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[Art] Zent Draws Stuff. Yup. :V
Honest Espeon:
Nice, you're back! :) I like the new stuff. You don't need to worry about not making fanart, OCs are fun too! Kraken G'Nol's look suits his apparent purpose. He looks like an SMT monster, which also fits. Mech suit girl looks like she's ready for battle.
Some feedback on thtwin-pistol girl:
The hip seems oddly-connected to the legs, perhaps drawing a basic figure, then putting in clothes would make it look more proper. Enlarging the hips slightly would make her look more girl-ish, too. Though I have seen girls irl with hips just as a big as that, hehe. And on that basic figure, making the lines between the neck and the shoulderblade slanted sliiightly more downward would be a nice touch.
Also, making the bow and vest more rounded (and sliiightly wavy) would makes them look more real. Unless you're going for the metal battle-suit sort of thing, which it seems to be a bit like as it is.
And the elbow lines would probably look better if thinner. More subtle is what I mean. It sticks out a little, looking at it closely.
I've don't see any problems on the other drawings, not like I think there could really be any considering design :P I hope I helped! =)
The ⑨th Zentillion:
Just a black pen sketch of Asuka Langley Soryu cosplaying Equius Zahhak (she's a Sagittarius! :o), but it's something, at least:
D --> I'm not about to let a lowb100d like Ikari outperform me in an Eva! I'm the STRONG pilot.
ZengEren Jaeger:
Beating up MP EVAs to show how STRONG she is.
That idea was unexpected!
KimikoMuffin:
Now I'm trying to decide who Shinji would be.
The ⑨th Zentillion:
--- Quote from: KimikoMuffin on July 06, 2011, 04:51:43 am ---Now I'm trying to decide who Shinji would be.
--- End quote ---
2hiinjii'2 a Gemiinii.
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