Decent LSDJ work here, really picks up right before the midway point. I liked the buildup to it. If you feel like working on it further I have some critiques for you:
The part from 0:26 to 1:13 felt like it dragged on too long, I would recommend trying to reduce it to 2 or 4 patterns [not sure what your tempo & speed are set to] and hear how that works. After the swing section you can possibly bring back the patterns @ 1:26 for a while and successfully extend the tune. As it is a dance track, I like to see those reach at least 5 or 6 minutes. Also, I am not a fan of the arpeggio effect for the lead. Probably just a taste thing, but I just don't like how it's used here for the lead. Hurts my head. Can probably get a lot more expressive with pitch bends and vibrato instead.
On another subject, didn't realize you posted here, that is cool. I have featured your songs on my radio show before, a few times, mainly Rigid Paradise. Keep up the good work!
