(AKA "Tear me a new one and pick apart my shitty writing" :V)
"Hey Reimu, lookit this!"
Marisa came running into the shrine, a grin on her face. Reimu turned around, calmly sipping tea. "What is it, Marisa?"
"Look what I found in the forest" The magician holds up a slightly torn book that's obviously been through a lot, "It's a diary or something."
"Reading someone else's diary? Really?"
"Keep in mind exactly who you're talking to."
"This is true..." Reimu pauses for a few seconds, idly sipping tea, "Welp, open it up."
"Haha!" Marisa sits down and gets in a comfortable position. "Alright, this is the first page..."
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Look at this journal I picked up! We had a huge harvest last year, and I -still- had money from the sweet potato sale, so I decided to pick this up. I've always considered myself a writer. My sister doesn't think so though...
...
I should probably hide this book from her.
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Shizuha is getting real stressed out lately. I don't know why either. Is it because Fall is coming soon? It's only at the end of Spring, she has a whole season to prepare... Should I be getting ready for the harvest now too? It's so early...
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I asked her why she seems so tense. It was what I thought, she thinks she doesn't have enough time to prepare for Fall. I told her she had plenty of time but she went on a large tangent about how "There's never enough time!" and "It's never too early to get ready!"
I don't get her sometimes.
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We had another argument today about Fall and the harvest. She said I didn't understand because I was younger. Does age really have a place amongst gods? Then again, I guess it does, given how often she herself acts childish.
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I decided to appease my sister and told her I'd get ready for the harvest "as soon as possible". Of course, she replied that "As soon as possible" was weeks ago, and I'll be behind schedule...
She's never been like this before, so strict...
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Wait, I think I know why she's been like this... Last year, Fall came late and I constantly reminded her that she wasn't doing her job correctly... we ended up getting into a large fight. I guess now she doesn't want another...
I should apologize... I never did.
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I talked to Shizuha today about last year. I apologized, but she just told me to leave. I did. I think she can sort this on her own now...
Actually, I'm walking through the forest and writing right now. If Fall does come very early like she wants, I won't be able to see such lush greens of the trees again before they change into orange and brown, and eventually die. Each color and season shares its beauty in different ways however and I gue
"The writing trails off there..." Marisa says, stretching her legs and clearing her throat.
"Oh geez, what do you think happened?" Reimu asks, leaning forward more, her tea becoming cold. Marisa chuckles and turns the page, "We're about to find out."
TO BE CONTINUED IN THE FUTURE (Tomorrow)
(This is my first writing attempt as well, please criticize!)
EDIT: I spel gud
