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Moerin

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I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« on: January 13, 2011, 06:29:51 PM »
>You (yes, YOU) are (the somewhat unfortunately named) Mary Sue, just your regular 15 year old high school girl!  Your parents have recently divorced, and as such you've moved with your mother to the vaguely-American city of Sanctuary.  You've only been going to the local high school for about a week now, so you're still new and don't really know any of your classmates yet.

>Your father gave you an old family heirloom as a memento before you moved away, a broach shaped like a black scarab beetle.  It didn't seem like anything that special at the time, but soon after your move to Sanctuary you accidently wandered into a rather shady alley and were accosted by muggers.  Imagine your surprise when the scarab seemingly exploded in a flash of light, and the next thing you knew you were a magical girl, just like from one of your Japanese animes!  And then you beat the crap out of them.  Huzzah!

>There are many kinds of magical girl out there!  I wonder what kind you are?  Please select an archetype:


Combat Type Magical Girl
You're as subtle as a sledgehammer and hit twice as hard!  On the downside, you're not exactly the nimblest girl out there, and can be easily outran.  Your defensive capabilities are about average.
Power: Super Strength
Weapon: Fists.  Who needs a weapon when you can demolish a house with your bare hands?
Finishing Move: You punch your enemy so hard they explode!


Defender Type Magical Girl
You've got staying power!  All of your magical energy goes into making sure you don't get hurt.  Unfortunately, this leads to your offensive capabilities taking a massive hit.  You move much faster than the Combat Type, however, and have an above average top speed.
Power: Force Field.  Unfortunately, it's only big enough to surround you alone, but it's pretty tough to crack.
Weapon: Bow and arrow.  You're not really the up close and personal type.
Finishing Move: An arrow sheathed in a portion of your force field, creating some disruption... Thingy.  Insert some Star Trek technobabble here.  Suffice to say, it makes your enemies explode.


Speedster Type Magical Girl
Faster than a speeding bullet, and with the reflexes to match!  You can easily outrace the many cars in the city on foot.  However, the old addage of "fast but fragile" is in full force here.  But hey, you're fast enough to dodge anything, right?
Power: Super Speed and Reflexes.  You're not sure what your top speed is, but you're still pretty much the fastest thing on two legs.
Weapon: Sword.  More specifically, a khopesh.
Finishing Move: Y'know that cool thing in anime where the hero speeds past his enemy with his sword, and then the enemy splits in half and then, yes, explodes?  It's basically that.


Healing Type Magical Girl
You're not especially powerful, or tough, or fast.  But you have one thing that sets you apart.  You have heart.

...Hey, come back!  Heart is an awesome power, really!
Power: You regenerate wounds at an astonishing rate.  Physical contact with another living being will allow them to take advantage of this ability themselves if you will it so.  You also happen to have a small degree of telepathy, a power you may use even when untransformed unlike any of the other powers mentioned.
Weapon: Heart-topped magician's staff.  You're a lover, not a fighter.
Finishing Move: A purifying blast of energy that wipes the evil from the hearts of those it touches!  In other words, a Care Bear Stare.


>In addition, your magical girl form and finishing move need names!  And whilst transforming is more of an act of will than anything else for you, you are free to come up with a transformation phrase if you so wish.

>Once that's all sorted out...
>You are currently untransformed and rushing to get to school.  Seems you slept in or something.  You know there's a shortcut nearby, but it's down a somewhat shady alleyway (Sanctuary seems to have an awful lot of these for some reason).
>If you really rushed, you could probably get there just on time by going the long way, but...
>_


(Yeah, this is kinda an experimental thing I decided to run.  It's an original (kind-of) setting, so hopefully that won't put too many people off, ahah.  Oh well, fingers crossed that this goes better than Satsuki Quest did!)
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2011, 06:34:55 PM »
> Defender Type; Arrow Vulcan

...Of course, I'm more of a defense/support oriented person in most games, so I'm a bit biased. >_>

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #2 on: January 13, 2011, 06:37:38 PM »
> Quickly retrieve arms.

> Combat Type Magical Girl, for when the time you need to rage, you can bring down the house!


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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #3 on: January 13, 2011, 06:39:43 PM »
> Defender type. There's so many things we could do with that force field.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2011, 06:45:35 PM »
> Healing Type. CAPTAAAAAAIN PLANETTTTTT

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #5 on: January 13, 2011, 06:53:34 PM »
Regeneration?

Healing-type, Clearly. I don't know why you'd want anything else. Sure you can defend that blow...

OR you can PLOW RIGHT DAMN THROUGH IT LIKE YOU JUST DON'T GIVE A DAMN BECAUSE IT'LL HEAL TEN SECONDS LATER.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 06:54:56 PM »
> Healing type. We're a magical girl! We don't make people explode into rains of blood and gore! Even though it's awesome.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 06:57:05 PM »
Regeneration?

Healing-type, Clearly. I don't know why you'd want anything else. Sure you can defend that blow...

OR you can PLOW RIGHT DAMN THROUGH IT LIKE YOU JUST DON'T GIVE A DAMN BECAUSE IT'LL HEAL TEN SECONDS LATER.

That sounds like it'd hurt. :<


When would the Magical Type be chosen?

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 06:59:09 PM »
I was gonna say speedster but it seems hopeless now :(

Well I'll throw my vote for healing then, with the goal of having instant regeneration at the end of the quest :D
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 07:00:24 PM »
That sounds like it'd hurt. :<


When would the Magical Type be chosen?
I'll leave the polls open for another half hour, or an hour at most (hopefully).

