drawn and coloured her face. I never liked the proportions you used; they are too far apart and the cheek bone . And it's worse because you're trying to shade realistically on a stylised piece of work. The eyes are flat, and trying to colour in a tiny pin prick of a nose doesn't work too well. I went in and fixed the proportions, rounded the eyes proper and gave an actual nose that is easier to shade.  Other fixes include softening some of the shadows (the neck for example), fixing the stomach and hip area and thinning the calves.

In the end, it'll be best if you revised on the form of the human body. If what i'm doing to the face doesn't please you, then you'll probably do well copying anime figurines.

I don't know if this paintover will do any good, or if it's any good, but may as well.

To me the face - especially the nose - looks like an improvement (which probably means that I need to care more about the effort of such things). Thanks for taking the time to do this.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Ragathol on September 24, 2015, 01:22:27 PM
A quick little cheat. It may not be correct moonlight, but at least it makes it blend together a little more. Just make a colored mask and set it to Multiply.
Like in terrorism, in digital art the end justifies the means.

(http://i.imgur.com/xkeopga.jpg)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 01, 2015, 08:09:16 PM
A quick little cheat. It may not be correct moonlight, but at least it makes it blend together a little more. Just make a colored mask and set it to Multiply.
Like in terrorism, in digital art the end justifies the means.

(http://i.imgur.com/xkeopga.jpg)
Thanks!

Some quick sketches from a while back: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/tQz21O8.jpg) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/HnlD5Ih.jpg) 3 (http://i.imgur.com/TbRZRPw.jpg)

On a different note -

I feel like I've been pretty high-strung for the longest time, and my work seems to be suffering because of it. ...idk I feel like I've trapped myself in this mindset that whenever I put pencil to paper a finished product needs to come out of it. For some reason I can't just leave some drawings as just a sketch?? It's pretty dumb of me, and I'm putting all sorts of imaginary pressure on myself to make "good" work.
Lately I've been trying to get myself out of this rut by doing some small and quick sketches in my free time. They look pretty bad, but I'm fine with it; I think I would be a lot better off if I just went "lol, what is that?" and just start a brand new sketch instead of trying to salvage and painstakingly refine it.

At least, that's what I think.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on October 01, 2015, 09:05:52 PM
Some quick sketches from a while back: 2 (http://i.imgur.com/HnlD5Ih.jpg)
Is that a CCS reference I see?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jq1790 on October 02, 2015, 02:26:29 AM
I agree with your approach 100%, Aoshi; perhaps trying just some short 10-15 min timed sketches or something would be good as a way to not even leave yourself the OPTION to get super involved with them?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 03, 2015, 04:02:25 AM
Is that a CCS reference I see?
Oh, is that where that meme came from?  :derp:

Forgot about this today, but I did a quick ASakuya (http://i.imgur.com/odJzTNt.jpg) as a (day late) start of Inktober. I'll do my best to do one everyday. o7
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 04, 2015, 03:50:33 AM
Oct. 3: Bountiful Harvests! (http://i.imgur.com/ohXnKDb.jpg) (How do I anatomy again?)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 18, 2015, 01:58:52 AM
It's not like I forgot to update or anything nuh uh nooooo. (Plus I figured that updating every week or so would be better then spamming my thread everyday.)

Oct 3 - Scanned in ACeres (http://i.imgur.com/vTaw0dd.png)
 Oct 4 - Wanted to draw some more Muhyo and Roji art (http://i.imgur.com/jKtMrwZ.png)
Oct 5 - More Muhyo (http://i.imgur.com/C1Vgmcm.png)
Oct 6 - Junko. (http://i.imgur.com/cR5KKk5.png) I ran out of ink before I could start on her dress, but it gave me an opportunity to play with my brush pen.
Oct 7 - Doremy (http://i.imgur.com/xkP2lDs.png)
Oct 8 - Reisen (http://i.imgur.com/DbnDNMa.png)
Oct 9 - Yuyuko. (http://i.imgur.com/0xz7KLn.png)

