Author Topic: Following one's dream 'Gensokyo'  (Read 2891 times)

draganuv15

Following one's dream 'Gensokyo'
« on: October 24, 2010, 10:00:32 PM »
this is my first story so please be generous with suggestions  :ohdear:

SOME CHARACTERS ARE MADE UP BY ME AND BY NO RIGHT MAY YOU STEAL THEM WITHOUT MY PERMISSION!

Prolouge;

'Come on we're almost there!'

It was a long trek to where I thought the best entrance to Gensokyo would be.
My 'friend' was trailing behind me looking really tired looking at her water bottle with great disdain to see it empty, she finally collapsed onto the ground,
'*pant*... why.. did I follow you?' said the girl behind me.
'Ugh! Don't worry, and if you stop complaining i'll you my water'
She didn't think twice before agreeing.
My name is Marie and I'm traveling up to Gensokyo with my friend Erin who was collapsing from exhaustion...

'Hey look! A shrine gate! ...But where is the shrine?' I said
'Ugh... I don't care! just go in!' Erin said

'Ok grouchy...'
As I enter the gate... The whole world disappears behind me, and in front of me looks like... exiting a time machine...
'We did it...' was all I could say...
'I like I ca- *THUMP*' Erin fell asleep
...I need a helthier friend...

TO BE CONTINUED *mabye*