Also there need to be more name suggestions!  And attack name suggestions.  And some other stuff I guess. >.>
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #10 on: January 13, 2011, 07:03:41 PM »
>Healing final attack name: Divine Saber

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #11 on: January 13, 2011, 07:06:49 PM »
> Healing final attack name: Complete. Global. Purification.
> Combat final attack name: Teraton Buster
> Staff name (weapons need names too!): Batentoun

Spoiler:
Pun on 'baton' (you know, that twirling staff thing) and 'tentou' (= moon speak for Heaven)
« Last Edit: January 13, 2011, 07:18:18 PM by OkashiiKisei »

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #12 on: January 13, 2011, 07:09:12 PM »
Healing Final Attack: Love Sign! Purification Touch!

'Let my touch relief you from the gap that is within your heart!'


Combat Final Attack: A Dynamic Punch!


Defender Final Attack: The Gatekeeper's Fury.


Those are some of my suggestions for the Final Attacks. Can't think of one for Speedster.

Healing Type Name: Medicine, a friendly high school doll, fighting for the rights of others who are just like her! oh wait...
Chiyu-Chan!

Defender Type Name: Loyal Guardian!

...Those are the only two names I could think of for the type.
« Last Edit: January 13, 2011, 07:23:43 PM by Kyo Tanaka »

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #13 on: January 13, 2011, 07:11:54 PM »
The type with the biggest boobs and shortest skirt.

Fighter type according to Boobs of Steel

Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #14 on: January 13, 2011, 07:12:21 PM »
Healing Type name: Medigirl

...Yeah, I got nothing. =/

EDIT: Also, once we decide on stuff, take the shortcut.
« Last Edit: January 13, 2011, 07:30:38 PM by Stardj Sapphire »

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #15 on: January 13, 2011, 07:33:38 PM »
I vote defense type but it so looks like the healing type is dominating....

Oh, god, the physical contact part...! it's nice hentai material.... YOU SICK BASTARDS


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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #16 on: January 13, 2011, 07:33:38 PM »
The type with the biggest boobs and shortest skirt.

Fighter type according to Boobs of Steel
This is not always the case!

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #17 on: January 13, 2011, 07:41:40 PM »
Boo, choose Defense people.

As for a names...I got nothing.


Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #18 on: January 13, 2011, 07:44:25 PM »
You know what?

##Unvote: Defense
##Hammer: Healing


Telepathy is going to be fun.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #19 on: January 13, 2011, 07:47:59 PM »
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[13:42]   <Jana>   Moerin: I'll tiebreak. Which choices are tied?
[13:43]   <Magical_Moerin>   Defensive and Healing.
[13:43]   <Jana>   Defensive had a bow. Hm...
[13:43]   <Chaore>   Healing however has regeneration
[13:43]   <Chaore>   >:
[13:43]   <Chaore>   rabbit want plow through moves like rabbit just don't care
[13:43]   <Okashii>   Herf derf....
[13:43]   <Chaore>   ...:V
[13:44]   <Jana>   I'll vote for the cheesy healing power, then. :P
[13:44]   <Chaore>   \o/
[13:44]   <Okashii>   Yay! :D
[13:45]   <Jana>   Oh, rdj just tiebroke for healing too, so I don't even have to post in-thread. :V
[13:45]   <Sana>   Jan, post anyway :<
[13:46]   <Jana>   oh okay >:
[13:46]   <Sana>   What if some other person votes :<
[13:46]   <Jana>   fine fine i'm on it >:

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #20 on: January 13, 2011, 07:49:39 PM »
Voting Prankster type.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #21 on: January 13, 2011, 07:50:22 PM »
Sigh, guess it's healing then...But I still stick my vote to Defense.

As for name: Pretty Cure! (Copyright infringement, ho!)

Moerin

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #22 on: January 13, 2011, 08:02:35 PM »
Okay, voting over!  And the archetype you have chosen is... Healing Type!  Say hello to Healing Type Magical Girl... Medigirl?  Chiyu-chan?  Um... Medichan?

...Pretty Cure Medichan!  Armed with your magical staff Batentoun, in times of need you can unleash the power of your ultimate attack, the... Divine Purification Touch!

Right, everything seems in order now... Hey-ho, let's go~!

Voting Prankster type.
Sorry, but that's only available in New Game+.

EDIT: Also, once we decide on stuff, take the shortcut.
>You run off down the alley.
>The alleyway is dark and smells somewhat odd.  Also, you can't help but feel like someone's watching you as you make your way across.
>About halfway down the alley, you hear a loud crashing noise, like glass smashing, coming from a smaller side-alley to your left.
>You're still running late, by the way.
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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #23 on: January 13, 2011, 08:05:31 PM »
> Take a small peek to the left side-alley.

> If nothing unusual, MAKE HASTE, WE'LL BE LATE.

> If there is something unusual, take a closer look

Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #24 on: January 13, 2011, 08:06:47 PM »
> Regardless of the above, use caution.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #25 on: January 13, 2011, 08:07:47 PM »
> Prepare our transformation Item too.

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #26 on: January 13, 2011, 08:08:10 PM »
>What is our rapport with Hobokind?

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #27 on: January 13, 2011, 08:08:42 PM »
> Use telekinesis TELEPATHY to detect any thoughts nearby.
> Hold on to broach just to be safe.
« Last Edit: January 13, 2011, 08:11:36 PM by OkashiiKisei »

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #28 on: January 13, 2011, 08:09:39 PM »
> Obligatory trip over nothing

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Re: I Wanna Be The Magical Girl!
« Reply #29 on: January 13, 2011, 08:13:09 PM »
>Examine Inventory.