Unfortunately I fell behind because of midterms (I have the 12th-today to catch up on), hopefully I can get caught up; these are really fun to do!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jq1790 on October 18, 2015, 02:18:33 AM
Oct 6 - Junko. (http://i.imgur.com/cR5KKk5.png) I ran out of ink before I could start on her dress, but it gave me an opportunity to play with my brush pen.
This is a REALLY neat effect you have going on there.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on October 18, 2015, 02:22:16 AM
Agreeing with JQ here, that Junko looks awesome. If that's my 2nd, then that Reisen is my #01 favorite. I love her look.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: OverlordChirei on October 20, 2015, 09:09:15 AM
Oct. 3: Bountiful Harvests! (http://i.imgur.com/ohXnKDb.jpg) (How do I anatomy again?)

she doesn't look very pleased about that apple
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jq1790 on October 20, 2015, 03:56:32 PM
You'd probably be upset with fruit growing off of you too!

Alternatively, maybe she prefers lemons or oranges or something?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Yukarin on October 20, 2015, 04:37:24 PM
I loooooove that Junko omg
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on October 29, 2015, 02:50:11 AM
I'm so tired

Oct 10 - Seiran (http://i.imgur.com/Jdm3uDG.png)
Oct 11 - Frisk (http://i.imgur.com/DgZS5bl.png)
Oct 12 - Jammers, jammers everywhere. (http://i.imgur.com/JXQkkvI.png)
Oct 13 - The only chibi I legit wanted was LValk. (http://i.imgur.com/tp2PgVy.png) Chibi Luci is fine too I guessssssssss
Oct 14 - Madoooo (http://i.imgur.com/wP9Q8is.png)
Oct 15 - Seiga (http://i.imgur.com/jEV9OMO.png)
Oct 16 - I think Sagume is one of my favorite Newhus (http://i.imgur.com/P2AEr7z.png)
Oct 17 - Youmu I guess (http://i.imgur.com/gqILWOz.png)

still behind
so behind
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: OverlordChirei on October 29, 2015, 11:59:03 AM
Oct 12 - Jammers, jammers everywhere. (http://i.imgur.com/JXQkkvI.png)

Somehow in here the jammers look like the neckbeards from mario

(http://www.mariowiki.com/images/e/e0/FuzziesSMW.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Jq1790 on October 29, 2015, 07:25:53 PM
When i saw the title I half expected ALakshmi, haha.

Also is that a popsicle in the tail's mouth? Adorable in any case.

I dont think I need to explain my views on Youmu by now to you of all people, now do I?  =P
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on December 10, 2015, 09:46:03 PM
Not exactly a bump, but more of a "Look at this stuff while I organize some things in the meantime."

A greenhouse (http://i.imgur.com/t0hMlc5.jpg) that I did for a school project. Reimu's teeny tiny compared to Remi so I'll need to scale her up when I render this.

Ceres! (http://i.imgur.com/ljWfZ6r.png)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Pirate on December 12, 2015, 06:39:15 PM
I want to point out once again that your facial proportions have done you absolutely no favours from the very first time you've chosen to stick with them and to this moment with your latest post. The wide eyes, low hanging nose and mouth may seem fine in sketches, but after rendering they fall apart like a paper mache without so much as a lone breeze. Many a time the nose is misaligned yet easily missed in sketches, but when they are rendered out, it's clear that they are usually off the mark.  Until you've decided to recognise these proportions as awful, properly construct the face as a 3d object and take the time to align facial features, it is obvious that your progress will stall as it had been for a fairly long time.

http://i.imgur.com/3L66LzS.png

As usual I've taken a stab at correcting the face, but it's clear my attempt at correcting anatomy fell flat since I simply made a half-hearted attempt trying to fix the visible body whilst trying not to mess with the rest of it that's clothed. (Excuses. I know.)

