Author Topic: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku  (Read 15791 times)

Sparen

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #30 on: March 31, 2013, 06:10:22 PM »
Patchouli script:

Spell 1: Very nice concept, but the bullets are a tad too fast. Also, going above Patchouli makes the script uglier because that wall of bullets doesn't looks os good graphically. Also, by going above and alternating to below, it's possible to BS the script.

Spell 2: Really nice to look at, really easy to dodge. I like it.

And yeah, that first lifebar is sort of out of place.

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #31 on: April 01, 2013, 03:43:06 AM »
Ah thanks for all the feedback!
I'm overall getting the feelings of:
A. Make the first spell more challenging and beautiful
B. Make the second more challenging...
Alrighty! I'll remember that for later!

PhantomSong

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #32 on: May 02, 2013, 01:58:36 AM »
Due to the fact that TD battles are coming up... I'll make a Futo battle. ~~Adds to Project~~

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #33 on: May 11, 2013, 05:07:38 AM »
Made Marisa and Reimu sprite for fun and as a joke(mainly Marisa) Marisa shoot dolls! Alice, y u give Marisa explosive dolls?!

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #34 on: May 12, 2013, 11:57:30 PM »
Kana Anaberal script released!

Sparen

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #35 on: May 13, 2013, 12:46:54 AM »
Kana Anaberal Boss Battle

NS1: Nothing special here. Nice though. [7/10]

Sp1: OK. The bullets are pretty fast and I bombed before I got the gimmick. Don't know what to do here. [10/20]

NS2: OK, but a little too dense for Easy Mode [7/10]

Sp2: Very repetitive. More like a non spell than a spell, in my opinion. [10/20]

NS3: Pretty much just misdirection. Pretty simple. [7/10]

Sp3:
Phase 1: Meh. Just dodge a bottle bit. The walls don't move. [6/10]
Phase 2: Meh. Even easier. [5/10]
Phase 3: The bullets surround you with almost no warning. The fact that she suddenly jumps out at you doesn't help either. [3/10]

Overall, 55/100. Don't think badly about me, but there wasn't much to this script.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #36 on: May 13, 2013, 05:27:48 AM »
- You get bonus points from me for using a pc98 character :3.
- Nonspells were good, but I'm wondering how random her second nonspell is...
- First spell is boring, unless I am missing something here with the bubble bullet.
- Second spell was good. Not that hard, but pretty and still some fun to dodge.
- Third spell, looks good, but unfortunately the random white dots seems to take up all the danger in the first two phases and the last phase is kind of BS.
I'm wondering, is there some gimmick to the first spell, or is it just horisontal streaming?

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #37 on: May 14, 2013, 12:48:29 AM »
- You get bonus points from me for using a pc98 character :3.
- Nonspells were good, but I'm wondering how random her second nonspell is...
- First spell is boring, unless I am missing something here with the bubble bullet.
- Second spell was good. Not that hard, but pretty and still some fun to dodge.
- Third spell, looks good, but unfortunately the random white dots seems to take up all the danger in the first two phases and the last phase is kind of BS.
I'm wondering, is there some gimmick to the first spell, or is it just horisontal streaming?

NS2: The only thing random was how the bullets curve
1st spell: Tap to victory!

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #38 on: May 14, 2013, 02:54:32 AM »
Perfect Cherry Blossom Reskin added... I tried xD

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #39 on: July 01, 2013, 11:35:55 PM »
Phantom Song Nue Script (Preliminary Unlisted Version)

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Reposted from LOCAA.

...Honestly, I think your other scripts were a lot better. At least you're still active.
« Last Edit: July 02, 2013, 12:19:23 PM by Sparen »

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #40 on: July 02, 2013, 03:59:03 AM »
Phantom Song Nue Script (Preliminary Unlisted Version)

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Reposted from LOCAA.

...Honestly, I think your other scripts were a lot better. At least you're still active.

I never asked you to revive my topic with a rating of an unlisted project, and I completely disapprove of it. It was for a PLAYTEST, nothing to be rated and posted publicly... This was strictly for the three people on the LOCAA chat only, Sparen.
« Last Edit: July 08, 2013, 12:39:11 AM by PhantomSong »

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #41 on: July 03, 2013, 03:51:32 PM »
- First spell is boring, unless I am missing something here with the bubble bullet.
Maybe it's there to prevent the player from circling Kana.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #42 on: July 06, 2013, 10:52:25 PM »
Maybe it's there to prevent the player from circling Kana.
I was thinking of some kind of special gimmick, instead of just forcing the player to stream horizontally.

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #43 on: July 07, 2013, 11:17:01 PM »
Maybe it's there to prevent the player from circling Kana.
It servers double purpose to be a hitbox for Kana because you get far away from her, and to prevent circling .

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #44 on: September 08, 2013, 01:36:58 AM »
Marisa Contest Entry can now be downloaded here
« Last Edit: September 08, 2013, 02:14:39 AM by PhantomSong »

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Re: Phantom Song's Scripts of Danmaku
« Reply #45 on: September 09, 2013, 12:20:51 AM »
As an early Cirno Day thingy, here you go. http://www.bulletforge.org/u/phantom-song/p/cirno-day-992013/v/1