+2 BoundNow that is one marauding Ichirin! I could see this in a Disney or Bluth animation easily.
On to formal criticisms: something about the body pose doesn't seem correct, probably in the abdomen or hip area.
+1 VentoCollected and ready for action! Must be a ceremonial trooper going by the outfit and the modern weaponry.
Crow: Suave facial expression. Good outfit details as usual. There is something with the shoulder that doesn't seem right....
KazeSenshi: Fitting outfit and role. Cape changes are good too, and good work on the hand. I think the most glaring issue here would be the legs, which seem flat and too tubular.
Pasu: How Merp-like! Never expected Medi to
W+M1 have a flamer.
Sixten: Neat choice of theme. Even with sketchbook I see your style remains just as good and able - in fact I'd like to see this method a bit more often.
Merp: Oh man, they really look ready for business!
Necrotastic: Newcomer, and with good start! Focusing first on Sanae - as this is not a formal art critique, I'll just say the body appears very 2-dimensional, especially in the shoulder area where the vest should wrap around. On a last note, the two draft sketches are damn hilarious. :V
Desu_Cake: Pretty clean image and good outfit that definitely fits the theme. Yet there remains the boxy chest (looks unnatural) plus the hands are small.
Piranha: I see potential to be had here, that's great! I'll note two things - the eyes appear mis-aligned, and something about the chest and abdomen isn't right (probably the angle relative to shoulders, hip, and head).
Vyrien: Satori appears to be saying to the speaker "and you've gone far enough, now...you shall die." I like that expression. She seems quite tall and stretched however.
Freeze-Ex: Looks great - would love to see this as a model in TGTA.