Which brings to the point of anatomy. It's bad. I don't know what more to say, since I don't have any nude drawings to go off by. You just seem to have trouble grasping proportion at times and failing to recognise the changes in planes on the body (especially the stomach, which looks little more than a tube as I've seen with Ringo). I peg it down to lack of construction, but as far as I know, anything flies.


Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on December 13, 2015, 01:50:44 AM
Ah, thanks. It almost feels embarrassing to be told the same thing twice, hahaha

Although it really sucks to feel like I've been dragging my feet when it comes to my art. I mean, it's not like I don't want to improve or anything, but... I feel pretty indifferent about it? It sucks to feel this way and I don't want to be this kind of person anymore, but first I guess I need to drum up my motivation again and just do it.

My anatomy's been gradually slipping in pretty much every area, but I think starting with faces would be in my best interest.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: pineyappled on December 13, 2015, 06:54:27 AM
That you actually get work done is admirable though; last time I finished something was... never lmao
+OT, but pirate: all your things have weird cat noses
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 07, 2016, 08:48:05 PM
Not exactly a bump, but more of a "Look at this stuff while I organize some things in the meantime."

Honestly I forgot what I was even doing hahaha

But here's half of the birthday stuff (http://imgur.com/a/VbxzF) (I just realized this is the album with the mostly unfixed images. I should probably scrap this album and upload the proper images sometime.)


And other shit:

Ink stuff: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/wyWDO8Z.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/4mdCXcy.png) 3 (http://i.imgur.com/Ykl1AND.png)

Might paint over the Youmu one since it looks like a hot mess

Digital stuff: 1 (http://i.imgur.com/NIyLcK4.png) 2 (http://i.imgur.com/uU4tcbG.png)

Still trying to figure out environmental lighting. I think I made a small step in  the right direction but I still got a long way to go.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Hello Purvis on June 08, 2016, 12:29:25 AM
That is a hella Benben right there.

Also I didn't expect Alraune when I clicked on that link, and I am deeply pleased. EO needs all the love.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 08, 2016, 12:58:03 AM
Also I didn't expect Alraune when I clicked on that link, and I am deeply pleased. EO needs all the love.

It's actually Scylla but I do happen to have an Alraune piece as well as a few other EO related stuff planned. I'll get around to those once I finish up all the birthday requests!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Hello Purvis on June 08, 2016, 01:06:50 AM
Dangit. That's what I meant.

Also: Awesome!
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on June 09, 2016, 11:26:11 PM
Is there a whole picture of your avvy?
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Aoshi-shi on June 10, 2016, 01:28:38 AM
Is there a whole picture of your avvy?
Yup!

http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=54523342 (http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=54523342)
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on June 10, 2016, 10:03:31 AM
Oh oops, the face looked vaguely familiar enough to your style that I thought you drew it
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Hope ♦ Metal on June 10, 2016, 11:46:34 AM
Oh oops, the face looked vaguely familiar enough to your style that I thought you drew it
That's impossible because nobody ever uses their own art as an avatar. kidding :V
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Delfigamer on June 10, 2016, 12:21:32 PM
Mea had been using his art for quite a while before Himiko blessed him with the current one. We may say his views are biased on the matter. :V
I usually apply varying degrees of editing to a picture before setting it as my userpic, though I haven't used a genuine Delfi drawing yet.

And why? This picture doesn't look like Aoshi's art for me, like at all.
Title: Re: [Art] Aoshi Thread II - The "Coming Up With Thread Names is Difficult" Edition
Post by: Mеа on June 10, 2016, 01:12:45 PM
looking at that picture gives me such an intense presque vu moment I thought it was hers. Or someone around here. Or of recently something something. I can't rememberrrr

blessed/given, yes, it just feels weird to use the work of a peer if it wasn't specifically intended for my use, I just assumed others had it too