Author Topic: Kirin Quest  (Read 54991 times)

Kirin Quest
« on: September 21, 2011, 12:44:13 AM »
Fire.
Flames danced about crackling in sinister laughter. Devouring the town, slowly turning everything to ash. This situation, this disaster, it could be described with one word alone.
Chaos.

A girl sits on the ground, without even seeing her tear streaked face, you know she?s crying. In front of the girl, there is a body.
It?s a small child. Her eyes are empty and lifeless. Blood leaks from her still body. The debris of a house lie on the child?s weak and fragile body, likely having crushed all the bones in her body. The flames slowly creep closer, licking the child?s corpse.
The crying girl swats at the flames, making them move back for only a second. You can hear her voice as it resounds in this death cage of fire. However, you can?t make out her words too well. You strain to hear, trying to drown out the crackling roars of fire, the constant snapping of wood, and the sniffling cries from the girl before you.
?Why!..why did this?have to?? She begins to cough slightly. ?Have to?happen like?this? She starts to gasp for air. You try to move forward to help her, but you?re body wont move.
?Damn it! Why can?t I do anything for her?! You shout at yourself pointlessly.
Then you notice it.
?Oh, so I can?t help her, because that?s?
Everything goes dark.

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>You slowly open your eyes and gaze around.
>Your vision is hazy but it eventually clears.
>But it?s dark in here so you can?t see much anyways?
>However, you do see a faint light coming from somewhere?
>Your mind is a little foggy, but you focus and clear it.

Kasu

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #1 on: September 21, 2011, 12:48:46 AM »
> Shake head to clear out fogginess.
> Flex everything to make sure we're in working order.

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #2 on: September 21, 2011, 12:51:53 AM »
>Who are we?
>Did we know the girl?
>Do we have a rough approximation of our location?
>Current condition
>Relationships
>Quests
>Inventory
>Check surroundings for nearby lolis

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #3 on: September 21, 2011, 01:15:11 AM »
((Hm~ I was expecting to ask who it is but i guess that'll come~))

>You shake you head. The swift motion dizzies you for a moment, but it fades and everything sharpens.
>You gaze around at the dimly lit...place...you're not familiar with this location
>You slowly move your limbs. They slowly creek and crack with each movement. Huh...you're unusually stiff it seems...

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>Who am I...? You think to yourself. Sa...Ki..Rin... you frown at your mind's unwillingness to move. Then it hits you (luckily only in a figuravity way...)
>You're Satsuki Rin! A Kirin who works as a nurse!
>Girl? You think long and hard, but you don't get any results. Like a search that turns up blank.
>Huh...Strange...You don't remeber you're memory being this bad...Then again, you can't remember if it was any good either...
>You look more closely at your location. It looks sorta like a cave or something, but more house-like, complete with it's own bathroom!
>You do various tests to check your well-being. You're a nurse after all! You're body feels a little heavy and a little sore. Not to mention stiff...
Relationships
>You rack your brain for knowledge of others. But you get nothing. You don't recall ever being a hermit...your body also proves this.
Quests
>Where Am I? The first thing I should do is find out where I am and how I got here...
>What happened to me? and Why can't I Remember it?
Inventory
>You seem to be laying on some sort of bed with only a blanket cover- WAIT A MINUTE WHAT?!
>You pull the covers off and look down at your naked body
>You let out a sigh of relief to see that your panties are untouched. The same can't be said for your bra though.
>Your chest and stomach are wrapped in bandages. Wait bandages?
>You decide against removing them for fear of bleeding to death before someone found you.
>Considering you don;t even have your clothes on you, you likely don't have anything else on you.
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>You look around to see if you can spot anyone.
>Sadly there are no lolis in sight
>However you do spot a shadow flickering on the floor. Hm...Seems like the shadow of a man...

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #4 on: September 21, 2011, 07:20:10 AM »
> Check chest for usual growths.
> I see a little silhouetto of a man! SCARAMOUCHE, SCARAMOUCHE, WILL YOU DO THE FANDANGO
> Hesitantly call out.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #5 on: September 21, 2011, 11:50:02 AM »
>You pat your chest lightly. Hm, it seems smaller without all your clothes on. PADS
>Maybe if you check when you get your clothes on it'll seem different.
>But you're a youkai after, and Youkai don't develop physically all that fast. Sometimes they just stop growing all together.
>Does not compute
>After a moment, you reluctantly call out to the shadow.
>"Hello? Is someone there?"
>You can hear your voice echo slightly.
>The shadow moves slightly. You hear the faint sound of footsteps approaching. A uneasy feeling hangs over your mind.

((Class time, away~))

GuardianTempest

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #6 on: September 21, 2011, 12:27:59 PM »
I was mislead(MOnster Hunter)

>Prepare for the inevitable pervert
>Assess possible combat options
>Assess possible passive options
>Look around for some clothes.
« Last Edit: September 21, 2011, 12:31:00 PM by GuardianTempest »

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #7 on: September 21, 2011, 03:41:40 PM »
>Your face goes bright red and your expression is colored with anger. TSUNDEREMODOACTIVATE
>You think of possible ways to retaliate. You could try to get up and kick him. But it doesn't seem like your body will cooperate.
>You shake your head to get rid of these violent thoughts of yours. Since when were you so violent? Aren't you supposed to be a nurse?
>You inhale and think calmly. He might not be a pervert. He could have just bandaged your wounds so you wouldn't die or attract animals. I doubt you'd want to wake up to some birds picking apart your organs now...
>Also, if you provoke him to attack, you might not last much longer. Even if you're a youkai, you're wounded, and your limbs are stiff. You wouldn't stand a chance in the condition you're in.
>You quickly look for something to cover yourself with. Ignoring the blanket, there's nothing you can use to hide your almost nude body.

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #8 on: September 21, 2011, 08:18:53 PM »
>Wrap body in blanket in overly extravagant manner.
My first attempt at storywriting, looking for critique

Avatar schizophrenia? I don't know what you're talking about.

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #9 on: September 21, 2011, 08:30:05 PM »
> Watch the figure cautiously.

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #10 on: September 21, 2011, 08:54:38 PM »
> Try calling out again.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #11 on: September 21, 2011, 09:11:22 PM »
>You watch as the shadow moves closer, eventually blocking out the light from the fire. The sound of the footsteps draw closer.
>A man comes around the corner.
>"Ah you're finally awake" He says gently.
>He approaches, his features more discernable.
>He's young, maybe in his 30s or so. His hair is short an black, and his face, while masculine, looks very friendly. He smiles warmly at you.

((Sorry sir, I'm a slow typer))

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #12 on: September 21, 2011, 09:17:39 PM »
(S'all good. :3)

> "Ah... yeah."

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #13 on: September 21, 2011, 09:33:40 PM »
((Not gonna ask more?))

>"Ah, I'm make some tea. Would you like some?" The man asks kindly before turning and heading back around the corner to get some tea.

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #14 on: September 21, 2011, 09:44:19 PM »
> "A-ah sure."
> "So...  Where exactly is this?  And who are you?"

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #15 on: September 21, 2011, 10:26:57 PM »
>After a few minutes, the man returns with two cups of tea. He sets the tray they are on down on the ground beside your makeshift bed.
>He sits down besde the tray and hands you your tea.
>He picks his own up and takes a sip "Hah..." He turns his attention to you.
>You take your chance and ask your questions.
>"This place is a cave in the distant mountains. I've come here for training" He says.
>He smiles, "Ah, my name is Kazuo, I apologize for not introducing myself first thing" He says with a weak laugh. "What's your name?"

Kasu

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #16 on: September 21, 2011, 10:40:05 PM »
> "Rin.  Pleased to meet you as well."
> "So... where exactly did you find me?  My memory's a bit fuzzy right now."

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #17 on: September 21, 2011, 11:29:15 PM »
>"Rin, what a nice name" Kazuo says with a smile.
>"I found you outside of Makai, you were unconscious and injured, so I brought you here and took care of your wounds"

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #18 on: September 21, 2011, 11:40:19 PM »
>"How funny, I'm usually the one bandaging people."
>Blush a bit. "...Was I like... this... when you found me?" He knows what we mean.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #19 on: September 21, 2011, 11:45:44 PM »
> Attempt to recall what we know about Makai, if anything.
> If we know literally nothing: "What's ... Makai?"

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #20 on: September 22, 2011, 12:22:12 AM »
>"Ah is that so?" He laughs a little. "I'm no doctor, I only can do the basics" He says with a smile as he scratches his head.
>He looks confused for a moment, then looks at Rin's body. He averts his eyes and blushes. "Nah, I had to remove your clothes, I'm sorry about that..."
>"Your clothes were wet with blood, but I washed it out for you" He says as he points to the bathroom. "They're in there when you're ready to change"
>You search your mind for 'Makai'
>You think you've heard the name before, but nothing concrete comes to mind.
>You ask Kazuo what Makai is
>"Makai is the Demon World. I'm not too familiar with the inside of it either, but I've meet Sara and Luize" He says, finishing off his cup of tea.

Aya Squawkermaru

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #21 on: September 22, 2011, 12:36:10 AM »
>Do we know Sara and Luize? If not: "Who are those two?"

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #22 on: September 22, 2011, 12:45:24 AM »
> Sip our tea a bit as well.

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #23 on: September 22, 2011, 12:45:45 AM »
>You do not.
>"Ah, figures if you didn't know of Makai you wouldn't have heard of them" Kazuo laughs weakly at his slip.
>"Sara is the Guardian of Makai's entrance. She's kinda fiesty, but through my training I know her" He says, putting his cup back on the tray. "As for Luize, she's a resident of Makai. She visits every once and a while, she's kind, despite her suspicious looks"
>Kazuo goes into a daze for a moment. He picks up his cup and tries to take a sip, only to realize it's empty.
>"Ah. I'll be right back, I'm going to get some more tea. You can go change if you want" Kazuo begins to leave but stops and turns back to you. "Oh, did you want another cup of tea?" He asks before heading off to make more.

Kasu

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #24 on: September 22, 2011, 12:46:43 AM »
> "Um... Sure."
> Smile slightly.
> Once he's out of the room, change.

Apparently, Thomas the Tank Engine isn't one to take crap from anyone.

Aya Squawkermaru

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #25 on: September 22, 2011, 12:54:49 AM »
>Be sure to close the door before changing.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #26 on: September 22, 2011, 01:08:55 AM »
>After Kazuo vanishes around the corner, you dash for the bathroom. Hm, your body seems to have fixed up quite a bit. Maybe it was the tea.
>You close the door and get dressed into your usual attire
>Wait, where's your Erhu? It's not with your clothes.
>After a few minutes you come out of the bathroom. Kazuo is sitting there sipping his tea, unaware you've returned at the moment.

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #27 on: September 22, 2011, 06:44:01 AM »
> "Um ... Did I have an Erhu with me when you found me?"

Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #28 on: September 22, 2011, 09:23:48 AM »
>Kazuo turns his head and looks towards you. "Erhu? Oh, yes it's over there" He says pointing at one wall.
>There lies your Erhu, undamaged.
>"You tea is ready" Kazuo says, gesturing towards your cup.

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Re: Kirin Quest
« Reply #29 on: September 22, 2011, 10:29:17 AM »
>Get the cup and slowly sip it.
>Check the temperature, if it's too hot then go for a cutesy 'Ouch!'
>Savor the flavor.